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“Which is why I will do it.”
 
“Which is why I will do it.”
   
Tigre's dark eyes looked straight into Lim's blue irises.
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Tigre's dark eyes looked straight into Lim's blue pupils.
   
 
“This is my fight. If I can't even risk my own life, how could I possibly ask you to help me?”
 
“This is my fight. If I can't even risk my own life, how could I possibly ask you to help me?”
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Because it was impossible to house two hundred people in it, there were many crude houses made of stone in the surroundings. The leader, Donalbein, and the girls they had kidnapped monopolized the fort, along with a few people who were accepted.
 
Because it was impossible to house two hundred people in it, there were many crude houses made of stone in the surroundings. The leader, Donalbein, and the girls they had kidnapped monopolized the fort, along with a few people who were accepted.
   
Donalbein had become 33 this year. Beneath his short, black hair was a thick face and rugged eyes. Before arriving here, he had passed through numerous battlefields as a mercenary. He was a soldier who had slayed many Generals.
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Donalbein had become 33 this year. Beneath his short, black hair was a thick face and rugged pupils. Before arriving here, he had passed through numerous battlefields as a mercenary. He was a soldier who had slayed many Generals.
   
 
Such a man was now cornered.
 
Such a man was now cornered.

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