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	It seemed like the night would last forever. But, when at last morning came, she fell asleep. She woke up at noon and went to sleep again. It was a mentally exhausting cycle.		It seemed like the night would last forever. But, when at last morning came, she fell asleep. She woke up at noon and went to sleep again. It was a mentally exhausting cycle.

	Two weeks passed… after using Summon Servant and learning about Saito’s death. All during this time, Louise never even took a single step out of her room. From time to time she got off the bed to eat the dishes placed at her door. She didn’t care anymore who it was placing it there.		Two weeks passed… after using Summon Servant and learning about Saito’s death. All during this time, Louise never even took a single step out of her room. From time to time she got off the bed to eat the dishes placed at her door. She didn’t care anymore who was placing it there.

	Only in her dreams could Louise meet Saito. So Louise tried to sleep all day long. Whenever she could not fall asleep, she drank wine. For Louise, the distinction between morning and night had already lost its meaning. The curtains in her room were always closed, so it was always dim.		Only in her dreams could Louise meet Saito. So Louise tried to sleep all day long. Whenever she could not fall asleep, she drank wine. For Louise, the distinction between morning and night had already lost its meaning. The curtains in her room were always closed, so it was always dim.

	Such a way of life gradually ~~devours~~ the boundary between day and night.		Such a way of life gradually devoured the boundary between day and night.

	The boundaries between dream and reality ~~become~~ ambiguous too.		The boundaries between dream and reality became ambiguous too.

	However, ~~this~~ was the only world that Louise longed for.		However, that was the only world that Louise longed for.

	She wanted to stay forever in ~~this~~ dream world, where she could meet Saito.		She wanted to stay forever in that dream world, where she could meet Saito.

	Even if someone knocked on the door, Louise did not answer. In order not to hear if someone called for her, she stuffed her ears with cotton. All locks were locked, preventing anyone from entering the room. She hugged her pillow as if it was Saito… closing her eyes and pressing her cheeks against it.		Even if someone knocked on the door, Louise did not answer. In order not to hear if someone called for her, she stuffed her ears with cotton. All locks were locked, preventing anyone from entering the room. She hugged her pillow as if it was Saito… closing her eyes and pressing her cheeks against it.
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	“Yeah.”		“Yeah.”

	~~They did~~ not ~~talk much~~.		Louise could not express herself at all. Even though she had things she wanted to say to him, she could not say anything at all.

	~~All words seemed plain and useless~~.

	It felt that uttering them would break this little world of theirs.		It felt that uttering them would break this little world of theirs.

	A warm world ~~of illusions of cracked glass~~, ~~even if it was~~ swallowed ~~further and further~~ by ~~the~~ darkness ~~– that’s how it felt~~.		Louise felt as if, as soon as she opened her mouth, this mirror that reflected such a warm and fake world would shatter, and she would be swallowed by unending darkness.

	“Louise, hey, come here. This light reflected on the water is very beautiful.”		“Louise, hey, come here. This light reflected on the water is very beautiful.”
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	There was something special about words spoken in this lake. Perhaps it was because of the Water Spirit, the spirit of oaths; oaths forged here could never be broken.		There was something special about words spoken in this lake. Perhaps it was because of the Water Spirit, the spirit of oaths; oaths forged here could never be broken.

	In a dream, Louise wanted to tell it to Saito.		In the dream, Louise wanted to tell it to Saito.

	“…I want to swim. Why don’t we swim together?”		“…I want to swim. Why don’t we swim together?”
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	It was a dream.		It was a dream.

	True, Saito is not that gentle.		True, Saito was not that gentle.

	Still… she was happy. Because it’s impossible in reality for her and Saito to meet again…		Still… she was happy. Because it’s impossible in reality for her and Saito to meet again…
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	Saito’s figure became smaller and smaller.		Saito’s figure became smaller and smaller.

	“Wait! Please!”		“Wait! Please!

	“Wait!”		“Wait!”
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	Louise sprang to her feet. It was pitch-dark in the room. It was night, apparently. Waking up at night led her to despair. Though it was not much different than waking in the morning, waking at night was more exhausting.		Louise sprang to her feet. It was pitch-dark in the room. It was night, apparently. Waking up at night led her to despair. Though it was not much different than waking in the morning, waking at night was more exhausting.

	Yet, Louise was not relieved that it was a dream. It is the same – dream or reality. Either way, she felt the same pain, the same guilt.		Yet, Louise was not relieved that it was a dream. It was the same – dream or reality. Either way, she felt the same pain, the same guilt.

	That day, when Saito left, she berated him non-stop.		That day, when Saito left, she berated him non-stop.
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	Midnight.		Midnight.

	Louise chose the artillery tower, where people rarely came. She could not remember how she got there. By the time she noticed, she was already standing on the roof. ~~The~~ roof ~~of the round tower was~~ a staircase ~~leading towards~~ the ~~void in the stars and nothingness~~. A low stone fence enclosed the circumference of the roof.		Louise chose the artillery tower, where people rarely came. She could not remember how she got there. By the time she noticed, she was already standing on the roof. There was nothing on the circular roof except a hole that led to a staircase going down the tower. A low stone fence enclosed the circumference of the roof.

	-tap tap tap- Louise approached the stone fence and climbed on top of it.		-tap tap tap- Louise approached the stone fence and climbed on top of it.
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	However… she couldn't take that step forward. Her legs were not obeying her. Contrary to her will, her body still wanted to live, which angered Louise.		However… she couldn't take that step forward. Her legs were not obeying her. Contrary to her will, her body still wanted to live, which angered Louise.

	~~“Saito…~~ is in that ~~pitch-~~dark ~~place… and you're regretting some~~ light?”		“Even though Saito......is just right in that dark place......Why do I still want to stay in the light?”

	When she decisively bit her lip… the voice came from behind.		When she decisively bit her lip… the voice came from behind.
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	Once she said "believe in the one I love", something lit up in Louise's heart.		Once she said "believe in the one I love", something lit up in Louise's heart.

	Feelings to which she ~~was~~ not been able to be honest with, while timidly crying in her bed.		Feelings to which she had not been able to be honest with, while timidly crying in her bed.

	Siesta repeated it loudly.		Siesta repeated it loudly.
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	Montmorency looked down slightly, with an unusual blush on her cheeks.		Montmorency looked down slightly, with an unusual blush on her cheeks.

	“Forgive me Guiche. It seems I ~~have~~ misunderstood you. I thought that you were lacking in delicacy.”		“Forgive me Guiche. It seems I had misunderstood you. I thought that you were lacking in delicacy.”

	“R-really? Oh dear, even if you thought so…”		“R-really? Oh dear, even if you thought so…”
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	“Louise?”		“Louise?”

	Montmorency, anxiously watched her classmate's face. ~~The~~ thought that Louise, because of the shock, became mad.		Montmorency, anxiously watched her classmate's face. She thought that Louise, because of the shock, became mad.

	“Relax, I am not mad.”		“Relax, I am not mad.”
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	“Louise!” Montmorency shouted.		“Louise!” Montmorency shouted.

	However, Louise's complexion ~~doesn~~'t change. There was unwavering power in her eyes.		However, Louise's complexion didn't change. There was unwavering power in her eyes.

	“Believe.”		“Believe.”
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	Saito, watching Agnes's feet, turned his attention to the sword.		Saito, watching Agnes's feet, turned his attention to the sword.

	''And… is this is the right moment?'' He thought, waiting for the moment.		''And… is this the right moment?'' He thought, waiting for the moment.

	While seeing it many times, he could judge it safely. Keeping the timing… the moment when half of her body was averted, he launched into attack.		While seeing it many times, he could judge it safely. Keeping the timing… the moment when half of her body was averted, he launched into attack.
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	Little by little, Saito felt he was stronger.		Little by little, Saito felt he was stronger.

	Not by given Gandálfr, but by true, self power…		Not by the power given by Gandálfr, but by true, self power…

	Such feelings of growth every day, were not bad feelings.		Such feelings of growth every day, were not bad feelings.

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	“Use this.”		“Use this.”

	When he, startled, turned towards the voice – Tiffania stood there with a towel. Seeing Saito’s upper-body nakedness, an embarrassed blush spread on her cheeks.		When he, startled, turned towards the voice – Tiffania stood there with a towel. Seeing Saito’s upper-body's nakedness, an embarrassed blush spread on her cheeks.

	“Thank you,” Saito said, receiving the towel, and ~~starting~~ to wipe his body.		“Thank you,” Saito said, receiving the towel, and started to wipe his body.

	Tiffania looked hesitant, as if wanting to say something.		Tiffania looked hesitant, as if wanting to say something.

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	Montmorency watched Guiche with an admiring face.		Montmorency watched Guiche with an admiring face.

	“I will put a ~~Transmutation~~ spell on it now, and change the soil into bronze. And… this way, I will praise the hero forever.”		“I will put a Alchemy spell on it now, and change the soil into bronze. And… this way, I will praise the hero forever.”

	“I will show it to Louise later, Surely it will comfort her a little.”		“I will show it to Louise later, Surely it will comfort her a little.”

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JackBassV: /* Chapter Seven: Louise's Decision */

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Chapter Seven: Louise's Decision

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	I was weak.		I was weak.

	Siesta, who cannot use any magic, was ~~a few times~~ stronger than me.		Siesta, who cannot use any magic, was much stronger than me.

	Even if you can use the legendary element… it is only a wasted treasure when one’s mind is weak.		Even if you can use the legendary element… it is only a wasted treasure when one’s mind is weak.
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	“Auch!”		“Auch!”

	However… the water permeates through the wounds.		However… the water permeates through the wounds.<!--not sure, but wouldn't ''the cold penetrated the wounds.'' sound more natural? Permeate means to spread through, so the word ''through'' isn't required anyway.-->

	His body was filled with bruises and abrasions. Agnes didn’t have mercy on his body.		His body was filled with bruises and abrasions. Agnes didn’t have mercy on his body.

	“That person is a real S… dog ~~remarks and~~ looking ~~down…” Saito muttered~~ shamefully.		“That person is a real Bi… dog." muttered Saito, looking down shamefully. <!--the original makes no sense in english. This seems closer what was meant, and to his feelings.-->

	However, the pain felt good.		However, the pain felt good.
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	“Uhm… recent injuries. They were from confronting Albion army, right…? You have stopped that huge army from advancing?		“Uhm… recent injuries. They were from confronting Albion army, right…? You have stopped that huge army from advancing?

	Shaking his head, Saito ~~answered~~.		Shaking his head, Saito replied. <!--He didn't answer, he asked another question.-->

	“Who told you that?”		“Who told you that?”
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	“Aye. The other day… when I heard Tiffa’s performance, I recalled the hometown and came to miss it unbearably. I thought about returning there. This thing I should do. Louise has things that Louise should do… And I have mine. For this purpose, I try to improve my sword skills. This world is a dangerous place. I have to find my own way to defend myself…”		“Aye. The other day… when I heard Tiffa’s performance, I recalled the hometown and came to miss it unbearably. I thought about returning there. This thing I should do. Louise has things that Louise should do… And I have mine. For this purpose, I try to improve my sword skills. This world is a dangerous place. I have to find my own way to defend myself…”

	In a somewhat settled voice~~, Saito said~~.		Said Saito, in a somewhat settled voice.

	“That person is named Louise?”		“That person is named Louise?”

Zultekmilennia: /* Chapter Seven: Louise's Decision */

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Chapter Seven: Louise's Decision

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	Even if someone knocks on the door, Louise does not answer. In order not to hear if someone calls her, she stuffed her ears with cotton. All locks were locked, preventing anyone from entering the room. She hugged her pillow as if it was Saito… closing her eyes and pressing her cheeks against it.		Even if someone knocks on the door, Louise does not answer. In order not to hear if someone calls her, she stuffed her ears with cotton. All locks were locked, preventing anyone from entering the room. She hugged her pillow as if it was Saito… closing her eyes and pressing her cheeks against it.

	Saito in the ~~dreama~~ always… gently embraces Louise, holding her close.		Saito in the dreams always… gently embraces Louise, holding her close.

	And did it many times with love.		And did it many times with love.
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	Hand in hand, the couple walked around the lake.		Hand in hand, the couple walked around the lake.

	Louise was wearing a black dress and black beret, like on her first date with Saito. That appearance was mirrored by a beautiful surface of the water.		Louise was wearing a black dress and black beret, like on her first date with Saito. That appearance was mirrored by the beautiful surface of the water.

	“Here, the water spirit was seen, right?”		“Here, the water spirit was seen, right?”
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	“Stop it Louise. The water is cold, you’ll freeze.”		“Stop it Louise. The water is cold, you’ll freeze.”

	There is something about the things said in this water. Maybe because of water spirit. Spirit of the oath. An oath given ~~her~~ will never be broken…		There is something about the things said in this water. Maybe because of water spirit. Spirit of the oath. An oath given here will never be broken…

	In a dream, Louise wanted to tell it to Saito.		In a dream, Louise wanted to tell it to Saito.
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	Midnight.		Midnight.

	Louise chose the artillery tower, where people come ~~rarely~~. She could not remember how she got there. She just noticed when she already stood on the rooftop. The roof of the round tower was a staircase leading towards the hole in the stars and nothingness. A too low stone fence enclosed around the circumference of the roof.		Louise chose the artillery tower, where people rarely come. She could not remember how she got there. She just noticed when she already stood on the rooftop. The roof of the round tower was a staircase leading towards the hole in the stars and nothingness. A too low stone fence enclosed around the circumference of the roof.

	-tap tap tap- Louise approached the stone fence and climbed on top of it.		-tap tap tap- Louise approached the stone fence and climbed on top of it.
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	Siesta said fiercely.		Siesta said fiercely.

	“If miss Valliere dies, Saito will be sad. He… sleeping pills that I passed to him… used to let you go, didn’t he? When I said for him to use them to escape! Therefore, I won’t let you go. Saito-san didn’t want you to die! So, I won’t let you to die either! Absolutely!”		“If miss Valliere dies, Saito will be sad. He… sleeping pills that I passed to him… used to let you go, didn’t he? When I said for him to use them to escape! Therefore, I won’t let you go. Saito-san didn’t want you to die! So, I won’t let you die either! Absolutely!”

	“C-calm down…”		“C-calm down…”
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	Hearing a strong sound from behind, she turned around facing the same way as Guiche.		Hearing a strong sound from behind, she turned around facing the same way as Guiche.

	“M-my art. ~~Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah~~!”		“M-my art. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!”

	Guiche’s masterpiece turned miserable. It was crushed back into the dirt by the fallen girls.		Guiche’s masterpiece turned miserable. It was crushed back into the dirt by the fallen girls.
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	Louise nodded.		Louise nodded.

	Her beautiful eyes regained ~~the~~ shine.		Her beautiful eyes regained its shine.

	Then Louise stood up. Montmorency ran up to her.		Then Louise stood up. Montmorency ran up to her.
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	The front yard of Tiffania's house…		The front yard of Tiffania's house…

	In front of Saito, who ~~set up~~ the wooden sword, Agnes was standing. Though Saito's breath is rough, Agnes breath is calm.		In front of Saito, who wielded the wooden sword, Agnes was standing. Though Saito's breath is rough, Agnes breath is calm.

	When Saito sets up the wooden sword, Agnes swung hers and lowered it. Though he dodged it, his arm was severely hit, and the sword fell from it…		When Saito sets up the wooden sword, Agnes swung hers and lowered it. Though he dodged it, his arm was severely hit, and the sword fell from it…
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	Saito, watching Agnes's feet, turned his attention to the sword.		Saito, watching Agnes's feet, turned his attention to the sword.

	And… is this is the right moment? He thought waiting for the moment.		And… is this is the right moment? He thought, waiting for the moment.

	While seeing it many times, he could judge it safely. Keeping the timing… the moment when half of her body was averted, he launched into attack.		While seeing it many times, he could judge it safely. Keeping the timing… the moment when half of her body was averted, he launched into attack.
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	However, the pain felt good.		However, the pain felt good.

	Little by little, Saito felt he ~~strengthened~~.		Little by little, Saito felt he was stronger.

	Not by given Gandalfr, but by true, self power…		Not by given Gandalfr, but by true, self power…

	Such ~~growing~~ feelings every day, were not bad feelings.		Such feelings of growth every day, were not bad feelings.

	Saito forgot the towel, so now flustered, he tried to wipe his upper nude body. It was a season still near winter. Even though his body burns, it still gets cold.		Saito forgot the towel, so now flustered, he tried to wipe his upper nude body. It was a season still near winter. Even though his body burns, it still gets cold.
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	“Who told you that?”		“Who told you that?”

	“That sword-~~sand~~ – Derf-san.”		“That sword-san – Derf-san.”

	“He can’t stop chatting…”		“He can’t stop chatting…”