This is the feedback thread for Incredible Loli Change (https://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/inde ... oli_Change)
Please tell me how you think of it.
This is a popular Chinese web series with about 2.3 million read count to date!
Synopsis:
The main character is called Azumabashi Jin-ichi, he's just a completely normal guy that has the uncontrollable ability transform into a cute loli, by getting hit by a shooting star. Then Weird things start to happen around him, which pretty much just ruined his life.
Author: LOSly.Hoy
Incredible Loli Change
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Chapter 3 Added!
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Guy with the power to transform into cute loli? That's instant 10/10 masterpiece.
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I enjoyed the work you did, so much that I went and edited the story myself!
There's one place where I didn't get the sentence
Also,
(I'm BelialBook, btw)
There's one place where I didn't get the sentence
It's the start of chapter 3. Is it really only "I can't anymore"? Or is there a verb that you forgot to put in?After experiencing the “Change to a Loli~ One Night Trip”, I was already very tired, now I’m experiencing “Get hungry! No Breakfast No Lunch No Dinner, ‘Stomach Dying’ One Day Trip!”, I
can’t anymore…
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I don't think "I can't even anymore" is a complete sentence.Jabbing at my sister has became my daily routine. Is Rin-ichi even tired of it? It’s like this everyday, I can’t even anymore…
(I'm BelialBook, btw)
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Chapter 4-5 up!
Also BelialBook, are there anyways of contacting you?
I just don't think posting on forum is a efficient way to communicate.
Also BelialBook, are there anyways of contacting you?
I just don't think posting on forum is a efficient way to communicate.
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If you count Facebook and/or Twitter as a way of communication, then yes.