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	"Really, a woman who has no confidence in her charms is the worst. Don't you agree?"		"Really, a woman who has no confidence in her charms is the worst. Don't you agree?"

	"Go die! Anyways, it's all Guiche's fault, if he had ~~drunken~~ it we would not need to search for the antidote now!"		"Go die! Anyways, it's all Guiche's fault, if he had drunk it we would not need to search for the antidote now!"

	"Are you saying it's my fault to begin with?"		"Are you saying it's my fault to begin with?"

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	"You are really good, we stood no chance."		"You are really good, we stood no chance."

	"Victory or defeat is also dependent on luck. If your luck ~~is perfect~~ we ~~can~~ only run. Besides, you were fighting alone, Guiche was useless, Montmorency was only watching and Louise only dealt the final blow."		"Victory or defeat is also dependent on luck. If your luck were better, we could only have run. Besides, you were fighting alone, Guiche was useless, Montmorency was only watching and Louise only dealt the final blow."

	Kirche proudly brushed up her hair.		Kirche proudly brushed up her hair.
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	Louise was bashfully tracing circles with her finger on Saito's chest.		Louise was bashfully tracing circles with her finger on Saito's chest.

	"Then...promise me with a kiss."		"Then... promise me with a kiss."

	"What...?"		"What...?"
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	Kirche looked awkwardly towards Tabitha who had been staring into the fire with a glazed expression.		Kirche looked awkwardly towards Tabitha who had been staring into the fire with a glazed expression.

	"This is bad, we can't fight you but if we don't stop the Water Spirit Tabitha's family will be in trouble..."		"This is bad; we can't fight you, but if we don't stop the Water Spirit, Tabitha's family will be in trouble..."

	"Why is it necessary to get rid of it?"		"Why is it necessary to get rid of it?"

Stealth: Corrected weird wording

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Corrected weird wording

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	"Really, a woman who has no confidence in her charms is the worst. Don't you agree?"		"Really, a woman who has no confidence in her charms is the worst. Don't you agree?"

	"Go die! Anyways, is all Guiche's fault, if he had drunken it we would not need to search for the antidote now!"		"Go die! Anyways, it's all Guiche's fault, if he had drunken it we would not need to search for the antidote now!"

	"Are you saying it's my fault to begin with?"		"Are you saying it's my fault to begin with?"

Akirasav: water spirit

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water spirit

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 Saito, who had his eye healed<!--perhaps healed would work better here, cure seems more like something for sickness ~Lys replaced with healed ~Wushu--> by Montmorency's 'Water' spell, had begun questioning Kirche, who was roasting meat with Tabitha around a bonfire.  Guiche appeared to be completely content and had been talking loudly to himself with a glass of wine in his hand.  He seemed only too content to be traveling.  It was well past midnight, and the twin moons glittered beautifully over the surface of the lake. It was a wonderful sight.
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 When Saito said this, she began to cry. Saito gently stroked her head.

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	Saito, who had his eye healed~~<!--perhaps healed would work better here, cure seems more like something for sickness ~Lys replaced with healed ~Wushu-->~~ by Montmorency's 'Water' spell, had begun questioning Kirche, who was roasting meat with Tabitha around a bonfire. Guiche appeared to be completely content and had been talking loudly to himself with a glass of wine in his hand. He seemed only too content to be traveling. It was well past midnight, and the twin moons glittered beautifully over the surface of the lake. It was a wonderful sight.		Saito, who had his eye healed by Montmorency's Water spell, had begun questioning Kirche, who was roasting meat with Tabitha around a bonfire. Guiche appeared to be completely content and had been talking loudly to himself with a glass of wine in his hand. He seemed only too content to be traveling. It was well past midnight, and the twin moons glittered beautifully over the surface of the lake. It was a wonderful sight.

	Kirche approached Saito asking if his wound had recovered. Though Saito felt slightly bitter about being defeated, he could not help but admire both their team work.		Kirche approached Saito asking if his wound had recovered. Though Saito felt slightly bitter about being defeated, he could not help but admire both their team work.
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	Kirche proudly brushed up her hair.		Kirche proudly brushed up her hair.

	"But why are you attacking the ~~water spirit~~?" Saito asked, sitting near the bonfire.		"But why are you attacking the Water Spirit?" Saito asked, sitting near the bonfire.

	"Why do you need to protect it?" Kirche countered.		"Why do you need to protect it?" Kirche countered.
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	"Are you saying it's my fault to begin with?"		"Are you saying it's my fault to begin with?"

	Saito explained the situation to Kirche. In order to make the antidote, they needed the ~~water spirit~~'s tears. And in exchange for it they needed to repel the attackers...		Saito explained the situation to Kirche. In order to make the antidote, they needed the Water Spirit's tears. And in exchange for it they needed to repel the attackers...

	"So that was it, that's why you are protecting the ~~water spirit~~?"		"So that was it, that's why you are protecting the Water Spirit?"

	Kirche looked awkwardly towards Tabitha who had been staring into the fire with a glazed expression.		Kirche looked awkwardly towards Tabitha who had been staring into the fire with a glazed expression.

	"This is bad, we can't fight you but if we don't stop the ~~water spirit~~ Tabitha's family will be in trouble..."		"This is bad, we can't fight you but if we don't stop the Water Spirit Tabitha's family will be in trouble..."

	"Why is it necessary to get rid of it?"		"Why is it necessary to get rid of it?"
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	So that was it. They couldn't go home empty handed. Then how should they handle it... Saito considered it for a while and concluded.		So that was it. They couldn't go home empty handed. Then how should they handle it... Saito considered it for a while and concluded.

	"That's fine, you can stop attacking the ~~water spirit~~ and we can find out why the ~~water spirit~~ is raising the water level so much and ask it to stop."		"That's fine, you can stop attacking the Water Spirit and we can find out why the Water Spirit is raising the water level so much and ask it to stop."

	"The ~~water spirit~~ will listen to us?"		"The Water Spirit will listen to us?"

	"This morning we negotiated with it and it agreed to give us a part of its body if we stop the attackers."		"This morning we negotiated with it and it agreed to give us a part of its body if we stop the attackers."
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	Early the next morning, Montmorency, like the previous day, released her small frog familar into the lake to call the ~~water spirit~~. The water parted and the ~~water spirit~~ rose up through the morning mist.		Early the next morning, Montmorency, like the previous day, released her small frog familar into the lake to call the Water Spirit. The water parted and the Water Spirit rose up through the morning mist.

	"Water ~~spirit~~, the attackers will no longer bother you, as per the agreement will you give us a part of your body?"		"Water Spirit, the attackers will no longer bother you, as per the agreement will you give us a part of your body?"

	As Montmorency finished talking, the ~~water spirit~~'s body trembled and a portion of its body was repelled as a thin line into the vial Guiche was holding.		As Montmorency finished talking, the Water Spirit's body trembled and a portion of its body was repelled as a thin line into the vial Guiche was holding.

	Its promise completed, the ~~water spirit~~ sunk back towards the lake, however Saito quickly called for it to stop.		Its promise completed, the Water Spirit sunk back towards the lake, however Saito quickly called for it to stop.

	"Please wait! I have something to ask you!"		"Please wait! I have something to ask you!"

	The ~~water spirit~~ rose up from the water's surface, taking, to Montmorency's displeasure, a naked Montmorency's shape once again.		The Water Spirit rose up from the water's surface, taking, to Montmorency's displeasure, a naked Montmorency's shape once again.

	"What, mere human?"		"What, mere human?"
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	"Why have you raised the water? Please, if there is a reason can you tell us? We would be willing to help if you can stop."		"Why have you raised the water? Please, if there is a reason can you tell us? We would be willing to help if you can stop."

	The ~~water spirit~~'s body grew in size and assumed various positions. It concluded by twisting its form into that of Montmorency in a gesture that seemed to express feeling. Perhaps its form reflected its thoughts.		The Water Spirit's body grew in size and assumed various positions. It concluded by twisting its form into that of Montmorency in a gesture that seemed to express feeling. Perhaps its form reflected its thoughts.

	"I will consider entrusting this task to you. Since you honored our previous contract, I think I can trust you."		"I will consider entrusting this task to you. Since you honored our previous contract, I think I can trust you."

	Suddenly seeming angry, the ~~water spirit~~ paused. Saito said nothing, but waited for the spirit to continue. After several shape changes, the ~~water spirit~~ had settled once again in Montmorency's form and continued to speak.		Suddenly seeming angry, the Water Spirit paused. Saito said nothing, but waited for the spirit to continue. After several shape changes, the Water Spirit had settled once again in Montmorency's form and continued to speak.

	"A long time ago, your kind stole one of my treasures."		"A long time ago, your kind stole one of my treasures."
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	"You're willing to do so much?"		"You're willing to do so much?"

	This was going too far, the ~~water spirit~~ was willing to submerge an entire continent in order to reclaim its treasure in a process that could take hundreds, even thousands of years.		This was going too far, the Water Spirit was willing to submerge an entire continent in order to reclaim its treasure in a process that could take hundreds, even thousands of years.

	"You sure are patient."		"You sure are patient."
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	"Our concept of time is different, for me the whole is the same as the present. All time is the same to me, regardless of the present the future will always come. It makes no difference as I will always exist."		"Our concept of time is different, for me the whole is the same as the present. All time is the same to me, regardless of the present the future will always come. It makes no difference as I will always exist."

	The ~~water spirit~~ did not seem to have the concept of death. Time on this scale would be unimaginable to a human.		The Water Spirit did not seem to have the concept of death. Time on this scale would be unimaginable to a human.

	"Well, we can help you retrieve your treasure. What is it?"		"Well, we can help you retrieve your treasure. What is it?"
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	Kirche continued to mutter to herself, she felt as if she should have remembered something but couldn't grasp the thought.		Kirche continued to mutter to herself, she felt as if she should have remembered something but couldn't grasp the thought.

	Saito nodded with a firm resolution, and turned towards the ~~water spirit~~.		Saito nodded with a firm resolution, and turned towards the Water Spirit.

	"I understand. Please stop raising the water level and I guarantee you I will return your ring."		"I understand. Please stop raising the water level and I guarantee you I will return your ring."

	The ~~water spirit~~ vibrated.		The Water Spirit vibrated.

	"I believe you, if you can bring back the ring I will no longer raise the water."		"I believe you, if you can bring back the ring I will no longer raise the water."
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	"Then when should I bring it back to you?"		"Then when should I bring it back to you?"

	This time the ~~water spirit~~ shook and trembled.		This time the Water Spirit shook and trembled.

	"Before your life ends, otherwise I am unconcerned."		"Before your life ends, otherwise I am unconcerned."
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	"You don't mind such a long time?"		"You don't mind such a long time?"

	"I don't care, to me tomorrow is no different from any other part of the future." After saying this, the ~~water spirit~~ returned to the depths of the lake.		"I don't care, to me tomorrow is no different from any other part of the future." After saying this, the Water Spirit returned to the depths of the lake.

	In that flash, Tabitha stopped it by calling out.		In that flash, Tabitha stopped it by calling out.
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	Everyone stared at Tabitha in surprise. Although she had been with them all this time, this was the first time she had spoken out.		Everyone stared at Tabitha in surprise. Although she had been with them all this time, this was the first time she had spoken out.

	"Water ~~spirit~~, I wish to ask you something."		"Water Spirit, I wish to ask you something."

	"What is your question?"		"What is your question?"
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	The ~~water spirit~~, trembling, spoke. The sound rang in the air.		The Water Spirit, trembling, spoke. The sound rang in the air.

	"Because you are eternally unchanging, therefore you will forever carry our hopes."		"Because you are eternally unchanging, therefore you will forever carry our hopes."