Talk:High School DxD:Volume 9 Life 4

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Ironically, even Cao Cao of the Heroes faction has also shifted his focus towards talents

How's this? --KuroiHikari (Talk | ) 06:27, 22 August 2012 (CDT)

Well, the irony doesn't refer to the act of gathering talent, but instead to the detail that the current Cao Cao discriminates based on race unlike the original Cao Cao who accepted everyone with merit. To make the connection clearer would require restructuring a few sentences rather than limiting changes to that single sentence. I'll think about it later. --Zzhk (talk) 05:12, 23 August 2012 (CDT)

"even" puts emphasis on Cao Cao, which links it to the irony. Anyone else with other inputs? --KuroiHikari (Talk | ) 05:18, 23 August 2012 (CDT)

Untouchable Queen, eh?[edit]

Anybody else notice the small FREEZING reference in part 1?