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Ephyon at 00:31, 21 July 2009

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	Montmorency watched Guiche with an admiring face.		Montmorency watched Guiche with an admiring face.

	“I will put a ~~Transmutation~~ spell on it now, and change the soil into bronze. And… this way, I will praise the hero forever.”		“I will put a Alchemy spell on it now, and change the soil into bronze. And… this way, I will praise the hero forever.”

	“I will show it to Louise later, Surely it will comfort her a little.”		“I will show it to Louise later, Surely it will comfort her a little.”

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71.34.139.151 at 05:16, 7 February 2009

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JackBassV: /* Chapter Seven: Louise's Decision */

2008-11-17T18:40:04Z

Chapter Seven: Louise's Decision

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	I was weak.		I was weak.

	Siesta, who cannot use any magic, was ~~a few times~~ stronger than me.		Siesta, who cannot use any magic, was much stronger than me.

	Even if you can use the legendary element… it is only a wasted treasure when one’s mind is weak.		Even if you can use the legendary element… it is only a wasted treasure when one’s mind is weak.
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	“Auch!”		“Auch!”

	However… the water permeates through the wounds.		However… the water permeates through the wounds.<!--not sure, but wouldn't ''the cold penetrated the wounds.'' sound more natural? Permeate means to spread through, so the word ''through'' isn't required anyway.-->

	His body was filled with bruises and abrasions. Agnes didn’t have mercy on his body.		His body was filled with bruises and abrasions. Agnes didn’t have mercy on his body.

	“That person is a real S… dog ~~remarks and~~ looking ~~down…” Saito muttered~~ shamefully.		“That person is a real Bi… dog." muttered Saito, looking down shamefully. <!--the original makes no sense in english. This seems closer what was meant, and to his feelings.-->

	However, the pain felt good.		However, the pain felt good.
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	“Uhm… recent injuries. They were from confronting Albion army, right…? You have stopped that huge army from advancing?		“Uhm… recent injuries. They were from confronting Albion army, right…? You have stopped that huge army from advancing?

	Shaking his head, Saito ~~answered~~.		Shaking his head, Saito replied. <!--He didn't answer, he asked another question.-->

	“Who told you that?”		“Who told you that?”
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	“Aye. The other day… when I heard Tiffa’s performance, I recalled the hometown and came to miss it unbearably. I thought about returning there. This thing I should do. Louise has things that Louise should do… And I have mine. For this purpose, I try to improve my sword skills. This world is a dangerous place. I have to find my own way to defend myself…”		“Aye. The other day… when I heard Tiffa’s performance, I recalled the hometown and came to miss it unbearably. I thought about returning there. This thing I should do. Louise has things that Louise should do… And I have mine. For this purpose, I try to improve my sword skills. This world is a dangerous place. I have to find my own way to defend myself…”

	In a somewhat settled voice~~, Saito said~~.		Said Saito, in a somewhat settled voice.

	“That person is named Louise?”		“That person is named Louise?”

Zultekmilennia: /* Chapter Seven: Louise's Decision */

2008-11-06T20:16:41Z

Chapter Seven: Louise's Decision

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	Even if someone knocks on the door, Louise does not answer. In order not to hear if someone calls her, she stuffed her ears with cotton. All locks were locked, preventing anyone from entering the room. She hugged her pillow as if it was Saito… closing her eyes and pressing her cheeks against it.		Even if someone knocks on the door, Louise does not answer. In order not to hear if someone calls her, she stuffed her ears with cotton. All locks were locked, preventing anyone from entering the room. She hugged her pillow as if it was Saito… closing her eyes and pressing her cheeks against it.

	Saito in the ~~dreama~~ always… gently embraces Louise, holding her close.		Saito in the dreams always… gently embraces Louise, holding her close.

	And did it many times with love.		And did it many times with love.
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	Hand in hand, the couple walked around the lake.		Hand in hand, the couple walked around the lake.

	Louise was wearing a black dress and black beret, like on her first date with Saito. That appearance was mirrored by a beautiful surface of the water.		Louise was wearing a black dress and black beret, like on her first date with Saito. That appearance was mirrored by the beautiful surface of the water.

	“Here, the water spirit was seen, right?”		“Here, the water spirit was seen, right?”
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	“Stop it Louise. The water is cold, you’ll freeze.”		“Stop it Louise. The water is cold, you’ll freeze.”

	There is something about the things said in this water. Maybe because of water spirit. Spirit of the oath. An oath given ~~her~~ will never be broken…		There is something about the things said in this water. Maybe because of water spirit. Spirit of the oath. An oath given here will never be broken…

	In a dream, Louise wanted to tell it to Saito.		In a dream, Louise wanted to tell it to Saito.
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	Midnight.		Midnight.

	Louise chose the artillery tower, where people come ~~rarely~~. She could not remember how she got there. She just noticed when she already stood on the rooftop. The roof of the round tower was a staircase leading towards the hole in the stars and nothingness. A too low stone fence enclosed around the circumference of the roof.		Louise chose the artillery tower, where people rarely come. She could not remember how she got there. She just noticed when she already stood on the rooftop. The roof of the round tower was a staircase leading towards the hole in the stars and nothingness. A too low stone fence enclosed around the circumference of the roof.

	-tap tap tap- Louise approached the stone fence and climbed on top of it.		-tap tap tap- Louise approached the stone fence and climbed on top of it.
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	Siesta said fiercely.		Siesta said fiercely.

	“If miss Valliere dies, Saito will be sad. He… sleeping pills that I passed to him… used to let you go, didn’t he? When I said for him to use them to escape! Therefore, I won’t let you go. Saito-san didn’t want you to die! So, I won’t let you to die either! Absolutely!”		“If miss Valliere dies, Saito will be sad. He… sleeping pills that I passed to him… used to let you go, didn’t he? When I said for him to use them to escape! Therefore, I won’t let you go. Saito-san didn’t want you to die! So, I won’t let you die either! Absolutely!”

	“C-calm down…”		“C-calm down…”
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	Hearing a strong sound from behind, she turned around facing the same way as Guiche.		Hearing a strong sound from behind, she turned around facing the same way as Guiche.

	“M-my art. ~~Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah~~!”		“M-my art. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!”

	Guiche’s masterpiece turned miserable. It was crushed back into the dirt by the fallen girls.		Guiche’s masterpiece turned miserable. It was crushed back into the dirt by the fallen girls.
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	Louise nodded.		Louise nodded.

	Her beautiful eyes regained ~~the~~ shine.		Her beautiful eyes regained its shine.

	Then Louise stood up. Montmorency ran up to her.		Then Louise stood up. Montmorency ran up to her.
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	The front yard of Tiffania's house…		The front yard of Tiffania's house…

	In front of Saito, who ~~set up~~ the wooden sword, Agnes was standing. Though Saito's breath is rough, Agnes breath is calm.		In front of Saito, who wielded the wooden sword, Agnes was standing. Though Saito's breath is rough, Agnes breath is calm.

	When Saito sets up the wooden sword, Agnes swung hers and lowered it. Though he dodged it, his arm was severely hit, and the sword fell from it…		When Saito sets up the wooden sword, Agnes swung hers and lowered it. Though he dodged it, his arm was severely hit, and the sword fell from it…
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	Saito, watching Agnes's feet, turned his attention to the sword.		Saito, watching Agnes's feet, turned his attention to the sword.

	And… is this is the right moment? He thought waiting for the moment.		And… is this is the right moment? He thought, waiting for the moment.

	While seeing it many times, he could judge it safely. Keeping the timing… the moment when half of her body was averted, he launched into attack.		While seeing it many times, he could judge it safely. Keeping the timing… the moment when half of her body was averted, he launched into attack.
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	However, the pain felt good.		However, the pain felt good.

	Little by little, Saito felt he ~~strengthened~~.		Little by little, Saito felt he was stronger.

	Not by given Gandalfr, but by true, self power…		Not by given Gandalfr, but by true, self power…

	Such ~~growing~~ feelings every day, were not bad feelings.		Such feelings of growth every day, were not bad feelings.

	Saito forgot the towel, so now flustered, he tried to wipe his upper nude body. It was a season still near winter. Even though his body burns, it still gets cold.		Saito forgot the towel, so now flustered, he tried to wipe his upper nude body. It was a season still near winter. Even though his body burns, it still gets cold.
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	“Who told you that?”		“Who told you that?”

	“That sword-~~sand~~ – Derf-san.”		“That sword-san – Derf-san.”

	“He can’t stop chatting…”		“He can’t stop chatting…”