Zero no Tsukaima:Volume5 Story1 - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 06:53, 13 October 2015

2015-10-13T06:53:25Z

Coffeezombie: change to pronoun

2015-07-05T16:13:47Z

change to pronoun

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	"That is this 'Charming Faeries' Bustier'!"		"That is this 'Charming Faeries' Bustier'!"

	Emphatically, Scarron stripped off his outer garments and trousers. This time, Saito, who had been watching distantly, went "Ouue" and vomited. That was because Scarron was wearing a short and sexy, black bustier that fit ~~Scarron's~~ body perfectly.		Emphatically, Scarron stripped off his outer garments and trousers. This time, Saito, who had been watching distantly, went "Ouue" and vomited. That was because Scarron was wearing a short and sexy, black bustier that fit his body perfectly.

	"This 'Charming Faeries' Bustier' that the king sent to the girl he loved four-hundred years ago is my family's heirloom! This bustier has a magic that allows it to change its size depending on its wearer's constitution as well as the magic "Attraction" cast on it."		"This 'Charming Faeries' Bustier' that the king sent to the girl he loved four-hundred years ago is my family's heirloom! This bustier has a magic that allows it to change its size depending on its wearer's constitution as well as the magic "Attraction" cast on it."

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2015-07-05T10:08:54Z

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	"So what?! I've already lost fifteen times. No matter how you think about it, I'll win next time. It'd be weird if I didn't. If I'm going to win, I might as well win big!"		"So what?! I've already lost fifteen times. No matter how you think about it, I'll win next time. It'd be weird if I didn't. If I'm going to win, I might as well win big!"

	Louise's reddish-brown eyes were glittering. It reminded him of the eyes of his uncle, who had failed at ~~stock~~ and ~~ran~~ away at night. He had these eyes the last time Saito saw him.		Louise's reddish-brown eyes were glittering. It reminded him of the eyes of his uncle, who had failed at stocks and had run away at night. He had these eyes the last time Saito saw him.

	On that day, the stock he said would rise greatly crashed downwards instead.		On that day, the stock he said would rise greatly crashed downwards instead.

Coffeezombie: fix verb tenses

2015-07-05T09:51:17Z

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	But, judging from the look on Louise's face, it seemed that the suggestion was rejected again.		But, judging from the look on Louise's face, it seemed that the suggestion was rejected again.

	The front gate which was filled with students going home could be seen from the plaza. The students, who ~~have~~ waited days to go home, ~~will ride~~ by carriage. They ~~will go~~ back to their hometown, being encouraged by their parents to return to the capital of Tristania. Tristain Academy of Magic would be on a long summer vacation starting from tomorrow. It would be a two and a half month long holiday.		The front gate, which was filled with students going home, could be seen from the plaza. The students, who had waited days to go home, were riding by carriage. They were going back to their hometown, being encouraged by their parents to return to the capital of Tristania. Tristain Academy of Magic would be on a long summer vacation starting from tomorrow. It would be a two and a half month long holiday.

	"You-you know, Miss Vallière. I think Saito-san needs a break as well."		"You-you know, Miss Vallière. I think Saito-san needs a break as well."

Vaelis at 11:52, 21 April 2012

2012-04-21T11:52:58Z

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	\| [[Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume5_Illustrations\|Back to ~~Color~~ Illustrations]]		\| [[Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume5_Illustrations\|Back to Novel Illustrations]]
	\| [[Zero_no_Tsukaima\|Return to Main Page]]		\| [[Zero_no_Tsukaima\|Return to Main Page]]
	\| [[Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume5_Story2\|Forward to ~~story~~ 2]]		\| [[Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume5_Story2\|Forward to Story 2]]
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Vaelis at 11:52, 21 April 2012

2012-04-21T11:52:13Z

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	===~~Chapter One~~: The "Charming Fairies" Inn===		===Story 1: The "Charming Fairies" Inn===
			==== Chapter 1 ====
	==== ~~Part~~ 1 ====


	"Alright, starting tomorrow is summer break."		"Alright, starting tomorrow is summer break."

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	"Do you think you're in a position to choose?"		"Do you think you're in a position to choose?"

	==== ~~Part~~ 2 ====		==== Chapter 2 ====


	"Good words! Fairies!"		"Good words! Fairies!"
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	"Try your best. If you beat me in the tip race, I won't ever call you a brat again."		"Try your best. If you beat me in the tip race, I won't ever call you a brat again."

	==== ~~Part~~ 3 ====		==== Chapter 3 ====

	"Faeries! Finally, the awaited week has come!"		"Faeries! Finally, the awaited week has come!"
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	In an almost crying voice, Saito persistently asked Louise. But, "Shut up! I'm going to sleep!" Louise shouted... and Saito down-heartedly crawled into bed.		In an almost crying voice, Saito persistently asked Louise. But, "Shut up! I'm going to sleep!" Louise shouted... and Saito down-heartedly crawled into bed.

			==== Chapter 4 ====


	==== ~~Part~~ 4 ====

	The final day of the tip race had come. On the evening of that day, Scarron announced the progress so far.		The final day of the tip race had come. On the evening of that day, Scarron announced the progress so far.
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	\| [[Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume5_Illustrations\|Back to Color Illustrations]]		\| [[Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume5_Illustrations\|Back to Color Illustrations]]
	\| [[Zero_no_Tsukaima\|Return to Main Page]]		\| [[Zero_no_Tsukaima\|Return to Main Page]]
	\| [[Zero_no_Tsukaima:~~Volume5_Chapter2~~\|Forward to ~~Chapter~~ 2]]		\| [[Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume5_Story2\|Forward to story 2]]
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Vaelis: moved Zero no Tsukaima:Volume5 Chapter1 to Zero no Tsukaima:Volume5 Story1

2012-04-21T11:49:56Z

moved Zero no Tsukaima:Volume5 Chapter1 to Zero no Tsukaima:Volume5 Story1

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Vaelis at 08:52, 20 April 2012

2012-04-20T08:52:50Z

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	Saito had been madly in love with her since a long time ago... so, that "Attraction" magic was already meaningless.		Saito had been madly in love with her since a long time ago... so, that "Attraction" magic was already meaningless.

	~~----~~

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Zeth: /* Part 2 */

2012-04-14T04:39:33Z

Part 2

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	Louise exhaled and tried to calm herself down.		Louise exhaled and tried to calm herself down.
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	''This is a mission. This is a mission. Information gathering while disguised as commoners. Information gathering...''		''This is a mission. This is a mission. Information gathering while disguised as commoners. Information gathering...''

Morgi: /* Part 1 */

2012-03-06T10:18:01Z

Part 1

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	Saito's scream resounded. The guests placing chips turned around and put on bitter smiles.		Saito's scream resounded. The guests placing chips turned around and put on bitter smiles.

	It was a scene that occurred ~~everyday~~.		It was a scene that occurred every day.

	"You haven't even won once."		"You haven't even won once."

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	After all of this happened, the two left for Tristania. In order to hide their social status, they could not use a coach. The horses at the academy were the academy's, so they could not use those. In the end, they walked.		After all of this happened, the two left for Tristania. In order to hide their social status, they could not use a coach. The horses at the academy were the academy's, so they could not use those. In the end, they walked.

	Louise and Saito walked on the road under the scorching sun, heading towards Tristania. It ~~takes~~ two days to get there.		Louise and Saito walked on the road under the scorching sun, heading towards Tristania. It took two days to get there.

	Looking reproachfully at the sun, Saito whispered,		Looking reproachfully at the sun, Saito whispered,
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	Well, it was this way the whole time, so Louise didn't get any tips that day.		Well, it was this way the whole time, so Louise didn't get any tips that day.

	Louise shuddered that as a result of trying to remain silent, the number of times the sole of her foot would fly ~~increases~~ in place of her abusive language. It ~~seems~~ the feelings she could not express out loud were said by her foot's sole instead.		Louise shuddered that as a result of trying to remain silent, the number of times the sole of her foot would fly increased in place of her abusive language. It seemed the feelings she could not express out loud were said by her foot's sole instead.

	On the next morning, Louise consulted with Saito on what to do. Saito proposed that to prevent her foot's sole from flying, Louise should take off her panties and do work, and was hit.		On the next morning, Louise consulted with Saito on what to do. Saito proposed that to prevent her foot's sole from flying, Louise should take off her panties and do work, and was hit.
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	Louise, after washing dishes through the night, looked at her own hands and sighed. Louise's fingers that had never washed anything before had become bright red due to unaccustomed kitchen work and were hurting thanks to the cold water and soap.		Louise, after washing dishes through the night, looked at her own hands and sighed. Louise's fingers that had never washed anything before had become bright red due to unaccustomed kitchen work and were hurting thanks to the cold water and soap.

	''Why do I have to do something like this?'' She thought. Even though she herself is a noble, she ~~has~~ to wash dishes... Having to serve all of those commoners...		''Why do I have to do something like this?'' She thought. Even though she herself was a noble, she had to wash dishes... Having to serve all of those commoners...

	Plus, a bar girl talked so impertinently to me......		Plus, a bar girl talked so impertinently to me......

	"No more." Louise muttered. ''Whether it's information gathering or whatever, this isn't my job. I'm a legend. I'm the user of Void, you know. Yet why, do I have to be a waitress at a bar? Shouldn't, like, a more showy mission be waiting for me?''		"No more." Louise muttered. ''Whether it's information gathering or whatever, this isn't my job. I'm a legend. I'm the user of Void, you know. Yet why do I have to be a waitress at a bar? Shouldn't, like, a more showy mission be waiting for me?''

	Thinking like that, tears felt like pouring out from the sadness. Opening a board of the floor, Saito poked his head out from downstairs so Louise crawled into the bed. She didn't want him to see her crying.		Thinking like that, tears felt like pouring out from the sadness. Opening a board of the floor, Saito poked his head out from downstairs so Louise crawled into the bed. She didn't want him to see her crying.
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	But the customer himself seemed to be used to that level of flattery. Without moving, he held out his wine cup. Here, Louise would unleash her finishing move.		But the customer himself seemed to be used to that level of flattery. Without moving, he held out his wine cup. Here, Louise would unleash her finishing move.

	Pinching the hem of her camisole, she bowed gracefully. As expected of a duke family as she did it. The bow, which was done as if in front of a king, was filled with the spirit of a noble. None of the girls there could imitate such a manner.		Pinching the hem of her camisole, she bowed gracefully. As expected of a duke family, she did it perfectly. The bow, which was done as if in front of a king, was filled with the spirit of a noble. None of the girls there could imitate such a manner.

	Doing so, the customer would become interested in Louise's background. I see. When I get a better look, her features are quite similar to a noble's.		Doing so, the customer would become interested in Louise's background. I see. When I get a better look, her features are quite similar to a noble's.
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	"You were born in the upper class, right?"		"You were born in the upper class, right?"

	Even then, Louise would not cease showing embarrassment. Then sorrowfully and with melancholy, she looked outside. The man ~~becomes~~ more and more enchanted at Louise's refined behavior. Bending himself forward, he spoke his expectations.		Even then, Louise would not cease showing embarrassment. Then sorrowfully and with melancholy, she looked outside. The man became more and more enchanted at Louise's refined behavior. Bending himself forward, he spoke his expectations.

	"Did you serve at some noble's house? They taught you good etiquette there, right?" Louise continued to smile brightly. The delusions inside the customer started to become as overexaggerated as he pleased.		"Did you serve at some noble's house? They taught you good etiquette there, right?" Louise continued to smile brightly. The delusions inside the customer started to become as overexaggerated as he pleased.
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	It seemed that in any world, there are people who abuse their power and extort off the common people. No one came to serve him, so Chulenne became irritated. In time, he started complaining.		It seemed that in any world, there are people who abuse their power and extort off the common people. No one came to serve him, so Chulenne became irritated. In time, he started complaining.

	"Oh! This store is seems to be making quite the profit! Isn't this wine a well-cured sake from Gronyu? The clothes that girl is wearing are tailored by Gallia! I guess I have to look over this year's tax rates."		"Oh! This store seems to be making quite the profit! Isn't this wine a well-cured sake from Gronyu? The clothes that girl is wearing are tailored by Gallia! I guess I have to look over this year's tax rates."

	The surrounding nobles went "That's right!" or nodded in agreement to Chulenne.		The surrounding nobles went "That's right!" or nodded in agreement to Chulenne.