Zero no Tsukaima:Volume6 Chapter8 - MTL - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 07:23, 18 October 2015

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	However… the injury was severe.		However… the injury was severe.

	~~Inner…~~		During that time…

	Agnes recovered and pointed her sword at Colbert.		Agnes recovered and pointed her sword at Colbert.
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	Colbert with a weak face looked up at Agnes.		Colbert with a weak face looked up at Agnes.

	“You… You are the leader of the Magical Research Experimental Group platoon? ~~You broke~~ the ~~royal~~ list ~~of military material~~ in ~~storage~~?”		“You… You are the leader of the Magical Research Experimental Group platoon? Were you also the culprit who tore the name list in the Royal Military Archives?”

	Colbert nodded.		Colbert nodded.

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	In the darkness he ran from side to side trying to escape them.		In the darkness he ran from side to side trying to escape them.

	Even if one wanted to attack, challenging Menvil in the dark is not easily done.		Even if one wanted to attack, challenging Menvil in the dark was not easily done.

	“What’s wrong?! What’s wrong captain?! Don’t just run around!”		“What’s wrong?! What’s wrong captain?! Don’t just run around!”
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	“I… I was chasing such a coward for twenty years… you good-for-nothing… I cannot permit that... I cannot permit that for myself. I will roast you bit by bit, taking my time, without any sympathy, from head to toes.”		“I… I was chasing such a coward for twenty years… you good-for-nothing… I cannot permit that... I cannot permit that for myself. I will roast you bit by bit, taking my time, without any sympathy, from head to toes.”

	Menvil began utter an incantation.		Menvil began to utter an incantation.

	“Even if I ask, you won’t listen.”		“Even if I ask, you won’t listen.”

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	===Chapter Eight: The Atonement of Flame===		===Chapter Eight: The Atonement of Flame===

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	''P.S.''		''P.S.''

	''In that world, are there "cars" that everyone can use and they drive on the roads?　''		''In that world, are there "cars" that everyone can use and they drive them on the roads?　''

	''Are there little boxes with which one can communicate over long distances?''		''Are there little boxes with which one can communicate over long distances?''
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	''Has a person really reached the moon?''		''Has a person really reached the moon?''

	''To be able to do that without magic, must be really wonderful.''		''To be able to do that without magic, it must be really wonderful.''

	''I want to see that kind of world.''		''I want to see that kind of world.''


	“That’s it. ~~Weird~~ person. He really wants to go to your world.”		“That’s it. What a weird person. He really wants to go to your world.”

	Saito, while sniffing, thanked Louise.		Saito, while sniffing, thanked Louise.

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	It came from Rosais, from one dragon scout of the first unit. General De Poitiers smiled gloatingly.		It came from Rosais, from one dragon scout of the first unit. General De Poitiers smiled gloatingly.

	Chief of Staff Wimpffen, watched his superior officer’s face.		Chief of Staff Wimpffen watched his superior officer’s face.

	“Must be good news,” he muttered.		“Must be good news,” he muttered.
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	''Saito-kun, was my invention useful?''		''Saito-kun, was my invention useful?''

	''If it is so, then I am glad. For you… no, to all students, not just as a teacher, it would make me happy if it would be of any use ~~for~~ you. Very happy.''		''If it is so, then I am glad. For you… no, to all students, not just as a teacher, it would make me happy if it would be of any use to you. Very happy.''

	''Now, why did I decide to write this letter today – I have a request. No, nothing weird. And be relieved it is not about money either.''		''Now, why did I decide to write this letter today – I have a request. No, nothing weird. And be relieved it is not about money either.''
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	''As to what this discourse is about, it is some dream of mine.''		''As to what this discourse is about, it is some dream of mine.''

	''If things which one can only do by magic, could be done by technologies that everyone could use.''		''That things, which one can only do by magic, could be done by technologies that everyone could use.''

	''Have you seen? Happy Little Snake.''		''Have you seen? Happy Little Snake.''
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	''In the past, I committed a crime.''		''In the past, I committed a crime.''

	''Too big a crime.''		''Too big of a crime.''

	''It is so big that it will never be forgiven.''		''It is so big that it will never be forgiven.''
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	''Do not become accustomed to people's death.''		''Do not become accustomed to people's death.''

	''Do not think it is natural.''		''Do not think that it is natural.''

	''The moment you do that – something will break.''		''The moment you do that – something will break.''
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	Behind the ~~cloud~~... one could see the Tristain-Germania united fleet heading to Rosais.		Behind the clouds... one could see the Tristain-Germania united fleet heading to Rosais.

	The number had decreased a lot.		The number of ships had decreased a lot.

	Still… most ships were still intact, so they likely won the battle.		Still… most ships were still intact, so they likely won the battle.

	Even though they won, the ones that survived looked worn-out. Many of the ships' hulls were damaged, masts were broken. There was a ship that lost all cannons completely as well.		Even though they had won, the ones that survived looked worn-out. Many of the ships' hulls were damaged, masts were broken. There was a ship that lost all of its cannons completely as well.

	Louise continued to read the letter aloud.		Louise continued to read the letter aloud.

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	Malicorne was alive too.		Malicorne was alive too.

	To survive among flying spells, bullets and cannonballs – ~~guess~~ he must be lucky. Whenever a new enemy ship passed, Malicorne created a dark cloud while yelling. Otherwise, he would have fainted from fear. He had no idea whether it was effective or not.		To survive among flying spells, bullets and cannonballs – he must have been lucky. Whenever a new enemy ship passed, Malicorne created a dark cloud while yelling. Otherwise, he would have fainted from fear. He had no idea whether it was effective or not.

	“Styx,”		“Styx,”
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	On the deck, Bowood and the commander of a warship walked. They were talking about the battle progress.		On the deck, Bowood and the commander of a warship walked. They were talking about the battle progress.

	The officer cadet that was guiding them both, spotted two people sitting on the deck and bellowed.		The officer cadet that was guiding them both spotted the two people sitting on the deck and bellowed.

	“Hey! You! No time to sit around! Stand up! Stand up now!”		“Hey! You! No time to sit around! Stand up! Stand up now!”
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	Hastily Malicorne and Styx stood up.		Hastily Malicorne and Styx stood up.

	“Start preparing. Wait with commanding officers and officer cadets inside.”		“Start preparing. Wait with the commanding officers and officer cadets inside.”

	Malicorne and Styx looked at each other. They just survived one deadly battle. How can they vigorously start preparing for another one?		Malicorne and Styx looked at each other. They just survived one deadly battle. How can they vigorously start preparing for another one?

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	If the enemy hides in the darkness… consign him to the darkness.		If the enemy hides in the darkness… consign him to the darkness.

	However, this spell kills everyone nearby. Therefore, Colbert did not use it until they moved to the center of the plaza.		However, this spell kills everyone nearby. Therefore, Colbert did not use it until they had moved to the center of the plaza.

	Colbert turned around and, while holding his mouth, approached the lying Menvil.		Colbert turned around and, while holding his mouth, approached the lying Menvil.
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	A black shadow jumped into the way.		A black shadow jumped into the way.

	He blocked the arrows from reaching Agnes with his own body. He uttered a spell and a snake of flame flew out the wand’s tip burning up the wand that the other mage ~~used~~.		He blocked the arrows from reaching Agnes with his own body. He uttered a spell and a snake of flame flew out the wand’s tip burning up the wand that the other mage was using.

	Agnes stared in blank surprise at Colbert.		Agnes stared in blank surprise at Colbert.
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	Inner…		Inner…

	Agnes ~~who~~ recovered ~~herself~~ pointed ~~the~~ sword at Colbert.		Agnes recovered and pointed her sword at Colbert.

	Shocked, students stared at Agnes.		Shocked, students stared at Agnes.
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	“Idiot… That is a lie.”		“Idiot… That is a lie.”

	“…Ha ha, afterwards, I learned about that too. In short it was the ‘New Religion Hunt.’ I am tormented by ~~the~~ guilt every day. It was… like Menvil said. Women, children - I burned them all. It was not permitted. But the memory still haunts me. I left the army. I swore… ~~not~~ to use Fire for destruction again.”		“…Ha ha, afterwards, I learned about that too. In short, it was the ‘New Religion Hunt.’ I am tormented by guilt every day. It was… like Menvil said. Women, children - I burned them all. It was not permitted. But the memory still haunts me. I left the army. I swore… never to use Fire for destruction again.”

	“…but those feelings didn’t stop your hand?”		“…but those feelings didn’t stop your hand?”
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	Colbert shook his head.		Colbert shook his head.

	After that… he slowly shut his eyes. Though Montmorency desperately kept uttering an incantation… her willpower was drained with time - she fainted and toppled to the ground. For the spell of "Recovery" to heal such a serious injury, ~~it needed~~ special ~~medicine…~~ but ~~now and here~~ there was none.		After that… he slowly shut his eyes. Though Montmorency desperately kept uttering an incantation… her willpower was drained with time - she fainted and toppled to the ground. For the spell of "Recovery" to heal such a serious injury, special medicine was necessary… but at this moment there was none.

	Therefore, though willpower tried to replace the specific medicine… it had its limits.		Therefore, though willpower tried to replace the specific medicine… it had its limits.

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	Menvil towered above Kirche, looking down on her.		Menvil towered above Kirche, looking down on her.

	“Too bad… Light bombs only ~~blinds~~ one's eyes…”		“Too bad… Light bombs only blind one's eyes…”

	Menvil said while smiling.		Menvil said while smiling.
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	The aura around him felt very different from normal.		The aura around him felt very different from normal.

	Burning his own people, even Kirche’s Zerbst lineage, never engaged in such atrocities. After all, those were nobles’ duels.		Burning his own people, even Kirche’s Zerbst lineage never engaged in such atrocities. After all, those were nobles’ duels.

	However, the air that Colbert emanated today was different.		However, the air that Colbert emanated today was different.
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	“…fire’s characteristics are zeal and destruction.”		“…fire’s characteristics are zeal and destruction.”

	“Fire’s zeal purpose ~~is solely destruction~~. That’s what you think. Twenty years ago I thought so too.”		“Fire’s zeal and destruction are its sole purpose. That’s what you think. Twenty years ago I thought so too.”

	Colbert muttered in an unusual voice.		Colbert muttered in an unusual voice.

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	In the darkness he ran from side to side trying to escape them.		In the darkness he ran from side to side trying to escape them.

	Even if ~~you want~~ to attack, challenging Menvil in the dark is not easily done.		Even if one wanted to attack, challenging Menvil in the dark is not easily done.

	“What’s wrong?! What’s wrong captain?! Don’t just run around!”		“What’s wrong?! What’s wrong captain?! Don’t just run around!”
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	“Young Menvil, I have a favor to ask.”		“Young Menvil, I have a favor to ask.”

	“What? You want to burn without suffering? Well for ~~the~~ old time's sake, I will burn you in an instant.”		“What? You want to burn without suffering? Well for old time's sake, I will burn you in an instant.”

	In a perfectly composed voice, Colbert said,		In a perfectly composed voice, Colbert said,
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	Colbert fell on his knees and bowed. The Menvil's voice was filled with disgust,		Colbert fell on his knees and bowed. The Menvil's voice was filled with disgust,

	“I… I was chasing such a coward for twenty years… you good-for-nothing… I cannot permit that... I cannot permit that to myself. I will roast you bit by bit, taking my time, without any sympathy, from head to toes.”		“I… I was chasing such a coward for twenty years… you good-for-nothing… I cannot permit that... I cannot permit that for myself. I will roast you bit by bit, taking my time, without any sympathy, from head to toes.”

	Menvil began utter an incantation.		Menvil began utter an incantation.
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	The ball of a small flame shot up.		The ball of a small flame shot up.

	“What? ~~Illumination~~ plan? Unfortunately, the fire size is not enough to light the area around.		“What? An illumination plan? Unfortunately for you, the fire size is not enough to light the area around.

	It was as Menvil said. The small ball of flame only lightly shined upon their surroundings. It could not replace the sun.		It was as Menvil said. The small ball of flame only lightly shined upon their surroundings. It could not replace the sun.
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	Using "Gold transmutation" water vapor in the air was turned into oil.		Using "Gold transmutation" water vapor in the air was turned into oil.

	With a spark it turned into a huge ~~bolide…~~		With a spark it turned into a huge raging ball of fire…

	The combustion of the ~~huge bolide~~ sucked up all oxygen around, causing every living thing within its range to suffocate and die.		The combustion of the raging ball of fire sucked up all oxygen around, causing every living thing within its range to suffocate and die.

	It was a matchless "Flame bomb."		It was a matchless "Flame bomb."