Zero no Tsukaima:Volume5 Story2 - Revision history

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	Although every version of “The Founder’s Prayer Book” claimed to be the “original,” their contents were slightly different. Furthermore, there were theories that “The Founder’s Prayer Book” was written hundreds of years after the fall of the Founder Brimir. “The Founder’s Prayer Book” that had been passed down through the Tristain royal family didn’t even have words in it. Therefore, many theologians interpreted it in such a sketchy way so that it would improve the political powers of the Halkeginia’s churches and themselves.		Although every version of “The Founder’s Prayer Book” claimed to be the “original,” their contents were slightly different. Furthermore, there were theories that “The Founder’s Prayer Book” was written hundreds of years after the fall of the Founder Brimir. “The Founder’s Prayer Book” that had been passed down through the Tristain royal family didn’t even have words in it. Therefore, many theologians interpreted it in such a sketchy way so that it would improve the political powers of the Halkeginia’s churches and themselves.
	The main body practitioners of the “Practical Doctrine” started in the religious center of the country Romania and was built of commoners who wanted to reform the corrupted churches that exploited people. This soon became an international circumstance. It spread out from commoners and farmers, they stripped power and land from the monks and priests, but no one knew for sure if their practices and interpretation ~~was~~ right. The only one that could possibly answer that was the Founder Brimir himself.		The main body practitioners of the “Practical Doctrine” started in the religious center of the country Romania and was built of commoners who wanted to reform the corrupted churches that exploited people. This soon became an international circumstance. It spread out from commoners and farmers, they stripped power and land from the monks and priests, but no one knew for sure if their practices and interpretation were right. The only one that could possibly answer that was the Founder Brimir himself.

	Tabitha closed her book and showed Kirche the title. It wasn’t a religious book, but an ancient magical research book.		Tabitha closed her book and showed Kirche the title. It wasn’t a religious book, but an ancient magical research book.
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	“Hurry up or we’ll leave you!”		“Hurry up or we’ll leave you!”

	Guiche and Montmorency both jumped after her and Guiche, who ~~gone~~ ahead, tried to catch Montmorency.		Guiche and Montmorency both jumped after her and Guiche, who went ahead, tried to catch Montmorency.

	Then Montmorency started screaming things like ‘don’t touch me’ and ‘don’t look at me’ to tease Guiche.		Then Montmorency started screaming things like ‘don’t touch me’ and ‘don’t look at me’ to tease Guiche.
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	“Oh, are you new? More noble ladies! How beautiful! How très bien! The girls in the shop will be jealous! I’m the storekeeper, Scarron. Please enjoy yourselves today!” he said while he twisted his body and bowed. Although he seemed kind of obscene, he complimented them so Montmorency was now in a better temper. She combed her hair with her fingers and said clearly, “Guide us to the cleanest table”.		“Oh, are you new? More noble ladies! How beautiful! How très bien! The girls in the shop will be jealous! I’m the storekeeper, Scarron. Please enjoy yourselves today!” he said while he twisted his body and bowed. Although he seemed kind of obscene, he complimented them so Montmorency was now in a better temper. She combed her hair with her fingers and said clearly, “Guide us to the cleanest table”.

	“Every table in this store is scrubbed to shine as much as Her Majesty’s ~~pallace~~.”		“Every table in this store is scrubbed to shine as much as Her Majesty’s palace.”

	Scarron lead the group to one of the tables. The bar seemed to be really prospering.		Scarron lead the group to one of the tables. The bar seemed to be really prospering.
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	Just when Guiche wanted to inquire about it, a group of new customers came into the bar.~~they~~ were good-looking nobles. They were wearing hats with large brims furnished with stylish feathers and had sword-shaped wands sticking out their cloak. They seemed to be officers from the royal army.		Just when Guiche wanted to inquire about it, a group of new customers came into the bar. They were good-looking nobles. They were wearing hats with large brims furnished with stylish feathers and had sword-shaped wands sticking out their cloak. They seemed to be officers from the royal army.

	They probably had been training the whole day; they came in without a care and started to look around for tables.		They probably had been training the whole day; they came in without a care and started to look around for tables.
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	“What did you say?”		“What did you say?”

	“I'm just so confused. If you've got the time to be jealous, why not try to persuade him to stay?” If you like him you should compliment him a bit. All y'all only know how to put on an angry face, you don't even know how to say things that make a man happy, do you?		“I'm just so confused. If you've got the time to be jealous, why not try to persuade him to stay?” If you like him you should compliment him a bit. All y'all only know how to put on an angry face, you don't even know how to say things that make a man happy, do you?”

	“That's what guys should do!”		“That's what guys should do!”
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	“Don't treat us like idiots!”		“Don't treat us like idiots!”

	“However, all of you can rest assured. Although I follow the philosophy of “Do whatever it takes to get what I want,” I'd never take what's most important to someone.		“However, all of you can rest assured. Although I follow the philosophy of “Do whatever it takes to get what I want,” I'd never take what's most important to someone.”

	“Liar! Haven't you tried to grab our boyfriends with your dirty hands?”		“Liar! Haven't you tried to grab our boyfriends with your dirty hands?”
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	During the break after lunch, one of the boys asked Tabitha to spar with him.		During the break after lunch, one of the boys asked Tabitha to spar with him.

	Sparring like this was basically the same as dueling. Since it was sparring, there was no little danger of any loss of life, at least not in this time period. In times past, it was said that giving your opponent the coup de grace was the way of the noble, but ~~this~~ age of heroes had disappeared into history. The modern method was to use spells with low lethality, and once someone was injured, the bout would be decided. Although at times there were incidents were a finger was broken, it was far safer than placing one's life on the line. In most cases, stealing your opponent's wand was considered the most elegant way of winning.		Sparring like this was basically the same as dueling. Since it was sparring, there was no little danger of any loss of life, at least not in this time period. In times past, it was said that giving your opponent the coup de grace was the way of the noble, but that age of heroes had disappeared into history. The modern method was to use spells with low lethality, and once someone was injured, the bout would be decided. Although at times there were incidents were a finger was broken, it was far safer than placing one's life on the line. In most cases, stealing your opponent's wand was considered the most elegant way of winning.

	The youth who had challenged Tabitha was named de Lorraine. Born into a family famous for “Wind” magic, he was one of their year's elite 'line' magicians.		The youth who had challenged Tabitha was named de Lorraine. Born into a family famous for “Wind” magic, he was one of their year's elite 'line' magicians.

Cthaeh: Preview -> MTL renaming

2015-07-23T02:38:15Z

Preview -> MTL renaming

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Coffeezombie: fix verb tenses

2015-07-05T22:15:29Z

fix verb tenses

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	Kirche waved her wand. Because of the considerable amount of military training she had received, when she ~~gets~~ serious, her chanting speed is faster than anyone else.		Kirche waved her wand. Because of the considerable amount of military training she had received, when she got serious, her chanting speed was faster than anyone else.

	From the tip of her wand a fireball, not conservative in terms of size or power, flew towards Tabitha. Tabitha changed her spell in an instant, making an ice wall right before herself.		From the tip of her wand a fireball, not conservative in terms of size or power, flew towards Tabitha. Tabitha changed her spell in an instant, making an ice wall right before herself.

Vaelis at 11:54, 21 April 2012

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	===~~Chapter Two~~: The Encounter with the Flame and the Friendship with the Wind===		===Story 2: The Encounter with the Flame and the Friendship with the Wind===

	==== ~~Part~~ 1 ====		==== Chapter 1 ====

	Well, this was the Tristain Magic Academy. The summer vacation had just started and in the dorm, two nobles were killing time.		Well, this was the Tristain Magic Academy. The summer vacation had just started and in the dorm, two nobles were killing time.
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	She gulped down the wine, and started telling the story with drowsy eyes.		She gulped down the wine, and started telling the story with drowsy eyes.

	==== ~~Part~~ 2 ====		==== Chapter 2 ====


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	On hearing his plan, the girls clapped and agreed. This would keep their identities from being known and take care of the two most hated girls in class.		On hearing his plan, the girls clapped and agreed. This would keep their identities from being known and take care of the two most hated girls in class.

	==== ~~Part~~ 3 ====		==== Chapter 3 ====

	The welcoming dance party for the new students would be held on the weekend of the second week, the week of Heimdallr, in the month of Ur. As the focus of the party was the new students, the senior students decorated the hall and entertained the new students as hosts.		The welcoming dance party for the new students would be held on the weekend of the second week, the week of Heimdallr, in the month of Ur. As the focus of the party was the new students, the senior students decorated the hall and entertained the new students as hosts.
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	The angrier Kirche got, the cooler her speech, and the calmer her attitude.		The angrier Kirche got, the cooler her speech, and the calmer her attitude.

	==== ~~Part~~ 4 ====		==== Chapter 4 ====

	After listening to the story of their past, Montmorency seemed to find it hard to believe and said,		After listening to the story of their past, Montmorency seemed to find it hard to believe and said,
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Vaelis: moved Zero no Tsukaima:Volume5 Chapter2 to Zero no Tsukaima:Volume5 Story2

2012-04-21T11:52:40Z

moved Zero no Tsukaima:Volume5 Chapter2 to Zero no Tsukaima:Volume5 Story2

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Part 2

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	“Everyone, Become the aristocrats who will support Halkeginia in the future!”		“Everyone, Become the aristocrats who will support Halkeginia in the future!”

	Such brave words. Everyone started clapping, feeling pity for Osman who was trying so hard to maintain his composure.		Such brave words. Everyone started clapping, feeling pity for Osman who was trying so hard to maintain his composure.

	In the crowd... There was a beautiful girl who stood out even amongst the nobles. This was Kirche, who held the title of “Ardent”. Giving a big yawn as she looked at the clumsy principal, she wondered if she'd made a mistake applying here.		In the crowd... There was a beautiful girl who stood out even amongst the nobles. This was Kirche, who held the title of “Ardent”. Giving a big yawn as she looked at the clumsy principal, she wondered if she'd made a mistake applying here.

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	Osman, spreading out his arms and legs, had jumped from the railing of the 2nd floor, preparing to land on a desk downstairs. In mid-air, he waved his staff to use “Levitation” to land safely, but failed. He'd grown old; the time he took to invoke spells had lengthened too much and he fell straight onto the desk. The hall was filled with an uproar as teachers jumped down to help him up. Osman had pulled something badly and someone had to heal him with Water magic. He continued, with no hint of embarrassment,		Osman, spreading out his arms and legs, had jumped from the railing of the 2nd floor, preparing to land on a desk downstairs. In mid-air, he waved his staff to use “Levitation” to land safely, but failed. He'd grown old; the time he took to invoke spells had lengthened too much and he fell straight onto the desk. The hall was filled with an uproar as teachers jumped down to help him up. Osman had pulled something badly and someone had to heal him with Water magic. He continued, with no hint of embarrassment,

	“Everyone, Become the aristocrats who will support ~~Helkeginia~~ in the future!”		“Everyone, Become the aristocrats who will support Halkeginia in the future!”

	Such brave words. Everyone started clapping, feeling pity for Osman who was trying so hard to maintain his composure.		Such brave words. Everyone started clapping, feeling pity for Osman who was trying so hard to maintain his composure.

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Part 4

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	In the end, Kirche still had not drank enough, and came down to the shop… And she found Louise, Montmorency, Guiche and Saito lying on the table, barely alive.		In the end, Kirche still had not drank enough, and came down to the shop… And she found Louise, Montmorency, Guiche and Saito lying on the table, barely alive.

	The group were beat up by those military men, and were half-dead. Louise had used too much "explosion" magic in the past few days, and that consumed all her willpower. Saito, as usual, had left Derflinger at the small room at the attic, and so was of no use. As for Guiche, he was taken down in a mere two seconds. Since Montmorency hated fighting, she made a declaration if neutrality, but the other party did not accept what she said.		The group were beat up by those military men, and were half-dead. Louise had used too much "explosion" magic in the past few days, and that consumed all her willpower. Saito, as usual, had left Derflinger at the small room at the attic, and so was of no use. As for Guiche, he was taken down in a mere two seconds. Since Montmorency hated fighting, she made a declaration of neutrality, but the other party did not accept what she said.

	Kirche, who knew nothing of what had happened, scratched her head, at a loss.		Kirche, who knew nothing of what had happened, scratched her head, at a loss.

Swiftstrike: /* Part 1 */

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Part 1

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	“Just reading,” said Tabitha.		“Just reading,” said Tabitha.

	“I know.In any case there is no way you're a Protestant. Ahh, it’s really hot today. REALLY hot. That’s why I invited you to go to Germania with me. It’s much cooler there.”		“I know. In any case there is no way you're a Protestant. Ahh, it’s really hot today. REALLY hot. That’s why I invited you to go to Germania with me. It’s much cooler there.”

	Tabitha reopened her book and continued reading. Kirche, who knew the situation of Tabitha’s family, decided to invite her to the Zerbst House, but Tabitha would not agree to come. With no other choice, Kirche decided to keep Tabitha company in the Magic Academy.		Tabitha reopened her book and continued reading. Kirche, who knew the situation of Tabitha’s family, decided to invite her to the Zerbst House, but Tabitha would not agree to come. With no other choice, Kirche decided to keep Tabitha company in the Magic Academy.

Myopius at 05:48, 12 April 2010

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	After leaving a big impression at the entrance ceremony, Kirche was being ignored by the girls of her class. That special wild attractiveness of Germanian girls, as well as that generous bust, the hormones in the air just couldn't be shut out. In a second, she had all the boys in class to herself. This made the Tristain girls, already famous for being jealous, burn in envy.		After leaving a big impression at the entrance ceremony, Kirche was being ignored by the girls of her class. That special wild attractiveness of Germanian girls, as well as that generous bust, the hormones in the air just couldn't be shut out. In a second, she had all the boys in class to herself. This made the Tristain girls, already famous for being jealous, burn in envy.

	Her personality was one of the reasons she was disliked. Even in Germania, the land of Fire, Kirche had been ostracized for her arrogance. Her personality just rubbed the Tristainians, who ~~worshiped~~ caution as a virtue, the wrong way. Within a short time of starting school, she'd already seduced three boys. There were two reasons. Firstly, those three boys were the better looking ones in class. Secondly, and more importantly... she was just so bored.		Her personality was one of the reasons she was disliked. Even in Germania, the land of Fire, Kirche had been ostracized for her arrogance. Her personality just rubbed the Tristainians, who worshipped caution as a virtue, the wrong way. Within a short time of starting school, she'd already seduced three boys. There were two reasons. Firstly, those three boys were the better looking ones in class. Secondly, and more importantly... she was just so bored.

	Number one, a seductive glance thrown in the hallway.		Number one, a seductive glance thrown in the hallway.