Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter1 - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 17:08, 17 October 2015

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	"When we got surrounded, I was injured before my mount; my shoulder was hit by a magic missile. Beyael probably wanted to help me escape. So, it pretended to be hit, and flew to a lower altitude."		"When we got surrounded, I was injured before my mount; my shoulder was hit by a magic missile. Beyael probably wanted to help me escape. So, it pretended to be hit, and flew to a lower altitude."

	There is a tinge of shame in his voice, due to the fact that the other knights continued to fight on despite the injuries they and their dragon mounts suffered.		There was a tinge of shame in his voice, due to the fact that the other knights continued to fight on despite the injuries they and their dragon mounts suffered.

	"Since you could no longer fight, it's only logical to leave the battlefield. There's nothing to be ashamed of."		"Since you could no longer fight, it's only logical to leave the battlefield. There's nothing to be ashamed of."
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	It was then that he recalled what Louise had said just now.		It was then that he recalled what Louise had said just now.

	''Death may sadden people.... But that was a glorious death in the battlefield... for honor. They died for a great victory. They'~~re too~~ pitiful if you felt sad about their deaths...''		''Death may sadden people.... But that was a glorious death in the battlefield... for honor. They died for a great victory. They'd be pitiful if you felt sad about their deaths...''

	He had a very strong distaste for this. It felt unnatural.		He had a very strong distaste for this. It felt unnatural.

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Preview -> MTL renaming

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Coffeezombie: lots of verb fixes

2015-07-20T13:01:06Z

lots of verb fixes

Coffeezombie: fixed translation to make sense. The Earth is not peaceful but Japan is

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fixed translation to make sense. The Earth is not peaceful but Japan is

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	As Louise looked at Saito's forlorn face, she felt terrible. The things she had just said were not lies. Although she felt sad for those youths who had sacrificed themselves, they had died for the victory of their country.		As Louise looked at Saito's forlorn face, she felt terrible. The things she had just said were not lies. Although she felt sad for those youths who had sacrificed themselves, they had died for the victory of their country.

	Louise, who had grown up receiving the education of the nobility, and Saito, who grew up in ~~Japan on~~ the peaceful Earth: there was an obvious rift between them.		Louise, who had grown up receiving the education of the nobility, and Saito, who grew up in the peaceful Japan of Earth: there was an obvious rift between them.

	Louise felt pain seeing Saito’s crying face. Compared to mourning the dead, she had a greater desire to heal the pain of the living. If Saito's tears were a kind of gentleness, then perhaps this can be said to be another type of gentleness.		Louise felt pain seeing Saito’s crying face. Compared to mourning the dead, she had a greater desire to heal the pain of the living. If Saito's tears were a kind of gentleness, then perhaps this can be said to be another type of gentleness.

Coffeezombie: fix translation to make sense in context

2015-07-20T12:27:16Z

fix translation to make sense in context

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	He felt that something was amiss when Louise started talking like this.		He felt that something was amiss when Louise started talking like this.

	”Of course not, but ~~we have~~ to. We're now at war."		”Of course not, but it has to be this way. We're now at war."

	Louise's right hand let go of the hem it was holding, and gently patted Saito's forehead, now that he has turned around. Her fingers caressed the streaks of dried tears on his cheeks.		Louise's right hand let go of the hem it was holding, and gently patted Saito's forehead, now that he has turned around. Her fingers caressed the streaks of dried tears on his cheeks.

Coffeezombie: fix verbs

2015-07-20T12:15:36Z

fix verbs

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	She was the one whom they call "Louise of the Void," otherwise known as Louise Françoise; only a few high ranking officers of the royal army knew of this secret.		She was the one whom they call "Louise of the Void," otherwise known as Louise Françoise; only a few high ranking officers of the royal army knew of this secret.

	It was now the end of the year, the second week in the month of Wynn. Going by Halkeginia's climate, it was the equivalent of autumn... still not considered very cold in the tent. Winter ~~will~~ have to wait until the coming of the new year. It's also because of this that she ~~can~~ dress so sexily without the fear of catching a cold.		It was now the end of the year, the second week in the month of Wynn. Going by Halkeginia's climate, it was the equivalent of autumn... still not considered very cold in the tent. Winter would have to wait until the coming of the new year. It was also because of this that she could dress so sexily without the fear of catching a cold.

	On a simple bed, consisting of a piece of cloth draped over straw, Louise bit her small finger, and sulked indignantly. This gesture of hers ~~has~~ an unbelievable cuteness to it. On that porcelain doll-like face of hers surfaced a peach color, arising from discontent. Louise sat up, and hugged her knee.		On a simple bed, consisting of a piece of cloth draped over straw, Louise bit her small finger, and sulked indignantly. This gesture of hers had an unbelievable cuteness to it. On that porcelain doll-like face of hers surfaced a peach color, arising from discontent. Louise sat up, and hugged her knee.

	This gesture of hers had a cuteness akin to a goddess'. With her feelings immediately written on her face, Louise could not completely hide the uneasiness in her heart. This unease caused some sort of dramatic change in Louise's girlish air, adding to it a layer of perfume called "sexiness".		This gesture of hers had a cuteness akin to a goddess'. With her feelings immediately written on her face, Louise could not completely hide the uneasiness in her heart. This unease caused some sort of dramatic change in Louise's girlish air, adding to it a layer of perfume called "sexiness".
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	As a female officer directly under Her Highness's command, Louise was assigned her own personal tent. In the military port of Rosais, buildings resembling hostels were rare, so tents were put at every stop. Such treatment was equal to a general's, but since Louise's legendary magic element ‘Void’ was considered to be a weapon of last resort, it was perfectly normal.		As a female officer directly under Her Highness's command, Louise was assigned her own personal tent. In the military port of Rosais, buildings resembling hostels were rare, so tents were put at every stop. Such treatment was equal to a general's, but since Louise's legendary magic element ‘Void’ was considered to be a weapon of last resort, it was perfectly normal.

	Inside the tent, illuminated by a magical lamp, was a simple bed made up of a piece of cloth covering some straw, a foldable dining table, a small cabinet for clothing and accessories and a bell for ordering the accompanying soldiers. In the battlefield, items like that inside a tent ~~can~~ be considered "luxurious".		Inside the tent, illuminated by a magical lamp, was a simple bed made up of a piece of cloth covering some straw, a foldable dining table, a small cabinet for clothing and accessories and a bell for ordering the accompanying soldiers. In the battlefield, items like that inside a tent could be considered "luxurious".

	In a corner of the tent, Saito was staring blankly in front of him, feeling low.		In a corner of the tent, Saito was staring blankly in front of him, feeling low.

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	A young lady with peach-colored hair was lying horizontally on the bed, with only a thin cape wrapped around her bare skin.~~kkkmmmm~~		A young lady with peach-colored hair was lying horizontally on the bed, with only a thin cape wrapped around her bare skin.

	She was the one whom they call "Louise of the Void," otherwise known as Louise Françoise; only a few high ranking officers of the royal army knew of this secret.		She was the one whom they call "Louise of the Void," otherwise known as Louise Françoise; only a few high ranking officers of the royal army knew of this secret.

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	A young lady with peach-colored hair was lying horizontally on the bed, with only a thin cape wrapped around her bare skin.		A young lady with peach-colored hair was lying horizontally on the bed, with only a thin cape wrapped around her bare skin.kkkmmmm

	She was the one whom they call "Louise of the Void," otherwise known as Louise Françoise; only a few high ranking officers of the royal army knew of this secret.		She was the one whom they call "Louise of the Void," otherwise known as Louise Françoise; only a few high ranking officers of the royal army knew of this secret.

Ephyon at 03:05, 18 July 2009

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	Beneath the cape was her skin, a young maiden's skin now full of charm, due to her passion.		Beneath the cape was her skin, a young maiden's skin now full of charm, due to her passion.

	Which is to say, she was wearing nothing. Why? Because Louise only ~~wears~~ pajamas when she ~~sleeps~~; so since she ~~forgot~~ to bring her pajamas, she had to replace it with a cape and if she were wearing her ~~undies~~, she would not be able to fall asleep.		Which is to say, she was wearing nothing. Why? Because Louise only wore pajamas when she slept; so since she had forgotten to bring her pajamas, she had to replace it with a cape, and if she were wearing her underwear, she would not have been able to fall asleep.

	Although the sexy and cute pose from Louise was spreading out an irresistible charm...It was a pity that the other person in the tent took no notice of it.		Although the sexy and cute pose from Louise was spreading out an irresistible charm...It was a pity that the other person in the tent took no notice of it.
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	She remembered what she was wearing now. Underneath the cape was her skin.		She remembered what she was wearing now. Underneath the cape was her skin.

	No ~~undies~~.		No underwear.

	Louise took a deep breath. It's only a tiny bit. If doing this could comfort Saito a little, isn't it worth a try?		Louise took a deep breath. It's only a tiny bit. If doing this could comfort Saito a little, isn't it worth a try?
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	"Are we not at war now? If you're going to grieve over every single stranger, wouldn't there be no end to it?"		"Are we not at war now? If you're going to grieve over every single stranger, wouldn't there be no end to it?"

	"We're not strangers; I talked with you guys before. If someone died while protecting you, you ~~will~~ definitely feel sad! You guys are the ones with strange ideas!"		"We're not strangers; I talked with you guys before. If someone died while protecting you, you would definitely feel sad! You guys are the ones with strange ideas!"

	Saito downed a mouthful of wine. Rene, with a somewhat serious look, said,		Saito downed a mouthful of wine. Rene, with a somewhat serious look, said,

	"We didn't serve as bait in order to protect you two. We~~'re~~ protecting the battle plan, and our own honor."		"We didn't serve as bait in order to protect you two. We were protecting the battle plan, and our own honor."

	"What do you mean?"		"What do you mean?"

	"Back then, the orders we received were to escort you guys to Dartanes at all cost. Ensuring the success of this battle ~~will~~ mean the protection of the entire royal army, equivalent to a blood oath of loyalty to Her Highness. As long as our loyalty to Her Highness is recognized, the prestige of our clans will increase. Even if I die, the glory will continue on."		"Back then, the orders we received were to escort you guys to Dartanes at all cost. Ensuring the success of this battle would mean the protection of the entire royal army, equivalent to a blood oath of loyalty to Her Highness. As long as our loyalty to Her Highness is recognized, the prestige of our clans will increase. Even if I die, the glory will continue on."

	"This is crazy."		"This is crazy."
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	He wanted to protect Siesta's hometown, for the girl had always cared for him.		He wanted to protect Siesta's hometown, for the girl had always cared for him.

	But, the most important reason of all... is that he's worried about Louise.		But, the most important reason of all... is that he was worried about Louise.

	''That's probably it...'' he thought, as he looked at this young lady with peach-coloured hair, who was sleeping on his knee. To put it plainly, it's because he loved her. That's why he always worried.		''That's probably it...'' he thought, as he looked at this young lady with peach-coloured hair, who was sleeping on his knee. To put it plainly, it was because he loved her. That was why he always worried.

	Louise is really cute, and he really wanted to feel her. But, he~~'ll~~ have to hold back for now, as everyone was here.		Louise is really cute, and he really wanted to feel her. But, he would have to hold back for now, as everyone was here.

	Ah, but ~~will~~ his feelings be reciprocated?		Ah, but would his feelings be reciprocated?

	Whether this relationship ~~will~~ have an outcome, perhaps only God himself knows. The God of Earth... or the gods of this different world... who should he ask for the answer?		Whether this relationship would have an outcome, perhaps only God himself knows. The God of Earth... or the gods of this different world... who should he ask for the answer?

	Thinking about this, Saito immediately shook his head.		Thinking about this, Saito immediately shook his head.