Talk:High School DxD:Volume 4 The Festival Ends

There are some weird sentences, sometimes I had to read the sentences two or three times to completely understand the story. (I just criticized your English when mine is much worse [pointless information : English is my 4th language] hahaha). Anyway as far as I can tell you have done a good translation so thanks for your hard work --LSwRl 17:01, 22 April 2012 (CDT)

Sorry about that, I try to keep the text as close to the original as I can, and it often ends up making weird sentences. Hopefully that will change as I get more experience in translating. --Eternal Dreamer 17:13, 22 April 2012 (CDT)

Looks fine to me, grammar-wise. Great work, Eternal Dreamer!