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	Henrietta shook her head.		Henrietta shook her head.

	“No… it’s my responsibility. It was me who decided about the war. The possibility of such instructions being issued should have also been taken into consideration. Really, you are alive. I'm sorry Louise. ~~What~~ words I ~~have to~~ say can't ~~apologize enough…”~~		“No… it’s my responsibility. It was me who decided about the war. The possibility of such instructions being issued should have also been taken into consideration. Really, you are alive. I'm sorry Louise. Whatever words I say, it can't be enough for an apology…”

	Feelings overtook Henrietta, and she began to weep.		Feelings overtook Henrietta, and she began to weep.
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	Henrietta, once the couple left, dwelled on the two countries' problems… she ordered an investigation into Gallia’s and Romalia’s Void users, who tried to harm the two. As soon as something became clear, she would tell them both.		Henrietta, once the couple left, dwelled on the two countries' problems… she ordered an investigation into Gallia’s and Romalia’s Void users, who tried to harm the two. As soon as something became clear, she would tell them both.

	~~For now~~, ~~both~~ Saito and Louise ~~were released~~, ~~in case another country decided~~ to attack them. ~~As usual~~ they ~~would be at~~ the Academy ~~of Magic. A nest of mages to speak with~~, and even ~~the~~ Void user ~~and her partner~~ would ~~remain at a hand~~.		So, Saito and Louise could put their hearts at ease a little. If they had an entire country to back them up, the enemy would not be able to attack them that easily. In addition to that, they normally stayed in the Magic Academy, in other words, the place where magicians were gathered, and even for a "Void user", this would be an opponent way out of their league.

	The next morning, when the wind dragon brought them back to Tristain‘s school, Saito strengthened his grip on the mantle given to him by Henrietta. On the velvet-black fabric, a small, blue Lily crest was placed - the symbol of the "Chevalier" title, that was attached on the chest for all Tristain to see. Seeing that, Agnes muttered,		The next morning, when the wind dragon brought them back to Tristain‘s school, Saito strengthened his grip on the mantle given to him by Henrietta. On the velvet-black fabric, a small, blue Lily crest was placed - the symbol of the "Chevalier" title, that was attached on the chest for all Tristain to see. Seeing that, Agnes muttered,
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	Saito wordlessly watched the beaker and muttered.		Saito wordlessly watched the beaker and muttered.

	“I… when the Princess said that I would be promoted to a Chevalier, I was glad. I thought, that I was finally being acknowledged… ~~A long time ago,~~ when I was in Japan, ~~there was no such thing, but it was difficult. Though I was praised by a great person,~~ I ~~was not acknowledged. Therefore~~, I ~~was glad~~. The teacher always acknowledged me. He always listened attentively to my words. I, I was happy. Even though I was commoner, I was not looked down upon… I was happy. He was only a teacher. Yet he treated me as equally as the other nobles in this school…”		“I… when the Princess said that I would be promoted to a Chevalier, I was glad. I thought, that I was finally being acknowledged… That was because I never had such an experience when I was in Japan, and that I had never done anything that would get me praise or acknowledgement from the adults, so I felt very happy. The teacher always acknowledged me. He always listened attentively to my words. I, I was happy. Even though I was commoner, I was not looked down upon… I was happy. He was only a teacher. Yet he treated me as equally as the other nobles in this school…”

	From Saito's eyes, tears started to fall. Tears, like water, rolled down his cheeks and chin.		From Saito's eyes, tears started to fall. Tears, like water, rolled down his cheeks and chin.

	“Teacher, I am a knight too. ~~A chevalier too~~. ~~Smile~~. ~~And then the teacher praises~~. ~~Like you always said and did~~.”		“Teacher, I have become a knight, you know, a chevalier to boot too. You will feel happy for me, right? Why don't you praise me, please? Why don't you say how well I did there, teacher, please....”

	Saito, while crying, muttered many times,		Saito, while crying, muttered many times,
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	Louise closed her eyes.		Louise closed her eyes.

	~~She~~ was ~~saddened as much by seeing Saito tapped into~~ sadness ~~as by Colbert’s death itself~~.		Seeing how Saito was deeply immersed in sadness made Louise feel the same.

	It was late at night… when Saito returned to their room. Not being able to bear Saito being like that anymore, Louise, who returned back to the room some time ago, pushed her head out of the sheets. Saito was silently sitting on a chair.		It was late at night… when Saito returned to their room. Not being able to bear Saito being like that anymore, Louise, who returned back to the room some time ago, pushed her head out of the sheets. Saito was silently sitting on a chair.
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	And muttered in soliloquy,		And muttered in soliloquy,

	“…Teacher said ~~some day… ‘I would be happy~~ to make ~~fire’s power work for people~~.~~’ Teacher, it is too tough~~ to ~~do that alone~~.”		“…Teacher once said that, 'I wanted to used the power of Fire to make everyone happy'. So teacher.....must have given his all to challenge what he could have done.”

	“…”		“…”

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	Colbert and Saito surpassed the differences of the worlds, Louise remembered them getting along well. For Saito… he must have been a person who he was able to trust in.		Colbert and Saito surpassed the differences of the worlds, Louise remembered them getting along well. For Saito… he must have been a person who he was able to trust in.

	''What could I ever say to comfort Saito who lost such important person?''		''What could I ever say to comfort Saito who lost such an important person?''

	~~Louis~~ closed her eyes.		Louise closed her eyes.

	She was as much ~~saddened~~ by seeing Saito tapped into sadness as by Colbert’s death itself.		She was saddened as much by seeing Saito tapped into sadness as by Colbert’s death itself.

	It was late at night… when Saito returned to their room. Not being able to bear Saito being like that anymore, Louise, who returned back to the room some time ago, pushed her head out of sheets. Saito was silently sitting on a chair.		It was late at night… when Saito returned to their room. Not being able to bear Saito being like that anymore, Louise, who returned back to the room some time ago, pushed her head out of the sheets. Saito was silently sitting on a chair.

	Still… like before, not knowing what to say, Louise quietly watched Saito.		Still… like before, not knowing what to say, Louise quietly watched Saito.

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	Montmorency said mercilessly, in a stony voice; Guiche shook his head.		Montmorency said mercilessly, in a stony voice; Guiche shook his head.

	“It might be so. I cannot ~~remembered~~ it so well. Aahahaha!”		“It might be so. I cannot remember it so well. Aahahaha!”

	Among this noise, Saito recalled a certain thing.		Among this noise, Saito recalled a certain thing.

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	Louise nodded.		Louise nodded.

	Once in bed again, Louise was ~~aimless~~ tossing herself on sheets, thinking.		Once in bed again, Louise was aimlessly tossing herself on sheets, thinking.

	Though she was going to find the way for Saito to return… Saito became Chevalier, and consequently, as he said, he will become a knight commander.		Though she was going to find the way for Saito to return… Saito became Chevalier, and consequently, as he said, he will become a knight commander.

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	…It might be as she said. If his position in this world goes up, there would be no limits for him. Saito knew that from spending quite some time with the nobles already.		…It might be as she said. If his position in this world goes up, there would be no limits for him. Saito knew that from spending quite some time with the nobles already.

	“What do you say, ~~Hiraga Saito~~?”		“What do you say, Hiragasaito?”

	Being called by his full name, Saito felt nervous. Otherwise, he was not interested in a noble’s position. However… being admitted among people – that’s what Saito desired. Being needed by Henrietta, consequently, means being needed by this entire country. Moreover, it will be easy to look for a way to return.		Being called by his full name, Saito felt nervous. Otherwise, he was not interested in a noble’s position. However… being admitted among people – that’s what Saito desired. Being needed by Henrietta, consequently, means being needed by this entire country. Moreover, it will be easy to look for a way to return.

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	…It might be as she said. If his position in this world goes up, there would be no limits for him. Saito knew that from spending quite some time with the nobles already.		…It might be as she said. If his position in this world goes up, there would be no limits for him. Saito knew that from spending quite some time with the nobles already.

	“What do you say, ~~Hiragasaito~~?”		“What do you say, Hiraga Saito?”

	Being called by his full name, Saito felt nervous. Otherwise, he was not interested in a noble’s position. However… being admitted among people – that’s what Saito desired. Being needed by Henrietta, consequently, means being needed by this entire country. Moreover, it will be easy to look for a way to return.		Being called by his full name, Saito felt nervous. Otherwise, he was not interested in a noble’s position. However… being admitted among people – that’s what Saito desired. Being needed by Henrietta, consequently, means being needed by this entire country. Moreover, it will be easy to look for a way to return.

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	It was an empty work room as, in addition to the riches, all the furniture was sold off. As might be expected, the desk that was used for the paper look-over was not present either. There was a worn-out desk, which was purchased in a second-hand articles shop instead.		It was an empty work room as, in addition to the riches, all the furniture was sold off. As might be expected, the desk that was used for the paper look-over was not present either. There was a worn-out desk, which was purchased in a second-hand articles shop instead.

	There was also one old ~~book-shelf~~ standing lonesome in the corner of the room. If she ~~was~~ not wearing a crown, the visitor coming to the room would have never been able to guess that it was a queen’s work room.		There was also one old bookshelf standing lonesome in the corner of the room. If she were not wearing a crown, the visitor coming to the room would have never been able to guess that it was a queen’s work room.

	“The wind dragon should be here from La Rochelle by now…”		“The wind dragon should be here from La Rochelle by now…”
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	Gratitude? What could it be? Some gold coins again? Or…		Gratitude? What could it be? Some gold coins again? Or…

	Saito recalled the event in the cheap hotel at one time. That night… Henrietta’s lips touched mine. Well, could He calmly ask to kiss her back - Saito grew expectant and ashamed.		Saito recalled the event in the cheap hotel at one time. ''That night… Henrietta’s lips touched mine.'' Well, could he calmly ask to kiss her back - Saito grew expectant and ashamed.

	However, the words that Henrietta uttered, were beyond Saito's imagination.		However, the words that Henrietta uttered, were beyond Saito's imagination.
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	“A hero has to be given an honor that matches his exploits. That’s what the general that confronted you said to me… and I think so as well. Thus I ask you – please lend me your power. You are important for me… no, for all people of Tristain.”		“A hero has to be given an honor that matches his exploits. That’s what the general that confronted you said to me… and I think so as well. Thus I ask you – please lend me your power. You are important for me… no, for all people of Tristain.”

	Saito finally understood the true feeling of VIP treatment. Being sought by Agnes, having a ship sent just for you - the purpose was not only to show appreciation for Saito's pains. I was admitted as a necessary human for Tristain, that’s what such a big warship was given for.		Saito finally understood the true feeling of VIP treatment. Being sought by Agnes, having a ship sent just for you - the purpose was not only to show appreciation for Saito's pains. ''I was admitted as a necessary human for Tristain, that’s what such a big warship was given for.''

	“But Princess, consecrating Saito, who is not a noble, as commander of the Imperial Guards? This cannot be allowed!”		“But Princess, consecrating Saito, who is not a noble, as commander of the Imperial Guards? This cannot be allowed!”
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	“But, but, my Void should remain a secret…”		“But, but, my Void should remain a secret…”

	“Of course, that secret will be kept. The fact that he is the familiar ~~Gandalfr~~ is known only by me, Agnes, Academy Director Osman, and top management of the country. Currently, he is just a soldier with excellent behavior and weapon-using skills.”		“Of course, that secret will be kept. The fact that he is the familiar Gandálfr is known only by me, Agnes, Academy Director Osman, and top management of the country. Currently, he is just a soldier with excellent behavior and weapon-using skills.”

	Louise could not object to such words any longer.		Louise could not object to such words any longer.
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	As told, he closed his eyes. The tension ran through the body. It was wrapped in exhilarating heat.		As told, he closed his eyes. The tension ran through the body. It was wrapped in exhilarating heat.

	No way, I’m becoming a noble…		''No way, I’m becoming a noble…''

	He never dreamed of such a thing, really.		He never dreamed of such a thing, really.
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	Henrietta, once the couple left, dwelled on the two countries' problems… she ordered an investigation into Gallia’s and Romalia’s Void users, who tried to harm the two. As soon as something became clear, she would tell them both.		Henrietta, once the couple left, dwelled on the two countries' problems… she ordered an investigation into Gallia’s and Romalia’s Void users, who tried to harm the two. As soon as something became clear, she would tell them both.

	For now, both Saito and Louise were released, in case another country decided to attack them. As usual they would be at the Academy of Magic. A nest of mages to speak with, and even the Void user and her partner ~~will~~ remain at a hand.		For now, both Saito and Louise were released, in case another country decided to attack them. As usual they would be at the Academy of Magic. A nest of mages to speak with, and even the Void user and her partner would remain at a hand.

	The next morning, when the wind dragon brought them back to Tristain‘s school, Saito strengthened his grip on the mantle given to him by Henrietta. On the velvet-black fabric, a small, blue Lily crest was placed - the symbol of the "Chevalier" title, that was attached on the chest for all Tristain to see. Seeing that, Agnes muttered,		The next morning, when the wind dragon brought them back to Tristain‘s school, Saito strengthened his grip on the mantle given to him by Henrietta. On the velvet-black fabric, a small, blue Lily crest was placed - the symbol of the "Chevalier" title, that was attached on the chest for all Tristain to see. Seeing that, Agnes muttered,
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	“Wear it.”“		“Wear it.”“

	Saito nodded and put the mantle on. It was placed on his worn-out parka that had big holes in it. Now I just want new clothes… he mused, not thinking about it as a symbol of Halkeginia’s nobility.		Saito nodded and put the mantle on. It was placed on his worn-out parka that had big holes in it. ''Now I just want new clothes…'' he mused, not thinking about it as a symbol of Halkeginia’s nobility.

	“It suits you well, doesn’t it?”		“It suits you well, doesn’t it?”
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	“Anyway, now I am finally equal to you, Louise.” Saying something like that with a smile ticked Louise off.		“Anyway, now I am finally equal to you, Louise.” Saying something like that with a smile ticked Louise off.

	“Huh? Equal to whom? Comparing ~~chevalier~~ with the House of Vallière is like comparing a lizard to a noble. No, a lizard is too good – a bug at most!”		“Huh? Equal to whom? Comparing Chevalier with the House of Vallière is like comparing a lizard to a noble. No, a lizard is too good – a bug at most!”

	Sulking, Saito turned away. "Haah," Louise let out a sigh.		Sulking, Saito turned away. "Haah," Louise let out a sigh.
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	''My feelings contradicted my words.''		''My feelings contradicted my words.''

	''Though I should be thinking about how to return Saito home… I was happy about Saito becoming a ~~chevalier~~ for different reasons.''		''Though I should be thinking about how to return Saito home… I was happy about Saito becoming a Chevalier for different reasons.''

	''I thought that when a partner is a chevalier, then admitting my relationship to my father, a duke, was possible.''		''I thought that when a partner is a chevalier, then admitting my relationship to my father, a duke, was possible.''
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	Though because he was from different world, there were no hometowns here… Saito wondered about these feelings.		Though because he was from different world, there were no hometowns here… Saito wondered about these feelings.

	When the wind dragon landed on ~~Austori~~ Plaza, tens of students ran up.		When the wind dragon landed on Austri Plaza, tens of students ran up.

	As Saito started wondering about it, a boy with blond hair cried out slowly.		As Saito started wondering about it, a boy with blond hair cried out slowly.
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	Montmorency noticed the mantle that Saito wore. After that, she gave the crest on his chest a long, hard look.		Montmorency noticed the mantle that Saito wore. After that, she gave the crest on his chest a long, hard look.

	“Can’t be – you're a ~~chevalier~~!”		“Can’t be – you're a Chevalier!”

	“Whaaat?!”		“Whaaat?!”
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