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'''Me:''' "I can see why Mary was confused."
 
'''Me:''' "I can see why Mary was confused."
   
'''Novice:''' "Yes, you do sometimes see people who try to simplify things with precise terminology and end up tripping over it."
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'''Novice:''' "Yes, you do sometimes see people who try to simplify things with precise terminology and up tripping over it."
   
 
'''Mal-Ga:''' "Huh? I take it you've been looking in the mirror then?"
 
'''Mal-Ga:''' "Huh? I take it you've been looking in the mirror then?"
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'''Novice:''' "No. You didn't understand me? I was talking about people who rejoice in using obscure and confusing language."
 
'''Novice:''' "No. You didn't understand me? I was talking about people who rejoice in using obscure and confusing language."
   
'''Four Eyes:''' "Yes, I know exactly what you mean. Just take a look at this book I bought at the last event: 'The black shade strength became a dark force and clouded the shadow man's mind with a grim power, drawing out his latent potential.' Wouldn't 'the shadow man became pathetic' work just as well? Right? Is there something wrong with your brain?"
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'''Four Eyes:''' "Yes, I know exactly what you mean. Just take a look at this book I bought at the last even: 'The black shade strength became a dark force and clouded the shadow man's mind with a grim power, drawing out his latent potential.' Wouldn't 'the shadow man became pathetic' work just as well? Right? Is there something wrong with your brain?"
   
 
'''Novice:''' "It was meant to represent his fall into darkness! Can't you just admit it sounds cool!?"
 
'''Novice:''' "It was meant to represent his fall into darkness! Can't you just admit it sounds cool!?"

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