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	===Chapter Nine: Confrontation of Sadness===		===Chapter Nine: Confrontation of Sadness===

	Riding Tabitha‘s wind dragon, Saito, Louise, Kirche and Tabitha ~~herself flew towards~~ the royal palace~~, having left~~ the Academy ~~of Magic two hours ago~~. It was ~~one hour after midnight~~.		Riding on Tabitha‘s wind dragon, Saito, Louise, Kirche and Tabitha arrived at the royal palace about two hours after departing from the Academy. It was just past 1 am.

	The courtyard was in an uproar. Louise and Saito felt that their bad premonitions had come true. When the wind-dragon landed in the courtyard, it was instantly surrounded by the ~~magic guardian troops~~.		The courtyard was in an uproar. Louise and Saito felt that their bad premonitions had come true. When the wind-dragon landed in the courtyard, it was instantly surrounded by the Magic Guards Corps.

	The ~~commander~~ of Manticore Corps, ~~loudly ordered.~~		The captain of the Manticore Corps shouted, "Who are you! The royal palace is currently off-limits! Stay Away!"

	~~“Hey you! The royal palace is off-limits now! Leave!”~~		However, the captain had already recognized the group. They were the same that came right before the war with Albion began. His brow furrowed.

	~~However, he already recognized the group from sight. They were the same that came here right before the war against Albion started. The commander puckered up his brows.~~		"You all again!? You only appear at the most troublesome times!"

	~~“You~~ again! You only ~~come~~ at troublesome times!”

	Louise jumped down from a wind dragon. She had no time to play games of questions and answers with the captain of the guard. She asked in a breathless haste.		Louise jumped down from a wind dragon. She had no time to play games of questions and answers with the captain of the guard. She asked in a breathless haste.

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	The troop of hippogriffs, resembling a cross between a griffin and a horse, flew down the road. With the body of a horse, the forelimbs of a bird and a beak, the Hippogriffs possessed the fastest speed of the three squads of mythical beasts. In addition, they had fantastic night-vision, and as such were chosen for the pursuit. The squad numbering roughly a dozen burned with rage. The enemy had audaciously struck the palace under the cover of night. Never could they have imagined that the Royal Capital, let alone the Palace, could be attacked, and they were furious. Not to mention that the one kidnapped was the Young Queen Henrietta, who had just recently ascended to the throne. For the Royal Magic Guards, those tasked with protecting the court and Royal Family, there could be no greater disgrace.		The troop of hippogriffs, resembling a cross between a griffin and a horse, flew down the road. With the body of a horse, the forelimbs of a bird and a beak, the Hippogriffs possessed the fastest speed of the three squads of mythical beasts. In addition, they had fantastic night-vision, and as such were chosen for the pursuit. The squad numbering roughly a dozen burned with rage. The enemy had audaciously struck the palace under the cover of night. Never could they have imagined that the Royal Capital, let alone the Palace, could be attacked, and they were furious. Not to mention that the one kidnapped was the Young Queen Henrietta, who had just recently ascended to the throne. For the Royal Magic Guards, those tasked with protecting the court and Royal Family, there could be no greater disgrace.

	Using their bird-like forelegs and horse-like hindlegs, the Hippogriffs advanced, ~~jumping and hopping~~ forward. Their departure had been delayed due to the confusion, but the enemy was using horses. A Hippogriff~~'s legs are~~ twice as fast as a horse's. There was no reason they couldn't catch up. The captain sternly urged his men.		Using their bird-like forelegs and horse-like hindlegs, the Hippogriffs advanced, bounding forward. Their departure had been delayed due to the confusion, but the enemy was using horses. A Hippogriff is twice as fast as a horse. There was no reason they couldn't catch up. The captain sternly urged his men.

	"Forward! We must catch up with Her Majesty as soon as possible!"		"Forward! We must catch up with Her Majesty as soon as possible!"
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	A groan escaped the captain's lips, and as he reached out to swing his staff, a massive tornado engulfed him.		A groan escaped the captain's lips, and as he reached out to swing his staff, a massive tornado engulfed him.

	The tornado sliced off his limbs, and in an instant his consciousness began to fade. It was then that he saw the knight he thought he killed stand up, cut throat exposed, smiling ~~clearly~~.		The tornado sliced off his limbs, and in an instant his consciousness began to fade. It was then that he saw clearly the knight he thought he killed stand up, cut throat exposed, smiling.

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	The troop of hippogriffs, resembling a cross between a griffin and a horse, flew down the road. With the body of a horse, the forelimbs of a bird and a beak, the Hippogriffs possessed the fastest speed of the three mythical beasts. In addition, they ~~possessed~~ fantastic night-vision, and as such were chosen for the pursuit. The squad numbering roughly a dozen burned with rage. The enemy had audaciously ~~attacked~~ the palace under the cover of night. Never could they have imagined that the Royal Capital, let alone the Palace, could be attacked, and they were furious. ~~Let alone the fact~~ that the one kidnapped ~~with~~ the Young Queen Henrietta, who had just recently ascended to the throne. For the Royal Magic Guards, those tasked with protecting the court and Royal Family, there could be no greater disgrace.		The troop of hippogriffs, resembling a cross between a griffin and a horse, flew down the road. With the body of a horse, the forelimbs of a bird and a beak, the Hippogriffs possessed the fastest speed of the three squads of mythical beasts. In addition, they had fantastic night-vision, and as such were chosen for the pursuit. The squad numbering roughly a dozen burned with rage. The enemy had audaciously struck the palace under the cover of night. Never could they have imagined that the Royal Capital, let alone the Palace, could be attacked, and they were furious. Not to mention that the one kidnapped was the Young Queen Henrietta, who had just recently ascended to the throne. For the Royal Magic Guards, those tasked with protecting the court and Royal Family, there could be no greater disgrace.

	Hippogriffs ~~taking use of their wings~~ and ~~feet rushed forwards~~. ~~Though the~~ departure ~~was~~ delayed due to ~~all~~ the confusion, the enemy was ~~still~~ using horses. There was no reason they ~~should not be able to~~ catch up. The ~~commander scolded the unit harshly~~.		Using their bird-like forelegs and horse-like hindlegs, the Hippogriffs advanced, jumping and hopping forward. Their departure had been delayed due to the confusion, but the enemy was using horses. A Hippogriff's legs are twice as fast as a horse's. There was no reason they couldn't catch up. The captain sternly urged his men.

	~~“Run~~! ~~Catch~~ up with Her Majesty as soon as possible!”		"Forward! We must catch up with Her Majesty as soon as possible!"

	~~One group of the~~ Hippogriff ~~unit dashed~~ forward.		The Hippogriff Corps advanced forward as one. Suddenly, the leading knight's hippogriff violently shuddered.

	~~There was~~ a ~~big hustle between~~ the ~~Hippogriff units going~~ ahead.		It must have found something. At the captain's signal, a fire mage launched a fireball forward. Illuminated by the light, a group of galloping horses could be seen on the road 100 mails ahead. There were about 10 riders.

	~~They might have found something. Under~~ the ~~commander’s signal, a fire user went forward and launched a flame spell. It lit the highway 100 mails ahead, and one could see distant figures of the riders~~.		A ferocious smile stretched across the captain's face.

	~~There were ten times as many of them~~.		They would repay this humiliation tenfold.

	~~The commander put on a brutal smile.~~		"Aim for the horses first! Hitting Her Majesty would be unforgivable!"

	~~“First of all aim for~~ the ~~horses! Do not hurt Her Majesty!”~~		The Hippogriff Corps closed the distance in an instant, firing spell after spell.

	~~The Hippogriff~~ Corps ~~dashed forwards, launching one spell after another~~.		After a knight cast an earth wall to block the enemies' escape, the Corps immediately launched a storm of attacks.

	~~After~~ the ~~wall~~ of ~~spells rounded upon~~ the ~~enemies,~~ the ~~knights launched~~ an ~~attack in~~ an ~~instant~~.		Balls of fire, blades of wind, and spears of ice flew towards the enemy's horses. The earth trembled as the horses fell one by one. The captain saw the white gown of Queen Henrietta on the back of the lead horse. He hesitated for an instant, but this was an emergency, and he should count himself lucky if only injuries occurred to her. He would accept as many reprimands as needed later.

	~~The flame ball~~, the ~~blade of~~ wind, the ~~spear~~ of ~~ice, all were aimed at~~ the ~~horses that~~ the ~~enemies rode on~~. ~~Doh! The earth trembled, making horses fall one after another~~. The ~~commander confirmed that Queen Henrietta~~, ~~dressed in her white gown, was riding behind~~ the ~~first horse~~. ~~In an emergency situation like this, he hesitated – it~~ was ~~necessary to retrieve Her Majesty without injuries~~. ~~If she were to be injured, he would get some major scolding later~~.		Muttering a quiet apology, the captain used a wind spell and sliced the horse's leg open, throwing the Queen and the rider to the earth. Meanwhile, the rest of the veteran Hippogriff Corps mercilessly finished off the fallen riders with their magic. Blades of wind sliced open the abductors' throats as spears of ice barreled through their chests. The captain himself unleashed a particularly large blade of wind on the fallen, motionless knight who had been leading the charge. His neck was slashed open. A fatal wound.

	~~After muttering~~ an ~~apology, the commander cast the wind spell, cutting the leg of the first horse off and throwing the Princess and the rider down to the ground~~.		The battle was decided in an instant.

	~~Without mercy~~, the ~~Hippogriff squad surrounded~~ the ~~fallen enemy knights~~. ~~The necks of the abductors were cut with wind blades and ice spears went through their hearts~~. ~~The knight who was leading the run had his head cut off by the commander’s wind blade, a deadly wound~~.		The captain, satisfied, nodded to his troops and ordered them to halt. Leaping from his hippogriff, he approached the dense grass where the Queen lay. But in that moment...

	The ~~match was decided in a moment~~.		The knights, who they had supposedly slain, rose one by one. Before they could react, magic flew, felling his subordinates and their hippogriffs who had grown complacent from their victory.

	~~When~~ the ~~commander nodded approvingly~~, ~~the unit stopped~~.		A groan escaped the captain's lips, and as he reached out to swing his staff, a massive tornado engulfed him.

	~~Then he jumped down from~~ his ~~Hippogriff~~, and the ~~moment~~ he ~~approached the queen who fell into the grass…~~		The tornado sliced off his limbs, and in an instant his consciousness began to fade. It was then that he saw the knight he thought he killed stand up, cut throat exposed, smiling clearly.

	~~Knights, who should have been dead, stood up one after another.~~

	~~Hippogriff knights, who had relaxed their guard thinking that enemy was annihilated were now caught by surprise by enemy magic.~~

	~~“Ah!” groaned the commander trying to pull out his wand when his body was wrapped up by tornado.~~

	~~Limbs were cut off by the tornado, finishing them off in a moment, as the knight who should have been finished by the commander stood up, with a clearly visible torn up wound on his neck, and smiled.~~

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	He was a serviceman though. No matter how one looked, a superior officer was still a superior officer. Standing upright at once, he reported the situation concerning Her Majesty.		He was a serviceman though. No matter how one looked, a superior officer was still a superior officer. Standing upright at once, he reported the situation concerning Her Majesty.

	“Two hours ago, someone enticed Her Majesty away. One of the guards was knocked down as they escaped with horses. The ~~griffon squad~~ is chasing after them. We were searching around here to find some evidence.”		“Two hours ago, someone enticed Her Majesty away. One of the guards was knocked down as they escaped with horses. The Hippogriff Corps is chasing after them. We were searching around here to find some evidence.”

	Louise's complexion changed.		Louise's complexion changed.
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	“Which way did they leave?”		“Which way did they leave?”

	“They went south over the highway. Apparently they escaped towards the district of La Rochelle. Without a doubt, Albion has a hand to this. Though the instruction to block the port was sent at once… Dragon Knight corps were almost annihilated in the last war. So the only way we can catch up with them are either by ~~griffons~~ or horses…”		“They went south over the highway. Apparently they escaped towards the district of La Rochelle. Without a doubt, Albion has a hand to this. Though the instruction to block the port was sent at once… Dragon Knight corps were almost annihilated in the last war. So the only way we can catch up with them are either by Hippogriffs or horses…”

	Wind dragons are much lighter than ~~griffons~~ thus they normally would take the pursuit… but the way things were now - it was questionable whether it was possible to catch up. Louise jumped onto the wind dragon again.		Wind dragons are much lighter than Hippogriffs thus they normally would take the pursuit… but the way things were now - it was questionable whether it was possible to catch up. Louise jumped onto the wind dragon again.

	“Hurry! The thief who kidnapped princess-sama escaped towards La Rochelle! We will be in serious trouble if we aren't able to catch up by the time the morning dawns!”		“Hurry! The thief who kidnapped princess-sama escaped towards La Rochelle! We will be in serious trouble if we aren't able to catch up by the time the morning dawns!”
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	The ~~griffon unit had split into two~~, ~~one~~ flew ~~by griffon along~~ the ~~highway~~, the ~~other rode on horses. It was to be expected as~~ the ~~Griffon Corps was~~ the ~~lightest~~ of the three ~~squads and~~ they ~~could see better at~~ night~~. Therefore~~, ~~it was~~ chosen as the ~~chasing unit~~. ~~A lot of people in the~~ squad ~~were burning~~ with ~~anger~~. The enemy attacked the ~~court~~ under the cover of ~~darkness~~. ~~Even in their wildest dreams one~~ could ~~not imagine~~ that ~~someone would dare to attack~~ the ~~palace of~~ the ~~capital~~. ~~Moreover, it was young queen~~ Henrietta ~~that was abducted~~, ~~a successor of~~ the throne. For ~~magic knights that have been guardians of royal family~~ there could ~~not~~ be a greater disgrace ~~than this~~.		The troop of hippogriffs, resembling a cross between a griffin and a horse, flew down the road. With the body of a horse, the forelimbs of a bird and a beak, the Hippogriffs possessed the fastest speed of the three mythical beasts. In addition, they possessed fantastic night-vision, and as such were chosen for the pursuit. The squad numbering roughly a dozen burned with rage. The enemy had audaciously attacked the palace under the cover of night. Never could they have imagined that the Royal Capital, let alone the Palace, could be attacked, and they were furious. Let alone the fact that the one kidnapped with the Young Queen Henrietta, who had just recently ascended to the throne. For the Royal Magic Guards, those tasked with protecting the court and Royal Family, there could be no greater disgrace.

	~~Griffons~~ taking use of their wings and feet rushed forwards. Though the departure was delayed due to all the confusion, the enemy was still using horses. There was no reason they should not be able to catch up. The commander scolded the unit harshly.		Hippogriffs taking use of their wings and feet rushed forwards. Though the departure was delayed due to all the confusion, the enemy was still using horses. There was no reason they should not be able to catch up. The commander scolded the unit harshly.

	“Run! Catch up with Her Majesty as soon as possible!”		“Run! Catch up with Her Majesty as soon as possible!”

	One group of the ~~Griffon~~ unit dashed forward.		One group of the Hippogriff unit dashed forward.

	There was a big hustle between the ~~Griffon~~ units going ahead.		There was a big hustle between the Hippogriff units going ahead.

	They might have found something. Under the commander’s signal, a fire user went forward and launched a flame spell. It lit the highway 100 mails ahead, and one could see distant figures of the riders.		They might have found something. Under the commander’s signal, a fire user went forward and launched a flame spell. It lit the highway 100 mails ahead, and one could see distant figures of the riders.
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	“First of all aim for the horses! Do not hurt Her Majesty!”		“First of all aim for the horses! Do not hurt Her Majesty!”

	The ~~Griffon~~ Corps dashed forwards, launching one spell after another.		The Hippogriff Corps dashed forwards, launching one spell after another.

	After the wall of spells rounded upon the enemies, the knights launched an attack in an instant.		After the wall of spells rounded upon the enemies, the knights launched an attack in an instant.
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	After muttering an apology, the commander cast the wind spell, cutting the leg of the first horse off and throwing the Princess and the rider down to the ground.		After muttering an apology, the commander cast the wind spell, cutting the leg of the first horse off and throwing the Princess and the rider down to the ground.

	Without mercy, the ~~griffon~~ squad surrounded the fallen enemy knights. The necks of the abductors were cut with wind blades and ice spears went through their hearts. The knight who was leading the run had his head cut off by the commander’s wind blade, a deadly wound.		Without mercy, the Hippogriff squad surrounded the fallen enemy knights. The necks of the abductors were cut with wind blades and ice spears went through their hearts. The knight who was leading the run had his head cut off by the commander’s wind blade, a deadly wound.

	The match was decided in a moment.		The match was decided in a moment.
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	When the commander nodded approvingly, the unit stopped.		When the commander nodded approvingly, the unit stopped.

	Then he jumped down from his ~~griffon~~, and the moment he approached the queen who fell into the grass…		Then he jumped down from his Hippogriff, and the moment he approached the queen who fell into the grass…

	Knights, who should have been dead, stood up one after another.		Knights, who should have been dead, stood up one after another.

	~~Griffon~~ knights, who had relaxed their guard thinking that enemy was annihilated were now caught by surprise by enemy magic.		Hippogriff knights, who had relaxed their guard thinking that enemy was annihilated were now caught by surprise by enemy magic.

	“Ah!” groaned the commander trying to pull out his wand when his body was wrapped up by tornado.		“Ah!” groaned the commander trying to pull out his wand when his body was wrapped up by tornado.
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	“Princess.”		“Princess.”

	Saito muttered. Burning corpses with their hands and feet cut off were laying around. ~~Griffons~~ and horses were lying in pools of their own blood. This must have been the ~~griffon~~ unit.		Saito muttered. Burning corpses with their hands and feet cut off were laying around. Hippogriffs and horses were lying in pools of their own blood. This must have been the Hippogriff unit.

	“There’s someone alive!”		“There’s someone alive!”
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	“Princess-sama! No, Her Majesty, is she alright?!”		“Princess-sama! No, Her Majesty, is she alright?!”

	The courtyard was humming like a beehive. Nobles carrying shining magical wands and ~~solders~~ holding torches were looking for something. It was clear that something had happened in the royal palace.		The courtyard was humming like a beehive. Nobles carrying shining magical wands and soldiers holding torches were looking for something. It was clear that something had happened in the royal palace.

	“I don’t have to tell any of you anything. Leave at once.”		“I don’t have to tell any of you anything. Leave at once.”
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	“They went south over the highway. Apparently they escaped towards the district of La Rochelle. Without a doubt, Albion has a hand to this. Though the instruction to block the port was sent at once… Dragon Knight corps were almost annihilated in the last war. So the only way we can catch up with them are either by griffons or horses…”		“They went south over the highway. Apparently they escaped towards the district of La Rochelle. Without a doubt, Albion has a hand to this. Though the instruction to block the port was sent at once… Dragon Knight corps were almost annihilated in the last war. So the only way we can catch up with them are either by griffons or horses…”

	Wind dragons are much lighter than griffons thus they normally would take the pursuit… but the way things were now - it ~~iwas~~ questionable whether it was possible to catch up. Louise jumped onto the wind dragon again.		Wind dragons are much lighter than griffons thus they normally would take the pursuit… but the way things were now - it was questionable whether it was possible to catch up. Louise jumped onto the wind dragon again.

	“Hurry! The thief who kidnapped princess-sama escaped towards La Rochelle! We will be in serious trouble if we aren't able to catch up by the time the morning dawns!”		“Hurry! The thief who kidnapped princess-sama escaped towards La Rochelle! We will be in serious trouble if we aren't able to catch up by the time the morning dawns!”
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	Henrietta nodded. ''I always dreamt only about the day when Wales would hold me in his arms.''		Henrietta nodded. ''I always dreamt only about the day when Wales would hold me in his arms.''

	“Even with the way things are, the oath sworn before the water spirit cannot be broken. You only have to believe ~~only~~ in your own words. Please leave everything to me.”		“Even with the way things are, the oath sworn before the water spirit cannot be broken. You only have to believe in your own words. Please leave everything to me.”

	Each gentle word of Wales turned Henrietta more and more into a girl that did not know a thing. Henrietta kept nodding many times, just like a child. She was completely persuaded.		Each gentle word of Wales turned Henrietta more and more into a girl that did not know a thing. Henrietta kept nodding many times, just like a child. She was completely persuaded.

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	===Chapter Nine: Confrontation of Sadness===		===Chapter Nine: Confrontation of Sadness===

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	However, Wales didn't drop the smile.		However, Wales didn't drop the smile.

	“You are saying strong things. I cannot return her as she follows me on her own free-will.”		“You are saying strong things. I cannot return her as she follows me on her own free will.”

	“What?”		“What?”
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	Tabitha chanted the spell.		Tabitha chanted the spell.

	‘Windy Icicle’ – attack spell by skillful Tabitha.		‘Windy Icicle’ – an attack spell from the skillful Tabitha.

	Right in the middle of his words the arrow of ice went through Wales’ body.		Right in the middle of his words the arrow of ice went through Wales’ body.
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	“Look! It is not the prince! It is something else! Princess!”		“Look! It is not the prince! It is something else! Princess!”

	However, Henrietta did not want to believe, and shook her head from right to left~~. Then~~ said to Louise in a constrained voice.		However, Henrietta did not want to believe, and shook her head from right to left, then said to Louise in a constrained voice.

	“Please, Louise, put away the wand. Please do it for me. Please let us go.”		“Please, Louise, put away the wand. Please do it for me. Please let us go.”
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	“Throw your wands away! I do not want to kill you!”		“Throw your wands away! I do not want to kill you!”

	“Just wake up, ~~princess~~! Please!”		“Just wake up, Princess! Please!”

	Louise shouted, but her voice was drowned by the sounds of the increasingly heavier raindrops		Louise shouted, but her voice was drowned by the sounds of the increasingly heavier raindrops
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	Saito shouted anxiously. Kirche, who was about to say that, nodded as if she were expressing her disappointment.		Saito shouted anxiously. Kirche, who was about to say that, nodded as if she were expressing her disappointment.

	“Really, the Princess can cast a wall of water on us with this. My flame is worthless now. Tabitha’s wind and even your sword cannot damage them… Well, it is over. ~~Defeat~~!”		“Really, the Princess can cast a wall of water on us with this. My flame is worthless now. Tabitha’s wind and even your sword cannot damage them… Well, it is over. We are defeated!”

	Louise muttered in a constrained voice.		Louise muttered in a constrained voice.

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	Still, he…		Still, he…

	Wales, who was dead and was given a fake life from Cromwell using the Ring of Andvari, stolen from the water spirit, had abducted Henrietta.		Wales, who was dead and was given a fake life from Cromwell using the Ring of Andvari that was stolen from the water spirit, had abducted Henrietta.

	~~Thinking so~~, Saito ~~was getting angry at such unfair doing~~.		That was a cowardly act, Saito thought angrily.

	He gripped Derflinger on his shoulder. The rune on his left hand started to shine.		He gripped Derflinger on his shoulder. The rune on his left hand started to shine.

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	Henrietta nodded. ''I always dreamt only about the day when Wales would hold me in his arms.''		Henrietta nodded. ''I always dreamt only about the day when Wales would hold me in his arms.''

	“Even ~~though~~ the way things are, the oath sworn before the water spirit cannot be broken. You only have to believe only in your own words. Please leave everything to me.”		“Even with the way things are, the oath sworn before the water spirit cannot be broken. You only have to believe only in your own words. Please leave everything to me.”

	Each gentle word of Wales turned Henrietta more and more into a girl that did not know a thing. Henrietta kept nodding many times, just like a child. She was completely persuaded.		Each gentle word of Wales turned Henrietta more and more into a girl that did not know a thing. Henrietta kept nodding many times, just like a child. She was completely persuaded.
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	Then they hid themselves in the tall grass, one after another disappearing from sight.		Then they hid themselves in the tall grass, one after another disappearing from sight.

	~~The~~ line of the ambush.		This was the line of the ambush.

	Without words they and Wales formed a line of ambush, and stopped moving. Just like one living creature.		Without words they and Wales formed a line of ambush, and stopped moving. Just like one living creature.