Zero no Tsukaima:Volume9 Chapter9 - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 06:11, 8 November 2015

2015-11-08T06:11:22Z

Iro Daijoubu: /* Chapter Nine: Confrontation with the Mysterious Bird */ rewrite9g

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Chapter Nine: Confrontation with the Mysterious Bird: rewrite9g

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	Louise struggled for a while, but eventually and with a muffled "''ngu...''", she stopped resisting and became quiet.		Louise struggled for a while, but eventually and with a muffled "''ngu...''", she stopped resisting and became quiet.

	''But if we continue dropping like this we'll still die...'' While he was thinking ~~about~~ that, ''"Buon!"'' A sound was heard, and Tabitha's Sylphid scooped them up with its wings.		''But if we continue dropping like this we'll still die...''

			While he was thinking that, ''"Buon!"'' A sound was heard, and Tabitha's Sylphid scooped them up with its wings.

	Relieved and hugging the still weeping Louise, Saito looked up to the sky...		Relieved and hugging the still weeping Louise, Saito looked up to the sky...

	Under the moonlight, flying ~~magnificently~~ in the sky, the ''Ostrant'' on which Colbert and Kirche were riding could be seen.		Under the moonlight, flying regally in the sky, the ''Ostrant'' on which Colbert and Kirche were riding could be seen.

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Iro Daijoubu: /* Chapter Nine: Confrontation with the Mysterious Bird */ rewrite9f

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	Compared to the flock of gargoyles and the one carrying Louise, this was about 50 times bigger. Apparently, it was an ultra big gargoyle...		Compared to the flock of gargoyles and the one carrying Louise, this was about 50 times bigger. Apparently, it was an ultra big gargoyle...
	<!---Text actually says 5 times bigger... but I'll leave it unchanged, as 50x sounds more better. --->		<!--- Text actually says 5 times* bigger... but I'll leave it unchanged, as 50x sounds more better. --->
			<!--- * - it is comparing the "huge" gargoyle that's carrying Louise --->

	It was unreasonable to even think about going against such an opponent.		It was unreasonable to even think about going against such an opponent.

Iro Daijoubu: /* Chapter Nine: Confrontation with the Mysterious Bird */ rewrite9e

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	“Release me!”		“Release me!”
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	Louise began to struggle.		Louise began to struggle.

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	“I don't care! That's enough, let go of me! I hate you Saito!! Just die! I hate you and Princess the most!! Both of you lied to me together! Absolutely unforgivable!!”		“I don't care! That's enough, let go of me! I hate you Saito!! Just die! I hate you and Princess the most!! Both of you lied to me together! Absolutely unforgivable!!”
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	“That's just the way it turned out. Really, i-i-its like a misunderstanding...”		“That's just the way it turned out. Really, i-i-its like a misunderstanding...”

Iro Daijoubu: /* Chapter Nine: Confrontation with the Mysterious Bird */ rewrite9d

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	This knight, who was once celebrated as a Chevalier, was quite embarrassed.		This knight, who was once celebrated as a Chevalier, was quite embarrassed.
	<!---Better than the prev translation. But still not 100% about this line, Japanese original: ~~??????????????????????????~~ --->		<!---Better than the prev translation. But still not 100% about this line, Japanese original: 騎士だシュヴァリエだと浮かれていた自分が恥ずかしい --->

	At that moment... Tabitha informed Saito softly,		At that moment... Tabitha informed Saito softly,
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	“Release me!”		“Release me!”
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	Louise began to struggle.		Louise began to struggle.

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	“That's just the way it turned out. Really, i-i-its like a misunderstanding...”		“That's just the way it turned out. Really, i-i-its like a misunderstanding...”
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	Even though Saito tried frantically to sooth her, Louise was still bawling and struggling with her hands. Perhaps she would be accidentally released		Even though Saito tried frantically to sooth her, Louise was still bawling and struggling with her hands. Perhaps she would be accidentally released
	like this. It would be terrible if they were to separate in the air.		like this. It would be terrible if they were to separate in the air.

Iro Daijoubu: /* Chapter Nine: Confrontation with the Mysterious Bird */ rewrite9c

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	“That's just the way it turned out. Really, i-i-its like a misunderstanding...”		“That's just the way it turned out. Really, i-i-its like a misunderstanding...”
			[[Image:ZnT09-245.jpg\|thumb]]
	Even though Saito tried frantically to sooth her, Louise was still bawling and struggling with her hands. Perhaps she would be accidentally released		Even though Saito tried frantically to sooth her, Louise was still bawling and struggling with her hands. Perhaps she would be accidentally released
	like this. It would be terrible if they were to separate in the air.		like this. It would be terrible if they were to separate in the air.
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	''There is no other way. Damn, if things keep continuing like this...''		''There is no other way. Damn, if things keep continuing like this...''
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	Saito hugged the raging Louise tightly. Louise was kicking and struggling, nevertheless he pressed his lips hard against hers.		Saito hugged the raging Louise tightly. Louise was kicking and struggling, nevertheless he pressed his lips hard against hers.

Iro Daijoubu: Undo revision 457267 by Iro Daijoubu (talk)

2015-08-13T09:30:48Z

Undo revision 457267 by Iro Daijoubu (talk)

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	Louise struggled for a while, but eventually and with a muffled "''ngu...''", she stopped resisting and became quiet.		Louise struggled for a while, but eventually and with a muffled "''ngu...''", she stopped resisting and became quiet.

	''But if we continue dropping like this we'll still die...'' While he was thinking about that, "''Buon!''" A sound was heard, and Tabitha's Sylphid scooped them up with its wings.		''But if we continue dropping like this we'll still die...'' While he was thinking about that, ''"Buon!"'' A sound was heard, and Tabitha's Sylphid scooped them up with its wings.

	Relieved and hugging the still weeping Louise, Saito looked up to the sky...		Relieved and hugging the still weeping Louise, Saito looked up to the sky...

Iro Daijoubu: /* Chapter Nine: Confrontation with the Mysterious Bird */ rewrite9b

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	Louise struggled for a while, but eventually and with a muffled "''ngu...''", she stopped resisting and became quiet.		Louise struggled for a while, but eventually and with a muffled "''ngu...''", she stopped resisting and became quiet.

	''But if we continue dropping like this we'll still die...'' While he was thinking about that, ''"Buon!"'' A sound was heard, and Tabitha's Sylphid scooped them up with its wings.		''But if we continue dropping like this we'll still die...'' While he was thinking about that, "''Buon!''" A sound was heard, and Tabitha's Sylphid scooped them up with its wings.

	Relieved and hugging the still weeping Louise, Saito looked up to the sky...		Relieved and hugging the still weeping Louise, Saito looked up to the sky...

Iro Daijoubu: /* Chapter Nine: Confrontation with the Mysterious Bird */ rewrite9a

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	===Chapter Nine: Confrontation with the Mysterious Bird===		===Chapter Nine: Confrontation with the Mysterious Bird===

	Saito exited the main tower and immediately went to Louise's room to find her. However, she had not come back. "~~Oh no, what~~ if I can't find Louise..." That was the only thing on his mind.		Saito exited the main tower and immediately went to Louise's room to find her. However, she had not come back. "What if I can't find Louise..." That was the only thing on his mind.

	He had never seen Louise so sad before.		He had never seen Louise so sad before.
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	“Closer.”		“Closer.”

	''Kyui'', at that moment when Sylphid purred...		"''Kyui''", at that moment when Sylphid purred...

	In the sky, small black dots started to gradually appear.		In the sky, small black dots started to gradually appear.

Iro Daijoubu: /* Chapter Nine: Confrontation with the Mysterious Bird */ rewrite9

2015-08-13T09:17:38Z

Chapter Nine: Confrontation with the Mysterious Bird: rewrite9

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