Talk:OreShura: Volume 1 Chapter 1

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General

You! Are! All! Garbage!

• This was changed from "You - Are - All - Garbage!" If I remember correctly. The original Japanese/Chinese splits all the words up by syllables. Should we do the same? Like, turn the "Garbage" --> "Garb-age?" --Cloudii (talk) 00:10, 25 October 2013 (CDT)

I don't think that English people would do that, rather throw every single word out. That's why I did it like that. -cautr (talk) 05:10, 25 October 2013 (CDT)

Wildk used the terminology, "Junior High" whereas Cloud uses the terminology "Middle School. Which do you prefer?"

• I'm all for whichever you guys like. --Cloudii (talk) 00:10, 25 October 2013 (CDT)Cloudii (talk)

I like your's more. I didn't really pay attention to that, though. I'll search 'n' destroy after volume 1 is done.-cautr (talk) 05:10, 25 October 2013 (CDT)

In my class 1-A, a rumor like this started to spread: Class 1-E's Harusaki Chiwa became super popular

• Wildk uses the terminology Class 1-A, etc. Is this how we typically translate Japanese class systems? The Chinese is like: Year 1 Class 1. Should I be using the 1-A stuff from now on? --Cloudii (talk) 00:10, 25 October 2013 (CDT)Cloudii (talk)

I see, well, as it plays in Japan, we could also stick with the class-system. The reader should be aware that they're in a different country with different systems. Maybe a footnote once and all right. Same as above I didn't pay attention to that yet. So same conclusion as above. -cautr (talk) 05:10, 25 October 2013 (CDT)

Awkward English Wording

Romance, that sort of thing, is nothing but an illusion. It's a disease. If you don't believe me, take a look at couples giggling every now and then in front of everyone. It's annoying to whoever sees them, praying for them to leave. As for their reason to flirt in public? That's because this is the real romance, unmasked: Morphine getting emitted everywhere inside the brain, making them lose their shame and all. My attitude towards those people? I always put up with it because I don't care. But when it comes to myself, that is another topic altogether. For me, even if it wasn't in public, I would never do such shameless acts.

• This paragraph is very convoluted. It would be really nice if we could clean this up. --Cloudii (talk) 00:10, 25 October 2013 (CDT)Cloudii (talk)

On my to-do list. But I don't really feel that it's too complicated. Sounds fine to me with some small changes. -cautr (talk) 05:11, 25 October 2013 (CDT)

Wouldn't make much of a difference not doing pointless stuff

• Double negative :C --Cloudii (talk) 00:10, 25 October 2013 (CDT)Cloudii (talk)

On my to-do list. -cautr (talk) 05:11, 25 October 2013 (CDT)