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Feeling that the sun was too strong, he couldn’t help but to cover his eyes.
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Feeling that the sun was too strong, he couldn’t help but to cover his eyes.
   
Walking on the scorching path to school alone as always, is me, Shou Shimizu.
+
Walking on the scorching path to school alone as always, is me, Shou Shimizu.
   
Then suddenly a lovely voice rang out.
+
Then suddenly a lovely voice rang out.
   
  +
“......Long time no see. Shou-kun. At last, at last, at last I am finally able to meet you”
 
“......Long time no see. Shou-kun. At last, at last, at last I am finally able to meet you”
 
   
 
Whether the cheerful voice was feigned or not, I had no way of determining it.
 
Whether the cheerful voice was feigned or not, I had no way of determining it.
 
Looking at where the voice came from, there stood a petite girl.
 
   
  +
Looking at where the voice came from, there stood a petite girl.
Conspicuously attracting the attention of passers-by.
 
   
  +
Conspicuously attracting the attention of passersby.
My eyes bugged out as I moaned.
 
   
  +
My eyes bugged out as I moaned.
That’s because that girl shouldn’t be here.
 
   
  +
That’s because that girl shouldn’t be here.
A girl with pristine long hair and a petite body.
 
   
  +
A girl with pristine long hair and a petite body.
On her head, jutted dog ears like hair are being exhibited.
 
   
  +
On her head, jutted dog ears like hair are being exhibited.
“.........Inui, Aki.........”
 
   
  +
“.........Inui, Aki.........”
A hoarse voice was let out of my throat forcibly.
 
   
  +
A hoarse voice was let out of my throat forcibly.
“Why, are you here.....”
 
   
  +
“Why, are you here.....”
“Shou-kun!”
 
   
  +
“Shou-kun!”
Aki’s expression immediately changed to one of delight.
 
   
  +
Aki’s expression immediately changed to one of delight.
 
   
tata* she trod over to my side.
+
*tata* she trod over to my side.
   
  +
Her dog ears alike swayed back and forth.
   
  +
She approached me from the front.
Her dog ears alike swayed back and forth.
 
   
  +
“Shou----kun!”
She approached me from the front.
 
   
  +
Leaping forward, she hugged me.
“Shou----kun!”
 
   
  +
At the front, two bulging objects happened to be present.
Leaping forward, she hugged me.
 
   
  +
“Wah.....! Wh, what do you think you are doing......!”
At the front, two bulging objects happened to be present.
 
   
  +
“I have been longing to see you! I miss you! I miss youuuuuuu! Waaaaaaaaaaaa!”
“Wah.....! Wh-what do you think you’re doing......!”
 
   
  +
“W, wait I can’t see the front! This is dangerous!”
“I have been longing to see you! I miss you! I miss youuuuuuu! Waaaaaaaaaaaa!”
 
   
  +
Grabbing my head with her slender hands, she proceeded to rub her cheek against mine.
“W, wait I can’t see the front! This is dangerous!”
 
   
  +
“It’s Shou-kun, Shou-kun’s smell! I sniff, I sniff! Haa,haa--”
Grabbing my head with her slender hands, she began to rub her cheeks against mine.
 
   
  +
“W, why the smell!?”
“It’s Shou-kun, Shou-kun’s smell! sniff, sniff! Haa,haa--”
 
   
  +
“Why? Do you even need to ask, it is because I love Shou-kun’s smell!”
“W, why the smell!?”
 
   
  +
“This again, you always give me this reason--hey, uwa!”
“Why? Do you even need to ask, it’s because I love Shou-kun’s smell!”
 
   
  +
Thereupon, a leg came flying out of nowhere along with a painful sensation. The next he could felt was that his body was being sent flying.
“This again, you always give me this reason--hey, uwa!”
 
   
  +
The me, whose vision is blocked, tripped back and fall over.
Thereupon, a leg came flying out of nowhere along with a painful sensation. The next thing he could feel was that his body was being sent flying.
 
   
  +
“Ack--”
The me, whose vision was blocked, tripped back and fell over.
 
   
  +
Aki, who was mounting on my chest, toppled down.
“Ack--”
 
   
  +
With that her white nape was exposed.
Aki, who was mounting on my chest, toppled down.
 
   
  +
“Uwa--”
With that her white nape exposed.
 
   
  +
“O, oi. We are in public right now!?”
“Uwa--”
 
   
  +
“No way, I have been keeping it in for a long time already! I can’t wait any longer......! I sniff, I sniff.”
“O, oi. We are in public right now!?”
 
   
  +
Aki snuggled at my neck, then lifted her head up afterwards.
“No way, I’ve been keeping it in for a long time already! I can’t wait any longer......! I sniff, I sniff.”
 
   
  +
“You know, Aki got a whiff of your scent and came running over.”
Aki snuggled at my neck, then lifted her head up afterwards.
 
   
  +
“S, scent......!?”
“You know, Aki got a whiff of your scent and came running over.”
 
   
  +
Speaking of which.
“S, scent...!”
 
   
  +
“You know, Aki has a good sense of smell ever since.”
Speaking of which.
 
   
  +
“A lot had happened and before I knew it my sense of smell has improved. Therefore, Shou-kun-.HaaHaa. Such a nice scent.”
“You know, Aki has a good sense of smell ever since.”
 
   
  +
“H, huh, smells nice......!?”
“A lot had happened and before I knew it my sense of smell has improved. Therefore, Shou-kun-.HaaHaa. Such a nice scent.”
 
   
  +
“A nice smell will always be a nice smell! I have always liked Shou-kun’s smell ever since I met you, that includes Shou-kun too.”
“H, huh, smells nice...!”
 
   
  +
Aki with her head held up high was very dazzling; resembling a sunflower being attracted to the sun.
“A nice smell will always be a nice smell! I have always liked Shou-kun’s smell ever since I met you! that includes Shou-kun too.”
 
   
  +
“You can even discern the smell!?”
Aki with her head held up high was very dazzling; resembling a sunflower being attracted to the sun.
 
   
  +
“Yes. Yes. I can. Shou-kun’s smell is the most valuable thing in the world.”
“You can even discern the smell!?”
 
   
  +
With clenched fists, Aki hold on tight.
“Yes. Yes. I can. Shou-kun’s smell is the most valuable thing in the world.”
 
   
  +
“Is, is that so......”
With clenched fists, Aki held on tight.
 
 
“Is, is that so......”
 
   
 
Against this action, he was left dumbstruck.
 
Against this action, he was left dumbstruck.
 
“......Hur--. Hey-”
 
   
  +
“......Hur--. Hey-”
After sniffing up a huge round, Aki displayed a face full of satisfaction.
 
   
  +
After sniffing up a huge round, Aki displayed a face full of satisfaction.
Adhering to this, I felt an indescribable feeling welling up.
 
  +
  +
Adhering to this, I felt an indescribable feeling welling up.
   
 
Perhaps, the incident before with Aki was what led to the current situation.
 
Perhaps, the incident before with Aki was what led to the current situation.
 
Back then, I didn’t even have the guts to apologize.
 
   
  +
Back then, I didn’t even have the guts to apologize.
Unknowingly, Aki had transferred to another school.
 
  +
  +
Unknowingly, Aki had transferred to another school.
   
 
Leaving without saying anything.
 
Leaving without saying anything.
 
I must have hurt her a lot.
 
 
However, it would be best if she didn’t received any psychological damage.
 
   
  +
I must had hurt her a lot.
At that time, Aki got involved in a fight with Hijiri.
 
   
  +
However, it would be best if she didn’t received any psychological damage.
“Really, that’s good then--”
 
   
  +
At that time, Aki got involved in a fight with Hijiri.
While I’m lost in my thoughts, Aki kept her head held up high and heaved out a sigh.
 
   
  +
“Really, that’s good then--”
As if to drown out the earlier smile, a frown appeared on her face.
 
   
  +
While I am lost in my thoughts, Aki kept her head held up high and heaved out a sigh.
Suddenly the gaze Aki emitted was as if to pierce through the target.
 
   
  +
As if to drown out the earlier smile, a frown appeared on her face.
The petite girl who possesses an extraordinary sense of smell proceeded to sniff.
 
   
  +
Suddenly the gaze Aki emitted was as if to pierce through the target.
“------This scent. It’s that annoying woman’s scent--”
 
   
  +
The petite girl who possesses an extraordinary sense of smell proceeded to sniff.
The voice being uttered was cold and full of enmity.
 
   
  +
“------This scent. It is that annoying woman’s scent--”
Following Aki’s line of sight, what appeared was the figure of Hijiri.
 
   
  +
The voice being uttered was cold and full of enmity.
Clutching her hair from being blown in the wind, she was expressionless as always.
 
   
  +
Following Aki’s line of sight, what appeared was the figure of Hijiri.
A doll-like beauty, my sister.
 
  +
  +
Clutching her hair for being blown by the wind, she is expressionless as always.
  +
  +
A doll-like beauty, my sister.
   
 
Hijiri, completely unaware of Aki, slowly walked over.
 
Hijiri, completely unaware of Aki, slowly walked over.
 
Afterwards, she halted her footstep.
 
   
  +
Afterwards, she halted her footstep.
Their gazes collided together.
 
   
  +
Their gazes collided together.
For a moment Hijiri widened her eyes in surprise, then shockingly said.
 
   
  +
For a moment Hijiri widened her eyes in surprise, then shockingly said.
“............Aki”
 
   
  +
“............Aki”
”Long time no see. Hijiri.”
 
   
  +
”Long time no see. Hijiri.”
A very bland tone.
 
   
  +
A very bland tone.
Aki exerted force on her hand and pinned me down.
 
   
  +
Aki exerted force on her hand and pinned me down.
“...Urgh, urgh.”
 
   
  +
“...Urgh, urgh.”
Hijiri’s shoulder was trembling non-stop as if being twisted.
 
   
  +
Hijiri’s shoulder was trembling non-stop as if being twisted.
Aki watched Hijiri as she slowly stood up.
 
   
  +
Aki watched Hijiri as she slowly stood up.
“Back then, before we separated, do you still remember?”
 
   
  +
“Back then, before we separated, do you still remember?”
Hearing this, Hijiri trembled.
 
   
  +
Hearing this, Hijiri trembled.
“You know, Aki cannot absolutely forgive Hijiri......!”
 
   
  +
“You know, Aki can not absolutely forgive Hijiri......!”
Directing her finger at Hijiri as she spoke.
 
   
  +
Directing her finger at Hijiri as she spoke.
“......A, Aki, at that time--”
 
   
  +
“......A, Aki, at that time--”
Just as Hijiri was about to say something, her thighs moved awkwardly.
 
   
  +
Just as Hijiri was about to say something, her thighs moved awkwardly.
Sweat dripped down from her forehead, staining the school uniform.
 
   
  +
Sweat dripped down from her forehead, staining the school uniform.
“What”
 
   
  +
“What”
“......A, ab, ab, about that time”
 
   
  +
“......A, ab, ab, about that time”
Hijiri was shaking even more uncontrollably with her mouth open.
 
   
  +
Hijiri was shaking even more uncontrollably her opening her mouth.
Her neck had turned red.
 
   
  +
Her neck was turned to that of red color.
While her cheeks were also flushed crimson.
 
   
  +
While her cheeks were also flushed crimson.
“......Eh, a......, a, about that time...a...”
 
   
  +
“......Eh, a......, a, about that time...a...”
I was startled.
 
   
  +
I was startled.
“H, Hijiri......? Could it be that you——”
 
   
  +
“H, Hijiri......? Could it be that you——”
Nervous——
 
   
  +
Nervous——
In other word, ——triggered?
 
   
  +
In other word, ——triggered?
If this is the case, then all the more she shouldn’t be asking in front of Aki.
 
   
  +
If this is the case,, then all the more she should not be asking in front of Aki.
Hijiri started to wriggle around.
 
   
  +
Hijiri started to wriggle around.
Accordingly, Aki’s nose shifted slightly.
 
   
  +
Accordingly, Aki’s nose shifted slightly.
“Ara? There’s some strange scent. Mixed with sweat, where have I come across it before——”
 
   
  +
“Ara? There’s some strange scent. Mixed with sweat, where have I come across it before——”
“N, no Aki! You must be mistaken!”
 
   
  +
“N, no Aki! You must be mistaken!”
Afterwards, Aki looked over with her pair of moist eyes.
 
   
  +
Afterwards, Aki looked over with her pair of moist eyes.
“What mistake. Shou.”
 
   
  +
“What mistake. Shou.”
“L, like I said you are mistaken......!”
 
   
“Hmph. The smell, is it from there......?
+
“L, like I said you are mistaken......!
  +
  +
“Hmph. The smell, is it from there......?”
   
 
With Aki setting her sight on Hijiri, Hijiri become pale like a ghost.
 
With Aki setting her sight on Hijiri, Hijiri become pale like a ghost.
 
It seemed like Aki got quite a good olfactory perception.
 
   
  +
It seemed like Aki got quite a good olfactory perception.
As I am pondering over the matter, Aki slowly crept closer to Hijiri.
 
  +
  +
As I am pondering over the matter, Aki slowly crept closer to Hijiri.
   
“Eh, so it's from Hijiri?
+
“Eh, so it is from Hijiri.
   
I can’t let Aki be close to Hijiri anymore than this!
+
I can’t let Aki be close to Hijiri anymore than this!
   
“Sorry! Aki! We have some matters to take care of......!”
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“Sorry! Aki! We have some matters to take care of......!”
   
 
I went in between the two of them, and quickly carried Hijiri up.
 
I went in between the two of them, and quickly carried Hijiri up.
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Like this, I ran toward the school.
 
Like this, I ran toward the school.
   
Good, Aki wasn’t following.
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Good, Aki isn’t following.
   
Although passerby were watching, that wasn't important right now.
+
Although passerby were watching, but that is not important right now.
   
The current situation was much more dire.
+
The current situation is much more dire.
   
 
●▲
 
●▲
   
After taking a turn at a corner, Aki couldn’t be seen anymore.
+
After taking a turn at a corner, Aki couldn’t be found already.
   
“......L, let me down, brother.”
+
“......L, let me down, brother.”
   
Hijiri, bashfully said to me.
+
Hijiri, bashfully said it to me.
   
I slowly lowered myself down, lightly putting Hijiri on the ground.
+
I slowly lowered myself down, lightly putting Hijiri on the ground.
   
“Are you fine? Hijiri.”
+
“Are you fine? Hijiri.”
   
“......Um. I am fine. I have calmed down already. Sorry ……...brother.”
+
“......Um. I am fine. I have calmed down already. Sorry, …......brother.”
   
“No, no problem. Don’t mind it.”
+
“N, no problem. Don’t mind about it.”
   
I flashed a smile at Hijiri.
+
I flashed a smile at Hijiri.
   
But she turned her face away to the side, exposing her white nape.
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But she turned her face away to the side, exposing her white nape.
   
“Hijiri, Hijiri?”
+
“Hijiri, Hijiri?”
   
Her cheeks turned a little red——
+
Her cheeks turned a little red——
   
“......B, brother. This is kinda embarrassing......”
+
“......B, brother. This is kinda embarrassing......”
   
Eh......?
+
Eh......?
   
It was a reaction he had never seen before.
+
It is a reaction he had never seen before.
   
It was not like she was completely ignoring me, just that she put up a cold front.
+
It is not like she is completely ignoring me, just that she put up a cold front.
   
Speaking of which, it seemed like her attitude towards me is much gentler a moment ago.
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Speaking of which, it seemed like her attitude towards me is much gentler a moment ago.
   
“Hijiri, Hijiri? What’s up?”
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“Hijiri, Hijiri? What’s up?”
   
“......Eh?”
+
“......Eh?”
   
“D, do you have a fever?”
+
“D, do you have a fever?”
   
 
“......B, brother?”
 
“......B, brother?”

Revision as of 16:41, 5 February 2014

Feeling that the sun was too strong, he couldn’t help but to cover his eyes.

Walking on the scorching path to school alone as always, is me, Shou Shimizu.

Then suddenly a lovely voice rang out.

“......Long time no see. Shou-kun. At last, at last, at last I am finally able to meet you”

Whether the cheerful voice was feigned or not, I had no way of determining it.

Looking at where the voice came from, there stood a petite girl.

Conspicuously attracting the attention of passersby.

My eyes bugged out as I moaned.

That’s because that girl shouldn’t be here.

A girl with pristine long hair and a petite body.

On her head, jutted dog ears like hair are being exhibited.

“.........Inui, Aki.........”

A hoarse voice was let out of my throat forcibly.

“Why, are you here.....”

“Shou-kun!”

Aki’s expression immediately changed to one of delight.

  • tata* she trod over to my side.

Her dog ears alike swayed back and forth.

She approached me from the front.

“Shou----kun!”

Leaping forward, she hugged me.

At the front, two bulging objects happened to be present.

“Wah.....! Wh, what do you think you are doing......!”

“I have been longing to see you! I miss you! I miss youuuuuuu! Waaaaaaaaaaaa!”

“W, wait I can’t see the front! This is dangerous!”

Grabbing my head with her slender hands, she proceeded to rub her cheek against mine.

“It’s Shou-kun, Shou-kun’s smell! I sniff, I sniff! Haa,haa--”

“W, why the smell!?”

“Why? Do you even need to ask, it is because I love Shou-kun’s smell!”

“This again, you always give me this reason--hey, uwa!”

Thereupon, a leg came flying out of nowhere along with a painful sensation. The next he could felt was that his body was being sent flying.

The me, whose vision is blocked, tripped back and fall over.

“Ack--”

Aki, who was mounting on my chest, toppled down.

With that her white nape was exposed.

“Uwa--”

“O, oi. We are in public right now!?”

“No way, I have been keeping it in for a long time already! I can’t wait any longer......! I sniff, I sniff.”

Aki snuggled at my neck, then lifted her head up afterwards.

“You know, Aki got a whiff of your scent and came running over.”

“S, scent......!?”

Speaking of which.

“You know, Aki has a good sense of smell ever since.”

“A lot had happened and before I knew it my sense of smell has improved. Therefore, Shou-kun-.HaaHaa. Such a nice scent.”

“H, huh, smells nice......!?”

“A nice smell will always be a nice smell! I have always liked Shou-kun’s smell ever since I met you, that includes Shou-kun too.”

Aki with her head held up high was very dazzling; resembling a sunflower being attracted to the sun.

“You can even discern the smell!?”

“Yes. Yes. I can. Shou-kun’s smell is the most valuable thing in the world.”

With clenched fists, Aki hold on tight.

“Is, is that so......”

Against this action, he was left dumbstruck.

“......Hur--. Hey-”

After sniffing up a huge round, Aki displayed a face full of satisfaction.

Adhering to this, I felt an indescribable feeling welling up.

Perhaps, the incident before with Aki was what led to the current situation.

Back then, I didn’t even have the guts to apologize.

Unknowingly, Aki had transferred to another school.

Leaving without saying anything.

I must had hurt her a lot.

However, it would be best if she didn’t received any psychological damage.

At that time, Aki got involved in a fight with Hijiri.

“Really, that’s good then--”

While I am lost in my thoughts, Aki kept her head held up high and heaved out a sigh.

As if to drown out the earlier smile, a frown appeared on her face.

Suddenly the gaze Aki emitted was as if to pierce through the target.

The petite girl who possesses an extraordinary sense of smell proceeded to sniff.

“------This scent. It is that annoying woman’s scent--”

The voice being uttered was cold and full of enmity.

Following Aki’s line of sight, what appeared was the figure of Hijiri.

Clutching her hair for being blown by the wind, she is expressionless as always.

A doll-like beauty, my sister.

Hijiri, completely unaware of Aki, slowly walked over.

Afterwards, she halted her footstep.

Their gazes collided together.

For a moment Hijiri widened her eyes in surprise, then shockingly said.

“............Aki”

”Long time no see. Hijiri.”

A very bland tone.

Aki exerted force on her hand and pinned me down.

“...Urgh, urgh.”

Hijiri’s shoulder was trembling non-stop as if being twisted.

Aki watched Hijiri as she slowly stood up.

“Back then, before we separated, do you still remember?”

Hearing this, Hijiri trembled.

“You know, Aki can not absolutely forgive Hijiri......!”

Directing her finger at Hijiri as she spoke.

“......A, Aki, at that time--”

Just as Hijiri was about to say something, her thighs moved awkwardly.

Sweat dripped down from her forehead, staining the school uniform.

“What”

“......A, ab, ab, about that time”

Hijiri was shaking even more uncontrollably her opening her mouth.

Her neck was turned to that of red color.

While her cheeks were also flushed crimson.

“......Eh, a......, a, about that time...a...”

I was startled.

“H, Hijiri......? Could it be that you——”

Nervous——

In other word, ——triggered?

If this is the case,, then all the more she should not be asking in front of Aki.

Hijiri started to wriggle around.

Accordingly, Aki’s nose shifted slightly.

“Ara? There’s some strange scent. Mixed with sweat, where have I come across it before——”

“N, no Aki! You must be mistaken!”

Afterwards, Aki looked over with her pair of moist eyes.

“What mistake. Shou.”

“L, like I said you are mistaken......!”

“Hmph. The smell, is it from there......?”

With Aki setting her sight on Hijiri, Hijiri become pale like a ghost.

It seemed like Aki got quite a good olfactory perception.

As I am pondering over the matter, Aki slowly crept closer to Hijiri.

“Eh, so it is from Hijiri.”

I can’t let Aki be close to Hijiri anymore than this!

“Sorry! Aki! We have some matters to take care of......!”

I went in between the two of them, and quickly carried Hijiri up.

“......B, brother......! What’s all the sudden......”

Hijiri, who I am carrying princess style.

“Sorry!”

Like this, I ran toward the school.

Good, Aki isn’t following.

Although passerby were watching, but that is not important right now.

The current situation is much more dire.

●▲

After taking a turn at a corner, Aki couldn’t be found already.

“......L, let me down, brother.”

Hijiri, bashfully said it to me.

I slowly lowered myself down, lightly putting Hijiri on the ground.

“Are you fine? Hijiri.”

“......Um. I am fine. I have calmed down already. Sorry, …......brother.”

“N, no problem. Don’t mind about it.”

I flashed a smile at Hijiri.

But she turned her face away to the side, exposing her white nape.

“Hijiri, Hijiri?”

Her cheeks turned a little red——

“......B, brother. This is kinda embarrassing......”

Eh......?

It is a reaction he had never seen before.

It is not like she is completely ignoring me, just that she put up a cold front.

Speaking of which, it seemed like her attitude towards me is much gentler a moment ago.

“Hijiri, Hijiri? What’s up?”

“......Eh?”

“D, do you have a fever?”

“......B, brother?”