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	Louise and Cattleya continued having a long chat between them.		Louise and Cattleya continued having a long chat between them.

	It ~~seems~~ like the second eldest sister, who was wearing those lovely clothes, was good friends with Louise. When you see two people getting along like this, even a tedious journey like this doesn't feel boring. Siesta was already sleeping peacefully in his lap. On the left of the coach, hills stretched. On the right – cultivated fields extended. As the rye harvest was ending, straw was piled up here and there. When he was looking at such tranquil scenery, it was impossible to believe that a war was going on. Leaning into the window frame, adjusting Derflinger behind his back, Saito took a deep yawn.		It seemed like the second eldest sister, who was wearing those lovely clothes, was good friends with Louise. When you see two people getting along like this, even a tedious journey like this doesn't feel boring. Siesta was already sleeping peacefully on his lap. On the left of the coach, hills stretched. On the right – cultivated fields extended. As the rye harvest was ending, straw was piled up here and there. When he was looking at such tranquil scenery, it was impossible to believe that a war was going on. Leaning into the window frame, adjusting Derflinger behind his back, Saito took a deep yawn.

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	===Chapter Two: Cattleya===		===Chapter Two: Cattleya===

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	“I think I drank too much. I’m not very good at drinking wine.”		“I think I drank too much. I’m not very good at drinking wine.”

	Averting her face, Siesta muttered awkwardly. ~~<!>~~Indeed, ~~‘You drink too’ was it~~, Saito ~~consented~~. Seems like this maid inclined to drunken frenzy.~~<!>~~		Averting her face, Siesta muttered awkwardly. Indeed, you were drunk, Saito agreed. Seems like this maid was inclined to drunken frenzy.

	“After drinking all that wine, I don’t have any memories of last night. Was I rude, Saito-san?”		“After drinking all that wine, I don’t have any memories of last night. Was I rude, Saito-san?”
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	“W-w-wha-!” Saito shouted.		“W-w-wha-!” Saito shouted.

	“No time! Master has arrived! We need to keep the castle sparkling…” she shouted, and with an armful of cleaning tools, she ran out. Soon, another employee came and dashed out with a mop and bucket. It was a storage room after all. Though there were a lot of cleaning tools, they ~~are~~ almost never used. However, it seemed that today was an exception.		“No time! Master has arrived! We need to keep the castle sparkling…” she shouted, and with an armful of cleaning tools, she ran out. Soon, another employee came and dashed out with a mop and bucket. It was a storage room after all. Though there were a lot of cleaning tools, they were almost never used. However, it seemed that today was an exception.

	Master? Siesta and Saito looked at each other.		Master? Siesta and Saito looked at each other.

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	Louise indomitably glared at Siesta. They both stared at each other, not backing off. Both ready to burst into a flaming rage.		Louise indomitably glared at Siesta. They both stared at each other, not backing off. Both ready to burst into a flaming rage.

	When drunk, Siesta is very strong-willed and daring. She ~~can~~ snap back even to Louise. Alarmed and agitated, she declared to Louise,		When drunk, Siesta was very strong-willed and daring. She could snap back even to Louise. Alarmed and agitated, she declared to Louise,

	“I am a housemaid employed by the school. I am not employed by Miss Vallière. Besides, we are on vacation anyway. It is up to us on how we use our free time. So please, do not disturb us.”		“I am a housemaid employed by the school. I am not employed by Miss Vallière. Besides, we are on vacation anyway. It is up to us on how we use our free time. So please, do not disturb us.”
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	Strangely powerful now, Siesta made Louise to retreat completely.		Strangely powerful now, Siesta made Louise to retreat completely.

	“But the most important is Saito-san…”		“But the most important thing to Saito-san…”

	“Wha-what?! What are you talking about?!”		“Wha-what?! What are you talking about?!”

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	“Yep. I was like you at first too.”		“Yep. I was like you at first too.”

	Louise tried to remember. ''Cattleya is 24 now… so she was sixteen, eight years ago. And I was eight. Did Cattleya look the same as I am at that time?'' She could not recall clearly, because she ~~was~~ too young then.		Louise tried to remember. ''Cattleya is 24 now… so she was sixteen, eight years ago. And I was eight. Did Cattleya look the same as I am at that time?'' She could not recall clearly, because she had been too young then.

	Come to think of it, Cattleya always embraced her when they slept, during those old times. ''I couldn’t stand sleeping by myself and couldn’t fall asleep alone.'' Carrying her pillow and going to Cattleya’s bed, while listening to elder sister's stories and breathing in her scent… she always calmed down and fell asleep.		Come to think of it, Cattleya always embraced her when they slept, during those old times. ''I couldn’t stand sleeping by myself and couldn’t fall asleep alone.'' Carrying her pillow and going to Cattleya’s bed, while listening to elder sister's stories and breathing in her scent… she always calmed down and fell asleep.
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	“Uuuuuh…” Louise groaned.		“Uuuuuh…” Louise groaned.

	“See you soon. ~~Your whereabouts today change~~.”		“See you soon. This is where you can be yourself.”

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	“The local doctor was called, and even though he tried to cast powerful ‘Water’ spells many times, magic is useless against this sickness. Nothing is good for such a body. The touch of water flow is useless.”		“The local doctor was called, and even though he tried to cast powerful ‘Water’ spells many times, magic is useless against this sickness. Nothing is good for such a body. The touch of water flow is useless.”

	The cause of Cattleya’s sickness was unknown. Even if ~~you treat~~ the sickened part of her body with medicine or magic, another part would start to degenerate. Eventually, all doctors failed against such a cycle. Her symptoms were currently relieved by various medicines and magics.		The cause of Cattleya’s sickness was unknown. Even if the sickened part of her body was treated with medicine or magic, another part would start to degenerate. Eventually, all doctors failed against such a cycle. Her symptoms were currently relieved by various medicines and magics.

	Despite all that, Cattleya still smiled. Louise felt pity for her elder sister. Because of her condition, Cattleya could not get into the magic academy, even though she could cast magic. She also ~~cannot~~ marry, despite being so beautiful.		Despite all that, Cattleya still smiled. Louise felt pity for her elder sister. Because of her condition, Cattleya could not get into the magic academy, even though she could cast magic. She also could not marry, despite being so beautiful.

	“Hmmm, why such a long face? I lead a rather happy life everyday. Look!”		“Hmmm, why such a long face? I lead a rather happy life everyday. Look!”

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	“Siesta?”		“Siesta?”

	~~It looks like~~ the situation changed. With a new resolve that seemed to say "I won’t give up on Saito-san!," Siesta turned around.		Somehow the situation changed. With a new resolve that seemed to say "I won’t give up on Saito-san!," Siesta turned around.

	“My b-b-b-breasts definitely beat Miss Vallière’s! Hiccup!”		“My b-b-b-breasts definitely beat Miss Vallière’s! Hiccup!”

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	Louise bit her lip. ''Henrietta is taking me to the battlefield because I am necessary. I am a "Void" user. However, I can't tell my family that.'' So Louise was not able to say anything at all and fell silent.		Louise bit her lip. ''Henrietta is taking me to the battlefield because I am necessary. I am a "Void" user. However, I can't tell my family that.'' So Louise was not able to say anything at all and fell silent.

	Eléonore tried to continue preaching, but was cut by the duchess who quietly stayed silent up till now. She commanded in a haughty voice,		Eléonore tried to continue preaching, but was cut off by the duchess who quietly stayed silent up till now. She commanded in a haughty voice,

	“Eat, Eléonore.”		“Eat, Eléonore.”

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	Although it was just four people that sat on seats during this supper, 20 servants were queuing up around the table.		Although it was just four people that sat on seats during this supper, 20 servants were queuing up around the table.

	And, in spite of the fact that it was midnight, Louise’s mother, the Duchess de La Vallière, was waiting for her daughters to arrive to the dining table.		And, in spite of the fact that it was midnight, Louise’s mother, the Duchess of La Vallière, was waiting for her daughters to arrive to the dining table.

	The Duchess, who occupied the top seat, looked over at her arriving daughters.		The Duchess, who occupied the top seat, looked over at her arriving daughters.
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	Louise, despite meeting her mother after such a long time, was acting tense. It seems like Louise trusted only Cattleya.		Louise, despite meeting her mother after such a long time, was acting tense. It seems like Louise trusted only Cattleya.

	“Mother, we have returned just now.” Eléonore said; Duchess de La Vallière nodded.		“Mother, we have returned just now.” Eléonore said; Duchess of La Vallière nodded.

	When the three sisters seated themselves, waiters carried the appetizers and the dinner started.		When the three sisters seated themselves, waiters carried the appetizers and the dinner started.