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	But at the next moment... the conversation behind his seat entered Saito's ears.		But at the next moment... the conversation behind his seat entered Saito's ears.

	“Have you heard? The word is going around that a 'mysterious bird' had been ~~see~~ in the skies of Tristania.”		“Have you heard? The word is going around that a 'mysterious bird' had been seen in the skies of Tristania.”

	“Yeah. My elder brother who serves in the dragon knight corps heard the rumor as well... is it true?”		“Yeah. My elder brother who serves in the dragon knight corps heard the rumor as well... is it true?”
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	“Hey, miss. Although I dunno what sort of magic you use, there are people who with bad intentions in this place. While you are not involved in anything troublesome yet...”		“Hey, miss. Although I dunno what sort of magic you use, there are people who with bad intentions in this place. While you are not involved in anything troublesome yet...”

	At the moment when the ~~shop~~ owner was warning Tabitha, a lady with a deeply set hood sat down beside Tabitha.		At the moment when the tavern owner was warning Tabitha, a lady with a deeply set hood sat down beside Tabitha.

	“Sorry for being late. Friend of yours?”		“Sorry for being late. Friend of yours?”

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	“Looks like she came back two or three days ago.”		“Looks like she came back two or three days ago.”

	“She has such a light presence, almost like ~~Kuroko~~. Hmm...”		“She has such a light presence, almost like a shadow. Hmm...”

	Guiche spoke as if he was troubled.		Guiche spoke as if he was troubled.
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	However today’s crow didn’t seem be carrying any secret letters.		However today’s crow didn’t seem be carrying any secret letters.

	Looking puzzled, Tabitha tilted its head to one side, and ''bang!''. Emitting a sound, it cracked into half.		Looking puzzled, Tabitha tilted its head to one side, and ''bang!'' Emitting a sound, it cracked into half.

	Upon closer inspection... it was actually an elaborate model of a crow. A type of magical doll akin to a 'gargoyle'. Inside the cavity of the crow model where it cracked apart, and a letter was inserted.		Upon closer inspection... it was actually an elaborate model of a crow. A type of magical doll akin to a 'gargoyle'. Inside the cavity of the crow model where it cracked apart, and a letter was inserted.

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	“Won't you try to use that strength for the sake of society?”		“Won't you try to use that strength for the sake of society?”

	~~Upon which~~ Tabitha closed her book and stood up.		After hearing those words, Tabitha closed her book and stood up.

	“Oooh, you're coming along, right?”		“Oooh, you're coming along, right?”
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	That lady removed the hood she was wearing. Almond shaped eyes, and between the flowing raven black hair, runic letters danced. It was the mind of god, Myozntnirn.		That lady removed the hood she was wearing. Almond shaped eyes, and between the flowing raven black hair, runic letters danced. It was the mind of god, Myozntnirn.

	“Here is our master’s thoughts: although he had wanted the four existing "dragons" in this world to fight		“Here are our master’s thoughts: although he had wanted the four existing "dragons" in this world to fight
	amongst each other... for some reason I don't understand, he has now decided to capture one of them.”		amongst each other... for some reason I don't understand, he has now decided to capture one of them.”

	“...”		“...”

	“That 'dragon' has a strong guardian. That's why he wants you to exterminate that guardian. During that time, I will take ~~that~~ 'dragon' for our master.”		“That 'dragon' has a strong guardian. That's why he wants you to exterminate that guardian. During that time, I will take the 'dragon' for our master.”

	“Exterminate that guardian?”		“Exterminate that guardian?”

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	Tabitha went back to her room, and discovered a ~~raven~~ on top of her bed. It ~~was definitely~~ a carrier crow, bringing a secret message from the Gallian royal family. ~~It was always a~~ delivery bird, ~~although~~ there were times when owls or ~~doves~~ were used.		Tabitha went back to her room, and discovered a crow on top of her bed. It looked like a carrier crow, bringing a secret message from the Gallian royal family. The delivery bird differs occasionally, there were times when owls or pigeons were used.

	~~Nevertheless, today's~~ crow ~~was not holding~~ any secret ~~message~~.		However today’s crow didn’t seem be carrying any secret letters.

	Tabitha ~~inclined her~~ head to one side, and ''bang!''. Emitting a sound, it cracked into half.		Looking puzzled, Tabitha tilted its head to one side, and ''bang!''. Emitting a sound, it cracked into half.

	Upon a closer ~~look~~... ~~that~~ was an elaborate model of a crow. ~~It was probably~~ a ~~kind of~~ 'gargoyle'~~<!--singular not plural-->~~. ~~There was a hole in~~ the crow model ~~which~~ cracked apart, and a letter was inserted ~~into it~~.		Upon closer inspection... it was actually an elaborate model of a crow. A type of magical doll akin to a 'gargoyle'. Inside the cavity of the crow model where it cracked apart, and a letter was inserted.

	She picked it up and browsed through it. Tabitha's eyebrows ~~lowered~~ slightly.		She picked it up and browsed through it. Tabitha's eyebrows shifted slightly.

	During that night... the ~~one~~ Tabitha visited on her wind dragon Sylphid was not Gallia, but Tristain.		During that night... the place Tabitha visited on her wind dragon Sylphid was not Gallia, but Tristain.

	Above the town which was glowing with lights, Tabitha jumped off from Sylphid. She recited a spell, and her body floated with Levitation, landing slowly.		Above the town which was glowing with lights, Tabitha jumped off from Sylphid. She recited a spell, and her body floated with Levitation, landing slowly.
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	“Oh my! You have lost your way? If I lead you to your dear father, would you give me a reward?”		“Oh my! You have lost your way? If I lead you to your dear father, would you give me a reward?”

	As if those were just a breeze which flew past her face, Tabitha ignored those sneers, and ~~head~~ towards ~~that specified~~ bar.		As if those were just a breeze which flew past her face, Tabitha ignored those sneers, and headed towards one specific bar.

	Although ~~that~~ place was on Chicton Street as well, it was a more refined bar. There were many people in noble and knight outfits. The ~~shop~~ owner sitting behind the counter stared at Tabitha suspiciously.		Although the place was on Chicton Street as well, it was a more refined bar. There were many people in noble and knight outfits. The tavern owner sitting behind the counter stared at Tabitha suspiciously.

	“This is not a ~~shop~~ for a noble's daughter to visit. Our premises ~~should be~~ quite chaotic ~~right now~~. ~~It is better~~ for you to return home.”		“This is not a place for a noble's daughter to visit. Our premises can become quite chaotic. Its best for you to return home.”

	In spite of that, Tabitha did not move.		In spite of that, Tabitha did not move.
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	Shaking his head, the owner drew near to Tabitha's face.		Shaking his head, the owner drew near to Tabitha's face.

	“Hey, miss. Although I dunno what sort of magic you use, ~~those~~ people who ~~conspire~~ bad ~~things come along as well~~. While you are not involved in anything troublesome yet...”		“Hey, miss. Although I dunno what sort of magic you use, there are people who with bad intentions in this place. While you are not involved in anything troublesome yet...”

	At the moment when the shop owner was ~~threatening~~ Tabitha, a lady deeply ~~buried in a~~ hood sat down beside Tabitha.		At the moment when the shop owner was warning Tabitha, a lady with a deeply set hood sat down beside Tabitha.

	“Sorry for being late. ~~Your friend, huh~~?”		“Sorry for being late. Friend of yours?”

	The latter half of her words were directed towards the ~~shop~~ owner. From the ambiance of that lady, the ~~shop~~ owner ~~who~~ sensed that it would be better for him not to poke his head into their affairs, withdrew to the inside of the bar.		The latter half of her words were directed towards the tavern owner. From the ambiance of that lady, the tavern owner sensed that it would be better for him not to poke his head into their affairs, withdrew to the inside of the bar.

	The lady in the thick robe looked at Tabitha.		The lady in the thick robe looked at Tabitha.
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	''Why is she to receive her task in Tristain and not Gallia?'' That was her question.		''Why is she to receive her task in Tristain and not Gallia?'' That was her question.

	“This country will be the setting of the ~~task~~ this time.”		“This country will be the setting of the mission this time.”

	“...”		“...”

	That lady removed the hood she was wearing. ~~Slit~~, ~~almond eyes. Between~~ the ~~rustling~~ black hair, ~~runes were written messily~~. ~~The~~ mind of god, Myozntnirn.		That lady removed the hood she was wearing. Almond shaped eyes, and between the flowing raven black hair, runic letters danced. It was the mind of god, Myozntnirn.

	~~“Our master's~~ thoughts ~~were this~~: although he wanted ~~to let~~ the four "dragons" of this world fight		“Here is our master’s thoughts: although he had wanted the four existing "dragons" in this world to fight
	~~among~~ each other... for some reason I don't ~~know~~, he decided to capture one of them.”		amongst each other... for some reason I don't understand, he has now decided to capture one of them.”

	“...”		“...”

	“That 'dragon' has a strong ~~guard~~. That's why he wants you to exterminate that ~~guard~~. During that time, I will ~~steal~~ that 'dragon.'”		“That 'dragon' has a strong guardian. That's why he wants you to exterminate that guardian. During that time, I will take that 'dragon' for our master.”

	“Exterminate ~~the guard~~?”		“Exterminate that guardian?”

	“Someone you know very well.”		“Someone you know very well.”
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	“If you manage to accomplish this task... there is a big reward. Your mother... she drank poison and became mentally ill, right? It's the medicine to regain her sanity.”		“If you manage to accomplish this task... there is a big reward. Your mother... she drank poison and became mentally ill, right? It's the medicine to regain her sanity.”

	Tabitha bit her lips ~~lightly,~~ and ~~quivered~~. ~~After that,~~ she ~~shifted her view towards~~ Myoznitnirn. ~~Those~~ eyes ~~contained obvious animosity~~.		Tabitha lightly bit her lips and trembled. Then she glared at Myoznitnirn. Her eyes revealed the feelings of clear hostility.

	~~“Eh~~? The great Knight~~-sama~~ of the North Parterre~~, had personal~~ feelings ~~towards~~ her acquaintances? Don't you ~~get it~~? This is a chance for your mother to regain her sanity.”		“Oh? The great Knight of the North Parterre is troubled by her feelings toward her acquaintances? Don't you understand? This is a chance for your mother to regain her sanity.”

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

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	“But can she really join our company? Isn't she a girl?”		“But can she really join our company? Isn't she a girl?”

	“Look she is certainly a 'Chevalier'. In such a case, we can't be discriminating against gender. The condition to be enlisted in “Undine” is “a student of the Academy of Magic”. Only that. There's no rule which forbids the participation of females.”		“Look she is certainly a 'Chevalier'. In such a case, we can't be discriminating against gender. The condition to be enlisted in “Undine” is “a student of the Academy of Magic”. Only that.
			There's no rule which forbids the participation of females.”

	“The official documents ~~do not set apart these things~~. It ~~just happened like that unexpectedly~~. ~~Which ever girl can also~~ join...”		“The only reason its not in the official documents is that we never had a chance to add it. It happens. Besides girls don’t want to join anyway...”

	Guiche said.		Guiche said.

	“But I'm not a student here...”		“But according to the rules I'm not a student here either.”

	Saito pointed out.		Saito pointed out.

	“Isn't it fine? If that's the case, we can also change it to “Beings that live at the Academy of Magic”. It's decided now. That's it. I decided it.”		“Isn't it fine? If that's the case, we can also change it to “Beings that live at the Academy of Magic” instead. It's decided now. That's it. I decided it.”

	~~Reynal~~ declared arrogantly. Not matching his obedient and quiet-looking appearance, looks like he had a really forceful character. Evidently, he intended to persuade the Commanding Officer and the Assistant Commanding Officer to let him shoulder the practical business of the knight corps.		Reynald declared arrogantly. Not matching his obedient and quiet-looking appearance, looks like he had a really forceful character. Evidently, he intended to persuade the Commanding Officer and the Assistant Commanding Officer to let him shoulder the practical business of the knight corps.

	“Is it okay? After all, both of you have no interest whatsoever in “administration” and “reputation”. For the continuation of the knight corps, above everything else, these two things are indispensable. I think that if the knight corps follow my own way, we would not be called fools in the palace. If you have a better plan, tell me.”		“Is it okay? After all, both of you have no interest whatsoever in “administration” and “reputation”. For the continuation of the knight corps, above everything else, these two things are indispensable. I think that if the knight corps follow my own way, we would not be called fools in the palace. If you have a better plan, tell me.”

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	During lunch break, all the group members went to the library.		During lunch break, all the group members went to the library.

	At the side of the library where most of the people won't go, there was a ~~lass~~ there.		At the side of the library where most of the people won't go, there was a girl there.

	~~The~~ small body ~~leaned~~ over ~~and was~~ reading a book with ~~her~~ utmost attention.		Her small body was hunched over, intent on reading the book in her hands with utmost attention.

	The blue-haired ~~lass~~ was Tabitha.		The blue-haired girl was Tabitha.

	“Huh? When did she come back?”		“Huh? When did she come back?” Guiche whispered.

	~~Guiche whispered.~~ Indeed, she ~~was supposed to stick close to~~ Kirche ~~and go~~ to Germania ~~with her~~.		Indeed, she should of went with Kirche to Germania together.

	“Looks like she came back two or three days ago.”		“Looks like she came back two or three days ago.”

	“She ~~is not someone who stands out~~. ~~Umm~~...”		“She has such a light presence, almost like Kuroko. Hmm...”

	Guiche spoke as if he was troubled.		Guiche spoke as if he was troubled.

	~~“Yet,~~ can she ~~come into~~ our company? Isn't she a girl?”		“But can she really join our company? Isn't she a girl?”

	~~“But still,~~ she is ~~truly~~ a 'Chevalier'. In such a case, we ~~cannot have~~ gender ~~distinctions, I suppose~~. The condition to be enlisted in “Undine” is “a student of the Academy of Magic”. Only that. ~~It doesn~~'~~t mean that there is a~~ rule which forbids the participation of females.”		“Look she is certainly a 'Chevalier'. In such a case, we can't be discriminating against gender. The condition to be enlisted in “Undine” is “a student of the Academy of Magic”. Only that. There's no rule which forbids the participation of females.”

	“The ~~only reason its not in the~~ official documents ~~is that we never had a chance to add it~~. It ~~happens~~. ~~Besides girls don’t want to~~ join ~~anyway~~...”		“The official documents do not set apart these things. It just happened like that unexpectedly. Which ever girl can also join...”

	Guiche said.		Guiche said.

	“But ~~according to the rules~~ I'm not a student here ~~either~~.”		“But I'm not a student here...”

	Saito pointed out.		Saito pointed out.

	“Isn't it fine? If that's the case, we can also change it to “Beings that live at the Academy of Magic” ~~instead~~. It's decided now. That's it. I decided it.”		“Isn't it fine? If that's the case, we can also change it to “Beings that live at the Academy of Magic”. It's decided now. That's it. I decided it.”

	~~Reynald~~ declared arrogantly. Not matching his obedient and quiet-looking appearance, looks like he had a really forceful character. Evidently, he intended to persuade the Commanding Officer and the Assistant Commanding Officer to let him shoulder the practical business of the knight corps.		Reynal declared arrogantly. Not matching his obedient and quiet-looking appearance, looks like he had a really forceful character. Evidently, he intended to persuade the Commanding Officer and the Assistant Commanding Officer to let him shoulder the practical business of the knight corps.

	“Is it okay? After all, both of you have no interest whatsoever in “administration” and “reputation”. For the continuation of the knight corps, above everything else, these two things are indispensable. I think that if the knight corps follow my own way, we would not be called fools in the palace. If you have a better plan, tell me.”		“Is it okay? After all, both of you have no interest whatsoever in “administration” and “reputation”. For the continuation of the knight corps, above everything else, these two things are indispensable. I think that if the knight corps follow my own way, we would not be called fools in the palace. If you have a better plan, tell me.”

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	“Yeah, its the ball that begins with the new school term. Do you know when it starts? Ah nevermind, you probably don't know either.”		“Yeah, its the ball that begins with the new school term. Do you know when it starts? Ah nevermind, you probably don't know either.”

	Although he said “new school term”, Saito was still a bit confused. Because he could not tell which month was which over here. Still, it felt somewhat warm of late, so perhaps ~~its~~ springtime ~~now~~.		Although he said “new school term”, Saito was still a bit confused. Because he could not tell which month was which over here. Still, it felt somewhat warm of late, so perhaps it was springtime.
	~~<!--- Boy the previous translations were terrible, not only incorrect but engrish to the max! ◔̯◔ --->~~

	Come to think of it, there was a certain ceremony recently, and many noble teens attended. However, the figures of the third-years could not be seen anymore. Did they graduate? Moreover their replacement with first-year students... Oh I see! That was the school entrance ceremony. Saito thumped his knees.		Come to think of it, there was a certain ceremony recently, and many noble teens attended. However, the figures of the third-years could not be seen anymore. Did they graduate? Moreover their replacement with first-year students... Oh I see! That was the school entrance ceremony. Saito thumped his knees.
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	Guiche, who was sitting beside him, explained,		Guiche, who was sitting beside him, explained,

	“Well, isn't a welcome necessary? Among the newly enrolled noble lasses, there is quite a number who are entering the higher society for the first time. I will carefully teach those girls the adult social life! Yeah, adult social life! Oh, there are boys as well...”		“Well, isn't a welcome necessary? Among the newly enrolled noble lasses, there are quite a number who are entering the higher society for the first time. I will carefully teach those girls the adult social life! Yeah, adult social life! Oh, there are boys as well...”

	~~Looks~~ like the point is to welcome the new students.		Looked like the point was to welcome the new students.

	"Hmmm guess so," Saito nodded, while filling his mouth with grilled meat. With the sour taste of the fruit sauce, it was delicious.		"Hmmm guess so," Saito nodded, while filling his mouth with grilled meat. With the sour taste of the fruit sauce, it was delicious.

	Looking around, it ~~seems~~ not everybody was dinning elegantly with their table utensils. Some were hitting their plate with the fork, making a loud “''gacchagaccha''” noise, some were gulping down their soup with a “''zuzuzu''” noise, spilling it haphazardly.		Looking around, it seemed not everybody was dinning elegantly with their table utensils. Some were hitting their plate with the fork, making a loud “''gacchagaccha''” noise, some were gulping down their soup with a “''zuzuzu''” noise, spilling it haphazardly.

	''Although Louise and the other girls ate quietly with polite table manners, Guiche and the other boys' way of eating was terrible.''		''Although Louise and the other girls ate quietly with polite table manners, Guiche and the other boys' way of eating was terrible.''
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	Assuming that it was neither a dragon nor a ship... could it be a magical item like those gargoyles??		Assuming that it was neither a dragon nor a ship... could it be a magical item like those gargoyles??

	Since there were no further details about that thing, ~~there’s~~ no point dwelling on it... at any rate, they can't afford to be negligent. Those guys Saito and the rest met in Albion, who had animosity towards them, were neither Fouquet or Wardes nor Reconquista. Their true motives were still unknown. Were they from a particular country, group or something else... Saito couldn’t tell. They were a creepy bunch.		Since there were no further details about that thing, there was no point dwelling on it... at any rate, they can't afford to be negligent. Those guys Saito and the rest met in Albion, who had animosity towards them, were neither Fouquet or Wardes nor Reconquista. Their true motives were still unknown. Were they from a particular country, group or something else... Saito couldn’t tell. They were a creepy bunch.

	Henrietta had investigated it... but they did not acquire any new information, and no new word of them came thus far.		Henrietta had investigated it... but they did not acquire any new information, and no new word of them came thus far.
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	“Huh? When did she come back?” Guiche whispered.		“Huh? When did she come back?” Guiche whispered.

	Indeed, she ~~should of~~ went with Kirche to Germania together.		Indeed, she went with Kirche to Germania together.

	“Looks like she came back two or three days ago.”		“Looks like she came back two or three days ago.”
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	“Isn't it fine? If that's the case, we can also change it to “Beings that live at the Academy of Magic” instead. It's decided now. That's it. I decided it.”		“Isn't it fine? If that's the case, we can also change it to “Beings that live at the Academy of Magic” instead. It's decided now. That's it. I decided it.”

	Reynald declared arrogantly. Not matching his obedient and quiet-looking appearance, ~~looks like~~ he had a really forceful character. Evidently, he intended to persuade the Commanding Officer and the Assistant Commanding Officer to let him shoulder the practical business of the knight corps.		Reynald declared arrogantly. Not matching his obedient and quiet-looking appearance, he had a really forceful character. Evidently, he intended to persuade the Commanding Officer and the Assistant Commanding Officer to let him shoulder the practical business of the knight corps.

	“Is it okay? After all, both of you have no interest whatsoever in “administration” and “reputation”. For the continuation of the knight corps, above everything else, these two things are indispensable. I think that if the knight corps follow my own way, we would not be called fools in the palace. If you have a better plan, tell me.”		“Is it okay? After all, both of you have no interest whatsoever in “administration” and “reputation”. For the continuation of the knight corps, above everything else, these two things are indispensable. I think that if the knight corps follow my own way, we would not be called fools in the palace. If you have a better plan, tell me.”
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	“Yo, Tabitha...”		“Yo, Tabitha...”

	Saito was fairly bad at dealing with this blue-haired girl. At any rate, when it ~~comes~~ to this girl, she neither ~~chatters~~, nor ~~responds~~, she ~~has~~ a somewhat unfriendly atmosphere.		Saito was fairly bad at dealing with this blue-haired girl. At any rate, when it came to this girl, she neither chattered, nor responded, she had a somewhat unfriendly atmosphere.

	Although Saito sat down, Tabitha still did not have any response.		Although Saito sat down, Tabitha still did not have any response.
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	“I am a Gallian.” Her answer had barely escaped her lips.		“I am a Gallian.” Her answer had barely escaped her lips.

	“Is there a problem ~~with been~~ a Gallian? If you like, we can offer you a honorary 'guest knight' status.”		“Is there a problem being a Gallian? If you like, we can offer you a honorary 'guest knight' status.”

	Reynald, who had been standing there unnoticed, said encouragingly.		Reynald, who had been standing there unnoticed, said encouragingly.
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	“We can negotiate the increase of annuity as well...”		“We can negotiate the increase of annuity as well...”

	Tabitha shook her head. The blue hair above her head shook alongside it. Saito remembered the dream he saw in Albion some time ago. During that time, he recalled those throbbing breasts... and her usually stern face, acting a little embarrassed. Upon closer look, Tabitha was a real beauty as well. ~~Its~~ just that... her icy facial expression had been concealing her charm.		Tabitha shook her head. The blue hair above her head shook alongside it. Saito remembered the dream he saw in Albion some time ago. During that time, he recalled those throbbing breasts... and her usually stern face, acting a little embarrassed. Upon closer look, Tabitha was a real beauty as well. It was just that... her icy facial expression had been concealing her charm.

	Watching her face closely.... ''Is there's nothing I can do?'' Saito thought.		Watching her face closely.... ''Is there nothing I can do?'' Saito thought.

	With a serious face, Saito said to Tabitha.		With a serious face, Saito said to Tabitha.
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	Looking puzzled, Tabitha tilted its head to one side, and ''bang!'' Emitting a sound, it cracked into half.		Looking puzzled, Tabitha tilted its head to one side, and ''bang!'' Emitting a sound, it cracked into half.

	Upon closer inspection... it was actually an elaborate model of a crow. A type of magical doll akin to a 'gargoyle'. Inside the cavity of the crow model where it cracked apart, ~~and~~ a letter was inserted.		Upon closer inspection... it was actually an elaborate model of a crow. A type of magical doll akin to a 'gargoyle'. Inside the cavity of the crow model where it cracked apart, a letter was inserted.

	She picked it up and browsed through it. Tabitha's eyebrows shifted slightly.		She picked it up and browsed through it. Tabitha's eyebrows shifted slightly.
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	Above the town which was glowing with lights, Tabitha jumped off from Sylphid. She recited a spell, and her body floated with Levitation, landing slowly.		Above the town which was glowing with lights, Tabitha jumped off from Sylphid. She recited a spell, and her body floated with Levitation, landing slowly.

	The place where she arrived was a street along which suspicious-looking bars and gambling dens lined - Chicton Street. The Drunkards and ladies in revealing clothing, who were walking along the street that night, saw Tabitha land from the sky. They ~~was~~ stunned for a moment, but then realizing that it was only a young child, the spectators suddenly had flippant smiles on their faces.		The place where she arrived was a street along which suspicious-looking bars and gambling dens lined - Chicton Street. The Drunkards and ladies in revealing clothing, who were walking along the street that night, saw Tabitha land from the sky. They were stunned for a moment, but then realizing that it was only a young child, the spectators suddenly had flippant smiles on their faces.

	Although she might have been a noble, the girl was still just a kid. Teasing words came out from the mouths of the drunkards, who became more and more rowdy.		Although she might have been a noble, the girl was still just a kid. Teasing words came out from the mouths of the drunkards, who became more and more rowdy.

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	“Oi Ryusto! What's wrong! I have to check out what that thing is!”		“Oi Ryusto! What's wrong! I have to check out what that thing is!”

	Despite Rene's desperate rebuke, with a purring ‘’Kyui’’, the wind dragon descended away from the object. Ryusto, who was still young, was evidently afraid of such a huge thing.		Despite Rene's desperate rebuke, with a purring ‘’Kyui’’ sound, the wind dragon descended away from the object. Ryusto, who was still young, was evidently afraid of such a huge thing.

	“How I miss Virkan who died in Albion!! Without being afraid, without even a command, he would just rush forward!!”		“How I miss Virkan who died in Albion!! Without being afraid, without even a command, he would just rush forward!!”
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	“Err... we’ve only recently been made into a knight corps... we want to borrow your power.”		“Err... we’ve only recently been made into a knight corps... we want to borrow your power.”

	Saito said~~, but~~ as expected, Tabitha did not respond.		Saito said.

			But as expected, Tabitha did not respond.

	“You're a Chevalier right? Couldn't you use that power for the sake of our Undine knights?”		“You're a Chevalier right? Couldn't you use that power for the sake of our Undine knights?”
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	“We can negotiate the increase of annuity as well...”		“We can negotiate the increase of annuity as well...”

	Tabitha shook her head. The blue hair above her head shook as well. Saito remembered the dream he saw in Albion some time ago. During that time, he recalled the throbbing breasts of this cold face, a little embarrassed. Upon a closer look, Tabitha was ~~really~~ a beauty as well. ~~Just~~ that... ~~the few layers of cold air covered Tabitha's~~ facial expression~~, thus~~ concealing her charm.		Tabitha shook her head. The blue hair above her head shook as well. Saito remembered the dream he saw in Albion some time ago. During that time, he recalled the throbbing breasts of this cold face, a little embarrassed. Upon closer look, Tabitha was a real beauty as well. Its just that... her icy facial expression had been concealing her charm.

	Watching her ~~expression~~.... ''Is there's nothing I can do?'' Saito thought.		Watching her face closely.... ''Is there's nothing I can do?'' Saito thought.

	With a serious face, Saito said to Tabitha.		With a serious face, Saito said to Tabitha.
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	“Sorry for being late. Friend of yours?”		“Sorry for being late. Friend of yours?”

	The latter half of her words were directed towards the tavern owner. From the ambiance of that lady, the tavern owner sensed that it would be better for him not to poke his head into their affairs, withdrew to the inside of the bar.		The latter half of her words were directed towards the tavern owner. From the ambiance of that lady, the tavern owner sensed that it would be better for him not to poke his head into their affairs, and withdrew to the inside of the bar.

	The lady in the thick robe looked at Tabitha.		The lady in the thick robe looked at Tabitha.
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	“Why?”		“Why?”

	''Why is she to receive her task in Tristain and not Gallia?'' That was her question.		''Why did she receive her task in Tristain and not Gallia?'' That was her question.

	“This country will be the setting of the mission this time.”		“This country will be the setting of the mission this time.”

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	“Oi Ryusto! What's wrong! I have to check out what that thing is!”		“Oi Ryusto! What's wrong! I have to check out what that thing is!”

	Despite Rene's desperate rebuke~~, ''Kyui''~~, with a ~~purr~~, the wind dragon descended away from the object. Ryusto, who was still young, was evidently afraid of such a huge thing.		Despite Rene's desperate rebuke, with a purring ‘’Kyui’’, the wind dragon descended away from the object. Ryusto, who was still young, was evidently afraid of such a huge thing.

	“How I miss Virkan who died in Albion!! Without being afraid, without even a command, he would just rush forward!!”		“How I miss Virkan who died in Albion!! Without being afraid, without even a command, he would just rush forward!!”
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	“That's enough!”		“That's enough!”

	“Sorry, sorry. Don't be angry like that. Don't you guys worry about that? The mysterious, enormous shadow ~~which had~~ appeared at the skies of Tristania!”		“Sorry, sorry. Don't be angry like that. Don't you guys worry about that? The mysterious, enormous shadow that appeared in the skies of Tristania?”

	~~“They had seen wrongly. A series~~ of ~~misrecognitions~~ during the night air patrol! ~~Information like~~ the naked ~~princess~~ flying in the sky~~. What is that? It~~'~~s be better for us to set out to investigate~~ it!”		“Look isn't that a mistake? Just a bunch of false positives during the night air patrol! If the information was about naked princesses flying in the sky then we'll definitely launch a proper investigation into it!”

	Guiche spoke in a foolish tone.		Guiche spoke in a foolish tone.
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	As this chatter continued, a spectacled lad opened his mouth.		As this chatter continued, a spectacled lad opened his mouth.

	“Hey, you guys. The ball or the mysterious shadow, whatever it is. Think more about the affairs of the ~~knight corps~~!”		“Hey, you guys. The ball or the mysterious shadow, whatever it is. Think more about the affairs of the Undine Knight Corps!”

	Saito sat down beside Guiche, and stared at that lad. It was definitely the chap from the class ~~beside~~ Reynald's. During Albion's military campaign, he apparently directed the wagon corps. Not discouraged during the chaos of their retreat, he had put that corps in order. Because of that, he was commended.		Saito sat down beside Guiche, and stared at that lad. It was definitely the chap from the next class called Reynald. During Albion's military campaign, he apparently directed the wagon corps. Not discouraged during the chaos of their retreat, he had put that corps in order. Because of that, he was commended.

	“Do you know ~~how~~ we are called in the palace? ~~“Student Knights Thingy”~~! My uncle who is serving in the palace heard a rumor, something like we had made her majesty disappointed and worried.”		“Do you know what we are called in the palace? “Students playing as Knights”! My uncle, who is serving in the palace, heard a rumor today; something like we had made her majesty disappointed and worried.”

	All the members present there displayed affronted-looking faces.		All the members present there displayed affronted-looking faces.

	~~“What? Although we might not~~ have ~~contributed many valorous deeds~~, ~~hadn't~~ the Imperial Guard ~~corps already been specially promoted?~~ Compared to the great ~~warriors~~ of ~~the past~~, ~~it can't be helped that we are known as “Child's Play”~~. ~~But~~ we ~~have no reason to accept it just~~ like that~~. For this reason~~, we want you to think ~~consider~~ this seriously~~, Guiche, Saito!~~”		“We have given some distinguished military service, but that level of success is expected from the Imperial Guard. Compared to the great Knight Corps of old, we’re like "children playing around" they said. There’s no way we can settle for something like that! Therefore, Guiche, Saito, we want you to think about this matter seriously.”

	Guiche and Saito exchanged glances.		Guiche and Saito exchanged glances.
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	“Your thoughts might be correct, b-but, what should we do?”		“Your thoughts might be correct, b-but, what should we do?”

	“We want you to ~~empower~~ our battle ~~arrays~~. Presently, isn't Saito the only Chevalier?”		“We want you to power up our battle lineup. Presently, isn't Saito the only Chevalier?”

	“Although you say that, Chevalier isn't a title you can receive just like that...”		“Although you say that, Chevalier isn't a title you can receive just like that...”
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	Guiche stamped his feet on the ground in frustration.		Guiche stamped his feet on the ground in frustration.

	“Well, don't take it personally. She's probably very busy with other things to do~~, I think..~~.”		“Well, don't take it personally. She's probably very busy with other things to do.”

	Saito tried to cheer up the angry Guiche.		Saito tried to cheer up the angry Guiche.