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===Part 1===
 
===Part 1===
 
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The night before leading the continent's combined military force to attack the Demon King's castle—
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The night before leading the continent's combined military force to attack the maou's castle—
   
 
"—Hey, Est?"
 
"—Hey, Est?"
   
The Sacred Maiden Areishia asked Est.
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The sacred maiden Areishia asked Est.
   
 
"Yes."
 
"Yes."
   
"If I wasn't here anymore, what would you do, Est?"
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"If I wasn't here anymore, what would Est do?"
   
 
Unlike humans who returned to the soil, spirits had no life span. No matter how strong a bond was with a contracted spirit, one would always have to part with them.
 
Unlike humans who returned to the soil, spirits had no life span. No matter how strong a bond was with a contracted spirit, one would always have to part with them.
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At Est's puzzled gaze, the girl continued.
 
At Est's puzzled gaze, the girl continued.
   
"If I'm not here anymore, you have to make sure to find a new elementalist to contract with, okay, Est."
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"If I'm not here anymore, Est has to make sure to find a new elementalist to contract with, okay."
   
 
"I don't want to."
 
"I don't want to."
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Everything about what her destiny would lead to in the nearby future — a face that knew all of this.
 
Everything about what her destiny would lead to in the nearby future — a face that knew all of this.
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===Part 2===
 
===Part 2===
   
And thus the Sacred Maiden and legendary sword went to meet the end of the story.
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And thus the sacred maiden and legendary sword went to meet the end of the story.
   
After several years of wars, the sacred girl Areishia launched an attack on the Demon King's castle.
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After several years of wars, the sacred girl Areishia launched an attack on the maou's castle.
   
 
Defeating scores of enemies, the pure girl's hand was already soaked in blood, but still she did not lose hope.
 
Defeating scores of enemies, the pure girl's hand was already soaked in blood, but still she did not lose hope.
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The strongest holy sword gripped in both her hands gave off dazzling light.
 
The strongest holy sword gripped in both her hands gave off dazzling light.
   
Pushing back the darkness, the girl ran while aiming for the Demon King's heart.
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Pushing back the darkness, the girl ran while aiming for the maou's heart.
   
 
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Everything happened in an instant.
 
Everything happened in an instant.
   
The holy sword shone and burst the Demon King's heart with a flash.
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The holy sword shone and burst the maou's heart with a flash.
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Giving off a dying cry of agony, the maou was vanquished from this world.
   
Giving off a dying cry of agony, the Demon King was vanquished from this world.
 
   
   
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The sun had already begun to set when Kamito and the others finally found a camp site.
 
The sun had already begun to set when Kamito and the others finally found a camp site.
   
It was beside a gently flowing mountain stream. Edible fish were present and the water was suitable for purification. After making a simple tent and leaving the meal preparations to the girls, Kamito had taken a nap in preparation for being the night look-out.
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It was beside a gently flowing mountain stream. Edible fish were present and the water was suitable for purification. After making a simple tent and leaving the meal preparations to the girls, Kamito had taken a nap in preparation of being the night look-out.
   
 
Night had already completely fallen.
 
Night had already completely fallen.
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Walking to the riverside where there was a table built from the trees, he found a luxurious evening meal on it.
 
Walking to the riverside where there was a table built from the trees, he found a luxurious evening meal on it.
   
Smoked fish from the river, seasoned risotto, and soup made with dried vegetables. These were from opening some of the many canned foods Claire had brought.
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Smoked fish from the river, seasoned risotto, and soup made with dried vegetables. These were from opening some of the many canned food that Claire had brought.
   
 
"Is it okay to eat this extravagantly from the first day?"
 
"Is it okay to eat this extravagantly from the first day?"
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"......!"
 
"......!"
   
"H-How is it?"
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"H, how is it?"
   
 
Rinslet asked while seemingly nervous.
 
Rinslet asked while seemingly nervous.
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"As expected of Rinslet."
 
"As expected of Rinslet."
   
"Kuu......m-my position is......"
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"Kuu......m, my position is......"
   
 
Ellis seemed a little down as she sighed that.
 
Ellis seemed a little down as she sighed that.
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"Ah, no, Ellis' cooking has a homemade feeling to it and I like that in its own way."
 
"Ah, no, Ellis' cooking has a homemade feeling to it and I like that in its own way."
   
"H-Homemade......you say......? Home......wife......"
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"H, homemade......you say......? Home......wife......"
   
 
He didn't know what she was imagining but Ellis had zoned out with a red face.
 
He didn't know what she was imagining but Ellis had zoned out with a red face.
   
"T-Tomorrow, I'll be making dinner......so I'll make Kamito's favorite dishes."
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"T, tomorrow, I'll be making dinner......so I'll make Kamito's favorite dishes."
   
 
"Yeah, I'm looking forward to it......by the way, what are we doing about baths?"
 
"Yeah, I'm looking forward to it......by the way, what are we doing about baths?"
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"Eh?"
 
"Eh?"
   
"I-Idiot, Kamito goes in after! Stand guard here!"
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"I, idiot, Kamito goes in after! Stand guard here!"
   
 
Claire said angrily with a beet red face.
 
Claire said angrily with a beet red face.
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"W-What are you thinking, you!"
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"W, what are you thinking, you!"
   
 
"Oh my, I was just teasing you a little. And Claire, weren't you a little tempted?"
 
"Oh my, I was just teasing you a little. And Claire, weren't you a little tempted?"
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"Though the knight captain is being the loudest."
 
"Though the knight captain is being the loudest."
   
"......S-Sorry."
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"......S, sorry."
   
 
A little away from the camp site, the girls were undressing.
 
A little away from the camp site, the girls were undressing.
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Having removed their academy uniforms, the princess maidens' skins were exposed to the night moon's faint radiance.
 
Having removed their academy uniforms, the princess maidens' skins were exposed to the night moon's faint radiance.
   
"E-Ellis, you were wearing quite mature underwear, weren't you......"
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"E, Ellis, you were wearing quite mature underwear, weren't you......"
   
"I-Is that so?"
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"I, is that so?"
   
 
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Ellis averted her eyes in embarrassment.
 
Ellis averted her eyes in embarrassment.
   
"T-To use black......how lewd......"
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"T, to use black......how lewd......"
   
 
Claire leered at Ellis' breasts coldly.
 
Claire leered at Ellis' breasts coldly.
   
"I-It's not lewd! Kamito chose them—"
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"I, it's not lewd! Kamito chose them—"
   
 
"Eh?"
 
"Eh?"
   
"Wh-What do you mean?"
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"Wh, what do you mean?"
   
 
"Ah, no, that's, umm......"
 
"Ah, no, that's, umm......"
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Fianna groped Claire's chest.
 
Fianna groped Claire's chest.
   
"Fuaaa, wh-what are you doing, you erotic queen!"
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"Fuaaa, wh, what are you doing, you erotic queen!"
   
 
"......Was it my imagination? It feels like they've grown a little since I last groped them."
 
"......Was it my imagination? It feels like they've grown a little since I last groped them."
   
"......Eh? R-Really!?"
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"......Eh? R, really!?"
   
 
Claire's red twintails jumped a little.
 
Claire's red twintails jumped a little.
   
"D-Don't tell me that thing of the lightning spirit from yesterday was effective......"
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"D, don't tell me that thing of the lightning spirit from yesterday was effective......"
   
 
"What are you talking about?"
 
"What are you talking about?"
   
"......I-It's nothing!"
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"......I, it's nothing!"
   
 
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As expected, not even Kamito with his good hearing could make out their words.
 
As expected, not even Kamito with his good hearing could make out their words.
   
Kamito was keeping surveillance from a rock's shadow. There were also spirits that gained strength with the coming of night. And unlike the matches at the academy, one also had to be vigilant of a night attack.
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Kamito was keeping surveillance from a rock's shadow. There were also spirits that gained strength with the coming of night. Unlike the matches at the academy, one also had to be vigilant of a night attack.
   
 
"......"
 
"......"
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Drawing a breath, he looked down at the spirit seal engraved on his right hand.
 
Drawing a breath, he looked down at the spirit seal engraved on his right hand.
   
(Est......)
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''Est......''
   
 
The past memories of Est he had caught a glimpse of.
 
The past memories of Est he had caught a glimpse of.
   
The dream about Est's former master, the Sacred Queen who slew the Demon King.
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The dream about Est's former master, the Sacred Queen who slew the maou.
   
 
I cannot become Kamito's sword — saying that, Est had rejected Kamito.
 
I cannot become Kamito's sword — saying that, Est had rejected Kamito.
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Kamito stood up on reflex and entered a battle stance.
 
Kamito stood up on reflex and entered a battle stance.
   
(......Don't tell me they broke Fianna's barrier!?)
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''......Don't tell me they broke Fianna's barrier!?''
   
 
A barrier that let them know when a person or beast got near was supposed to have been erected.
 
A barrier that let them know when a person or beast got near was supposed to have been erected.
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As the dress fluttered, Restia slowly walked towards him.
 
As the dress fluttered, Restia slowly walked towards him.
   
"It's not like you to have a hard fight against opponents of that caliber."
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"It's not like you to have a hard fight against opponents of that calibre."
   
 
"Were you the one who told them I lost Est?"
 
"Were you the one who told them I lost Est?"
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Because of that, he didn't know what to say next.
 
Because of that, he didn't know what to say next.
   
(I've always gotten caught up in her pace......)
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''I've always gotten caught up in her pace......''
   
 
Restia came just in front of him and gazed up at his face with her twilight-colored eyes.
 
Restia came just in front of him and gazed up at his face with her twilight-colored eyes.
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It was true that he still had Restia's spirit seal on his left hand but—
 
It was true that he still had Restia's spirit seal on his left hand but—
   
The Gate had never opened even once since that day.
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The «Gate» had never opened even once since that day.
   
 
"That's because you didn't have the requirements, Kamito. But with your latest power that awakened — you can use me again just like before."
 
"That's because you didn't have the requirements, Kamito. But with your latest power that awakened — you can use me again just like before."
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Kamito stared at his leather-gloved left hand.
 
Kamito stared at his leather-gloved left hand.
   
The elemental waffe he had used three years ago as Ren Ashbell — Vorpal Sword.
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The Elemental Waffe he had used three years ago as Ren Ashbell — «Vorpal Sword».
   
 
The power of that demon sword to cut everything was comparable to Terminus Est.
 
The power of that demon sword to cut everything was comparable to Terminus Est.
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Without Est, winning the Blade Dance was impossible.
 
Without Est, winning the Blade Dance was impossible.
   
But if his former contracted spirit returned to him once again—
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But if his former contract spirit returned to him once again—
   
 
He could even win against that other Ren Ashbell.
 
He could even win against that other Ren Ashbell.
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[[File:STnBD V05 217.jpg|thumbnail|right]]
   
Restia put her index finger to her lips.
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And. Restia put her index finger to her lips.
   
 
"A condition?"
 
"A condition?"
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He had lived the past three years for the sake of getting Restia back.
 
He had lived the past three years for the sake of getting Restia back.
   
The reason he had participated in this Blade Dance was for the same reason.
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The reason he had participated in this «Blade Dance» was for the same reason.
   
 
But he could not sever the contract with Est for that.
 
But he could not sever the contract with Est for that.
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The earth and sand that flew collapsed the forest's trees.
 
The earth and sand that flew collapsed the forest's trees.
   
(What......the......!?)
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''What......the......!?''
   
 
While groaning, Kamito lifted his face.
 
While groaning, Kamito lifted his face.
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And.
 
And.
   
From the epicenter of the explosion, a giant black shadow stood up.
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From the epicentre of the explosion, a giant black shadow stood up.
   
 
"Wha!?"
 
"Wha!?"
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Her red eyes penetrated the night.
 
Her red eyes penetrated the night.
   
(What an ominous presence......)
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''What an ominous presence......''
   
 
An oppressive feeling that could even be felt on one's skin.
 
An oppressive feeling that could even be felt on one's skin.
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"The dragons of Dracunia hunt lions with all their strength."
 
"The dragons of Dracunia hunt lions with all their strength."
   
The dragon spirit Nidhogg opened its mouth and released an inferno.
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The dragon spirit «Nidhogg» opened its mouth and released an inferno.
   
 
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