Zero no Tsukaima:Volume4 Chapter9 - MTL - Revision history

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	“Princess-sama! No, Her Majesty, is she alright?!”		“Princess-sama! No, Her Majesty, is she alright?!”

	The courtyard was humming like a beehive. Nobles carrying shining magical wands and ~~solders~~ holding torches were looking for something. It was clear that something had happened in the royal palace.		The courtyard was humming like a beehive. Nobles carrying shining magical wands and soldiers holding torches were looking for something. It was clear that something had happened in the royal palace.

	“I don’t have to tell any of you anything. Leave at once.”		“I don’t have to tell any of you anything. Leave at once.”
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	“They went south over the highway. Apparently they escaped towards the district of La Rochelle. Without a doubt, Albion has a hand to this. Though the instruction to block the port was sent at once… Dragon Knight corps were almost annihilated in the last war. So the only way we can catch up with them are either by griffons or horses…”		“They went south over the highway. Apparently they escaped towards the district of La Rochelle. Without a doubt, Albion has a hand to this. Though the instruction to block the port was sent at once… Dragon Knight corps were almost annihilated in the last war. So the only way we can catch up with them are either by griffons or horses…”

	Wind dragons are much lighter than griffons thus they normally would take the pursuit… but the way things were now - it ~~iwas~~ questionable whether it was possible to catch up. Louise jumped onto the wind dragon again.		Wind dragons are much lighter than griffons thus they normally would take the pursuit… but the way things were now - it was questionable whether it was possible to catch up. Louise jumped onto the wind dragon again.

	“Hurry! The thief who kidnapped princess-sama escaped towards La Rochelle! We will be in serious trouble if we aren't able to catch up by the time the morning dawns!”		“Hurry! The thief who kidnapped princess-sama escaped towards La Rochelle! We will be in serious trouble if we aren't able to catch up by the time the morning dawns!”
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	Henrietta nodded. ''I always dreamt only about the day when Wales would hold me in his arms.''		Henrietta nodded. ''I always dreamt only about the day when Wales would hold me in his arms.''

	“Even with the way things are, the oath sworn before the water spirit cannot be broken. You only have to believe ~~only~~ in your own words. Please leave everything to me.”		“Even with the way things are, the oath sworn before the water spirit cannot be broken. You only have to believe in your own words. Please leave everything to me.”

	Each gentle word of Wales turned Henrietta more and more into a girl that did not know a thing. Henrietta kept nodding many times, just like a child. She was completely persuaded.		Each gentle word of Wales turned Henrietta more and more into a girl that did not know a thing. Henrietta kept nodding many times, just like a child. She was completely persuaded.

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	===Chapter Nine: Confrontation of Sadness===		===Chapter Nine: Confrontation of Sadness===

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	However, Wales didn't drop the smile.		However, Wales didn't drop the smile.

	“You are saying strong things. I cannot return her as she follows me on her own free-will.”		“You are saying strong things. I cannot return her as she follows me on her own free will.”

	“What?”		“What?”
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	Tabitha chanted the spell.		Tabitha chanted the spell.

	‘Windy Icicle’ – attack spell by skillful Tabitha.		‘Windy Icicle’ – an attack spell from the skillful Tabitha.

	Right in the middle of his words the arrow of ice went through Wales’ body.		Right in the middle of his words the arrow of ice went through Wales’ body.
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	“Look! It is not the prince! It is something else! Princess!”		“Look! It is not the prince! It is something else! Princess!”

	However, Henrietta did not want to believe, and shook her head from right to left~~. Then~~ said to Louise in a constrained voice.		However, Henrietta did not want to believe, and shook her head from right to left, then said to Louise in a constrained voice.

	“Please, Louise, put away the wand. Please do it for me. Please let us go.”		“Please, Louise, put away the wand. Please do it for me. Please let us go.”
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	“Throw your wands away! I do not want to kill you!”		“Throw your wands away! I do not want to kill you!”

	“Just wake up, ~~princess~~! Please!”		“Just wake up, Princess! Please!”

	Louise shouted, but her voice was drowned by the sounds of the increasingly heavier raindrops		Louise shouted, but her voice was drowned by the sounds of the increasingly heavier raindrops
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	Saito shouted anxiously. Kirche, who was about to say that, nodded as if she were expressing her disappointment.		Saito shouted anxiously. Kirche, who was about to say that, nodded as if she were expressing her disappointment.

	“Really, the Princess can cast a wall of water on us with this. My flame is worthless now. Tabitha’s wind and even your sword cannot damage them… Well, it is over. ~~Defeat~~!”		“Really, the Princess can cast a wall of water on us with this. My flame is worthless now. Tabitha’s wind and even your sword cannot damage them… Well, it is over. We are defeated!”

	Louise muttered in a constrained voice.		Louise muttered in a constrained voice.

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	Still, he…		Still, he…

	Wales, who was dead and was given a fake life from Cromwell using the Ring of Andvari, stolen from the water spirit, had abducted Henrietta.		Wales, who was dead and was given a fake life from Cromwell using the Ring of Andvari that was stolen from the water spirit, had abducted Henrietta.

	~~Thinking so~~, Saito ~~was getting angry at such unfair doing~~.		That was a cowardly act, Saito thought angrily.

	He gripped Derflinger on his shoulder. The rune on his left hand started to shine.		He gripped Derflinger on his shoulder. The rune on his left hand started to shine.

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	Henrietta nodded. ''I always dreamt only about the day when Wales would hold me in his arms.''		Henrietta nodded. ''I always dreamt only about the day when Wales would hold me in his arms.''

	“Even ~~though~~ the way things are, the oath sworn before the water spirit cannot be broken. You only have to believe only in your own words. Please leave everything to me.”		“Even with the way things are, the oath sworn before the water spirit cannot be broken. You only have to believe only in your own words. Please leave everything to me.”

	Each gentle word of Wales turned Henrietta more and more into a girl that did not know a thing. Henrietta kept nodding many times, just like a child. She was completely persuaded.		Each gentle word of Wales turned Henrietta more and more into a girl that did not know a thing. Henrietta kept nodding many times, just like a child. She was completely persuaded.
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	Then they hid themselves in the tall grass, one after another disappearing from sight.		Then they hid themselves in the tall grass, one after another disappearing from sight.

	~~The~~ line of the ambush.		This was the line of the ambush.

	Without words they and Wales formed a line of ambush, and stopped moving. Just like one living creature.		Without words they and Wales formed a line of ambush, and stopped moving. Just like one living creature.

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	Wales answered softly.		Wales answered softly.

	“You do not need to understand. You do not need to like oath<!--This fragment makes no sense as a whole. It looks like it's maybe two sentences mashed together "You do not need to. Like your oath, ..."~Lys--><!--I do not see what confuses you for me it sounds like a good sentences with a meaning "You do not need to like oath (that you make) - you only need to follow it. It is a single sentence and thats how it should be kept as well. It does sound random as Wales mentions oath oath bit of nowhere. But blame Noboru for that, not the translation. Maybe he assumed taht Henrietta and Wales know each other so well that even random seemingly 'off' things have a meaning for them.~Darknemo2000--><!--Without some kind of punctuation between the mention of not needing to and the mention of the oath the interpretation of the fragment is that like is a verb saying that what she does not need to do is consider the the oath in a favourable manner(like as a verb). Probably assumed by context is that the oath is henrietta's but in english it comes across more as a sort of caveman talk so even if it isn't there it should be insertered that he's referring to hernrietta's oath. ~Lys-->, you just need to follow it. Do you remember? The words of the oath you said at the Ragdorian lake. Words you said before the water spirit.”		“You do not need to understand. You do not need to like that oath<!--This fragment makes no sense as a whole. It looks like it's maybe two sentences mashed together "You do not need to. Like your oath, ..."~Lys--><!--I do not see what confuses you for me it sounds like a good sentences with a meaning "You do not need to like oath (that you make) - you only need to follow it. It is a single sentence and thats how it should be kept as well. It does sound random as Wales mentions oath oath bit of nowhere. But blame Noboru for that, not the translation. Maybe he assumed taht Henrietta and Wales know each other so well that even random seemingly 'off' things have a meaning for them.~Darknemo2000--><!--Without some kind of punctuation between the mention of not needing to and the mention of the oath the interpretation of the fragment is that like is a verb saying that what she does not need to do is consider the the oath in a favourable manner(like as a verb). Probably assumed by context is that the oath is henrietta's but in english it comes across more as a sort of caveman talk so even if it isn't there it should be insertered that he's referring to hernrietta's oath. ~Lys-->, you just need to follow it. Do you remember? The words of the oath you said at the Ragdorian lake. Words you said before the water spirit.”

	“By no means could I forget. I will remember until the day I die.”		“By no means could I forget. I will remember until the day I die.”

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	“I don’t have to tell any of you anything. Leave at once.”		“I don’t have to tell any of you anything. Leave at once.”

	Her face red with anger, Louise pulled out something from her pocket. It was the permit paper that Henrietta ~~gave~~ to Louise before.		Her face red with anger, Louise pulled out something from her pocket. It was the permit paper that Henrietta had given to Louise before.

	“I am a court lady who is under immediate control of Her Majesty! In my hand I hold the permit papers signed by the Queen! I have the right to exercise Her Majesty's jurisdiction! I request an immediate explanation of the circumstances!“		“I am a court lady who is under immediate control of Her Majesty! In my hand I hold the permit papers signed by the Queen! I have the right to exercise Her Majesty's jurisdiction! I request an immediate explanation of the circumstances!“
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	“Which way did they leave?”		“Which way did they leave?”

	“They went south over the highway. Apparently they escaped towards the district of La Rochelle. Without a doubt, Albion has a hand to this. Though the instruction to block the port was sent at once… Dragon Knight corps were almost annihilated in the last war. So the only way we can catch up with them are either by griffons or horses…”		“They went south over the highway. Apparently they escaped towards the district of La Rochelle. Without a doubt, Albion has a hand to this. Though the instruction to block the port was sent at once… the Dragon Knight corps were almost annihilated in the last war. So the only way we can catch up with them are either by griffons or horses…”

	Wind dragons are much lighter than griffons thus they normally would take the pursuit… but the way things were now - it ~~iwas~~ questionable whether it was possible to catch up. Louise jumped onto the wind dragon again.		Wind dragons are much lighter than griffons thus they normally would take the pursuit… but the way things were now - it was questionable whether it was possible to catch up. Louise jumped onto the wind dragon again.

	“Hurry! The thief who kidnapped ~~princess~~-sama escaped towards La Rochelle! We will be in serious trouble if we aren't able to catch up by the time the morning dawns!”		“Hurry! The thief who kidnapped Princess-sama escaped towards La Rochelle! We will be in serious trouble if we aren't able to catch up by the time the morning dawns!”

	Everyone, hearing the circumstances, nodded, looking tense. Tabitha gave the orders to the wind dragon.		Everyone, hearing the circumstances, nodded, looking tense. Tabitha gave the orders to the wind dragon.

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	“Princess-sama! No, Her Majesty, is she alright?!”		“Princess-sama! No, Her Majesty, is she alright?!”

	The courtyard was humming like a beehive. ~~The nobles were~~ carrying ~~the~~ shining magical wands~~, while~~ solders – torches, looking for something. It was clear that something happened in the royal palace.		The courtyard was humming like a beehive. Nobles carrying shining magical wands and solders holding torches were looking for something. It was clear that something had happened in the royal palace.

	“I don’t have to tell you anything~~, damned one~~. Leave at once.”		“I don’t have to tell any of you anything. Leave at once.”

	Her face red with anger, Louise pulled out something from her pocket. It was the permit paper that Henrietta gave to Louise before.		Her face red with anger, Louise pulled out something from her pocket. It was the permit paper that Henrietta gave to Louise before.

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	“I don’t have to tell any of you anything. Leave at once.”		“I don’t have to tell any of you anything. Leave at once.”

	Her face red with anger, Louise pulled out something from her pocket. It was the permit paper that Henrietta ~~had given~~ to Louise before.		Her face red with anger, Louise pulled out something from her pocket. It was the permit paper that Henrietta gave to Louise before.

	“I am a court lady who is under immediate control of Her Majesty! In my hand I hold the permit papers signed by the Queen! I have the right to exercise Her Majesty's jurisdiction! I request an immediate explanation of the circumstances!“		“I am a court lady who is under immediate control of Her Majesty! In my hand I hold the permit papers signed by the Queen! I have the right to exercise Her Majesty's jurisdiction! I request an immediate explanation of the circumstances!“
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	“Which way did they leave?”		“Which way did they leave?”

	“They went south over the highway. Apparently they escaped towards the district of La Rochelle. Without a doubt, Albion has a hand to this. Though the instruction to block the port was sent at once… ~~the~~ Dragon Knight corps were almost annihilated in the last war. So the only way we can catch up with them are either by griffons or horses…”		“They went south over the highway. Apparently they escaped towards the district of La Rochelle. Without a doubt, Albion has a hand to this. Though the instruction to block the port was sent at once… Dragon Knight corps were almost annihilated in the last war. So the only way we can catch up with them are either by griffons or horses…”

	Wind dragons are much lighter than griffons thus they normally would take the pursuit… but the way things were now - it ~~was~~ questionable whether it was possible to catch up. Louise jumped onto the wind dragon again.		Wind dragons are much lighter than griffons thus they normally would take the pursuit… but the way things were now - it iwas questionable whether it was possible to catch up. Louise jumped onto the wind dragon again.

	“Hurry! The thief who kidnapped ~~Princess~~-sama escaped towards La Rochelle! We will be in serious trouble if we aren't able to catch up by the time the morning dawns!”		“Hurry! The thief who kidnapped princess-sama escaped towards La Rochelle! We will be in serious trouble if we aren't able to catch up by the time the morning dawns!”

	Everyone, hearing the circumstances, nodded, looking tense. Tabitha gave the orders to the wind dragon.		Everyone, hearing the circumstances, nodded, looking tense. Tabitha gave the orders to the wind dragon.
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	After the wall of spells rounded upon the enemies, the knights launched an attack in an instant.		After the wall of spells rounded upon the enemies, the knights launched an attack in an instant.

	The flame ball, the blade of wind, the spear of ice, all aimed at the horses that enemies rode on. Doh! ~~Earth~~ trembled, making horses fall one after another. The commander confirmed that Queen Henrietta, dressed in her white gown, was riding behind the first horse. In an emergency situation like this, he hesitated – it was necessary to retrieve Her Majesty without injuries. If she were to be injured, he would get some major scolding later.		The flame ball, the blade of wind, the spear of ice, all were aimed at the horses that the enemies rode on. Doh! The earth trembled, making horses fall one after another. The commander confirmed that Queen Henrietta, dressed in her white gown, was riding behind the first horse. In an emergency situation like this, he hesitated – it was necessary to retrieve Her Majesty without injuries. If she were to be injured, he would get some major scolding later.

	After muttering an apology, the commander cast the wind spell, cutting the leg of the first horse off and throwing the Princess and the rider down to the ground.		After muttering an apology, the commander cast the wind spell, cutting the leg of the first horse off and throwing the Princess and the rider down to the ground.

	Without mercy, the griffon squad surrounded the fallen enemy knights. The necks of the abductors were cut with wind blades and ice spears went through their hearts. The knight who was leading the run had his head cut of by the commander’s wind blade, a deadly wound.		Without mercy, the griffon squad surrounded the fallen enemy knights. The necks of the abductors were cut with wind blades and ice spears went through their hearts. The knight who was leading the run had his head cut off by the commander’s wind blade, a deadly wound.

	The match was decided in a moment.		The match was decided in a moment.
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	“Ah!” groaned the commander trying to pull out his wand when his body was wrapped up by tornado.		“Ah!” groaned the commander trying to pull out his wand when his body was wrapped up by tornado.

	Limbs were cut off by the tornado, finishing them off in a moment, as the knight who should have been finished by the commander stood up, with a clearly visible torn up wound in his neck, and smiled.		Limbs were cut off by the tornado, finishing them off in a moment, as the knight who should have been finished by the commander stood up, with a clearly visible torn up wound on his neck, and smiled.