Zero no Tsukaima:Volume6 Chapter1 - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 06:12, 15 October 2015

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	''Damn you, putting me in this condition.''		''Damn you, putting me in this condition.''

	And the worst part is that, while making such an oddly audacious move, the cute Siesta was still radiating a sweet, innocent atmosphere.		And the worst part was that, while making such an oddly audacious move, the cute Siesta was still radiating a sweet, innocent atmosphere.

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	As Cromwell headed towards the chief’s seat, Sheffield followed him like a shadow. Wardes and Fouquet sat down in two free seats.		As Cromwell headed towards the chief’s seat, Sheffield followed him like a shadow. Wardes and Fouquet sat down in two free seats.

	After the chairman and first emperor were seated the meeting began. One man raised his hand. It was General Hawkins. With grey hair, white moustache, and a long military service, the general stared with intense eyes at the emperor that used to be a bishop.		After the chairman and first emperor were seated, the meeting began. One man raised his hand. It was General Hawkins. With grey hair, white moustache, and a long military service, the general stared with intense eyes at the emperor that used to be a bishop.

	After Cromwell acknowledged him, he stood up.		After Cromwell acknowledged him, he stood up.
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	“Of course. After all, it’s necessary to know everything about the incidents.”		“Of course. After all, it’s necessary to know everything about the incidents.”

	“The enemy army is... ah. Tristain and Germania’s allied forces are preparing their fleets as quickly as possible. The two countries have a total of sixty battle-ready ships that can set out into the sky. If we begin the reorganization of our army now, after the maintenance our warship battle-line will not be able to rival theirs. Moreover, their side’s warships are all brand new.”		“The enemy army is... ah. Tristain and Germania’s allied forces are preparing their fleets as quickly as possible. The two countries have a total of sixty battle-ready ships that can set out into the sky. Even if we begin the reorganization of our army now, after the maintenance our warship battle-line will not be able to rival theirs. Moreover, their side’s warships are all brand new.”

	One of the generals muttered with a voice full of disdain,		One of the generals muttered with a voice full of disdain,
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	Hawkins complexion changed.		Hawkins complexion changed.

	"It's not real?" "Gallia is really on our side?		"It's not real?" "Gallia is really on our side?”

	"I wouldn't say that yet. But there are advanced diplomatic meetings with them."		"I wouldn't say that yet. But there are advanced diplomatic meetings with them."

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	In that drawer there was a small box. He took it out and opened the lid.		In that drawer there was a small box. He took it out and opened the lid.

	There was a small red ruby ring shining like a fire ~~was~~ inside it.		There was a small red ruby ring shining like a fire inside of it.

	If one concentrated, he would be able to see a flickering flame inside the precious stone.		If one concentrated, he would be able to see a flickering flame inside the precious stone.

	As he looked at that flame, the memories of the incident from twenty years ago were resurrected. The memories of that scene were imprinted into his mind; even now the colors were vivid. In that clear, glittering flame… Colbert was blaming himself. In just a moment, he ~~remember~~ everything he had forgotten….		As he looked at that flame, the memories of the incident from twenty years ago were resurrected. The memories of that scene were imprinted into his mind; even now the colors were vivid. In that clear, glittering flame… Colbert was blaming himself. In just a moment, he remembered everything he had forgotten….

	After that, Colbert looked around the inside of the laboratory. It was a small house with a shabby exterior, but he liked it much more than the mansion and property he had inherited from his ancestors and of which he himself had disposed. The walls were covered by various tools and flasks he had obtained over time.		After that, Colbert looked around the inside of the laboratory. It was a small house with a shabby exterior, but he liked it much more than the mansion and property he had inherited from his ancestors and of which he himself had disposed of. The walls were covered by various tools and flasks he had obtained over time.

	As he gazed at them, Colbert suddenly crumbled as if in pain.		As he gazed at them, Colbert suddenly crumbled as if in pain.

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	Kirche and Tabitha were walking lazily when they arrived at Colbert’s laboratory, ~~that~~ was located next to the Tower of Flame. In there Colbert was working very hard in order to finish the final war adjustments of the Zero Fighter.		Kirche and Tabitha were walking lazily when they arrived at Colbert’s laboratory, which was located next to the Tower of Flame. In there, Colbert was working very hard in order to finish the final war adjustments of the Zero Fighter.

	Even though most of the male teachers had departed… Colbert was in his usual “my pace” mood. As soon as the winds of war started blowing, he immersed himself in his studies.		Even though most of the male teachers had departed… Colbert was in his usual “my pace” mood. As soon as the winds of war started blowing, he immersed himself in his studies.
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	“Oh, Miss. Miss Zerbst. You should take my lectures on Fire Manipulation from time to time.”		“Oh, Miss. Miss Zerbst. You should take my lectures on Fire Manipulation from time to time.”
			Colbert said as if he were still in class.
	Colbert said as if he ~~was~~ in class.~~<!--(someone retranslate please)-->~~

	“Yes.”		“Yes.”
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	“What’s wrong? Miss…”		“What’s wrong? Miss…”

	~~“Mister~~, You didn’t volunteer to join the Queen’s army, did you?"		“Sir, You didn’t volunteer to join the Queen’s army, did you?"

	Even though most of the academy’s men joined the war, is what she meant by that.		Even though most of the academy’s men joined the war, is what she meant by that.
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	Colbert turned his face away from Kirche. Kirche snorted with a face full of disdain. “So unmanly”, she thought. She could see nothing but a person that had run away from the war. She couldn’t forgive this teacher who, even though he was one of the proud “Flame Users,” calmly declared that he hated war.		Colbert turned his face away from Kirche. Kirche snorted with a face full of disdain. “So unmanly”, she thought. She could see nothing but a person that had run away from the war. She couldn’t forgive this teacher who, even though he was one of the proud “Flame Users,” calmly declared that he hated war.

	“As a person that also uses Fire, I’m ~~embarassed~~.”		“As a person that also uses Fire, I’m embarrassed.”

	Colbert was facing down for a while, but then he looked up again.		Colbert was facing down for a while, but then he looked up again.

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	“Wardes you should have at least heard his name, right? He is White Menvil.”		“Wardes you should have at least heard his name, right? He is White Menvil.”

	Wardes’ eyes glittered. He had a memory of hearing that name. The legendary mage mercenary. The White Flame. The one that used cowardly methods during a duel and as a result got his noble title confiscated and became a mercenary, killed his own family by burning them to death, and abandoned his house. It is said that the number of the people he had burned so far is greater than the number of the birds he has grilled in order to eat. There were also many other rumors about him that had been floating about.		Wardes’ eyes glittered. He had a memory of hearing that name. The legendary mage mercenary. The White Flame. The one that used cowardly methods during a duel and as a result got his noble title confiscated and became a mercenary, killed his own family by burning them to death, and abandoned his house. It was said that the number of the people he had burned so far is greater than the number of the birds he has grilled in order to eat. There were also many other rumors about him that had been floating about.

	There was one certain thing in those rumors.		There was one certain thing in those rumors.

	That on the battlefield he used his flame with thorough cruelty. That flame didn’t choose its opponent. He was a man to whom the age and gender of the ones he burned didn’t matter. He was a man that deprived humans of their warmth ~~as if they’re free fires…~~ that’s who this White Menvil was.		That on the battlefield he used his flame with thorough cruelty. That flame didn’t choose its opponent. He was a man to whom the age and gender of the ones he burned didn’t matter. He was a man that deprived humans of their warmth with his fire freely… that’s who this White Menvil was.

	“What’s wrong, Viscount? There’s a legend right before your eyes.”		“What’s wrong, Viscount? There’s a legend right before your eyes.”

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	"Gallia is going to participate in the war?" "What are there conditions of agreement?" "If Gallia were on our side, it would be frightening" and so on. They began to all shout simultaneously. With a disbelieving face, Hawkins stared at Cromwell. However, Cromwell just fiddled with his mustache.		"Gallia is going to participate in the war?" "What are there conditions of agreement?" "If Gallia were on our side, it would be frightening" and so on. They began to all shout simultaneously. With a disbelieving face, Hawkins stared at Cromwell. However, Cromwell just fiddled with his mustache.

	"So, ~~what will be discussed at this~~ meeting?"		"Yes, a diplomatic meeting has been arranged."

	Hawkins was filled with thoughts. With Gallia's army, they would be able to attack allied Tristain and Germania. If Albion's fleet was about to be defeated, Gallia's forces could surprise the two countries from behind. They would be forced to withdraw their troops.		Hawkins was filled with thoughts. With Gallia's army, they would be able to attack allied Tristain and Germania. If Albion's fleet was about to be defeated, Gallia's forces could surprise the two countries from behind. They would be forced to withdraw their troops.

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	Cromwell looked over his shoulder and exchanged glances with Sheffield. She gave a small nod.		Cromwell looked over his shoulder and exchanged glances with Sheffield. She gave a small nod.

			"That neutrality, what if it were a ruse?"

			Hawkins complexion changed.

			"It's not real?" "Gallia is really on our side?

			"I wouldn't say that yet. But there are advanced diplomatic meetings with them."

			The meeting became an uproar.

			"Gallia is going to participate in the war?" "What are there conditions of agreement?" "If Gallia were on our side, it would be frightening" and so on. They began to all shout simultaneously. With a disbelieving face, Hawkins stared at Cromwell. However, Cromwell just fiddled with his mustache.

			"So, what will be discussed at this meeting?"

			Hawkins was filled with thoughts. With Gallia's army, they would be able to attack allied Tristain and Germania. If Albion's fleet was about to be defeated, Gallia's forces could surprise the two countries from behind. They would be forced to withdraw their troops.

			"If this is true, then it is great news."

			"It would stimulate our military. Our offense, our defense, our triumph would be certain."

			The generals stood up and all saluted at the same time. Then, they left and returned to their troops.

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	One of the generals muttered with a voice full of disdain,		One of the generals muttered with a voice full of disdain,

	“It’s a papier mache fleet! They are inferior to us!”		“It’s a papier mache fleet. They are inferior to us.”

	“That’s a story of the past, Your Excellency. There is no reason to praise our own army now. At the time of the revolution we executed the majority of our superior generals and as a result the strength of our side was weakened. The remaining veterans were lost because of the defeat at Tarbes.”		“That’s a story of the past, Your Excellency. There is no reason to praise our own army now. At the time of the revolution we executed the majority of our superior generals and as a result the strength of our side was weakened. The remaining veterans were lost because of the defeat at Tarbes.”
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	A fat general blurted that out with a cheerful voice. Hawkins glared at him.		A fat general blurted that out with a cheerful voice. Hawkins glared at him.

	“Difficult to attack? Isn’t it obvious ~~that~~ that the enemy’s army is probably scheming something if they’ve gathered so few forces?”		“Difficult to attack? Isn’t it obvious that the enemy’s army is probably scheming something if they’ve gathered so few forces?”

	Hawkins hit the table strongly.		Hawkins hit the table strongly.

Coffeezombie: "haribote" means "papier mache" or something equivalent to that...

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"haribote" means "papier mache" or something equivalent to that...

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	One of the generals muttered with a voice full of disdain,		One of the generals muttered with a voice full of disdain,

	“It’s a fleet ~~of Haribotes~~! They are inferior to us!”		“It’s a papier mache fleet! They are inferior to us!”

	“That’s a story of the past, Your Excellency. There is no reason to praise our own army now. At the time of the revolution we executed the majority of our superior generals and as a result the strength of our side was weakened. The remaining veterans were lost because of the defeat at Tarbes.”		“That’s a story of the past, Your Excellency. There is no reason to praise our own army now. At the time of the revolution we executed the majority of our superior generals and as a result the strength of our side was weakened. The remaining veterans were lost because of the defeat at Tarbes.”

Coffeezombie: mistranslated as twenty years when it should be "two years"

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mistranslated as twenty years when it should be "two years"

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	In the middle of that hall stood a huge “Round Table” made of rock, around which the ministers and generals of the Holy Albion Republic were gathering, waiting for the start of the council’s meeting.		In the middle of that hall stood a huge “Round Table” made of rock, around which the ministers and generals of the Holy Albion Republic were gathering, waiting for the start of the council’s meeting.

	This was the place at which, until roughly ~~twenty~~ years ago, the ministers gathered around the king in order to control the country. But the ruler had since changed.		This was the place at which, until roughly two years ago, the ministers gathered around the king in order to control the country. But the ruler had since changed.

	The people that participated in the revolution and took the country from the monarchy gave themselves top posts in the country as was to be expected.		The people that participated in the revolution and took the country from the monarchy gave themselves top posts in the country as was to be expected.

	As for the person that, until ~~twenty~~ years ago, was a simple local bishop…		As for the person that, until two years ago, was a simple local bishop…

	The one that used to have a lower social status than everyone that had gathered here… even than the protection squad members that were standing on the sides of the door…		The one that used to have a lower social status than everyone that had gathered here… even than the protection squad members that were standing on the sides of the door…