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Shadowys: Reverted edits by IcePhantom (talk) to last revision by Veritatis cupitor

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Reverted edits by IcePhantom (talk) to last revision by Veritatis cupitor

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	"Now, I shall decorate this officer with a medal..."		"Now, I shall decorate this officer with a medal..."

	But, he ~~has~~ no medals with him. Just as Saito was being troubled by this, someone stuffed something into his hand. It was a light, pure white piece of fabric.		But, he had no medals with him. Just as Saito was being troubled by this, someone stuffed something into his hand. It was a light, pure white piece of fabric.

	"Wha-what is this?"		"Wha-what is this?"
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	“Ha, drinking certainly makes me happy, after a great deed!"		“Ha, drinking certainly makes me happy, after a great deed!"

	Said Rene.		Said Rene.

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	“'Fairies of the Wind' do not exist. Fairies, unlike the spirits of the dead, are legendary living beings.”		“'Fairies of the Wind' do not exist. Fairies, unlike the spirits of the dead, are legendary living beings.”

	“I do not understand myself! But, I know was a fairy…”		“I do not understand myself! But, I know it was a fairy…”

	“How did it look like?”		“How did it look like?”
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	“Is it so weird that the color of my eyes are different?”		“Is it so weird that the color of my eyes are different?”

	“N-no…” he blushed instinctively. What was that, he is a man, Saito tried persuade himself.		“N-no…” he blushed instinctively. What was that, he is a man, Saito tried to persuade himself.

	“Then don’t feel so shy looking at it.”		“Then don’t feel so shy looking at it.”
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	“It's Saito.”		“It's Saito.”

	In a hoity-toity gesture waved~~, he~~ it away and introduced himself~~. He bowed~~ gracefully.		In a hoity-toity gesture he waved it away and introduced himself by bowing gracefully.

	“Sorry! I was being rude! I am a priest of Romalia, Julio Cesar. I was looking forward to meeting you… Because a human being for a familiar is very rare. I wanted to meet you at least once… Ah, and you…”		“Sorry! I was being rude! I am a priest of Romalia, Julio Cesar. I was looking forward to meeting you… Because a human being for a familiar is very rare. I wanted to meet you at least once… Ah, and you…”
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	Saito was in a cold sweat.		Saito was in a cold sweat.

	What’s with reaction?		What’s with that reaction?

	He was reminded of Wardes. He remembered that Louise was weak against such charm. Saito felt like throwing up.		He was reminded of Wardes. He remembered that Louise was weak against such charm. Saito felt like throwing up.
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	“Maybe it’s time for you to take care of your dragon.”		“Maybe it’s time for you to take care of your dragon.”

	Julio spread his hands out, “I envy those who do not have to take care of a dragon,” and after leaving this sarcastic message, he left. Everyone from the 2nd Dragon Knight Squadron, who lost their dragons in battle, watched Julio’s back in hatred.		Julio spread his hands out, “I envy those who do not have to take care of a dragon,” and after leaving this sarcastic message, he left. Everyone from the 2nd Dragon Knight Squadron, who lost their dragons in battle, watched Julio’s back in hatred.

IcePhantom: Reverted edits by Veritatis cupitor (talk) to last revision by Cthaeh

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	"Now, I shall decorate this officer with a medal..."		"Now, I shall decorate this officer with a medal..."

	But, he ~~had~~ no medals with him. Just as Saito was being troubled by this, someone stuffed something into his hand. It was a light, pure white piece of fabric.		But, he has no medals with him. Just as Saito was being troubled by this, someone stuffed something into his hand. It was a light, pure white piece of fabric.

	"Wha-what is this?"		"Wha-what is this?"
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	“Ha, drinking certainly makes me happy, after a great deed!"		“Ha, drinking certainly makes me happy, after a great deed!"

	Said Rene.		Said Rene.

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	“'Fairies of the Wind' do not exist. Fairies, unlike the spirits of the dead, are legendary living beings.”		“'Fairies of the Wind' do not exist. Fairies, unlike the spirits of the dead, are legendary living beings.”

	“I do not understand myself! But, I know it was a fairy…”		“I do not understand myself! But, I know was a fairy…”

	“How did it look like?”		“How did it look like?”
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	“Is it so weird that the color of my eyes are different?”		“Is it so weird that the color of my eyes are different?”

	“N-no…” he blushed instinctively. What was that, he is a man, Saito tried to persuade himself.		“N-no…” he blushed instinctively. What was that, he is a man, Saito tried persuade himself.

	“Then don’t feel so shy looking at it.”		“Then don’t feel so shy looking at it.”
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	“It's Saito.”		“It's Saito.”

	In a hoity-toity gesture he ~~waved~~ it away and introduced himself ~~by bowing~~ gracefully.		In a hoity-toity gesture waved, he it away and introduced himself. He bowed gracefully.

	“Sorry! I was being rude! I am a priest of Romalia, Julio Cesar. I was looking forward to meeting you… Because a human being for a familiar is very rare. I wanted to meet you at least once… Ah, and you…”		“Sorry! I was being rude! I am a priest of Romalia, Julio Cesar. I was looking forward to meeting you… Because a human being for a familiar is very rare. I wanted to meet you at least once… Ah, and you…”
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	Saito was in a cold sweat.		Saito was in a cold sweat.

	What’s with ~~that~~ reaction?		What’s with reaction?

	He was reminded of Wardes. He remembered that Louise was weak against such charm. Saito felt like throwing up.		He was reminded of Wardes. He remembered that Louise was weak against such charm. Saito felt like throwing up.
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	“Maybe it’s time for you to take care of your dragon.”		“Maybe it’s time for you to take care of your dragon.”

	Julio spread his hands out, “I envy those who do not have to take care of a dragon,” and after leaving this sarcastic message, he left. Everyone from the 2nd Dragon Knight Squadron, who lost their dragons in battle, watched Julio’s back in hatred.		Julio spread his hands out, “I envy those who do not have to take care of a dragon,” and after leaving this sarcastic message, he left. Everyone from the 2nd Dragon Knight Squadron, who lost their dragons in battle, watched Julio’s back in hatred.

Veritatis cupitor at 18:29, 17 October 2015

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	"Now, I shall decorate this officer with a medal..."		"Now, I shall decorate this officer with a medal..."

	But, he ~~has~~ no medals with him. Just as Saito was being troubled by this, someone stuffed something into his hand. It was a light, pure white piece of fabric.		But, he had no medals with him. Just as Saito was being troubled by this, someone stuffed something into his hand. It was a light, pure white piece of fabric.

	"Wha-what is this?"		"Wha-what is this?"
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	“Ha, drinking certainly makes me happy, after a great deed!"		“Ha, drinking certainly makes me happy, after a great deed!"

	Said Rene.		Said Rene.

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	“'Fairies of the Wind' do not exist. Fairies, unlike the spirits of the dead, are legendary living beings.”		“'Fairies of the Wind' do not exist. Fairies, unlike the spirits of the dead, are legendary living beings.”

	“I do not understand myself! But, I know was a fairy…”		“I do not understand myself! But, I know it was a fairy…”

	“How did it look like?”		“How did it look like?”
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	“Is it so weird that the color of my eyes are different?”		“Is it so weird that the color of my eyes are different?”

	“N-no…” he blushed instinctively. What was that, he is a man, Saito tried persuade himself.		“N-no…” he blushed instinctively. What was that, he is a man, Saito tried to persuade himself.

	“Then don’t feel so shy looking at it.”		“Then don’t feel so shy looking at it.”
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	“It's Saito.”		“It's Saito.”

	In a hoity-toity gesture waved~~, he~~ it away and introduced himself~~. He bowed~~ gracefully.		In a hoity-toity gesture he waved it away and introduced himself by bowing gracefully.

	“Sorry! I was being rude! I am a priest of Romalia, Julio Cesar. I was looking forward to meeting you… Because a human being for a familiar is very rare. I wanted to meet you at least once… Ah, and you…”		“Sorry! I was being rude! I am a priest of Romalia, Julio Cesar. I was looking forward to meeting you… Because a human being for a familiar is very rare. I wanted to meet you at least once… Ah, and you…”
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	Saito was in a cold sweat.		Saito was in a cold sweat.

	What’s with reaction?		What’s with that reaction?

	He was reminded of Wardes. He remembered that Louise was weak against such charm. Saito felt like throwing up.		He was reminded of Wardes. He remembered that Louise was weak against such charm. Saito felt like throwing up.
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	“Maybe it’s time for you to take care of your dragon.”		“Maybe it’s time for you to take care of your dragon.”

	Julio spread his hands out, “I envy those who do not have to take care of a dragon,” and after leaving this sarcastic message, he left. Everyone from the 2nd Dragon Knight Squadron, who lost their dragons in battle, watched Julio’s back in hatred.		Julio spread his hands out, “I envy those who do not have to take care of a dragon,” and after leaving this sarcastic message, he left. Everyone from the 2nd Dragon Knight Squadron, who lost their dragons in battle, watched Julio’s back in hatred.

Cthaeh: Cthaeh moved page Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter2 ~Preview~ to Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter2 - MTL without leaving a redirect: Preview -> MTL renaming

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	Louise, left behind, trembled with anger.		Louise, left behind, trembled with anger.

	She bellowed towards the direction where Saito left.		She bellowed towards the direction where Saito had left.

	“What was that?! Come over here!”		“What was that?! Come over here!”
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	Steadily, her eyes grew teary. Lately she just wanted to escape it all.		Steadily, her eyes grew teary. Lately she just wanted to escape it all.

	''Separately, well, that's ok. Bad, but it's ok. I‘ll forgive him. That boy is like that, ~~can not~~ be helped. I don’t like him, really, I don’t like, aah, maybe a little.''		''Separately, well, that's ok. Bad, but it's ok. I‘ll forgive him. That boy is like that, it cannot be helped. I don’t like him, really, I don’t like, aah, maybe a little.''

	Louise shook her head.		Louise shook her head.
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	''But if it’s love why he does treat me so coldly?'' She could not understand.		''But if it’s love why he does treat me so coldly?'' She could not understand.

	Besides, he ~~would~~ not be hanging with that maid.		Besides, he should not be hanging around with that maid.

	''Really he must be saying that to all girls. Idiot. Not ~~only~~ to the maid.''		''Really he must be saying that to all girls. Idiot. Not just to the maid.''

	''He said ‘love’ to me as well.''		''He said ‘love’ to me as well.''

	''~~Inexcusable~~. ~~Fibber~~. ~~Dislike~~. ~~Dislike~~.''		''It was inexcusable. He's a liar. I hate him. I hate him.''

	“That’s enough” Louise muttered while biting her lips.		“That’s enough” Louise muttered while biting her lips.

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	But… Saito choked the tears down.		But… Saito choked the tears down.

	What kind of girl do you think Louise is? ~~Noble~~ girl.		What kind of girl do you think Louise is? She's a noble girl.

	You have to be gentle.		You have to be gentle.
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	''I should ignore in anger… after all.''		''I should ignore in anger… after all.''

	Then, Saito, thinking so, gave a ~~cramp~~ smile.		Then, Saito, thinking so, gave a cramped smile.

	''I am honorable man,'' he tried to persuade himself while trembling.		''I am an honorable man,'' he tried to persuade himself while trembling.

	He thought already beaten with cold sweat.		He thought, already beaten with a cold sweat.

	But when he turned with concession to say “…ah, Louise come over”… surprisingly!		But when he turned with concession to say “…ah, Louise come over”… surprisingly!
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	Louise looked the other way.		Louise looked the other way.

	“Come over here, ~~right~~.”		“Come over here, okay.”

	With her arms crossed and puffing her cheeks, she turned away.		With her arms crossed and puffing her cheeks, she turned away.
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	But this time, it wasn’t Louise’s usual angry attitude.		But this time, it wasn’t Louise’s usual angry attitude.

	But… this time ~~Loise’s~~ face looked uncomfortable.		But… this time Louise’s face looked uncomfortable.

	''Is this all that Louise thinks of me? Uncomfortable.''		''Is this all that Louise thinks of me? Uncomfortable.''

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	However, Louise quietly listened to that story. It seemed that it had caught her interest.		However, Louise quietly listened to that story. It seemed that it had caught her interest.

	Then, when it ~~comes~~ to an end...		Then, when it came to an end...

	A single boy started speaking hesitantly.		A single boy started speaking hesitantly.
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	Saito continued the talk, but was stopped by an officer with a wand who entered the tent.		Saito continued the talk, but was stopped by an officer with a wand who entered the tent.

	“Hey, hey! Do not sit around and talk in here! ~~Nuisance~~! ~~Nuisance~~!”		“Hey, hey! Do not sit around and talk in here! It's a nuisance! A nuisance!”

	Saito and others looked at each other.		Saito and others looked at each other.
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	Saito began to burn with jealousy.		Saito began to burn with jealousy.

	''She is making such face just because her hand was kissed! What a woman. Unfaithful! Unfaithful!'' Though not being a lover himself, Saito cursed.		''She is making such face just because her hand was kissed! What a woman. Unfaithful! Unfaithful!'' Though not being her lover himself, Saito cursed.

	''This is certainly "wrong". Just because she was complimented by that beautiful face!		''This is certainly "wrong". Just because she was complimented by that beautiful face!
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	''The war has started now and we were in haste, and I was depressed in a room, thinking that everyone died…''		''The war has started now and we were in haste, and I was depressed in a room, thinking that everyone died…''

	When ~~you think~~ about it very well…		When he thought about it very well…

	''Maybe this is rejection?''		''Maybe this is rejection?''
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	''Presiding Judge's word.''		''Presiding Judge's word.''

	''Following society regalement this man here said ‘I like you♪ Lets start ~~from friend love♪”~~ but the answer was…''		''Following society regalement this man here said ‘I like you♪ Lets start by being friends♪” but the answer was…''

	''T! H! I! S!''		''T! H! I! S!''

	''"~~Loyality~~ reward"''		''"Loyalty reward"''

	''"You may touch only one place you like the most."''		''"You may touch only one place you like the most."''
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	After leaving dragon knights’ headquarters tent, the story and the beautiful boy made Louise’s mind confused.		After leaving the dragon knights’ headquarters tent, the story and the beautiful boy made Louise’s mind confused.

	Somehow she felt uneasy.		Somehow she felt uneasy.
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	Was she startled because it was a beautiful boy?		Was she startled because it was a beautiful boy?

	Somewhat. Louise was a girl going through puberty and she did not hate beautiful boys. But to put it simply she did not think of him as a lover. Only one boy occupied her thoughts at the moment, even though she wasn’t fully aware of it, other boys even with a "nice face," failed to move ~~in there~~.		Somewhat. Louise was a girl going through puberty and she did not hate beautiful boys. But to put it simply she did not think of him as a lover. Only one boy occupied her thoughts at the moment, even though she wasn’t fully aware of it, other boys, even those with a "nice face," failed to move her thoughts.

	The tenant though, was constantly making the landlord angry.		The tenant though was constantly making the landlord angry.

	This uneasiness was part of the natural appeal.		This uneasiness was part of the natural appeal.
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	Saito didn't even turn around. ''The distance can’t be too big. He should have… heard me.''		Saito didn't even turn around. ''The distance can’t be too big. He should have… heard me.''

	Louise started to boil with anger towards Saito. Such behavior by ~~the~~ partner (sealed with Louise) made the pink-blonde girl's temper explode.		Louise started to boil with anger towards Saito. Such behavior by her partner (sealed with Louise) made the pink-blonde girl's temper explode.

	One ~~can’t~~ blame Louise’s short temper. When you are in love with someone, even the smallest things can be damaging and easily make one happy or angry.		One couldn’t blame Louise’s short temper. When you are in love with someone, even the smallest things can be damaging and easily make one happy or angry.

	Though Louise wasn’t aware of her love, it was 100% pointing at Saito. Thus even his slightest action could easily make her angry.		Though Louise wasn’t aware of her love, it was 100% pointing at Saito. Thus even his slightest action could easily make her angry.

Coffeezombie: I don't think Buddhism exists in Halkeginia

2015-07-20T14:10:54Z

I don't think Buddhism exists in Halkeginia

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	“Are priests allowed to touch women like that? Is it common between Romalian people…”		“Are priests allowed to touch women like that? Is it common between Romalian people…”

	Instead of Saito, it was Matthew who said it with a scowl. ~~Seems like~~ Julio wasn’t very popular among the members of the 2nd Dragon Knight Squadron.		Instead of Saito, it was Matthew who said it with a scowl. It seemed that Julio wasn’t very popular among the members of the 2nd Dragon Knight Squadron.

	“Since I was going into the war, I received a temporary secular life permission from the pope.”		“Since I was going into the war, I received a temporary secular life permission from the pope.”
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	“Have you passed the ground where elves live?!” He was surprised. Apparently, in this world, elves are frightening and seemed to be a belligerent race. Moreover, they were on bad terms with humans.		“Have you passed the ground where elves live?!” He was surprised. Apparently, in this world, elves are frightening and seemed to be a belligerent race. Moreover, they were on bad terms with humans.

	“Romalia is a ‘religious authority’ country, that manages ~~buddhist~~ temples in Halkeginia. It is a country where there are a lot of priests, who are domineering, even more than nobles.”		“Romalia is a ‘religious authority’ country, that manages temples in Halkeginia. It is a country where there are a lot of priests, who are domineering, even more than nobles.”

	“Romalia’s priests, because of their status as servants of God, can travel abroad freely.”		“Romalia’s priests, because of their status as servants of God, can travel abroad freely.”

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	“How did it look like?”		“How did it look like?”

	“Very beautiful… girl. With beautiful blond hair… her body shone. No doubt, it was a fairy! An ancient fairy!”		“Very beautiful… a girl. With beautiful blond hair… her body shone. No doubt, it was a fairy! An ancient fairy!”

	Everyone scorned Fernand's words.		Everyone scorned Fernand's words.
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	“Please remember my name first – Julio Cesar.”		“Please remember my name first – Julio Cesar.”

	The name ~~seems~~ manly. A handsome dragon knight, who introduced himself as Julio, after gracefully bowing to Ginnumer, reported.		The name seemed manly. A handsome dragon knight, who introduced himself as Julio, after gracefully bowing to Ginnumer, reported.

	“The 3rd Dragon Knight Squadron, returned from the patrol flight.”		“The 3rd Dragon Knight Squadron, returned from the patrol flight.”
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	Julio looked around the tent. This reminded Saito of the similar antipathy he felt towards Wardes when they first met. ''Huuh?'' he really did not like this fellow.		Julio looked around the tent. This reminded Saito of the similar antipathy he felt towards Wardes when they first met. ''Huuh?'' he really did not like this fellow.

	Well anyway, it is not surprising. Though Guiche was lady-killer, he was different. Was he a woman? He looked like one, with those thin and slender, appealing lips. Long eyelashes that created a beautiful shadow. While listlessly rolling hair around his thin finger covered with white gloves, he looked around the tent.		Well anyway, it was not surprising. Though Guiche was lady-killer, he was different. Was he a woman? He looked like one, with those thin and slender, appealing lips. Long eyelashes that created a beautiful shadow. While listlessly rolling hair around his thin finger covered with white gloves, he looked around the tent.

	Seeing Saito, in surprise he stopped playing with his hair.		Seeing Saito, in surprise he stopped playing with his hair.