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	Louise concentrated her spirit and began imprinting the spectacle in her mind.		Louise concentrated her spirit and began imprinting the spectacle in her mind.

	When one used the Void element for big, one-time spells, collecting willpower took time. And since it was already used ~~today… the big Illusion spell covering~~ a ~~wide landscape~~ could not ~~be created now~~.		When one used the Void element for big, one-time spells, collecting willpower took time. And since it was already used a few days ago… she could not turn such a huge landscape into an illusion.

	“Circle over the town once more.”		“Circle over the town once more.”

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	===Chapter Three: The Priest of Romalia===		===Chapter Three: The Priest of Romalia===
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	A voice coming from the front, brought Louise back.		A voice coming from the front, brought Louise back.

	“W-well…” she hesitated ~~weather~~ to say it or not.		“W-well…” she hesitated whether to say it or not.

	“Where should we scout?” Julio repeated.		“Where should we scout?” Julio repeated.
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	Louise with her left hand tightly holding the Founder’s Prayer Book. In order not to lose it, she made a bag for it, reaching down her waist with a leather string over her.		Louise with her left hand tightly holding the Founder’s Prayer Book. In order not to lose it, she made a bag for it, reaching down her waist with a leather string over her.

	“That’s a test from the upper department. To see… how good our researched magical weapons are. Surely all tests will be passed.”		“That’s a test from the upper department. To see… how good our researched magical weapons are. Surely all of the tests will be passed.”

	“To check the good and bad sides.”		“To check the good and bad sides.”
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	“W-what?“		“W-what?“

	“Ah, sorry! City of Saxe-Gotha!”		“Ah, sorry! The City of Saxe-Gotha!”

	“An ancient town. I heard it is beautiful. We cannot let it be destroyed by war.”		“An ancient town. I heard it is beautiful. We cannot let it be destroyed by war.”
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	“B-but why is Romalia helping? They're not our allies…”		“B-but why is Romalia helping? They're not our allies…”

	“On our own will! Small help! Today’s Albion may ~~effect~~ all countries in Halkeginia. If the monarchy were to be overthrown, what would happen with the nobility in the republic? If that happens it would be a serious threat! A republic nightmare for all countries. Romalia is no exception, governed by the Pope."		“On our own will! Small help! Today’s Albion may affect all countries in Halkeginia. If the monarchy were to be overthrown, what would happen with the nobility in the republic? If that happens it would be a serious threat! A republic nightmare for all countries. Romalia is no exception, governed by the Pope."

	“I do not understand politics well.”		“I do not understand politics well.”
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	“Fly lower.”		“Fly lower.”

	Julio nodded and started to fly lower. They could see ~~towns people~~ waving. They probably mistook them for allies. Then Julio smiled and muttered something to the wind dragon. Azuro spread his wings and started to shake in a strange way.		Julio nodded and started to fly lower. They could see townspeople waving. They probably mistook them for allies. Then Julio smiled and muttered something to the wind dragon. Azuro spread his wings and started to shake in a strange way.

	“What are you doing?“		“What are you doing?“
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	Not just her imagination. There were just orcs, trolls and demi-humans armed with spears and clubs. Though they could see a mage commanding them… there were no soldiers in sight.		Not just her imagination. There were just orcs, trolls and demi-humans armed with spears and clubs. Though they could see a mage commanding them… there were no soldiers in sight.

	“Using demi-humans as an army replacement is a cheap stuff. However… those brutal orc demons are following the humans as well…”		“Using demi-humans as an army replacement is cheap stuff. However… those brutal orc demons are following the humans as well…”

	“There must be some kind of trick. However I do not know how that mage can make them obey.”		“There must be some kind of trick. However I do not know how that mage can make them obey.”
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	Louise concentrated her spirit and began imprinting the spectacle in her mind.		Louise concentrated her spirit and began imprinting the spectacle in her mind.

	When ~~you use~~ the Void element for big, one-time spells, collecting willpower ~~takes some~~ time. And since it was already used today… the big Illusion spell covering wide landscape could not be created now.		When one used the Void element for big, one-time spells, collecting willpower took time. And since it was already used today… the big Illusion spell covering a wide landscape could not be created now.

	“Circle over the town once more.”		“Circle over the town once more.”
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	“Eh? Eeh? What are you talking about?!”		“Eh? Eeh? What are you talking about?!”

	“Without weapons it is dangerous and you were worried. Not for yourself… but for that familiar. Danger cannot be helped. ~~Because~~ of duty. However, I cannot be brave in rash danger. Do you differ? Why oh why, are you leaving this calm part out in anger. I wonder if it's because you're a girl?”		“Without weapons it is dangerous and you were worried. Not for yourself… but for that familiar. Danger cannot be helped. It is because of duty. However, I cannot be brave in rash danger. Do you differ? Why oh why, are you leaving this calm part out in anger. I wonder if it's because you're a girl?”

	“I don’t understand what you mean.”		“I don’t understand what you mean.”
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	Louise said with a furious blush on her cheeks.		Louise said with a furious blush on her cheeks.

	“That flying machine is out of bullets, right? There are no other secret weapons. Other than fast flights it's useless.”		“That flying machine is out of bullets, right? There are no other secret weapons. Other than for fast flights, it's useless.”

	“…How do you know this?”		“…How do you know this?”
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	Staring at the closing wind dragons, Louise trembled. Gathering information for the generals, may have been overdone. She bit her lip, thinking about the possibility of death in terror.		Staring at the closing wind dragons, Louise trembled. Gathering information for the generals, may have been overdone. She bit her lip, thinking about the possibility of death in terror.

	She shook her head, trying to shake off such fears… Somehow… she needed to counterattack with Void. But how many explosions could be shot? ~~Willpower… is~~ low. The scale is small. Would they hit well enough?		She shook her head, trying to shake off such fears… Somehow… she needed to counterattack with Void. But how many explosions could be shot? Her willpower… was low. The scale is small. Would they hit well enough?

	While she was thinking that, the instructions came from Julio.		While she was thinking that, the instructions came from Julio.
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	“Y-yeah…I am.”		“Y-yeah…I am.”

	“Hold on tight then! As if you were jumping over fences with a ~~stud~~! Azuro!“		“Hold on tight then! As if you were jumping over fences and bushes with a gallop! Azuro!“

	The wind dragon let out a small bark and sped up aiming towards the enemy.		The wind dragon let out a small bark and sped up aiming towards the enemy.

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	“Not to our corps.”		“Not to our corps.”

	Rene said. Indeed, there was the tent of the dragon knight battalion headquarters, which they visited yesterday. For some reason she passed all the other tents and walked alone, looking around as if searching for someone.		Rene said. Indeed, there was the tent of the dragon knight battalion headquarters, which they had visited yesterday. For some reason she passed all the other tents and walked alone, looking around as if searching for someone.

	~~Around~~ there were 20 wind dragons tied to a stake, roaring and barking. It was dangerous going there so far away from other units.		Nearby there were 20 wind dragons tied to a stake, roaring and barking. It was dangerous going there so far away from the other units.

	There was only one person taking care of them.		There was only one person taking care of them.

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	The boy knights’ eyes were sparkling brilliantly while talking to Saito. Apparently, they thought that Louise and Saito were researchers from a magic laboratory. Indeed, the only ones that knew about Louise's Void were a few generals.		The boy knights’ eyes were sparkling brilliantly while talking to Saito. Apparently, they thought that Louise and Saito were researchers from a magic laboratory. Indeed, the only ones that knew about Louise's Void were a few generals.

	Though it was easy to convince the masses outside the court that it all was a war miracle, the same excuse didn’t really work with nobles. So the most plausible explanation would be "Academy’s new magical weapons".		Though it was easy to convince the masses outside the court that it all was a war miracle, the same excuse didn’t really work with nobles. So the most plausible explanation would be " the Academy’s new magical weapons".

	Louise, listening to Saito’s conversation attentively, halted.		Louise, listening to Saito’s conversation attentively, halted.
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	“Though I do not really understand, it sounds like a really powerful organization!”		“Though I do not really understand, it sounds like a really powerful organization!”

	“Really? ~~Secret Organization~~? Then you can’t tell anyone? Then you research magical weapons, but what does it differ from the academy’s research? There must be a death punishment for revealing it.”		“Really? A secret organization? Then you can’t tell anyone? Then you research magical weapons, but what does it differ from the academy’s research? There must be a death punishment for revealing it.”

	“R-really?”		“R-really?”
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	With a snort, Louise turned her face away and started walking.		With a snort, Louise turned her face away and started walking.

	“What’s the matter with you and your mistress; you are moody lately.”		“What’s the matter with you and your mistress; you two are moody lately.”

	Rene muttered.		Rene muttered.

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	“Though I do not really understand, it sounds like a really powerful organization!”		“Though I do not really understand, it sounds like a really powerful organization!”

	“Really? A secret organization? Then you can’t tell anyone? Then you research magical weapons, but ~~what~~ does it differ from the academy’s research? There must be a death punishment for revealing it.”		“Really? A secret organization? Then you can’t tell anyone? Then you research magical weapons, but how does it differ from the academy’s research? There must be a death punishment for revealing it.”

	“R-really?”		“R-really?”
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	“A VIP researcher of the academy like you doing a scout's duty! Unimaginable! Don’t familiars usually work as scouts?”		“A VIP researcher of the academy like you doing a scout's duty! Unimaginable! Don’t familiars usually work as scouts?”

	Louise ~~with her left hand~~ tightly holding the Founder’s Prayer Book. In order not to lose it, she made a bag for it, reaching down her waist with a leather string over her.		Louise was tightly holding the Founder’s Prayer Book with her left hand. In order not to lose it, she made a bag for it, reaching down her waist with a leather string over her.

	“That’s a test from the upper department. To see… how good our researched magical weapons are. Surely all of the tests will be passed.”		“That’s a test from the upper department. To see… how good our researched magical weapons are. Surely all of the tests will be passed.”
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	Pulling away slightly, a confused Louise asked,		Pulling away slightly, a confused Louise asked,

	“B-but why is Romalia helping? They're not our allies…”		“B-but why is Romalia helping? They're not our allies…”

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	“Don’t say silly things, look more carefully. You are badly mistaken.”		“Don’t say silly things, look more carefully. You are badly mistaken.”

	“Excuses. According to Azuro, we are going the right way. We are flying to the city of Saxe-Gotha right?”		“Excuses. According to Azuro, we are going the right way. We are flying to the city of Saxe-Gotha, right?”

	Louise became suspicious. This priest was not a mage. In other words, his abilities were those of a commoner. And even for a mage, it would take some time to establish a connection between him and his familiar…		Louise became suspicious. This priest was not a mage. In other words, his abilities were those of a commoner. And even for a mage, it would take some time to establish a connection between him and his familiar…
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	Staring at the closing wind dragons, Louise trembled. Gathering information for the generals, may have been overdone. She bit her lip, thinking about the possibility of death in terror.		Staring at the closing wind dragons, Louise trembled. Gathering information for the generals, may have been overdone. She bit her lip, thinking about the possibility of death in terror.

	She shook her head, trying to shake off such fears… Somehow… she needed to counterattack with Void. But how many explosions could be shot? Her willpower… was low. The scale is small. Would they hit well enough?		She shook her head, trying to shake off such fears… Somehow… she needed to counterattack with Void. But how many explosions could be shot? Her willpower… was low. The scale would be small. Would they hit well enough?

	While she was thinking that, the instructions came from Julio.		While she was thinking that, the instructions came from Julio.

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	When the magic was about to hit… the wind dragon suddenly pulled an unexpected movement. It twisted it’s body and suddenly shot up in the air, avoiding spells one after another.		When the magic was about to hit… the wind dragon suddenly pulled an unexpected movement. It twisted it’s body and suddenly shot up in the air, avoiding spells one after another.

	Unbelievable. A wind dragon was moving at a speed that was unimaginable for such body. It was moving like a small bird, surprising even their enemies. For a moment, their speed decreased.		Unbelievable. A wind dragon was moving at a speed that was unimaginable for such a body. It was moving like a small bird, surprising even their enemies. For a moment, their speed decreased.

	“Breath! Azuro!”		“Breath! Azuro!”
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	The remaining enemy dragon knights, whose number had decreased to seven, turned around and headed back at them.		The remaining enemy dragon knights, whose number had decreased to seven, turned around and headed back at them.

	As one would expect from Albion’s dragon knights.		It was as one would expect from Albion’s dragon knights.

	Though for a moment they were surprised by Julio’s wind dragon's movements, they regained their composure now. Dividing into two lines, they flinchingly moved forwards.		Though for a moment they were surprised by Julio’s wind dragon's movements, they regained their composure now. Dividing into two lines, they flinchingly moved forwards.
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	They started forming and closing a circle around them.		They started forming and closing a circle around them.

	~~Seems~~ like they closed their retreating paths carefully, planning to kill them.		It seemed like they had closed their retreating paths carefully, planning to kill them.

	In a movement that could be called casual, Julio's Azuro entered the circle. The enemy in front, tried to run, keeping a considerable distance.		In a movement that could be called casual, Julio's Azuro entered the circle. The enemy in front tried to run, keeping a considerable distance.

	But once Azuro turned a head towards that enemy, another one flew from the back. ~~Seems~~ like the one in front was just a decoy.		But once Azuro turned a head towards that enemy, another one flew from the back. It appeared like the one in front was just a decoy.

	“Behind you! Behind you!”		“Behind you! Behind you!”
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	Julio’s tone of voice remained perfectly composed.		Julio’s tone of voice remained perfectly composed.

	With three of them gone, the atmosphere around the enemy changed. Louise ducked her head, feeling the bursting anger. The encirclement loosened for a moment, and then, all dragon knights at once, plunged at them.		With three of them gone, the atmosphere around the enemy changed. Louise ducked her head, feeling the bursting anger. The encirclement loosened for a moment, and then, all of the dragon knights, at once, plunged at them.

	For a moment, Louise rocked up and down, side to side. Her body felt like a ball in the hands of juggler. Forgetting to keep her eyes open she closed them... Louise was clinging to Julio.		For a moment, Louise rocked up and down, side to side. Her body felt like a ball in the hands of juggler. Forgetting to keep her eyes open she closed them... Louise was clinging to Julio.
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	In only four seconds, six of them were beaten and fell down.		In only four seconds, six of them were beaten and fell down.

	~~“The end~~. Let's return then.”		“It has ended. Let's return then.”

	Julio said in a nonchalant voice.		Julio said in a nonchalant voice.

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	At last, they both calmed down.		At last, they both calmed down.

	“For now we have to admit that the first plan, beating Albion's main forces and then advancing to Londinium, getting Cromwell’s head, and raising ~~white lily’s~~ flag in Whitehall, failed. but completing the war according to plan is still possible.”		“For now we have to admit that the first plan, beating Albion's main forces and then advancing to Londinium, getting Cromwell’s head, and raising the White Lily flag in Whitehall, failed. but completing the war according to plan is still possible.”

	After overthrowing the Albion's revolution government, they would rule in the name of Henrietta. Of course, part of the territory would be ceded to Germania. Afterwards, the remaining survivors of Albion's royal family ~~will~~ be searched for and placed on the throne of the territory under Tristain’s rule, thus reviving the monarchy. To avoid possible revolutions they decided to look for Albion’s surviving royal family members, once a suitable noble with royal blood was found, the throne would be passed to him.		After overthrowing the Albion's revolution government, they would rule in the name of Henrietta. Of course, part of the territory would be ceded to Germania. Afterwards, the remaining survivors of Albion's royal family would be searched for and placed on the throne of the territory under Tristain’s rule, thus reviving the monarchy. To avoid possible revolutions they decided to look for Albion’s surviving royal family members, once a suitable noble with royal blood was found, the throne would be passed to him.

	De Poitiers shook his head, trying to brush off these thoughts.		De Poitiers shook his head, trying to brush off these thoughts.

	It was not the time to think about it. Right now they needed to think how to annihilate the enemy.		It was not the time to think about it. Right now they needed to think about how to annihilate the enemy.

	De Poitiers bit his lip. ''My promotion depends on this.''		De Poitiers bit his lip. ''My promotion depends on this.''
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	If he could win this war, he would be promoted to Field Marshal.		If he could win this war, he would be promoted to Field Marshal.

	Everything could have been easily settled by one decisive battle… De Poitiers felt a grudge against the Albion army. ''Why would Cromwell barricade himself in ~~Londonium~~?''		Everything could have been easily settled by one decisive battle… De Poitiers felt a grudge against the Albion army. ''Why would Cromwell barricade himself in Londinium?''

	''What about the enemy occupying the country?''		''What about the enemy occupying the country?''
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	The Marquis and Chief of Staff nodded and frowned. De Poitiers showed the map that had been laid out on the table and pointed at the place between Rosais and Londonium.		The Marquis and Chief of Staff nodded and frowned. De Poitiers showed the map that had been laid out on the table and pointed at the place between Rosais and Londonium.

	“The City of Saxe-Gotha. An ancient town, favorite tourist spot. We will take it over and turn it into the foothold for the capture of Londinium. We will leave ~~5000~~ soldiers here in Rosais to secure the supply lines and path for retreat. The remaining troops will participate in the capture with the support from our air forces. If the enemy's main army comes out, we will finish it with a decisive battle, of course.”		“The City of Saxe-Gotha. It is an ancient town an favorite tourist spot. We will take it over and turn it into the foothold for the capture of Londinium. We will leave 5,000 soldiers here in Rosais to secure the supply lines and path for retreat. The remaining troops will participate in the capture with the support from our air forces. If the enemy's main army comes out, we will finish it with a decisive battle, of course.”

	The Marquis and Chief of Staff nodded. The proposal was a compromise, and though it was a noncommittal strategy, it wasn’t bad.		The Marquis and Chief of Staff nodded. The proposal was a compromise, and though it was a noncommittal strategy, it wasn’t bad.

	Saxe-Gotha was a big town. The crossing of all roads. If it ~~was~~ taken, it would possibly be effective against other castles and towns. Even if the war was not settled before the Advent Festival, it would be easy to hold out longer as it was a big city.		Saxe-Gotha was a big town. The crossing of all roads. If it were taken, it would possibly be effective against other castles and towns. Even if the war was not settled before the Advent Festival, it would be easy to hold out longer as it was a big city.

	As they debated the strategy, someone knocked at the door.		As they debated the strategy, someone knocked at the door.
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	“Who?” asked a guard.		“Who?” asked a guard.

	~~“Me~~. Her Majesty's Court Lady, La Vallière.”		“It is me. It is Her Majesty's Court Lady, La Vallière.”

	De Poitiers signaled the guards to let her in, even though he wasn’t particularly eager to let the girl take part in army business. ~~But~~ he couldn’t treat her unkindly as she was Her Majesty’s Court Lady and the user of the legendary Void~~. She~~ still might be bothersome.		De Poitiers signaled the guards to let her in, even though he wasn’t particularly eager to let the girl take part in army business. Although he couldn’t treat her unkindly as she was Her Majesty’s Court Lady and the user of the legendary Void, she still might be bothersome.

	De Poiters saw Louise as nothing more than a "tool".		De Poiters saw Louise as nothing more than a "tool".
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	“Aah, Miss Void. We have prepared a gorgeous tent for you. Leave all the trouble to servicemen and take a rest. I will call you if you are needed.”		“Aah, Miss Void. We have prepared a gorgeous tent for you. Leave all the trouble to servicemen and take a rest. I will call you if you are needed.”

	Louise was nervous about the great surroundings. However, she couldn‘t do what she decided to if she acted cowardly. So, she gathered her courage and spoke up,”		Louise was nervous about the great surroundings. However, she couldn‘t do what she decided to if she acted cowardly. So, she gathered her courage and spoke up,

	“W-well…”		“W-well…”
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	Indifferent applause echoed in the conference room.		Indifferent applause echoed in the conference room.

	“I will request the royal family for reward.”		“I will request the royal family for a reward.”

	“N-no that…”		“N-no that…”
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	De Poiters tone became diluted with dour.		De Poiters tone became diluted with dour.

	''Is a single reward not enough? What a greedy ~~chit~~!''		''Is a single reward not enough? What a greedy girl!''

	Human beings are greedy, it is one of the basic habits of human beings. De Poitiers felt offended that after praising her, Louise wanted more.		Human beings are greedy, it is one of the basic habits of human beings. De Poitiers felt offended that after praising her, Louise wanted more.
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	“It's not that. Umm, I did not come here to get a reward. It’s about the dragon knights who returned alive…”		“It's not that. Umm, I did not come here to get a reward. It’s about the dragon knights who returned alive…”

	~~Generals~~ for a moment could not understand what she was talking about… But then they remembered the dragon knight unit that returned alive and nodded.		The generals for a moment could not understand what she was talking about… But then they remembered the dragon knight unit that had returned alive and nodded.

	“Aah, what about it?”		“Aah, what about it?”
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	“Indeed.”		“Indeed.”

	~~Annoyed~~ generals listened to her. How was it effecting the army? They were about to say it.		The annoyed generals listened to her. How was it effecting the army? They were about to say it.

	“It’s a place near Saxe-Gotha. I think it should be investigated.”		“It’s a place near Saxe-Gotha. I think it should be investigated.”
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	“No way! What if behind it lies an important secret?! Something that might change the course of the war!”		“No way! What if behind it lies an important secret?! Something that might change the course of the war!”

	“Miss, though it certainly is a mysterious event, it is not likely to change such a grand situation. We do not have time to care about such trivial matters.”		“Miss, though it certainly is a mysterious event, it is not likely that it would change such a grand situation. We do not have time to care about such trivial matters.”

	“But…”		“But…”

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	In other words, they had prepared for a quick, decisive battle.		In other words, they had prepared for a quick, decisive battle.

	This strategic failure could not be helped now. A large amount of food is necessary to maintain a large army of 60,000 people. To recite strong spells, specific medicine (especially Water element-based healing medicine) is needed, along with war materials like bullets, gunpowder and cannons. And it all had to be carried from their own country to the army in the front.		This strategic failure could not be helped now. A large amount of food would be necessary to maintain a large army of 60,000 people. To recite strong spells, specific medicine (especially Water element-based healing medicine) would be needed, along with war materials like bullets, gunpowder and cannons. And it all had to be carried from their own country to the army in the front.

	Fighting a long war in the enemy's territory would be nothing but a nightmare. Besides, Tristain’s economy made such a long war impossible.		Fighting a long war in the enemy's territory would be nothing but a nightmare. Besides, Tristain’s economy made such a long war impossible.

	Albion's main army successfully retreated from Dartanes, and barricaded itself in the capital city Londinium.		Albion's main army successfully retreated from Dartanes, and barricaded itself in the capital city of Londinium.

	The enemy army avoided fighting a decisive battle; after Albion's air force received damage beyond imagination, and lost control of the sky, the Albion army ~~might've~~ abandoned counterattack tactics.		The enemy army avoided fighting a decisive battle; after Albion's air force received damage beyond imagination, and lost control of the sky, the Albion army seemed to have abandoned counterattack tactics.

	The allied forces were prepared for Albion’s attack.		The allied forces were prepared for Albion’s attack.
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	But because expectations went down the drain and physical damage did not occur, constructing positions and preparing for a decisive battle became pointless. The allied forces wasted food for a week and a half.		But because expectations went down the drain and physical damage did not occur, constructing positions and preparing for a decisive battle became pointless. The allied forces wasted food for a week and a half.

	The allied forces could not plan anything but a quick decisive battle, so they only brought a food supply for six weeks. But now it became necessary to carry food and gunpowder from their own country by ship. For the two countries that organized the expedition army with very limited finances, the situation was worrisome.		The allied forces could not plan anything but a quick decisive battle, so they only brought enough food supply for six weeks. But now it became necessary to carry food and gunpowder from their own country by ship. For the two countries that organized the expedition army with very limited finances, the situation was worrisome.

	By the eighth day after the landing, a tense atmosphere surrounded the future invasion plans.		By the eighth day after the landing, a tense atmosphere surrounded the future invasion plans.
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	The Supreme Commander of coalition forces, General de Poitiers, sat at the round table on the central seat. He listened to two opposing opinions.		The Supreme Commander of coalition forces, General de Poitiers, sat at the round table on the central seat. He listened to two opposing opinions.

	~~First~~ one came from Germanian General Marquis Handenburg, who insisted, while shaking his fist and white mustache, upon a quick, decisive battle.		The first one came from Germanian General Marquis Handenburg, who insisted, while shaking his fist and white mustache, upon a quick, decisive battle.

	“Let’s march! March! March! We have food only for four and a half weeks. Make a detour at a fort on the way and march straight to the castle! Anyway, let's aim for Londonium. Fortunately, we control the sky. We have to end the war before Founder Brimir's Advent Festival, for morale will drop after advent festival!		“Let’s march! March! March! We have food only for four and a half weeks. Make a detour at a fort on the way and march straight to the castle! Anyway, let's aim for Londonium. Fortunately, we control the sky. We have to end the war before Founder Brimir's Advent Festival, for morale will drop after advent festival!

	~~Seems~~ like Germania’s General insisted upon advancing like a flame.		It seemed like Germania’s General insisted upon advancing like a flame.

	“Ending before the Advent Festival is fine, but I wonder why there are no such short war stories in Halkeginia’s history?”		“Ending before the Advent Festival is fine, but I wonder why there are no such short war stories in Halkeginia’s history?”

	Wimpffen, Chief of Staff, ~~objecting~~ coldly ~~stared~~ through the ~~pane~~ of his glasses.		Wimpffen, the Chief of Staff, objected, coldly staring through the frames of his glasses.

	“Then, we'll be the first,” Marquis Handenburg said and gave a piercing glare to Wimpffen.		“Then, we'll be the first,” Marquis Handenburg said and gave a piercing glare to Wimpffen.