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“''Ah, I can open this room. Rather, the only ones who can’t open this room are other Cadet Guards and Regular Guards; Elite Guards that hold the rank of Captain or higher can unlock it just like that.''“
 
“''Ah, I can open this room. Rather, the only ones who can’t open this room are other Cadet Guards and Regular Guards; Elite Guards that hold the rank of Captain or higher can unlock it just like that.''“
   
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{{furigana|Machine crystal|Ilis}} smoothly continued Monica’s words.
 
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{{furigana|machine crystal|Ilis}} smoothly continued Monica’s words.
   
 
But upon hearing that, Vaiel’s smile became even more relaxed.
 
But upon hearing that, Vaiel’s smile became even more relaxed.
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“Now that you mention it, that might be the case.”
 
“Now that you mention it, that might be the case.”
   
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{{furigana|Machine crystal|Ilis}} blinked and Sheltis ended up agreeing without thinking.
 
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{{furigana|machine crystal|Ilis}} blinked and Sheltis ended up agreeing without thinking.
   
 
“But you know, Vaiel. If by chance a superior──”
 
“But you know, Vaiel. If by chance a superior──”
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“''Ehhhhh!? No, no, no, let’s go somewheeere?''“
 
“''Ehhhhh!? No, no, no, let’s go somewheeere?''“
   
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Putting aside
Putting aside {{furigana|machine crystal|Ilis}} who was blinking in protest.
 
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{{furigana|machine crystal|Ilis}} who was blinking in protest.
   
 
……I’m also interested in Ymy.
 
……I’m also interested in Ymy.
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“Then so will I……”
 
“Then so will I……”
   
Vaiel left the meeting room quickly. Just before Sheltis followed after him, {{furigana|machine crystal|Ilis}} flashed as if remembering something.
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Vaiel left the meeting room quickly. Just before Sheltis followed after him,
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{{furigana|machine crystal|Ilis}} flashed as if remembering something.
   
 
“''Come to think of it, Sheltis, there was something this morning.''“
 
“''Come to think of it, Sheltis, there was something this morning.''“
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“''Isn’t that fine since you’re already on break tomorrow anyway? Rather than that……''“
 
“''Isn’t that fine since you’re already on break tomorrow anyway? Rather than that……''“
   
{{furigana|Machine crystal|Ilis}}’ voice that had a suppressed laugh mixed into it quieted down a notch.
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{{furigana|machine crystal|Ilis}}’ voice that had a suppressed laugh mixed into it quieted down a notch.
   
 
“''It looks like there’s one other message from someone.''“
 
“''It looks like there’s one other message from someone.''“
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“''……I just thought about how you can think like that.''“
 
“''……I just thought about how you can think like that.''“
   
There was a ten minute pause between her words ── {{furigana|machine crystal|Ilis}} continued speaking with a tone like she was gazing into the distance.
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There was a ten minute pause between her words ──
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{{furigana|machine crystal|Ilis}} continued speaking with a tone like she was gazing into the distance.
   
 
“Aiming to become a Sennenshi is something you have a promise with Ymy for but there’s no difference in the goal between you and other Guards in the end……but what you just said might truly be something that only you can achieve.”
 
“Aiming to become a Sennenshi is something you have a promise with Ymy for but there’s no difference in the goal between you and other Guards in the end……but what you just said might truly be something that only you can achieve.”
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The mere fact that somebody would be carried to this room is something that shouldn’t happen.
 
The mere fact that somebody would be carried to this room is something that shouldn’t happen.
   
If the Priestesses’ Hyouketsu Kyoukai completely froze the {{furigana|Garden of Corrupted Song|Eden}}, Yuugenshu wouldn’t be able to come up to {{furigana|floating continent|Orbie Clar}}. People afflicted with the Yuugenshu’s mateki would also cease to exist.
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If the Priestesses’ Hyouketsu Kyoukai completely froze the {{furigana|Garden of Corrupted Song|Eden}}, Yuugenshu wouldn’t be able to come up to {{furigana|The floating continent|Orbie Clar}}. People afflicted with the Yuugenshu’s mateki would also cease to exist.
   
 
A perfect barrier.
 
A perfect barrier.
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“It’s a pity but I won’t rampage.”
 
“It’s a pity but I won’t rampage.”
   
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He took off the pendant that
He took off the pendant that {{furigana|machine crystal|Ilis}} was attached to and placed it on the tray beside the bed. He looked down at the bed once more.
 
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{{furigana|machine crystal|Ilis}} was attached to and placed it on the tray beside the bed. He looked down at the bed once more.
   
 
“…………”
 
“…………”
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Her jade green eyes stared unblinking at him. Crimson particles of light suddenly rose up from her entire body.
 
Her jade green eyes stared unblinking at him. Crimson particles of light suddenly rose up from her entire body.
   
…………Three years ago……the time when I returned to the {{furigana|floating continent|Orbie Clar}}……Ymy wasn’t a Priestess yet.
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…………Three years ago……the time when I returned to the {{furigana|The floating continent|Orbie Clar}}……Ymy wasn’t a Priestess yet.
   
 
Ymy who had been an apprentice Priestess at the time had tried time after time to purify his mateki……and had cried herself dry when it ended in failure.
 
Ymy who had been an apprentice Priestess at the time had tried time after time to purify his mateki……and had cried herself dry when it ended in failure.
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The battle at the Governmental Sector.
 
The battle at the Governmental Sector.
   
The wound she had sustained when fighting the clones that {{furigana|Golden|Maha}} had summoned. When she received the blow, it had been enough to stop her breathing and even knock her unconscious, but it looked like the first-aid she’d received at the Governmental Sector had been good.
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The wound she had sustained when fighting the clones that
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{{furigana|Golden|Maha}} had summoned. When she received the blow, it had been enough to stop her breathing and even knock her unconscious but it looked like the first-aid she’d received at the Governmental Sector had been good.
   
 
“……At first, I was wondering how many ribs had broken.”
 
“……At first, I was wondering how many ribs had broken.”
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“I just thought of this while walking but that child also has faith.”
 
“I just thought of this while walking but that child also has faith.”
   
It couldn’t be helped that she’d be interested in Ymy’s situation since yesterday. She hadn’t appeared when the time came to have the meeting with Cadres Guard Ishtar, and she didn’t appear when the meeting ended either.
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It couldn’t be helped that she’d be interested in Ymy’s situation since yesterday. She hadn’t appeared when it came time to have the meeting with Cadres Guard Ishtar and she didn’t appear when the meeting ended either.
   
 
……The reason for that is that her training ran late?
 
……The reason for that is that her training ran late?
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“Yeah. But she thinks that’s the only option left.”
 
“Yeah. But she thinks that’s the only option left.”
   
Betting on the chance that it wasn’t a delayed sin type, she would search for the S vector, eighth class hiding somewhere on this gigantic {{furigana|floating continent|Orbie Clar}}. It was an outrageous mortification like trying to find grains of salt in a desert.
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Betting on the chance that it wasn’t a delayed sin type, she would search for the S vector, eighth class hiding somewhere on this gigantic {{furigana|The floating continent|Orbie Clar}}. It was an outrageous mortification like trying to find grains of salt in a desert.
   
 
“But if time passes, Ymy──”
 
“But if time passes, Ymy──”
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“That ri…………!”
 
“That ri…………!”
   
Monica’s voice paused. At the same time, it felt like she gulped. At the same time came the sound of a horribly shaky breath taken with anguish.
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Monica’s voice paused. At the same time, it felt like she gulped. At the same time came the sound of a horribly shaky breathe taken with anguish.
   
 
──What happened?
 
──What happened?
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“Monica-senpai!?”
 
“Monica-senpai!?”
   
She who probably had the same thoughts as Ymy, clothed in her vestments, ran towards the intersection.
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She probably had the same thoughts as Ymy, clothed in her vestments, ran towards the intersection.
   
 
“''Sheltis.''“
 
“''Sheltis.''“
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Their lines of sight were at about the same height.
 
Their lines of sight were at about the same height.
   
Looking on at her directly, the blinder-wearing woman wrinkled her brow.
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Looking at her directly on, the blinder-wearing woman wrinkled her brow.
   
 
“I was wondering who it was, but another Cadet Guard? Small fry, who are you mouthing──”
 
“I was wondering who it was, but another Cadet Guard? Small fry, who are you mouthing──”
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“The barrier transfer ceremony is approaching. The Queen will be able to complete her mission with the barrier and take three days of rest while the Priestesses support the barrier in her stead, you know?”
 
“The barrier transfer ceremony is approaching. The Queen will be able to complete her mission with the barrier and take three days of rest while the Priestesses support the barrier in her stead, you know?”
   
──Everything was contrasting.
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──Everything was contrastive.
   
 
Viola was not shaken no matter how much her younger sister strengthened her tone. Oh so quietly, her words permeated like waves upon water’s surface.
 
Viola was not shaken no matter how much her younger sister strengthened her tone. Oh so quietly, her words permeated like waves upon water’s surface.
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“''Oh boy.''”
 
“''Oh boy.''”
   
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{{furigana|Machine crystal|Ilis}} and Ymy both exclaimed at the same time.
 
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{{furigana|machine crystal|Ilis}} and Ymy both exclaimed at the same time.
   
 
“Did something happen?”
 
“Did something happen?”
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“''Haha─n, I’ve figured it out.''“
 
“''Haha─n, I’ve figured it out.''“
   
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{{furigana|Machine crystal|Ilis}} sparkled.
 
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{{furigana|machine crystal|Ilis}} sparkled.
   
 
“''So the senpai who’s prone to worrying was worried about whether her cute kouhai was doing well and came to take a look.''“
 
“''So the senpai who’s prone to worrying was worried about whether her cute kouhai was doing well and came to take a look.''“

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