Talk:Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter8

This sentence:

 Kamito averted his eyes from Claire, from her eyes. 

Isn't this way beyond an error? --Chancs 08:36, 4 April 2012 (CDT)

I was thinking it's like 'vague, specially'. something like:

Kamito averted his eyes from Claire, more specially from her eyes.

But I still don't quite understand the line, there's also a word dropped in the translation, so those will resolved once I understand the line.--KuroiHikari 08:44, 4 April 2012 (CDT)

Use the word "specifically" instead of "specially". It will fit better in the sentence, or something like:

Kamito averted his eyes from the crystal clear gaze of Claire's. 

Though the second 1 sounds too...simple. --Chancs 08:51, 4 April 2012 (CDT)

It should be : "Kamito averted his eyes from Claire's clear eyes." Actually the "Kamito averted his eyes from the crystal clear gaze of Claire's. " is close enough given by Chancs. The direct object is the clear pupil of Claire, which Kamito averted at.

Hmm, ok. Let's go with that. But kara can be used like that?--KuroiHikari 20:50, 4 April 2012 (CDT)

The word minute doesn't seem to fit into this sentence properly. My suggestion would either be "Until a while ago, her depressed state was still quite extreme." Or something around those lines if you will. -- Royaloyalz (talk) 19:49, 3 March 2013 (CST)

Until a while ago, her depressed state was not even minute. 

Translation Question

“That’s right. But probably even a tenth of her original power can’t be used.”

Is that statement correct? Isnt it like that, that she can only use a tenth of her original strength? --Darklor 07:06, 18 April 2012 (CDT)

Implies less than a tenth of her original power can be used. I feel it needs a subject so I'm going to rephrase this a little --KuroiHikari 09:44, 18 April 2012 (CDT)

It can be rewritten as "That's right. But probably not even a tenth of her original power can be used. " (may add "at present" to make it fluent) --Chancs 10:03, 18 April 2012 (CDT)