Editing Horizon:Kimitoasamade 1B Chapter 8

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The container moving up the towing belt ring had railings on the top because those transport containers were also used to view the Musashi.
 
The container moving up the towing belt ring had railings on the top because those transport containers were also used to view the Musashi.
   
Asama and Mitotsudaira fell to all fours and gasped for breath atop one.
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Asama and Mitotsudaira feel to all fours and gasped for breath atop one.
   
 
But the idiot sister was not even out of breath as she spun around behind them while holding a new charm stick like a smoke bomb.
 
But the idiot sister was not even out of breath as she spun around behind them while holding a new charm stick like a smoke bomb.
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She decided there was no point in risking a violation of her substitutions.
 
She decided there was no point in risking a violation of her substitutions.
   
“I’ve been thinking…a bit…about some lyrics.”
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“I’ve thinking…a bit…about some lyrics.”
   
 
She meant the night before.
 
She meant the night before.

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