Zero no Tsukaima:Volume6 Chapter6 - MTL - Revision history

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	Thus Colbert finished "New Liquid Container" putting the technologies to use.		Thus Colbert finished "New Liquid Container" putting the technologies to use.

	In front of the laboratory in the Academy of Magic, Colbert, who with much effort had finished obtaining all the ~~equipment~~ for the Zero Fighter, with a deep sigh, watched his single-handed work.		In front of the laboratory in the Academy of Magic, Colbert, who with much effort had finished obtaining all the equipments for the Zero Fighter, with a deep sigh, watched his single-handed work.

	During half of a year, though the new weapon was finished, he still wanted to accomplish more wonderful technologies, but his research results were settled there.		During half of a year, though the new weapon was finished, he still wanted to accomplish more wonderful technologies, but his research results were settled there.
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	However, Louise turned away, puffing her cheeks.		However, Louise turned away, puffing her cheeks.

	Louise's mood did not improve. Lately, after returning home, she was always like this.		Louise's mood did not improve. Lately, after returning from home, she was always like this.

	Saito tried to figure out the reason behind Louise’s bad mood.		Saito tried to figure out the reason behind Louise’s bad mood.

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	===Chapter Six: Sortie===		===Chapter Six: Sortie===

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	The dragons inside were all adult dragons. They looked twice as big as Tabitha’s Sylphid. Their big wings seemed to be built for speed.		The dragons inside were all adult dragons. They looked twice as big as Tabitha’s Sylphid. Their big wings seemed to be built for speed.

	“It ~~must be~~ very ~~tough~~ to become a dragon knight.”		“It is very difficult to become a dragon knight.”

	“Really?”		“Really?”

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	"That was annoying," Louise said in the hallway as the ~~conference room~~ door shut ~~behind them~~. She stuck her tongue out while facing the conference room.		"That was annoying," Louise said in the hallway as the door was shut. She stuck her tongue out while facing the conference room.

	“Yeah,” Saito nodded.		“Yeah,” Saito nodded.

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	However, while thinking absent-mindedly, his shoulder was tapped from behind.		However, while thinking absent-mindedly, his shoulder was tapped from behind.

	When he turned around, five or six nobles were sharply staring at Saito. They all seemed to be teenagers rather than men. They looked similar in age to Saito. They were wearing leather hats and clad in blue tunics. Like soldiers, they were wearing rapier-looking wands at their waists… yet it looked considerably shorter.		When he turned around, five or six nobles were sharply staring at Saito. They all seemed to be teenagers rather than men. They looked similar in age to Saito. They were wearing leather hats and clad in blue tunics. Like soldiers, they were wearing rapier-looking wands at their waists… yet they looked considerably shorter.

	“Hey, you.”		“Hey, you.”

	Being addressed to, Saito turned.		Being addressed that way, Saito turned.

	“What?”		“What?”
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	''Huh?'' With a suddenly agitated imagination, Saito, holding Derflinger, walked towards them.		''Huh?'' With a suddenly agitated imagination, Saito, holding Derflinger, walked towards them.

	They entered the upper deck where the Zero Fighter was placed. All Zero Fighter’s parts were tied with ropes that were fastened to the deck. Not able to understand, and still trying the figure out the meaning behind this, the irritated Saito pulled out Derflinger.		They entered the upper deck where the Zero Fighter was placed. All of the Zero Fighter’s parts were tied with ropes that were fastened to the deck. Not able to understand, and still trying the figure out the meaning behind this, the irritated Saito pulled out Derflinger.

	“Is this thing alive?”		“Is this thing alive?”

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			"That was annoying," Louise said in the hallway as the conference room door shut behind them. She stuck her tongue out while facing the conference room.

	~~“Great~~,” Saito nodded.		“Yeah,” Saito nodded.

	“Those people, I think that they see me only as a gift horse.”		“Those people, I think that they see me only as a gift horse.”

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	As soon as Saito and Louise landed on the Varsenda and got off the Zero Fighter, they were greeted by the officer, who was accompanied by ~~the guardians~~.		As soon as Saito and Louise landed on the Varsenda and got off the Zero Fighter, they were greeted by the officer, who was accompanied by an escort of guards.

	“Deck Officer, Kuryuuzurei.”		“Deck Officer, Kuryuuzurei.”
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	“Where are we heading now?“		“Where are we heading now?“

	Although he was asked, the officer guided them both without answering. Where could he be taking them? In Henrietta’s instructions only the name of the warship that they were to land on was written, nothing else. And the instructions of higher-up were always like this. ''Telling to one subordinate, they think that they already told all. A noble’s subordinate must lead a long and tough life'', Saito thought. Henrietta did not appear to be an exception.		Although he was asked, the officer guided them both without answering. Where could he be taking them? In Henrietta’s instructions only the name of the warship that they were to land on was written, nothing else. And the instructions of higher-up were always like this. ''Telling one subordinate, they think that they already told all. A noble’s subordinate must lead a long and tough life'', Saito thought. Henrietta did not appear to be an exception.

	They are so confident, because that’s the way things are.		They are so confident, because that’s the way things are.
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	The generals smiled to Louise. Fake smiles.		The generals smiled to Louise. Fake smiles.

	“You may think it is a hastily chosen headquarters. ~~Sorry no~~. This ship ensures absolute security. You see, this warship which is specialized in carrying dragon knights is not packed with cannons. It ~~can~~ be troublesome if enemies aim at us. ”		“You may think it is a hastily chosen headquarters. That is not the case. This ship ensures absolute security. You see, this warship, which is specialized in carrying dragon knights is not packed with cannons. It would be troublesome if enemies aim at us. ”

	“Ha, haah…then why did you make such a warship into general headquarters?”		“Ha, haah…then why did you make such a warship into general headquarters?”

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	Saito exclaimed in a voice of admiration.		Saito exclaimed in a voice of admiration.

	“Hey, Louise, look. ~~Huge~~ fleet!”		“Hey, Louise, look. A huge fleet!”

	“…”		“…”
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	However, Louise turned away, puffing her cheeks.		However, Louise turned away, puffing her cheeks.

	Louise's mood did not improve. Lately, after returning home, was ~~she~~ always like this.		Louise's mood did not improve. Lately, after returning home, she was always like this.

	Saito tried to figure out the reason behind Louise’s bad mood.		Saito tried to figure out the reason behind Louise’s bad mood.
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	''But I interpreted Louise’s reward, “Touch one place that you like,” as permission to touch everywhere, which made Louise angry.''		''But I interpreted Louise’s reward, “Touch one place that you like,” as permission to touch everywhere, which made Louise angry.''

	''And after Siesta’s “Unbuttoning” remark, Master, who has a very strong ~~monopoly on~~ desire got even more angry.''		''And after Siesta’s “Unbuttoning” remark, Master, who has a very strong desire to monopolize, got even more angry.''

	From Louise’s perspective, flirting with another girl was similar to serving two masters at once – Saito misunderstood it greatly.		From Louise’s perspective, flirting with another girl was similar to serving two masters at once – Saito misunderstood it greatly.
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	At the moment, they needed to find that warship to land on. Several dragon knights flew up, surrounding Saito’s Zero Fighter. They started waving; Saito waved back. Seems like they were going to guide him to the ship.		At the moment, they needed to find that warship to land on. Several dragon knights flew up, surrounding Saito’s Zero Fighter. They started waving; Saito waved back. Seems like they were going to guide him to the ship.

	Following the backs of the dragon knights, at the limit ~~speed~~ of the plane, ''Varsenda'' came into view.		Following the backs of the dragon knights, at the speed limit of the plane, ''Varsenda'' came into view.

	The ship deck was flat and big in order to carry the large number of dragon knights. The sail mast was about 6 meters tall, everything must look like small bugs from up there. It wasn’t equipped with cannons as this ship’s sole purpose was to carry dragon knights.		The ship deck was flat and big in order to carry the large number of dragon knights. The sail mast was about 6 meters tall, everything must look like small bugs from up there. It wasn’t equipped with cannons as this ship’s sole purpose was to carry dragon knights.

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	“We're going to war. What kind of girl preparations are there?”		“We're going to war. What kind of girl preparations are there?”

	“Hmph!” Louise turned her face away, and ignoring Saito, climbed up the wing and entered the cockpit. One month had passed since they ~~ran~~ away from Louise's family.		“Hmph!” Louise turned her face away, and ignoring Saito, climbed up the wing and entered the cockpit. One month had passed since they had run away from Louise's family.

	Since then, things were like this.		Since then, things were like this.
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	Then Colbert’s magic cranked the propeller, starting up the engine.		Then Colbert’s magic cranked the propeller, starting up the engine.

	As it was a second time, it was possible to operate calmly.		As it was the second time, it was possible to operate calmly.

	Colbert helping again, created a strong wind.		Colbert, helping again, created a strong wind.

	Saito put on the goggles and rolled the muffler around his neck.		Saito put on the goggles and rolled the muffler around his neck.