Zero no Tsukaima:Volume6 Chapter3 - Revision history

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	She could hear the sounds of the footsteps and voices of the servants that were looking for her inside the castle. But, just like when she was a child, this boat in the courtyard was a safe place. With its figure hidden by the small island’s shadow, it became a blind spot when looked at from inside the castle and didn’t stand out at all.		She could hear the sounds of the footsteps and voices of the servants that were looking for her inside the castle. But, just like when she was a child, this boat in the courtyard was a safe place. With its figure hidden by the small island’s shadow, it became a blind spot when looked at from inside the castle and didn’t stand out at all.

	Just like in the time when she was still a kid, she had curled herself up and had covered herself with the blanket that she brought with her. When she was a child and did that... her feelings would usually slowly calm down, but this time it didn’t go so well. It ~~appears~~ that her mood ~~that~~ had sunken so low, she just couldn’t brighten up no matter what.		Just like in the time when she was still a kid, she had curled herself up and had covered herself with the blanket that she brought with her. When she was a child and did that... her feelings would usually slowly calm down, but this time it didn’t go so well. It appeared that her mood had sunken so low, that she just couldn’t brighten up no matter what.

	The small steps of someone stepping on the soil inside the courtyard resounded.		The small steps of someone stepping on the soil inside the courtyard resounded.
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	That black-haired girl that listens to anything he says is better, isn’t she?		That black-haired girl that listens to anything he says is better, isn’t she?

	She felt lonely, because she couldn’t get either her parents or sisters to understand her. ~~The~~ Siesta ~~from yesterday’s words~~ left a trail as well. “Saito doesn’t like Louise at all.” Those words had seriously harmed Louise’s self-confidence and will to do anything. Louise hadn’t recognized those words as her own thoughts, but she kept remembering them.		She felt lonely, because she couldn’t get either her parents or sisters to understand her. Yesterday’s words from Siesta left a trail as well. “Saito doesn’t like Louise at all.” Those words had seriously harmed Louise’s self-confidence and will to do anything. Louise hadn’t recognized those words as her own thoughts, but she kept remembering them.

	Therefore, Louise grumbled.		Therefore, Louise grumbled.
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	It was the small wounded bird that she had picked up and bandaged a while back. She gazed at the thrush inside the cage for a while, and then Cattleya gave a kind smile.		It was the small wounded bird that she had picked up and bandaged a while back. She gazed at the thrush inside the cage for a while, and then Cattleya gave a kind smile.

	She opened the cage’s lid and put her hand inside. The thrush jumped ~~into~~ her hand. After she took it out from inside, she unfastened the bandages.		She opened the cage’s lid and put her hand inside. The thrush jumped onto her hand. After she took it out from inside, she unfastened the bandages.

	She stretched her hand out through the window. The thrush that was on it peered into Cattleya’s face and inclined its head to the side in doubt. As if she was questioning her.		She stretched her hand out through the window. The thrush that was on it peered into Cattleya’s face and inclined its head to the side in doubt. As if she was questioning her.

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	As she was watching the coach that was disappearing in the distance, Cattleya smiled. After that she suddenly started coughing violently. She had exhausted her physical strength with the “Alchemy” incantation she used earlier.		As she was watching the coach that was disappearing in the distance, Cattleya smiled. After that, she suddenly started coughing violently. She had exhausted her physical strength with the “Alchemy” incantation she had used earlier.

	In her field of vision she could see the drawbridge in the distance. Because she used the incantation from such a great distance, quite a bit of her Willpower was used up.		In her field of vision she could see the drawbridge in the distance. Because she had used the incantation from such a great distance, quite a bit of her Willpower was used up.

	Inside the room a thrush was singing.		Inside the room a thrush was singing.

	It was the small wounded bird that she had picked up and bandaged a while back. She gazed at the thrush inside the cage for a while and then Cattleya gave a kind smile.		It was the small wounded bird that she had picked up and bandaged a while back. She gazed at the thrush inside the cage for a while, and then Cattleya gave a kind smile.

	She opened the cage’s lid and put her hand inside. The thrush jumped into her hand. After she took it out from inside, she unfastened the bandages.		She opened the cage’s lid and put her hand inside. The thrush jumped into her hand. After she took it out from inside, she unfastened the bandages.

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	Shivering in fear, Siesta was sitting in the coachman’s seat.		Shivering in fear, Siesta was sitting in the coachman’s seat.

	~~“Fast~~! Get on fast, please!”		“Hurry! Get on fast, please!”

	After pushing Louise into the carriage, Saito jumped onto it as well.		After pushing Louise into the carriage, Saito jumped onto it as well.
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	“W-Why a dragon?”		“W-Why a dragon?”

	“I don’t know! But, if there were horses, wouldn’t they run away? Um, ~~that’s~~, Miss Cattleya told me so! Kyaa! Kyaa, kyaa! Anyway, dragons are scary! Their faces are scary!” screaming that, Siesta ~~stroke~~ the ~~brittle~~ in a daze.		“I don’t know! But, if there were horses, wouldn’t they run away? Um, that is, Miss Cattleya told me so! Kyaa! Kyaa, kyaa! Anyway, dragons are scary! Their faces are scary!” screaming that, Siesta struck the bridle in a daze.

	“Let’s switch,” Saito said, receiving the bristle from Siesta and sitting down on the coachman’s seat. Siesta smiled and cuddled with Saito. In the seat behind Louise was about to snap, as she watched that scene, but endured. She remembered Saito’s words from earlier. “I love you,” he said. How many times did he say it…		“Let’s switch,” Saito said, receiving the bristle from Siesta and sitting down on the coachman’s seat. Siesta smiled and cuddled with Saito. In the seat behind Louise was about to snap, as she watched that scene, but endured. She remembered Saito’s words from earlier. “I love you,” he said. How many times did he say it…
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	Aah, Siesta, don’t add oil instead of water to a burning fire.		Aah, Siesta, don’t add oil instead of water to a burning fire.

	Saito started denying even though he knew it was pointless.		Saito started denying it even though he knew it was pointless.

	“I did no such thing.”		“I did no such thing.”
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	“Just a bit.”		“Just a bit.”

	“After all you deserve treatment worse than a dog’s.”		“After all, you deserve treatment worse than a dog’s.”

	A useless politeness. Already, the atmosphere he was in meant he couldn’t make any objections. That said, Saito was very tired because he had used so much of the Gandálfr power. One could say, Saito knew perfectly well that he couldn’t make any objections no matter what.		A useless politeness. Already, the atmosphere he was in meant he couldn’t make any objections. That said, Saito was very tired because he had used so much of the Gandálfr power. One could say, Saito knew perfectly well that he couldn’t make any objections no matter what.

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	“Certainly!” Jerome, the butler, replied.		“Certainly!” Jerome, the butler, replied.

	“As for that guy. That commoner. Hm~, decapitation. Because he will be exposed for one month, make a brand new stand please.”		“As for that guy. That commoner. Hm~, decapitation. Because his body will be exposed for one month, make a brand new stand please.”

	“Certainly!” Jerome, agreeing with the same tone.		“Certainly!” Jerome, agreeing with the same tone.

	The employees simultaneously took out brooms, hoes, sickles, spears or ~~katanas<!--Katanas? Here?-->~~ and attacked. Saito grabbed the handle of Derflinger that was on his back. The runes on his left hand glowed.		The employees simultaneously took out brooms, hoes, sickles, spears or swords and attacked. Saito grabbed the handle of Derflinger that was on his back. The runes on his left hand glowed.

	“Myy, partner. It’s been a while. I was just wondering if you were going to die a lonely death.”		“Myy, partner. It’s been a while. I was just wondering if you were going to die a lonely death.”

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	She could hear the sounds of the footsteps and voices of the servants that were looking for her inside the castle. But, just like when she was a child, this boat in the courtyard was a safe place. With its figure hidden by the small island’s shadow, it became a blind spot when looked at from inside the castle and didn’t stand out at all.		She could hear the sounds of the footsteps and voices of the servants that were looking for her inside the castle. But, just like when she was a child, this boat in the courtyard was a safe place. With its figure hidden by the small island’s shadow, it became a blind spot when looked at from inside the castle and didn’t stand out at all.

	Just like in the time when she was still a kid, she had curled herself up and had covered herself with the blanket that she brought with her. When she was a child and did that... her feelings would usually slowly calm down, but this time it didn’t go so well. It appears that her mood that had sunken so low, just couldn’t brighten up no matter what.		Just like in the time when she was still a kid, she had curled herself up and had covered herself with the blanket that she brought with her. When she was a child and did that... her feelings would usually slowly calm down, but this time it didn’t go so well. It appears that her mood that had sunken so low, she just couldn’t brighten up no matter what.

	The small steps of someone stepping on the soil inside the courtyard resounded.		The small steps of someone stepping on the soil inside the courtyard resounded.
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	Getting in the boat, Saito grasped Louise’s hand.		Getting in the boat, Saito grasped Louise’s hand.

	“Geez. I will ~~recognize~~ you. I will, your whole existence, completely positively. ~~That’s why~~, stand up. C’mon.”		“Geez. I will accept you. I will, your whole existence, completely positively. So, stand up. C’mon.”

	After hearing that, Louise blushed and felt her heart becoming warm and fuzzy.		After hearing that, Louise blushed and felt her heart becoming warm and fuzzy.
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	After all, her breasts’ size was the same as a kid’s.		After all, her breasts’ size was the same as a kid’s.

	''That black-haired girl that listens to anything he says is better, isn’t she?''		That black-haired girl that listens to anything he says is better, isn’t she?

	She felt lonely, because she couldn’t get either her parents or sisters to understand her. The Siesta from yesterday’s words left a trail as well. “Saito doesn’t like Louise at all.” Those words had seriously harmed Louise’s self-confidence and will to do anything. Louise hadn’t recognized those words as her own thoughts, but she kept remembering them.		She felt lonely, because she couldn’t get either her parents or sisters to understand her. The Siesta from yesterday’s words left a trail as well. “Saito doesn’t like Louise at all.” Those words had seriously harmed Louise’s self-confidence and will to do anything. Louise hadn’t recognized those words as her own thoughts, but she kept remembering them.
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	Therefore, Louise grumbled.		Therefore, Louise grumbled.

	“What 'I’ll ~~recognize~~ you?' Don’t lie”		“What 'I’ll accept you?' Don’t lie”

	“It’s not a lie.”		“It’s not a lie.”
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	“Who’s an idiot?!”		“Who’s an idiot?!”

	“Don’t just decide who I like, just because you’re in a bad mood, you selfish ~~daughter~~! You think that just because you’re my master and I’m your familiar, you have the right to tell me who I like?!”		“Don’t just decide who I like, just because you’re in a bad mood, you selfish girl! You think that just because you’re my master and I’m your familiar, you have the right to tell me who I like?!”

	Saito was staring at Louise with burning eyes, shouting at her. ''Everything I said came from the bottom of my heart. Why can't this girl understand that?'' he thought to himself cursing his own impulses.		Saito was staring at Louise with burning eyes, shouting at her. ''Everything I said came from the bottom of my heart. Why can't this girl understand that?'' he thought to himself cursing his own impulses.

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	“Eh?”		“Eh?”

	“Louise’s talk with Father didn’t go well. Because of that, she was told that she has to find a ~~son-in-law~~. And she then disappeared off somewhere.”		“Louise’s talk with Father didn’t go well. Because of that, she was told that she has to find a husband. And she then disappeared off somewhere.”

	“Really?”		“Really?”
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	Saito shook his head.		Saito shook his head.

	“Th-That sort of thing... is fine. I can’t think much of Louise in the first place. Because Louise, ~~about me... about the me that isn’t~~ a noble or anything, she doesn’t think much of me, that’s why...”		“Th-That sort of thing... is fine. I can’t think much of Louise in the first place. Because Louise, well, because I'm not a noble or anything, so I'm sure she doesn’t think much of me, that’s why...”

	Raising her body, Cattleya asked Saito.		Raising her body, Cattleya asked Saito.
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	Cattleya shook her head.		Cattleya shook her head.

	“There is only one condition that needs to be fulfilled to become a noble. To swear that you will protect the princess even at the cost of your own life, that’s all. Our ancestors were given territory and money by the king, because they protected the princess’, his daughter’s, life at the cost of their own. It wasn’t because they could use magic.”		“There is only one condition that needs to be fulfilled to become a noble. To swear that you will protect the princess even at the cost of your own life, that’s all. Our ancestors were given territory and money by the king because they protected the princess’, his daughter’s, life at the cost of their own. It wasn’t because they could use magic.”

	Cattleya stared at Saito with sincere eyes.		Cattleya stared at Saito with sincere eyes.

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	“Where? Have you found her?”		“Where? Have you found her?”

	“No, not this way!” the voices were saying something like that. It ~~seems~~ they were searching for someone.		“No, not this way!” the voices were saying something like that. It seemed they were searching for someone.

	Just as he was wondering who they were searching for, the door opened with a bang. Several ~~younglings~~ jumped in, held Saito down and started searching through the storage room.		Just as he was wondering who they were searching for, the door opened with a bang. Several young maids jumped in, held Saito down and started searching through the storage room.

	“What the heck are you guys doing?!” Saito shouted. Stating, “Doesn’t seem to be here”, and ignoring him, the ~~guys~~ that held Saito down left the room.		“What the heck are you guys doing?!” Saito shouted. Stating, “Doesn’t seem to be here”, and ignoring him, the maids that held Saito down left the room.

	“What the hell just happened?” as Saito thought to himself, this time there was a knock on the door.		“What the hell just happened?” as Saito thought to himself, this time there was a knock on the door.

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	“Huh? Why?”		“Huh? Why?”

	“I can’t recognize your participation in the war. I absolutely can’t recognize it. You’re probably ~~despaired~~, because of that traitor Wardes, right? That’s why, choose a son-in-law for me. Also, calm down your heart, ok? You've told me that you want to go to war twice now. This is an order. No changes are allowed.”		“I can’t recognize your participation in the war. I absolutely can’t recognize it. You’re probably in despair, because of that traitor Wardes, right? That’s why you need to choose a son-in-law for me. Also, calm down your heart, ok? You've told me that you want to go to war twice now. This is an order. No changes are allowed.”

	“Father!”		“Father!”
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	“Father isn’t young anymore. Don’t worry him so much.”		“Father isn’t young anymore. Don’t worry him so much.”

	“Because you worried Father so much, now you have to choose a ~~son-in-law~~.”		“Because you worried Father so much, now you have to choose a husband.”

	Eléonore declared coldly.		Eléonore declared coldly.
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	Having been told that by her mother, Louise shook her head.		Having been told that by her mother, Louise shook her head.

	~~“Don’t~~ have. ~~Don’t~~. No such ~~thing~~.”		“I don’t have. I don’t. There is no such person.”

	The Duke’s wife and Eléonore seemed to have noticed something because of Louise’s expression. The two exchanged glances.		The Duke’s wife and Eléonore seemed to have noticed something because of Louise’s expression. The two exchanged glances.
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	“I-I didn’t fall in love with a Chevalier.”		“I-I didn’t fall in love with a Chevalier.”

	Louise said in haste. The truth was he wasn’t even a Chevalier, but a simple Commoner. Even more, a Commoner that came from a completely different world... if they knew that, a simple sorry wouldn’t be even nearly enough of an apology. Even though she always repeated to herself that she ~~doesn’t~~ really like him, right now her head was full of thoughts of Saito.		Louise said in haste. The truth was he wasn’t even a Chevalier, but a simple Commoner. Even more, a Commoner that came from a completely different world... if they knew that, a simple sorry wouldn’t be even nearly enough of an apology. Even though she always repeated to herself that she didn’t really like him, right now her head was full of thoughts of Saito.

	Cattleya was looking worriedly at Louise.		Cattleya was looking worriedly at Louise.

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	===Chapter Three: Duke de La Vallière===		===Chapter Three: Duke of La Vallière===


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	The servants that had gathered in the surrounding area simultaneously took off the wheels of the cage-like carriage. Footmen caught the dragons and, at the given opportunity, the servants opened the carriage door. A red carpet spread out all the way to the cage’s entrance in order to accept a middle aged noble.		The servants that had gathered in the surrounding area simultaneously took off the wheels of the cage-like carriage. Footmen caught the dragons and, at the given opportunity, the servants opened the carriage door. A red carpet spread out all the way to the cage’s entrance in order to accept a middle aged noble.

	It was Duke de La Vallière. He was more than fifty years old. He had blonde hair and a beard that were both turning white, and he was dressed in wonderful clothes suitable for a king. On his left eye he had a monocle, and his eyes had a strong glitter to them.		It was Duke of La Vallière. He was more than fifty years old. He had blonde hair and a beard that were both turning white, and he was dressed in wonderful clothes suitable for a king. On his left eye he had a monocle, and his eyes had a strong glitter to them.

	The butlers walked briskly to the duke, took off his hat, fixed his hair and made sure that his robe was properly lined.		The butlers walked briskly to the duke, took off his hat, fixed his hair and made sure that his robe was properly lined.
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	“Certainly!”		“Certainly!”

	The mood in the La Vallière family as they had breakfast on the sunlit balcony was the same as usual. The table was drawn out in order to have breakfast in the sunlight, everyone was seated. Duke de La Vallière was seated in the seat of honor and next to him was his wife. And the unusually concentrated three sisters were sitting at the table, lined up by age. Louise’s body was a bit unstable, because she had cried so much last night. Even though she was supposed to get her father’s permission to participate in the war...		The mood in the La Vallière family as they had breakfast on the sunlit balcony was the same as usual. The table was drawn out in order to have breakfast in the sunlight, everyone was seated. Duke of La Vallière was seated in the seat of honor and next to him was his wife. And the unusually concentrated three sisters were sitting at the table, lined up by age. Louise’s body was a bit unstable, because she had cried so much last night. Even though she was supposed to get her father’s permission to participate in the war...

	It appeared that the Duke was in a considerably bad mood.		It appeared that the Duke was in a considerably bad mood.
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	“Fire?”		“Fire?”

	For a little while, Duke de La Vallière gazed at Louise’s face and then he slowly nodded.		For a little while, Duke of La Vallière gazed at Louise’s face and then he slowly nodded.

	“You have the same Element as your grandfather. I see, Fire, hmm. ... In that case, it’s only natural that you would be attracted to war. It’s a sinful Element. Truly, an Element covered in sin.”		“You have the same Element as your grandfather. I see, Fire, hmm. ... In that case, it’s only natural that you would be attracted to war. It’s a sinful Element. Truly, an Element covered in sin.”
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	“What are you doing?!” Saito began shouting and was noticed by the audience inside the courtyard.		“What are you doing?!” Saito began shouting and was noticed by the audience inside the courtyard.

	Duke de La Vallière ordered with a voice full of dignity.		Duke of La Vallière ordered with a voice full of dignity.

	"Hm~, seize Louise and confine her in the tower. And also, because she won’t be leaving that place for at least a year, please exchange the chain with something sturdier."		"Hm~, seize Louise and confine her in the tower. And also, because she won’t be leaving that place for at least a year, please exchange the chain with something sturdier."

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