Difference between revisions of "Talk:Kikou Shoujo wa Kizutsukanai:Volume 3 Chapter 1"
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When written like that ''bobble'' sounds like an SFX. I know the characters are not bolded, I just did it to make it easier for the readers to understand (A single letter is easy to overlook unless set apart in some way). ''False moves'' is incorrect in such circumstance no matter how you look it; in English, the correct term should be ''wrong moves''. [[User:Zero2001|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001|Talk]] - 13:23, 31 October 2012 (CDT) |
When written like that ''bobble'' sounds like an SFX. I know the characters are not bolded, I just did it to make it easier for the readers to understand (A single letter is easy to overlook unless set apart in some way). ''False moves'' is incorrect in such circumstance no matter how you look it; in English, the correct term should be ''wrong moves''. [[User:Zero2001|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001|Talk]] - 13:23, 31 October 2012 (CDT) |
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| + | ''Gryphon dorm'' not ''the Gryphon dorm'' is more correct here. You don't need the ''the'' if the name is Title Cased. And you reverted when you should have undid my edit. Thus changing my other edits (punctuation and <nowiki><noinclude></noinclude></nowiki>) as well. I'll fix that. Reverting: undos all consecutive edits made by the last editor. Undo: reverts only the edit in question. [[User:Zero2001|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001|Talk]] - 13:29, 31 October 2012 (CDT) |
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Is this complete or not? If not then please use Template:Incomplete at the top of the page and write the progress percentage besides the link to the chapter on the main page. Please. Zero2001 - Talk - 18:04, 29 October 2012 (CDT)
Bobble is not a SFX, henriette and henrietta do not have to have their last letters bolded, and false moves is not the same as wrong moves.--Hayashi s (talk) 12:15, 31 October 2012 (CDT)
When written like that bobble sounds like an SFX. I know the characters are not bolded, I just did it to make it easier for the readers to understand (A single letter is easy to overlook unless set apart in some way). False moves is incorrect in such circumstance no matter how you look it; in English, the correct term should be wrong moves. Zero2001 - Talk - 13:23, 31 October 2012 (CDT)
Gryphon dorm not the Gryphon dorm is more correct here. You don't need the the if the name is Title Cased. And you reverted when you should have undid my edit. Thus changing my other edits (punctuation and <noinclude></noinclude>) as well. I'll fix that. Reverting: undos all consecutive edits made by the last editor. Undo: reverts only the edit in question. Zero2001 - Talk - 13:29, 31 October 2012 (CDT)
