Talk:The Longing Of Shiina Ryo:Volume1 Chapter 2: Reikoku

Edit explanation: rather than the line "the japanese pronounce is...", the line "the japanese pronunciation is" is proper grammar, as pronunciation is a noun, while pronounce is a verb. also changed all instances of the <br> html tag with 2 returns, for ease of reading in differentiating paragraphs. --Saganatsu 03:39, 18 September 2010 (UTC)

• Counter-editing explanation: First of all, thank you about the "pronounce/pronunciation" correction: I'll be sure to watch out for mistakes like this in the future. However, there is a bug that occurs when using simple quotation marks as the end of a line and the start of other (both lines merge and the dialogue becomes confusing as a Dune book to a toddler). --Ryuno 11:40, 18 September 2010 (UTC)