Talk:Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume5 Chapter6

Her destructive <Death Gaze> – her Nidhogg had displayed immense overwhelming force to destroy the flying craft's military spirits.

This line needs changing (Her destructive <Death Gaze> makes not much sense where it appears, <Death Gaze> doesn't belong to Claire or Leonora, I suggest The destruction of <Death Gaze> by her Nidhogg..

--Drowzycow (talk) 17:36, 22 February 2013 (CST)

• (v5c6) Her destructive «Death Gaze» – her Nidhogg had displayed immense overwhelming force to destroy the flying craft's militarized spirits.

-From context I would have guessed this line to be something closer to "Against the destructive Death Gaze – her Nidhogg had displayed immense overwhelming force to destroy the militarized spirit attacking the flying craft.") Not that my guess is necessarily accurate, but the current feels like a mistranslation (and editing this discussion page, I see Drowzycow agreed something is off). --Cthaeh (talk) 23:11, 28 November 2014 (CST)

• (v5c6) Kamito was powerful, so powerful that he left his same-age counterparts at the Institutional school in the dust.

-The majority of this translator's use of Institutional School have referred to the Instructional School, but there was one that didn't seem to be that. This use could go one of two ways as I see it (Instructional School, or possibly referring to the academy) so I wasn't sure what to do. --Cthaeh (talk) 23:11, 28 November 2014 (CST)