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Her cheeks heated up when he was looking at her and she became unable to calm down no matter what she did.
 
Her cheeks heated up when he was looking at her and she became unable to calm down no matter what she did.
   
And then, she didn’t want herself to be seen like that and completely looked away.
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And then, she didn’t want herself that was like that to be seen and completely looked away.
   
 
Yet, when he didn’t look in her direction, she would then stare at him for a long time, she was seriously ill.
 
Yet, when he didn’t look in her direction, she would then stare at him for a long time, she was seriously ill.
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Suddenly the students that were still in the courtyard made a stir.
 
Suddenly the students that were still in the courtyard made a stir.
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===Part 5===
 
===Part 5===

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