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	“Just a while ago, s-sorry for the children… because they believed… that you were doing strange things.”		“Just a while ago, s-sorry for the children… because they believed… that you were doing strange things.”

	Tiffania was carrying the heavy Derflinger in her arms. Unsho, yokkorasho<ref>sounds made during panting ~~to show physical exertion~~</ref> – panting, she put strained expression that didn’t suit her face and leaned it against the bed.		Tiffania was carrying the heavy Derflinger in her arms. Unsho, yokkorasho<ref>sounds made during panting</ref> – panting, she put strained expression that didn’t suit her face and leaned it against the bed.

	“Derf!”		“Derf!”

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	The girl looked hesitant for a moment. Then, after deciding something, took a deep breath and approached Saito. She wore a green, crude, short, one-piece dress, but rather than damaging her beauty it complimented her nicely. Slender lovely legs ran down her short skirt with white sandals framing her pretty feet.		The girl looked hesitant for a moment. Then, after deciding something, took a deep breath and approached Saito. She wore a green, crude, short, one-piece dress, but rather than damaging her beauty it complimented her nicely. Slender lovely legs ran down her short skirt with white sandals framing her pretty feet.

	That simple attire ~~accentuate~~ her beauty and created a friendly atmosphere.		That simple attire accentuated her beauty and created a friendly atmosphere.

	Upon nearing Saito the girl laughed forcibly. She obviously tried hard to make him comfortable. And her accompanying smile didn't radiated beauty but kindness.		Upon nearing Saito the girl laughed forcibly. She obviously tried hard to make him comfortable. And her accompanying smile didn't radiated beauty but kindness.
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	“Did I sleep for that long?” Although he was surprised that he slept for two weeks, the girl’s beauty was even more shocking.		“Did I sleep for that long?” Although he was surprised that he slept for two weeks, the girl’s beauty was even more shocking.

	It looked as if she was covered with light since her long golden hair on all sides of her like a waving golden sea ~~reflecting sunshine rays~~ falling from the window, and the light ~~dancing~~ on her face.		It looked as if she was covered with light since her long golden hair on all sides of her, like a waving golden sea, reflected sunlight falling from the window, and the light danced on her face.

	It was like a computer animation showing the face with a perfect outline and silhouette. Beautiful but it made one nervous at the same time. Such a beautiful person without any noticeable flaws.		It was like a computer animation showing the face with a perfect outline and silhouette. Beautiful but it made one nervous at the same time. Such a beautiful person without any noticeable flaws.
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	After confirming his well being, the girl's beauty felt more real and made Saito’s heart tremble.		After confirming his well being, the girl's beauty felt more real and made Saito’s heart tremble.

	~~Aaah~~, ~~the~~ touch ~~of such a~~ beautiful ~~person felt like a his desire hitting him in the gut~~.		Oh, if I were to touch someone as beautiful as her, I would certainly receive heaven's punishment.

	Saito immediately retracted. He felt like a simpleton .		Saito immediately retracted. He felt like a simpleton .
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	“Elf?”		“Elf?”

	Saito had heard the name. He delved to the bottom of his memory and recalled it. Well it was certainly mentioned in some talks. This was the name of those who ~~live~~ in the "east". According to the rumors they were vicious, and ~~live~~ on bad terms with humans in a holy land.		Saito had heard the name. He delved to the bottom of his memory and recalled it. Well it was certainly mentioned in some talks. This was the name of those who lived in the "east". According to the rumors they were vicious, and lived on bad terms with humans in a holy land.

	He did think them to be terrible, but the girl in front of him was far from that.		He did think them to be terrible, but the girl in front of him was far from that.
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	Then what.		Then what.

	Still, even if ~~it was~~ breasts, there were physical laws that breasts could not disregard.		Still, even if these were breasts, there were physical laws that breasts could not disregard.

	By accident he caught her profile with his eyes. She was crimson. From shame and tension she seemed to not to be able to talk any more. Because Saito’s grip on her arm she could not stand up. Still, bravely, the girl struggled trying to stand up.		By accident he caught her profile with his eyes. She was crimson. From shame and tension she seemed to not to be able to talk any more. Because of Saito’s grip on her arm she could not stand up. Still, bravely, the girl struggled trying to stand up.

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	“Just a while ago, s-sorry for the children… because they believed… that you were doing strange things.”		“Just a while ago, s-sorry for the children… because they believed… that you were doing strange things.”

	Tiffania was carrying the heavy Derflinger in her arms. Unsho, yokkorasho – panting, she put strained expression that didn’t suit her face and leaned it against the bed.		Tiffania was carrying the heavy Derflinger in her arms. Unsho, yokkorasho<ref>sounds made during panting to show physical exertion</ref> – panting, she put strained expression that didn’t suit her face and leaned it against the bed.

	“Derf!”		“Derf!”
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	Tiffania nodded.		Tiffania nodded.

	~~“This is rather complicated~~. I ~~cannot tell you in full-detail… but~~, the magical power ~~of the plinth was already~~ used up.”		"I see. You have some hidden reasons of your own, right? Ah, never mind, I don't plan on asking for the details anyway......However, since there is only the bezel of the ring left, does this mean that the 'magical power' within it has been used up?"

	~~“Exactly~~. ~~Since the~~ Water ~~magic stone was placed in there~~, the magic was ~~absorbed by~~ the ~~plinth itself~~. ~~Therefore,~~ there is only ~~a plinth~~ left. ~~However~~, ~~it cannot raise~~ the ~~dead~~. ~~It cannot~~ heal ~~the wounds of the dead ones~~.”		"Exactly. There was a magical gem containing 'Water Magic' embedded here before, but as the magic was exhausted, the gem just dissolved......That's why there is only the bezel of the ring left. Anyway, this marks the end of the ring's power here. So, please don't get hurt that seriously again, because I can't heal you anymore."

	Saito was touched to the bottom of his heart. Though he didn’t understand well, somehow an important keepsake from her mother was used and he was cured.		Saito was touched to the bottom of his heart. Though he didn’t understand well, somehow an important keepsake from her mother was used and he was cured.
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	“F-for now…”		“F-for now…”

	Tiffania ~~mutters~~, giving a wry smile.		Tiffania muttered, giving a wry smile.

	“You’ll see! Weapon! Grab! And the runes on my left hand start to shine! Here!”		“You’ll see! Weapon! Grab! And the runes on my left hand start to shine! Here!”

	~~“Saito~~ reached for Derflinger, who had been leaning against the bed and gripped him.		Saito reached for Derflinger, who had been leaning against the bed and gripped him.

	“Ah, partner…”		“Ah, partner…”

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WindNWater: /* Chapter Three: The Golden Elf */

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Chapter Three: The Golden Elf

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	“Tiffania it is. Though, if it is too hard to call me that, you can call me Tifa.”		“Tiffania it is. Though, if it is too hard to call me that, you can call me Tifa.”

	Tiffania said, giving a smile that was embodiment of beauty. Hard to call, indeed.		Tiffania said, giving a smile that was the embodiment of beauty. Hard to call, indeed.

	“Tifa then. Really really, that… Let me express my greatest gratitude… Though it was such an important ring, to cure me…”		“Tifa then. Really really, that… Let me express my greatest gratitude… Though it was such an important ring, to cure me…”

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	“Stop doing weird things to big sister!”		“Stop doing weird things to big sister!”

	Children suddenly rushed into ~~the~~ Saito’s room. Seems like the children were watching them from the open door.		Children suddenly rushed into Saito’s room. Seems like the children were watching them from the open door.

	“Remove your hands from Tiffania onee-chan!”		“Remove your hands from Tiffania onee-chan!”

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	Once reaching to Saito, the girl laughed forcibly. She tried hard to make him relieved and smiled. Yet it radiated not beauty, but kindness.		Once reaching to Saito, the girl laughed forcibly. She tried hard to make him relieved and smiled. Yet it radiated not beauty, but kindness.

	“Thank goodness. Because you slept for two ~~weeks…I~~ was worried that you might not awaken.”		“Thank goodness. Because you slept for two weeks… I was worried that you might not awaken.”

	“Did I sleep for that long…”		“Did I sleep for that long…”
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	Confused for a moment… Saito had second thoughts.		Confused for a moment… Saito had second thoughts.

	''Hey Saito, it's not time to appreciate the pretty girl.		''Hey Saito, it's not time to appreciate the pretty girl.''

	Isn't there anything else for you to worry about?		''Isn't there anything else for you to worry about?''

	How did I survive?		''How did I survive?''

	What happened to the war?		''What happened to the war?''

	Louise?		''Louise?''

	Siesta?		''Siesta?''

	Everyone?''		''Everyone?''

	However, there was something else to do before that. He’d ask later.		However, there was something else to do before that. He’d ask later.
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	Wasn’t it a little strange?		Wasn’t it a little strange?

	She helped me?		''She helped me?''

	Hey hey, wasn’t I battling against an army of 70,000?		Hey hey, wasn’t I battling against an army of 70,000?
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	“Because you were lying in the forest, we brought you here.”		“Because you were lying in the forest, we brought you here.”

	Lying in the forest?		''Lying in the forest?''

	Didn’t I fall, surrounded by a large army?		''Didn’t I fall, surrounded by a large army?''

	What forest?		''What forest?''

	Saito narrowed his eyes and watched the girl suspiciously.		Saito narrowed his eyes and watched the girl suspiciously.
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	Detective doubts about the girl where blown from his head in an instant, and now other doubt swelled up in his mind.		Detective doubts about the girl where blown from his head in an instant, and now other doubt swelled up in his mind.

	Hey, Saito asked.		"Hey", Saito asked.

	What object crashed against my thigh just now?		''What object crashed against my thigh just now?''

	…Breasts?		''…Breasts?''

	It should be breasts.		''It should be breasts.''

	However… it cannot be breasts. Surely, there cannot be such breast size. So, it isn’t.		''However… it cannot be breasts. Surely, there cannot be such breast size. So, it isn’t.''

	Yet what would be normal breasts like? Saito imagined cooking. Big, soft bread. Stuffed animal. And yes - rounded square cushion.		''Yet what would be normal breasts like?'' Saito imagined cooking. Big, soft bread. Stuffed animal. And yes - rounded square cushion.

	Then what.		Then what.
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	Something hard stuck in Saito’s throat.		Something hard stuck in Saito’s throat.

	T-this especially. I, aah, I…		''T-this especially. I, aah, I…''

	These soft, heavy objects on his thigh changed shape while moving.		These soft, heavy objects on his thigh changed shape while moving.
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	Or in other words…		Or in other words…

	The ~~bust revolution~~.		The Bust Revolution.

	Indeed… this was a revolutionary breast size.		Indeed… this was a revolutionary breast size.
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	“Eh! No! This! Different! Children, it’s different!”		“Eh! No! This! Different! Children, it’s different!”

	Though Saito tried to make excuses… the ~~childrens~~' power was too strong, even though these kids a little while ago were frightened by the weird stranger.		Though Saito tried to make excuses… the children's power was too strong, even though these kids a little while ago were frightened by the weird stranger.

	With potential of huge breasts that cannot be expressed in a single phrase, this delicate elf girl, seemed to be the children's treasure.		With potential of huge breasts that cannot be expressed in a single phrase, this delicate elf girl, seemed to be the children's treasure.
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	How he fell immediately before attacking the general.		How he fell immediately before attacking the general.

	And how Derflinger using "absorbed amount of magic to move ~~Gandalfr~~" ability ran away to the forest.		And how Derflinger using "absorbed amount of magic to move Gandálfr" ability ran away to the forest.

	“But, I was at a loss. And sad because you died. Your heart stopped too. I was fed up with making friends and then losing them, what kind of legendary Derf I am.”		“But, I was at a loss. And sad because you died. Your heart stopped too. I was fed up with making friends and then losing them, what kind of legendary Derf I am.”
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	And so…		And so…

	The sign of ~~Gandalfr~~ disappeared without a trace.		The sign of Gandálfr disappeared without a trace.

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Akirasav: Ancient Magic

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Ancient Magic

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	“What?” Saito was bewildered. Derflinger explained.		“What?” Saito was bewildered. Derflinger explained.

	~~“Primordial magic~~. Elf treasure, isn’t it? The girl is half-elf.”		“Ancient Magic. Elf treasure, isn’t it? The girl is half-elf.”

	Tiffania was surprised.		Tiffania was surprised.
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	“How do I know it? Anyhow, I lived very long, even though my memory is bad.”		“How do I know it? Anyhow, I lived very long, even though my memory is bad.”

	“So… I'll tell you. As Sword-san said the ~~‘primordial magic‘~~ with water power was placed into this ring. However, I do not know the name of it... it was given as keepsake from my dying mother.“		“So… I'll tell you. As Sword-san said the 'Ancient Magic' with water power was placed into this ring. However, I do not know the name of it... it was given as keepsake from my dying mother.“

	“Your mother was an elf?”		“Your mother was an elf?”