Zero no Tsukaima:Volume9 Chapter8 - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 06:39, 3 November 2015

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	Siesta and Louise glanced at each other.		Siesta and Louise glanced at each other.

	''Huh—it looked like they were plotting something.’’		''Huh—it looked like they were plotting something.''

	''Women sure are so superficial…'' Saito thought. ''The war had only ended not long ago, and already they are engrossed in something like a ball. Shouldn’t they be more concerned about contributing to society or something?''		''Women sure are so superficial…'' Saito thought. ''The war had only ended not long ago, and already they are engrossed in something like a ball. Shouldn’t they be more concerned about contributing to society or something?''
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	''Saito should be able to find me, right?'' Louise sighed to herself.		''Saito should be able to find me, right?'' Louise sighed to herself.

	''I think he should be able to recognize me. After all, I took on Cattleya’s appearance.’’		''I think he should be able to recognize me. After all, I took on Cattleya’s appearance.''

	Seeing that all the students were more or less present, Headmaster Osman walked onto the platform.		Seeing that all the students were more or less present, Headmaster Osman walked onto the platform.
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	When Saito ~~had~~ arrived at the assembly hall, the ball had already started. It was because he had to take care<!---missing word---> of his horse that he was late. He had experienced how difficult it was to feed an animal, and wasted no short amount of time doing so.		When Saito arrived at the assembly hall, the ball had already started. It was because he had to take care<!---missing word---> of his horse that he was late. He had experienced how difficult it was to feed an animal, and wasted no short amount of time doing so.

	As he walked past the curtain at the entrance, he didn't notice the mirror within it. Rather, it would be more accurate to say that he was completely unaware that the mirror had something to do with the disguises.		As he walked past the curtain at the entrance, he didn't notice the mirror within it. Rather, it would be more accurate to say that he was completely unaware that the mirror had something to do with the disguises.
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	''I’ll let you finish what you started that night back in Albion.''		''I’ll let you finish what you started that night back in Albion.''

	They were such ~~moving words…~~		They were such disastrous words. ''For her to actually say this, I have to punish her accordingly...D-damn it.'' Saito searched for Louise frantically, his mind boiling.

	''To actually say ~~such a thing… if~~ I ~~were~~ to ~~not find~~ her ~~after that…~~'' ~~Without any time to waste,~~ Saito ~~frantically~~ searched for Louise.

	However, she was nowhere to be seen.		However, she was nowhere to be seen.

	''Since it’s a masquerade ball, maybe she put on a mask? That's what I would think, except there isn’t a single person here who's wearing one. And, there isn't anyone I recognize in the crowd, apart from the few students mingled within.'' Everywhere ~~you~~ looked, there were seemingly important people dancing and conversing.		''Since it’s a masquerade ball, maybe she put on a mask? That's what I would think, except there isn’t a single person here who's wearing one. And, there isn't anyone I recognize in the crowd, apart from the few students mingled within.'' Everywhere he looked, there were seemingly important people dancing and conversing.

	Saito finally found Louise standing next to a wall and enthusiastically ran towards her.		Saito finally found Louise standing next to a wall and enthusiastically ran towards her.
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	Louise looked up at Saito, her eyes glistening. Such an expression seemed to stop his heart, drawing his breath away...		Louise looked up at Saito, her eyes glistening. Such an expression seemed to stop his heart, drawing his breath away...

	~~And, passionately wishing to place~~ his lips ~~upon hers, Saito tightly embraced~~ Louise in his arms; Louise ~~leaned her body against his~~.		Saito could not stop himself from planting his lips onto Louise's lips.

			He then pulled her into his arms, tightly embracing her, while Louise simply surrendered herself to him meekly.

	~~It was~~ like ~~this~~ that Louise was ~~pressed against~~ the ~~wall~~ of the ~~veranda~~.		Just like that......Louise was pushed to the corner of the wall.

	''Although there was no one else on the veranda, if someone were to see this, it would become quite troublesome.''		''Although there was no one else on the veranda, if someone were to see this, it would become quite troublesome.''
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	''Actually it was… huge!''		''Actually it was… huge!''

	The full, soft and warm mound shifted and moved under Saito’s palm. And each time he grasped it, Louise would pant ~~ever~~ louder…		The full, soft and warm mound shifted and moved under Saito’s palm. And each time he grasped it, Louise would pant even louder…

	“When did it become…”		“When did it become…”
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	Saito nodded. That night, they actually pressed their lips together twice. Even now, his heart would race when he recalled it.		Saito nodded. That night, they actually pressed their lips together twice. Even now, his heart would race when he recalled it.

	“Ever since that evening… every time I think of you, my heart aches. The heartache steadily grew deeper and deeper… ~~by the time~~ I noticed it, ~~it had already grown to the point~~ I ~~could not worry about it…~~ It was always lingering in my heart… I didn't know what to do about it anymore.”		“Ever since that evening… every time I think of you, my heart aches. The heartache steadily grew deeper and deeper… I don't know when I've noticed it, but I felt peaceful while I'm in such pain… It was always lingering in my heart… I didn't know what to do about it anymore.”

	“…”		“…”
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	What Louise couldn’t forgive the most was, ''The promise he made to me, the time we spent together, that sweet kiss… the things I had always trusted completely… were all lies he had made to me.''		What Louise couldn’t forgive the most was, ''The promise he made to me, the time we spent together, that sweet kiss… the things I had always trusted completely… were all lies he had made to me.''

	''The things I most valued in my heart; the memories I most ~~treasure~~ in my heart… were nothing more than lies.''		''The things I most valued in my heart; the memories I most treasured in my heart… were nothing more than lies.''

	''And the one to do this wasn’t just anybody… but Henrietta, the person I had always held in the highest regard.''		''And the one to do this wasn’t just anybody… but Henrietta, the person I had always held in the highest regard.''

Iro Daijoubu: Undo revision 456687 by Joegargery (talk)

2015-08-10T03:03:13Z

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Joegargery: Reverted edits by Iro Daijoubu (talk) to last revision by Zeth

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Iro Daijoubu: /* Chapter Eight: The Ball of Sleipnir */ Fixin capitols and problem lines

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Zeth: /* Chapter Eight: The Ball of Sleipnir */

2012-04-14T05:01:27Z

Chapter Eight: The Ball of Sleipnir

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	"What the hell?!"		"What the hell?!"
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	"Did the Mirror of Truth’s magic backfire?"		"Did the Mirror of Truth’s magic backfire?"

Ephyon at 04:48, 22 July 2009

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Akirasav: clarity

2009-06-03T17:36:24Z

clarity

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Kumichael at 03:06, 6 January 2009

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	“Yeah, yeah.”		“Yeah, yeah.”

	Saito replied idly, regarding Guiche as something that was little more than the breeze of the wind. Sitting opposite him was Malicorne, hugging himself.		Saito replied idly, regarding Guiche as something that was little more than the breeze of the wind. Sitting opposite him was Malicorne, who was hugging himself. <!-- is... is this a guy?... whatever... -->

	“What should I do... If it remains like this, it looks like I'm going to have to become a beautiful girl."		“What should I do... If it remains like this, it looks like I'm going to have to become a beautiful girl."
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	''Siesta can read as well'', Saito thought.		''Siesta can read as well'', Saito thought.

	“Oh, I forgot Saito ~~couldn~~'t read."		“Oh, I forgot Saito can't read."

	Siesta blushed as she explained the story to Saito.		Siesta blushed as she explained the story to Saito.

	“The name of the book is ‘Housemaid’s ~~Afternoon’~~.”		“The name of the book is ‘Housemaid’s Afternoon.'”

	“Uh huh.”		“Uh huh.”
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	''So, this is the stuff Siesta and the maids read in their spare time... But, then again, the girl magazines in my world are pretty risque as well...''		''So, this is the stuff Siesta and the maids read in their spare time... But, then again, the girl magazines in my world are pretty risque as well...''

	Saito accepted with his strange justification.		Saito accepted this with his strange justification.

	“Well...?”		“Well...?”

JackBassV: /* Chapter Eight: The Ball of Sleipnir */

2009-01-04T18:31:16Z

Chapter Eight: The Ball of Sleipnir

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	“Noblemen and Noble ladies, tonight I will guide you into a world of fantasy.”		“Noblemen and Noble ladies, tonight I will guide you into a world of fantasy.”

	She enthusiastically ~~introduced~~ to the line of students. Louise, who was also in the queue, was pondering who to transform into.		She enthusiastically announced<!-she is making an announcement, not an introduction--> to the line of students. Louise, who was also in the queue, was pondering who to transform into.

	Doubt began to creep into her mind.		Doubt began to creep into her mind.
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	When Saito had arrived at the assembly hall, the ball had already started. It was because he had to take of his horse that he was late. He had experienced how difficult it was to feed an animal, and wasted no short amount of time doing so.		When Saito had arrived at the assembly hall, the ball had already started. It was because he had to take care<!-missing word--> of his horse that he was late. He had experienced how difficult it was to feed an animal, and wasted no short amount of time doing so.

	As he walked past the curtain at the entrance, he didn't notice the mirror within it. Rather, it would be more accurate to say that he was completely unaware that the mirror had something to do with the disguises.		As he walked past the curtain at the entrance, he didn't notice the mirror within it. Rather, it would be more accurate to say that he was completely unaware that the mirror had something to do with the disguises.

Vaelis at 20:22, 30 December 2008

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	Running till she was out of breath, Louise kneeled and collapsed onto the ground, her face covered by the ground and tears flowing down her cheeks…		Running till she was out of breath, Louise kneeled and collapsed onto the ground, her face covered by the ground and tears flowing down her cheeks…

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