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===Part 5===
 
===Part 5===
   
{I’m already free from this platoon.}
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{I’m out already from this platoon.}
   
With that sentence as the beginning, the confrontation between Sumika and Nakajima was not something peaceful from the start. But finally after getting this far, a dangerous air as if they would be going at each other soon began to drift off.
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With that sentence as the beginning, the confrontation between Sumika and Nakajima was not something peaceful from the start. But finally after getting this far, a dangerous air as if the both of them would be going at each other soon began to drift off.
   
Unable to bear it, Ichinotani Chikori who at first remained a spectator stepped forward in between the two.
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Unable to bear it, Ichinotani Chikori who at first remained a spectator cut in between the two.
   
 
“Le, Leader and also Nakajima-kun, let’s calm down a little? Okay?”
 
“Le, Leader and also Nakajima-kun, let’s calm down a little? Okay?”
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That was why Chikori’s attempt was futile.
 
That was why Chikori’s attempt was futile.
   
Sumika had already been completely fired up.
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Sumika had been already completely fired up.
   
 
While her golden hair stood on end from rage, Sumika pushed back Chikori and drew closer to Nakajima.
 
While her golden hair stood on end from rage, Sumika pushed back Chikori and drew closer to Nakajima.
   
“Nakajima-san! Are you thinking about just how much danger we encountered because you ran away on your own!? Although it ended well because of Homura-san’s assistance, but if Homura-san didn’t come just what was going to happen to us! Yet despite so you didn’t even apologize and in addition even quit the platoon, isn’t there a limit to just how rude one can be!?”
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“Nakajima-san! Are you thinking about just how much danger we encountered because you ran away on your own!? Although it ended well because of Homura-san’s assistance, but if Homura-san didn’t come just what was going to happen to us! Yet despite so you didn’t even apologize and in addition even quit the platoon, isn’t there a limit to just how one can be so rude!?”
   
 
“I don’t care! You two almost died only because both of you are greenhorns! Don’t make it my fault!”
 
“I don’t care! You two almost died only because both of you are greenhorns! Don’t make it my fault!”
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He yelled angrily with a voice so loud that spit flew at Sumika’s face.
 
He yelled angrily with a voice so loud that spit flew at Sumika’s face.
   
“Are you planning to shift the blame!?”
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“You are planning to shift the blame!?”
   
“In the first place it’s fine even if we ignored the scramble! If we did that the National Defense Magicians would take care of it, yet you, Hoshikawa, accepted the mission on your own so…! Everything is your fault!”
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“In the first place it’s fine even if we ignored the scramble! If we did that the National Defense Magician would take care of it, yet Hoshikawa accepted the mission on your own so…! Everything is your fault!”
   
 
“The trainee platoon is also a member of National Defense Magician! We have a responsibility to respond to the scramble!”
 
“The trainee platoon is also a member of National Defense Magician! We have a responsibility to respond to the scramble!”
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“Hah-! You're acting like a good kid as usual aren’t you―! As expected from the S-rank magician-sama. But ignoring the scramble is done by all trainee platoons! Everyone cuts corners in this. After all by raising achievements in repelling demons, you will only pointlessly stand out and just get placed on the front line in the future, not taking the scramble is just obvious!”
 
“Hah-! You're acting like a good kid as usual aren’t you―! As expected from the S-rank magician-sama. But ignoring the scramble is done by all trainee platoons! Everyone cuts corners in this. After all by raising achievements in repelling demons, you will only pointlessly stand out and just get placed on the front line in the future, not taking the scramble is just obvious!”
   
“Wha-, are you seriously saying that!? Humans that can handle sorcery are still few in number. If we who are just that few in number don’t do this seriously then just what’s going to happen! What’s going to happen if we cannot protect everyone!”
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“Wha-, are you seriously saying that!? Humans that can handle sorcery are still few in number. If we who are just that few in number don’t do this frantically then just what’s going to happen! What’s going to happen if we cannot protect everyone!”
   
 
“Like I care! Besides why do I have to bet my life for other people’s sake, just because I happen to be able to handle magic power and got conscripted! If you want to become a superman that much then just do it yourself! Who wants to go along with you!”
 
“Like I care! Besides why do I have to bet my life for other people’s sake, just because I happen to be able to handle magic power and got conscripted! If you want to become a superman that much then just do it yourself! Who wants to go along with you!”
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When he returned a sharp parting remark like that, Nakajima now couldn’t turn back anymore.
 
When he returned a sharp parting remark like that, Nakajima now couldn’t turn back anymore.
   
Pushing open the door with force as if to break it, he exited outside while his shoulders were heaving in rage.
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Opening the door with a force as if hitting the door, he exited outside while his shoulders were heaving in rage.
   
 
After Nakajima left, Sumika dropped her waist on the pipe chair in the platoon room and blew out her breath.
 
After Nakajima left, Sumika dropped her waist on the pipe chair in the platoon room and blew out her breath.
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“Really, what a low awareness……!”
 
“Really, what a low awareness……!”
   
That disappointment was not directed at just Nakajima alone.
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That disappointment was not directed to just Nakajima alone.
   
Not limited only to him, the majority of people in this academy had low motivation.
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Not limited to him, the majority of people in this academy had low motivation.
   
 
Well, it was not something so unjustifiable.
 
Well, it was not something so unjustifiable.
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That was why people who possessed even the slightest bit of aptitude were forcefully enrolled into the magician training academy.
 
That was why people who possessed even the slightest bit of aptitude were forcefully enrolled into the magician training academy.
   
And then from the shortage of human personnel, there were a lot of cases where <Soldier class> demon’s exterminations like this time were handed over to the students in the trainee platoon.
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And then from the shortage of human personnel, there were a lot of cases where <Soldier class> demon’s extermination like this time were handed over to the students in the trainee platoon.
   
 
It couldn’t be helped, because of the fact that the demons couldn’t be killed except by an attack that was using magic power.
 
It couldn’t be helped, because of the fact that the demons couldn’t be killed except by an attack that was using magic power.
   
However, to tell children to be understanding about such a problem of society was unreasonable.
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However, to tell children to be understanding about such a problem of society was an unreasonable talk.
   
 
Just why do they have to do something this dangerous?
 
Just why do they have to do something this dangerous?
   
It was not like Sumika couldn’t understand that feeling.
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It was not like Sumika too couldn’t understand that feeling.
   
(However, even if one can understand one may not accept it.)
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(However, even if they can understand they cannot accept it.)
   
 
She understood that it was scary. Even she was scared of the exchange of life. Even today she had just almost died.
 
She understood that it was scary. Even she was scared of the exchange of life. Even today she had just almost died.
   
But, right now the only ones who could oppose the demons were them.
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But, right now the only ones who could equally oppose the demons were only them.
   
And so, why couldn’t everyone become serious about this, no matter what it made her really irritated.
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Despite so, why they couldn’t become frantic about this, no matter what it made her really irritated.
   
In this area…Sumika was also still immature.
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In that area…Sumika was also still immature.
   
 
As a result, Sumika who had a high awareness as a magician felt uncertain somehow.
 
As a result, Sumika who had a high awareness as a magician felt uncertain somehow.
   
Too serious. Gloomy. What are you doing acting like a good child? She was ridiculed like that, estranged, while she was a possessor of the greatest fighting strength that was S-rank Magician where there were only ten people in the world, she was washed away to the 101st platoon that was scorned as [baggage platoon]. She was stuck with taking care of poor students that couldn’t be accepted anywhere else.
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Too frantic. Gloomy. What are you doing acting like a good child? She was ridiculed like that, estranged, while she was a possessor of the greatest fighting strength that was S-rank Magician where there were only ten people in the world, she was washed away to the 101st platoon that was scorned as [baggage platoon]. She was stuck with taking care of poor students that couldn’t be accepted anywhere else.
   
 
Even so Sumika didn’t rot, in order to make her platoon able to fight somehow even with all the difficulties, she was always wracking her brains over and gave out instructions, but she had never been rewarded even once.
 
Even so Sumika didn’t rot, in order to make her platoon able to fight somehow even with all the difficulties, she was always wracking her brains over and gave out instructions, but she had never been rewarded even once.
   
Even though she had given her best, the existence of the humans by her side made all of her effort for nothing.
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Even though she had devoted her best, the existence of humans beside herself made all of her effort for nothing.
   
No matter how much she did her very best, the result was always always tilting in a bad direction.
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No matter how much she did her very best, the result was always always tilting into a bad direction.
   
 
And today the end result was she was almost killed by something like an orc.
 
And today the end result was she was almost killed by something like an orc.
   
Her that if she was alone she could kill something like an orc instantly.
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Herself that if she was alone she could kill something like an orc instantly.
   
 
“Haa……..”
 
“Haa……..”
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“Kyan-“
 
“Kyan-“
   
“Chikori-san. Even you are not unrelated to this problem. Even though I told you to stop, yet you rushed off on your own! In the end you were taken hostage! Do you not have self-awareness, do you know just how much trouble you caused me because of your rash action!?”
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“Chikori-san. Even you are not unrelated to this problem. Even though I told you to stop, yet you rushed off on your own! In the end you were taken hostage! Do you not have self-awareness just how much trouble you caused me because of your rash action!?”
   
 
“Bu, but, that time the orc was heading to the town area…”
 
“Bu, but, that time the orc was heading to the town area…”

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