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Could you explain your edits for Heavy Object 7? I see little reason for nearly all of your changes. Your edits don't improve readability or sentence flow, but use different choice words than what the translator chose. I also noticed you leaving a few mistakes behind, and would like to revert all of your edits. —[[User:EnigmaticRepose|EnigmaticRepose]] ([[User talk:EnigmaticRepose|talk]]) 22:34, 16 January 2014 (CST) |
Could you explain your edits for Heavy Object 7? I see little reason for nearly all of your changes. Your edits don't improve readability or sentence flow, but use different choice words than what the translator chose. I also noticed you leaving a few mistakes behind, and would like to revert all of your edits. —[[User:EnigmaticRepose|EnigmaticRepose]] ([[User talk:EnigmaticRepose|talk]]) 22:34, 16 January 2014 (CST) |
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| + | I'm sorry if I ever left and made some mistakes on my editing. You can revert it if you deem some of the edits are unreasonable. About my edits, well as I read throughout, some phrases/sentences need a bit of words to be understood and the rest were grammar fixes (in my opinion) because some paragraphs have sentences with verbs in inconsistent time like past phrases/sentences in between present ones and vice versa and some character lines which are in double apostrophes are not in present form. But anyways, sorry for the trouble. -[[User:DevilByMySide]] |
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Revision as of 07:46, 17 January 2014
Heavy Objects edits
Could you explain your edits for Heavy Object 7? I see little reason for nearly all of your changes. Your edits don't improve readability or sentence flow, but use different choice words than what the translator chose. I also noticed you leaving a few mistakes behind, and would like to revert all of your edits. —EnigmaticRepose (talk) 22:34, 16 January 2014 (CST)
I'm sorry if I ever left and made some mistakes on my editing. You can revert it if you deem some of the edits are unreasonable. About my edits, well as I read throughout, some phrases/sentences need a bit of words to be understood and the rest were grammar fixes (in my opinion) because some paragraphs have sentences with verbs in inconsistent time like past phrases/sentences in between present ones and vice versa and some character lines which are in double apostrophes are not in present form. But anyways, sorry for the trouble. -User:DevilByMySide
