Editing Horizon:Volume 3B Chapter 53

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“A king needs a lot of help to fulfill dreams. So if you’re having trouble, try asking the people closer to you instead of me.”
 
“A king needs a lot of help to fulfill dreams. So if you’re having trouble, try asking the people closer to you instead of me.”
   
“Really? By they’re horrible people, so when I say ‘Hey! Can I ask something!?’, they give me this look of scorn, keep their distance, and say ‘Can you keep it to five words or less?’ or ‘I’m too busy with my manuscript’ or ‘How much will you pay me?’ or ‘What did you do this time? Let’s start with that.’ ”
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“Really? By they’re horrible people, so when I say ‘Hey! Can I ask something!?’, they give me this look of scorn, keep their distance, and say ‘Can you keep it to five words or left?’ or ‘I’m too busy with my manuscript’ or ‘How much will you pay me?’ or ‘What did you do this time? Let’s start with that.’ ”
   
 
However, there was one thing she could say.
 
However, there was one thing she could say.
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“Heh heh. They’re overprotective of you, aren’t they?”
 
“Heh heh. They’re overprotective of you, aren’t they?”
   
“Hmm,” he thought about that. “I won’t tell them because it would make their heads swell, but I am thankful… I guess. Anyway, what are we going to do today? Aren’t things about to get a lot more fun? I mean, look.”
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“Hmm,” he thought about that. “I won’t tell them because it would make their heads swell, but I am thankful…I guess. Anyway, what are we going to do today? Aren’t things about to get a lot more fun? I mean, look.”
   
 
He pointed toward the front door, indicating something she had vaguely noticed as well.
 
He pointed toward the front door, indicating something she had vaguely noticed as well.

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