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It was a great hall. The red line of a carpet ran across a floor of white stone.
 
It was a great hall. The red line of a carpet ran across a floor of white stone.
   
A single figure was in the center of that red carpet that bisected the round hall.
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A single figure stood in the center of that red carpet that bisected the round hall.
   
 
It was a girl. She wore a vermilion uniform and sat with her legs underneath her. She did not have human arms from the shoulder on. Instead, she had giant metal arms. They occasionally made small noises as she placed her fists on the carpet as if to support herself.
 
It was a girl. She wore a vermilion uniform and sat with her legs underneath her. She did not have human arms from the shoulder on. Instead, she had giant metal arms. They occasionally made small noises as she placed her fists on the carpet as if to support herself.
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That decorated door suddenly opened inward. At the same time, a female student acting as a lady-in-waiting spoke up.
 
That decorated door suddenly opened inward. At the same time, a female student acting as a lady-in-waiting spoke up.
   
“Vice president and treasurer of Alcalá de Henares’s Student Council, Lady Juana, has arrived!”
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“Vice president and treasurer of Alcalá de Henares’s student council, Lady Juana, has arrived!”
   
 
The door opened without a single creak. The only sound was the movement of air. Someone walked out into the center of the hall through that door.
 
The door opened without a single creak. The only sound was the movement of air. Someone walked out into the center of the hall through that door.
   
This person was a woman who nodded in thanks to the girls who opened the double doors from either side and then passed through. She was tall and wore a vermilion uniform. Her name was Juana and the guard-covered ears that proved she was of the long-lived race shook a bit as she walked. She walked with long strides that made her black hair flow behind her and the sharp eyes behind her black glasses looked toward the girl on the floor.
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This person was a woman who nodded in thanks to the girls who opened the double door from either side and then passed through. She was tall and wore a vermilion uniform. Her name was Juana and the guard-covered ears that proved she was of the long-lived race shook a bit as she walked. She walked with long strides that made her black hair flow behind her and the sharp eyes behind her black glasses looked toward the girl on the floor.
   
 
“Tachibana Gin,” said Juana after stopping a few steps in front of her. “You understand why you were called here as soon as you returned from Mikawa, do you not?”
 
“Tachibana Gin,” said Juana after stopping a few steps in front of her. “You understand why you were called here as soon as you returned from Mikawa, do you not?”
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“Testament,” replied Gin while still hanging her head down.
 
“Testament,” replied Gin while still hanging her head down.
   
Juana immediately said, “Alcalá de Henares’s officers and Student Council have decided to revoke one inherited name of the 1st special duty officer who has inherited the name Garcia de Ceballos and Tachibana Muneshige. The latter shall be revoked.”
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Juana immediately said, “Alcalá de Henares’s officers and student council have decided to revoke one inherited name of the 1st special duty officer who has inherited the name Garcia de Ceballos and Tachibana Muneshige. The latter shall be revoked.”
   
 
In other words…
 
In other words…
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He would no longer be Muneshige. The reason for that was obvious.
 
He would no longer be Muneshige. The reason for that was obvious.
   
He held the name of the warrior known as the Peerless in the West, yet he had lost and his Logismoi Òplo had been taken.
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He held the name of the warrior known as the Peerless in the West, yet he had lost and his Logismoi Oplo had been taken.
   
 
They of course had their responsibility as a major Testament Union nation which possessed a Testament, but Tres España also supported its economy with investments from other countries. Anything that made them look weak would make others hesitant to invest. By stripping Muneshige of his inherited name and giving it to someone else, they were saying this had been Muneshige’s mistake and not theirs.
 
They of course had their responsibility as a major Testament Union nation which possessed a Testament, but Tres España also supported its economy with investments from other countries. Anything that made them look weak would make others hesitant to invest. By stripping Muneshige of his inherited name and giving it to someone else, they were saying this had been Muneshige’s mistake and not theirs.
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“That does not require you to fight, does it?”
 
“That does not require you to fight, does it?”
   
“I see you do not deny we will attack Musashi. Do the officers and Student Council see something in Musashi regarding the approaching battle against England?”
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“I see you do not deny we will attack Musashi. Do the officers and student council see something in Musashi regarding the approaching battle against England?”
   
 
Once she finished speaking, Gin listened. She heard Juana send a small laugh to the floor.
 
Once she finished speaking, Gin listened. She heard Juana send a small laugh to the floor.
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And so Gin continued speaking.
 
And so Gin continued speaking.
   
“I would like permission to join the ranks of those taking revenge on Musashi and reclaiming the Logismoi Òplo.”
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“I would like permission to join the ranks of those taking revenge on Musashi and reclaiming the Logismoi Oplo.”
   
 
“But you are weaker than Tachibana Muneshige, are you not?”
 
“But you are weaker than Tachibana Muneshige, are you not?”
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“Chehh,” pouted Takakane as Fusae looked down at the papers held in her light board.
 
“Chehh,” pouted Takakane as Fusae looked down at the papers held in her light board.
   
“First, P.A.Oda has finished its attack on Asai. With this adjustment within their territory, it is thought their external activities will grow more intense from now on.”
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“First, P.A.ODA has finished its attack on Asai. With this adjustment within their territory, it is thought their external activities will grow more intense from now on.”
   
“If P.A.Oda has secured a foothold, the neighboring Qing-Takeda should be under a lot more tension. Not to mention Hexagone Française who also have M.H.R.R. in Hashiba to worry about,” said Juana.
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“If P.A.ODA has secured a foothold, the neighboring Qing-Takeda should be under a lot more tension. Not to mention Hexagone Française who also have M.H.R.R. in Hashiba to worry about,” said Juana.
   
 
Gin nodded.
 
Gin nodded.
   
“During our return, the Papa-Schola said Musashi is a ‘going’ threat and P.A.Oda is a ‘coming’ threat.”
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“During our return, the Papa-Schola said Musashi is a ‘going’ threat and P.A.ODA is a ‘coming’ threat.”
   
 
“He was telling us to be careful, but also admonishing himself. K.P.A. Italia borders M.H.R.R. just like Hexagone Française. And as a Catholic nation, we are not completely unconnected to K.P.A. Italia.”
 
“He was telling us to be careful, but also admonishing himself. K.P.A. Italia borders M.H.R.R. just like Hexagone Française. And as a Catholic nation, we are not completely unconnected to K.P.A. Italia.”
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“And the other news?” asked Juana.
 
“And the other news?” asked Juana.
   
“Testament. It seems Musashi has been detected in the sky to the west. They have likely lessened their stealth mode in preparation to placing a course marker. Most likely they are performing the marker checks so the Testament Union can’t take advantage of it, and otherwise remaining in stealth mode except when in port. That seems to be why they have been moving so slowly.”
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“Testament. It seems Musashi has been detected in the sky to the west. They have likely lessened their stealth mode in preparation to place the course marker. Most likely, they are performing the marker check so the Testament Union can’t take advantage of it and remaining in stealth mode except when at port. That seems to be why they have been moving so slowly.”
   
 
Gin lightly clenched her back teeth when she heard the word “Musashi”. Juana nodded and took a breath.
 
Gin lightly clenched her back teeth when she heard the word “Musashi”. Juana nodded and took a breath.
   
“We need to contact the chancellor and Student Council president.”
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“We need to contact the chancellor and student council president.”
   
 
“Tes,” replied everyone else, but Juana frowned.
 
“Tes,” replied everyone else, but Juana frowned.
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Gin, Takakane, Fusae, and the Valdés siblings pointed behind Juana.
 
Gin, Takakane, Fusae, and the Valdés siblings pointed behind Juana.
   
As Juana turned around, Gin could see the middle-aged man in worn-out clothes mopping the passageway beyond the large ornamented door.
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As Juana turned around, Gin could see a middle-aged man in worn-out clothes mopping the passageway beyond the large ornamented door.
   
 
A few seconds after Juana saw the man bending over and polishing the floor, her ears stood up.
 
A few seconds after Juana saw the man bending over and polishing the floor, her ears stood up.
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Juana quickly and loudly walked over with long strides.
 
Juana quickly and loudly walked over with long strides.
   
“What do you think you are doing!? Tres España is in a crisis and you are the chancellor, the Student Council president, and Felipe Segundo!”
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“What do you think you are doing!? Tres España is in a crisis and you are the chancellor, the student council president, and Felipe Segundo!”
   
 
“Y-yeah, but you seemed to be handling all the work pretty well, Juana-kun. This is really all I can do…”
 
“Y-yeah, but you seemed to be handling all the work pretty well, Juana-kun. This is really all I can do…”

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