Talk:Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Chapter1

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Freshly pumped milk

She had mysterious violet eyes. Her skin was white like freshly-pumped milk. Freshly-pumped? Or is it freshly-extracted? Or freshly-milked? Personally, I find that freshly-extracted is used more often in regards to milk. Zero2001 - Talk - 22:42, 26 October 2012 (CDT)

Transparent eyes

Tears were shed from Est's transparent eyes and she pleaded while gasping. Transparent? You mean he could see through he eyes into the backside of the eye-socket? YUCK!!! I wanna throw up! This cannot be correct. Someone fix this. Or give the original j-text for cross checking. Zero2001 - Talk - 22:42, 26 October 2012 (CDT)

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