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	With his face lifted, Saito stared at Montmorency. Beside her sat Guiche holding his chin and scowling.		With his face lifted, Saito stared at Montmorency. Beside her sat Guiche holding his chin and scowling.

	Montmorency and Guiche had gone into the city that day to face the black-market traders in the hopes of finding the antidote, however....		Montmorency and Guiche had gone into the city that day to face the black-market traders in the hopes of finding the antidote, however....

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	===Chapter Five: The Strength of a Love Potion===		===Chapter Five: The Strength of a Love Potion===
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	“What is it?”		“What is it?”

	“The specific medicine comes from Ragdorian Lake, at the ~~boarder~~ with Gallia. It is made from the tears of a water spirit… however it seems they were not able to contact the water spirits recently."		“The specific medicine comes from Ragdorian Lake, at the border with Gallia. It is made from the tears of a water spirit… however it seems they were not able to contact the water spirits recently."

	“Whaat?!”		“Whaat?!”

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	“These feelings are not because of medicine. Because whenever I look at Saito my heart starts beating wildly. Not only that…I cannot breathe and feel helpless. I know, this feeling is…”		“These feelings are not because of medicine. Because whenever I look at Saito my heart starts beating wildly. Not only that…I cannot breathe and feel helpless. I know, this feeling is…”

	“I-it’s different. I would like it if they were your real feelings, but ~~it isn~~'t, it is different. This is because of the drug. The antidote will be ready by tomorrow night, so wait till then. Anyway, go to sleep now, okay?”		“I-it’s different. I would like it if they were your real feelings, but they aren't, it is different. This is because of the drug. The antidote will be ready by tomorrow night, so wait till then. Anyway, go to sleep now, okay?”

	Louise shook her head.		Louise shook her head.
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	“If you don’t do this - I won’t go to sleep.”		“If you don’t do this - I won’t go to sleep.”

	There was no other way. Saito closed his eyes and brought his lips to Louise’s neck. He touched it. A deep sigh escaped Louise’s lips. Never ~~hearing~~ such a cute sigh from her, Saito almost died.		There was no other way. Saito closed his eyes and brought his lips to Louise’s neck. He touched it. A deep sigh escaped Louise’s lips. Never having heard such a cute sigh from her before, Saito almost died.

	Very nervous, he sucked on Louise’s celadon skin. <!--Ummm, celadon, acording to Wikipedia is a green colour: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Celadon_(color)#Celadon Is this translated correctly? ~Dan--> <!--Coult it be porcelain? celadon also refers to a glazing used on porcelain. Also porcelain is a common metaphore for white skin ~Lys--><!--Nope it is really celadon and not porcelain, as those two words have different kaji. At first I also though he had in mind it is porcelain but celadon works as well as it means glazing usually used on white porcelain. It is not green, Dan, not in this context thats for sure - it is glaze~Darknemo2000-->		Very nervous, he sucked on Louise’s celadon skin. <!--Ummm, celadon, acording to Wikipedia is a green colour: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Celadon_(color)#Celadon Is this translated correctly? ~Dan--> <!--Coult it be porcelain? celadon also refers to a glazing used on porcelain. Also porcelain is a common metaphore for white skin ~Lys--><!--Nope it is really celadon and not porcelain, as those two words have different kaji. At first I also though he had in mind it is porcelain but celadon works as well as it means glazing usually used on white porcelain. It is not green, Dan, not in this context thats for sure - it is glaze~Darknemo2000-->
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	Louise must have been nervous too, as giving out such a cry seemed to confirm.		Louise must have been nervous too, as giving out such a cry seemed to confirm.

	Tiredness soon took over her and Louise started to ~~breath~~ in a faint sleeper’s way after a while.		Tiredness soon took over her and Louise started to breathe in a faint sleeper’s way after a while.

	Dazzled he looked at his own red mark on Louise’s nape of the neck. It looked like a red strawberry in the middle of white snow.		Dazzled he looked at his own red mark on Louise’s nape of the neck. It looked like a red strawberry in the middle of white snow.

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	“So-sorry…”		“So-sorry…”

	''Why doesn't she put on a skirt?!'' He tried to turn his eyes away from her body when he noticed another unexpected fact. ''Well… Lo-Louise, Louise Françoise – that rascal, the skirt wasn’t the only thing that she ~~missed…~~ Her panties are gone as well.''		''Why doesn't she put on a skirt?!'' He tried to turn his eyes away from her body when he noticed another unexpected fact. ''Well… Lo-Louise, Louise Françoise – that rascal, the skirt wasn’t the only thing that she was missing… Her panties are gone as well.''

	Her lower waist line was peeking up from the gap of her shirt. There were no signs of any underwear beneath.		Her lower waist line was peeking up from the gap of her shirt. There were no signs of any underwear beneath.

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	Saito said to them both. Then Guiche raised his forefinger and started talking.		Saito said to them both. Then Guiche raised his forefinger and started talking.

	“Listen. This world has two kinds of nobles. One kind are nobles that do not have the good fortune of money, ~~another~~ kind – nobles that have ~~the~~ money. For instance, de Montmorency. Montmorency's family, ~~fails in the~~ land reclamation and the management of ~~the~~ territory is horrible.”		“Listen. This world has two kinds of nobles. One kind are nobles that do not have the good fortune of money, and the other kind are nobles that do have money. For instance, de Montmorency, Montmorency's family, is a failure when it comes to land reclamation, and the management of their territory is horrible.”

	Montmorency cut in.		Montmorency cut in.

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	“S-Siesta?"		“S-Siesta?"

	~~Seems~~ like she was really mad. The composed smile only emphasized her cold anger.		It seemed like she was really mad. The composed smile only emphasized her cold anger.

	“Heeeh. That a highly prideful noble Miss Vallière would suddenly become clingy over Saito-san. What would make her change her mind about Saito-san? I’m worried.”		“Heeeh. That a highly prideful noble Miss Vallière would suddenly become clingy over Saito-san. What would make her change her mind about Saito-san? I’m worried.”

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	“No, it’s different. Louise isn’t herself. She’s acting funny. It can’t be helped, and now I have to get some of this food…”		“No, it’s different. Louise isn’t herself. She’s acting funny. It can’t be helped, and now I have to get some of this food…”

	~~Worried,~~ Saito said, ~~while~~ Siesta trampled on Saito’s feet, without breaking her smile.		Saito said worriedly. As he said this, Siesta trampled on Saito’s feet, without breaking her smile.

	“That’s great.”		“That’s great.”

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	The thrust out complex object was made from knitting wool. In any case, it seemed to be unwearable. Saito received it and tilted his head, trying to figure out it's purpose. By any means, could it still be something "to wear"? No, never. He had no inkling of where it could fit on the body.		The thrust out complex object was made from knitting wool. In any case, it seemed to be unwearable. Saito received it and tilted his head, trying to figure out it's purpose. By any means, could it still be something "to wear"? No, never. He had no inkling of where it could fit on the body.

	Louise kept on quietly watching Saito... with eyes that seemed to be moist from crying. Aah, ~~can~~'t help it when looked at with such eyes. They had an expecting look. Yet, he couldn't answer Louise's expectations as he didn't know what on earth it was for, however, he had to do something!		Louise kept on quietly watching Saito... with eyes that seemed to be moist from crying. Aah, he could't help it when he was looked at with such eyes. They had an expecting look. Yet, he couldn't answer Louise's expectations as he didn't know what on earth it was for, however, he had to do something!

	''What the heck is that''. Saito thought. ''Think! Yeaaah, looking at it, it seems similar to medusa stuffed toy. It also can be thought to be one of Burgess fauna's species that ruled the sea in the ancient earth. Though it looks like a mysterious animal, because Louise handed it over to me, it must have some use. Ah! Think!''		''What the heck is that''. Saito thought. ''Think! Yeaaah, looking at it, it seems similar to medusa stuffed toy. It also can be thought to be one of Burgess fauna's species that ruled the sea in the ancient earth. Though it looks like a mysterious animal, because Louise handed it over to me, it must have some use. Ah! Think!''