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Original Light Novel: The Lady Voltigeur

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Um. Hello everyone.

I've been lingering and reading the light novel translations in this site for some time now, and I must say that I really love the literature here.
Suddenly I managed to stumble upon the OLN by the title of Daybreak Hyperion, I got inspired to write something too. I have managed to write down my first "book" and I thought that instead of letting it rot in my drawer, why don't I post it online and maybe some like-minded people might appreciate it?

So to cut down to the chase, this will be my first try to write a novel in this way. I am humbly honored by the opportunity of my work be read by such amazing people such as you in this community. In no way am I a professional writer and English is not my mother tongue, but I do plan on going career if my writing skills get sharpened enough, and I thought that it would be great if I develop my skills by being in this community.

A also want to thank BitterSugar for lending me a helping hand!

So, here goes the summary of my OLN:
The year was 1813, Europe was in flames as the Napoleonic wars continued to rage on the face of the continent. Nathalie Toussaint was an elite soldier fighting for France, a female cross-dresser that joined the French Grand Army for personal reasons.

Her fate was forever changed when she met an unsuspecting hunter by the name of Reinhard Jaeger. Together with their friends, they try to live their lives as far away from the war as possible only to be dragged back in by circumstances beyond their control.

As the different warring nations of Europe clashed against each other in the closing years of the war, Nathalie and Reinhard discover that their pasts and their lives had been more intertwined than they ever could have imagined. Against the most unlikely and unexpected foe, Nathalie and Reinhard's beliefs and trust may be shaken... for them the closing years of the war was just the beginning.


Prologue:
Spoiler! :
Prologue: October 19th, 1813

A massive explosion shook the earth. Everything trembled in its violent wake. Smoke rose up from the city miles up into the air, shrouding the thousands of people beneath in a great shadow. The shockwave of its sound tore through everything... even the minds and hearts of tens of thousands of French soldiers in the city of Leipzig.

The soldiers were fighting street by street, house by house. They were in a battle with their lives within the grasp of the alliance of Prussia, Russia and Austria and Sweden.

It is 1:00 PM October 19, 1813 and the French Grande Armée fights for its very survival inside the city of Leipzig. It has been days already into the battle and the Emperor of the French, Napoleon Bonaparte, had come to the conclusion that it is a losing battle and decided to retreat.

However, the only liberation for the French was the sole bridge across the White Elster River.

A dreaded scream broke through the chaos, “The bridge...! The bridge is down!!!”

“We have no other way out! There’s nowhere to go!” the others cried out in panic and in fear for their lives.

Who wouldn't be? Thousands of enemy soldiers were advancing from the other end of the city.

Thirty thousand men were now stranded in the city. Thirty thousand exhausted, fatigued and demoralized men trapped in a labyrinth of wood and stone.
A river stood on one side and on the other was the enemy army intent on their utter destruction.
The destruction of the bridge meant defeat for the French.

Debris. Wood. People. In the thick of the chaotic battle, they all hurled through the air like mere pebbles. Through the explosions and confusions, hysterical shouting and the heavy treading of the soldiers' boots were heard.
Amidst the war torn streets stood Nathalie. With a gray scarf wrapped around her, she stared gravely at the plume of smoke rising from whatever remained of the bridge.
Panic. Confusion. Agitation. With these emotions in hand, everyone ran across the streets.
But Nathalie stood still. Without panic. Without confusion. Without agitation. Just there - staring at the destruction of the bridge.

“No.... no... it can’t be,” a very soft voice came out of her. It was a voice devoid of hope.
It was understandable - she had been in the devastated and war-torn city of Leipzig for days.
The stress and the fatigue she endured must have been intolerable.

“W-what? What the hell just happened?” holding her musket tighter with both her hands, her face contorted in confusion and fear. Her eyes trembled as she gazed upon the destruction ahead.

“W-W-What the hell just happened to the bridge?!” she once again cried out in a mix of emotions.

“..................Ugh!... Hey! Where do we go now?” Claire, a friend of Nathalie’s, stopped beside her and took deep breaths to quench her need for much needed air.

Nathalie looked back at her. In her eyes reflected the despair and uncertainty of being trapped in the city.

“Where do we head now?” the bespectacled lady asked once again, wiping the sweat off her forehead.

The two young women were in grave danger. Not only was a fierce battle raging around which placed them in harm’s way, but they weren't civilians in this war... they were part of the French Grande Armée.
They were wearing the same blue-white uniform and shooting the same musket like other Frenchmen.

“Cross the river!” Nathalie said to her friend. After adjusting her shako, she sprinted towards the bridge along with her friend.

“How...? H-how are we going to cross that?” Claire asked as she saw the huge river snaking around the city. The river's extend seemed impossible for her to cross no matter how much she thought of it.

“There's no other way than to swim it!” Nathalie shouted at Claire as she points at the other bank of the river.

“What?! Are you crazy? We’ll drown trying to cross this river!”

“You’re a good swimmer! I know you can swim across that!”

In the middle of their discussion, bullets whizzed past their heads. Enemy troops were closing in, shooting at anyone wearing a French uniform.

“Get in the water already!” Nathalie shouted again.

“What about you? You know you’re not that good in the water... you might drown trying to cross!”

“That’s why I’m going to find a shallower place where I can cross - now go!”

“No! I am not going to leave you here! We will both find a better crossing.”

“This is not the time to-------”

Before Nathalie could even finish, a cannonball bounced by dangerously close to them. It was so close that the two of them were almost thrown to the ground.
The impact cracked and destroyed the cobblestones that made up the road they were standing on. Glass panes from windows of the houses in the vicinity shattered. Splinters of wood sprayed through the open area.

Regaining their balance, the two young women sprinted and, ploughing and shoving their way through the densely packed body of soldiers, made their way to the edge of the river.
By the time they reached their destination, they felt nauseated from the exhaustion.

“Dammit! The enemy are closing in; we need to get out of here now.”
Nathalie’s eyes shook in fear as she saw a column of Prussian and Russian troops closing in from the road some distance ahead.

The enemy had broken through the Grimma Gate earlier and were starting to make ground through the ferocious house to house fighting.

Nathalie and Claire, however, know that it was just a matter of time before the city collapsed to the alliance. They needed to escape.

“Jump now! Jump now!” Claire reached out her hand, convincing Nathalie to jump with her as she stood by the edge of the river.

“Okay, okay! I’ll jump! Just help me swim so I don’t drown!”

“Good! Now let’s go!”

But before she could grab her friend’s hand, Nathalie saw a group of Prussians quickly closing in on them.

“Tch!” she knew they would get shot in the back if they swam the river with the enemy this close to them.

“Sorry Claire.” Nathalie muttered softly before she pushed her friend over.

She planned to distract the soldiers and give time for Claire to swim across the river safely.

“Wha...?” before the woman in glasses could even utter a single word, she was already falling towards the water.

“Live on.............,” it was the last word that Claire heard from Nathalie, and the last thing she saw was her friend before everything turned into the splashing of water.

Believing that her friend was safe, Nathalie turned around to see that the enemy were drawing near to her and the other French soldiers.

They were surrounded. They had them outnumbered. They were outgunned, yet she remained defiant.

She raised her musket to her shoulder and aimed at the approaching enemy, the concentration in her eyes almost inhuman.

“Let’s get this over with.” with these words, Nathalie pulled the trigger. Her story has begun.

Chapter 1:
Spoiler! :
Chapter 1: The eyes that pierce a soul.

Part 1

Bang!
6:00 PM. The sound of the gunshot resounded through the otherwise silent woods. As the plume of smoke from his weapon started to clear, the young man frowned with his eyebrow twitching in displease at the sight of missing his shot.

“Damn! There goes my dinner.” he grumbled, the hare hopping further and further away until it disappeared into the forest.

With a disappointed sigh, he reached for another cartridge from his ammunition pouch that was slung over his shoulder and went all the way down to his right hip.

That’s my last round too. Unlucky.
However, upon inserting his hand into the pouch, he realized it was empty. The young hunter had just used his last round, missing his last opportunity to catch a decent meal.

What the hell just happened there anyway?

He stared into the distant sky, where the smoke and turbulence of a battle was raging. He wondered about the massive explosion he heard and the huge plume of smoke he saw a few hours ago.

The young man’s name was Reinhard Jaeger, a hunter hailing from Prussia of average physique with striking brown eyes that looked intimidating yet inviting at the same time. Sporting a rough black vest left open over a long sleeved white shirt tucked inside a pair of trousers and a pair of simple leather boots, he looked like an ordinary everyday person with no unique characteristic at all. His brown hair fluttered along with the wind as it blew past him. He owned a custom made rifle - uncommon at the time due to the difficulty of crafting the rifling in a barrel of the weapon. The more universally-used infantry weapon was the smoothbore musket.

A rather more precise description of this young man was that he was the type of person that appeared to be a happy-go-lucky kind of guy; a simple minded fellow that decided on stuff at the very last moment.
If some of his friends were around him right now, they would probably be really uncomfortable as a battle was raging just a few miles from where he was standing. Yet, he would just smile at them as if he doesn't care.

“.......Nnnnnnnnggghhhh..... Looks like I’ll get to Berlin starving,” with another exasperated sigh of disappointment, he took a piece of bread from his bag and began nibbling on it.

With an extremely frustrated look, he walked towards the nearest tree that looked comfortable for him to rest against. He placed his rifle beside him, sitting on the grass with his head resting on the tree.

Reinhard withdrew a white locket from the inside of his long-sleeved shirt. It was a small circular locket about a few centimetres in width, adorned with beautiful golden coloured engravings.

He stared at the locket for a moment, holding it up against the afternoon sunlight shining through the canopy of the woods, contrasting it with the environment. Gently caressing it with his right thumb, he pondered about something very deeply, very sincerely. It was as if the locket had some sentimental values to him.

“...Maybe sometime I’ll get you back to your proper owner. Until then, you’re in my care.”

He caressed the locket one last time before he placed it back inside his shirt.

“That darn battle has been going on for days now... good thing it's drawing to an end,” he murmured, fixating his gaze at the direction of the city of Leipzig, his tone mixed with both boredom and exhaustion.
He had already been in the woods for two days - he arrived at Leipzig during the heat of the battle. Most battles in this era lasted from a few hours and up to a little under a day. He had not expected it to last this long.

In any event, he seemed certain that the battle was almost over. The mortar shots and musket volleys that he had heard for the last days have dwindled and weakened.

Sitting idly by the tree without anything to do, he stared blankly at the ground, his head slowly going numb from inactivity.

“Aaaaahhhhh!!! Dammit, I’m so bored!” he fussed as he scratched his head in a furious wave of circles, messing up his hair.

All of it just because he was tired of waiting before he could move to Berlin and see someone that he had business with.
He had the option of walking back and looking for another route towards his destination, but he was just too lazy to try and instead ended up waiting for two whole days for the battle to end.
By this point, he must have been thinking that if he walked back and tried another route to Berlin he would already be there, enjoying a mug of beer.

He bit and chewed on the bread he was holding, until none of it was left in his hands. Stretching his arms and legs, he yawned his heart out, relaxed and made himself at home under the sturdy tree.
He crossed his arms over his chest, leaning back on the tree and closing his eyes. He thought that sleeping would be the best thing he could do to wait for the battle to end completely.

He made such a peaceful and relaxed face in trying to sleep, it was as if all of his worries have been thrown out of the window and the only thing he cared about was the comfortable positioning of his head against the tree.

Such a comfortable position was not to last, though.

Before he could even sleep for five minutes, the sound of gunshots nearby awoke him.

One. Two. The sound of the shots seemed to become louder with the number of shots fired. Along with the sound, there were loud *tadud tadud tadud* sounds, Reinhard listened closely and the sound got louder and louder, clearer and clearer... until it became clear to him that the sound was the thundering hooves of horses.

Pop! Pop! Bang!
The sound of sporadic musket shots resounded in the distance once again.

What in the world was that, now?

He peeked around the tree he was resting against, using his rifle as a support. He saw figures in the distance, some of which were obscured by the trees and bushes of the woods, while the others were at clear sight and unmistakable.

Squinting his eyes, he focused on the figures ahead.
He saw figures in blue and white... all running about in a way that looked like a chaotic free-for-all, screaming and yelling in panicked voices.

“Run! Run!” the figures in blue yelled.
“Dammit, they’re on our tail!” screamed another in obvious fear.

Reinhard's pair of eyebrows almost met when he saw the figures run about mindlessly.
At first, he was a bit unsure of what was happening. It all happened so fast that he was left no choice but to be dumbstruck for a moment.

It was until he saw the source of the thundering sounds that it became as clear as day.

He never could have guessed that the horses were Russian Cavalry in pursuit of fleeing French Infantry!

“Get them!” the Russians shouted.
“Kill them! Kill them!” another cavalrymen yelled in bloodthirsty anger.
With heavy swords and glaring sabres being struck at the backs of the fleeing French soldiers, screams of agony and death filled the air.
The disorganized French were no match for the horsemen that were pursuing them. They were being cut down at will, with little to no chance of fighting back.

The blades swinging in the air with *whoosh* sounds pushed Reinhard out of his sleepy state, the terrifying sound of the weapon disconcerting even for the most brave of men.

Crap! I need to get out here NOW!

Reinhard knew that his napping haven was not the best place in the world to be in, right now. He picked up his rifle and ran to try and hide.
With all the chaos going on around him, he was careful to avoid getting into contact with either party as his identity could be easily mistaken, ending up in a not-so-enjoyable encounter.

Running from trees to trees, taking effective cover from them and using moments of openings when the Russians and the fleeing French could not see him, he moved along the forest trying to escape.

Where in the world did they come from?
His heart was beating so fast, the only thing in his mind was to get out of the woods alive.

He gripped his rifle tightly. Sweat poured down his forehead. His knees trembled.

Who wouldn't be intimidated by galloping steeds mounted by rough-faced mustachioed Russians filled with killing intent swinging their swords wildly in the air?

He felt even more at edge as he watched as Russian horsemen cut their share of the disarrayed French. The Russians showed no mercy and slew anyone that they see as the enemy, everyone simply hated whoever was on the other side.

The Napoleonic wars has been raging for over a decade now. Alliances and enemies have changed multiple times. Borders of nations had been drawn and redrawn. Atrocities were committed to each other by both sides. Obviously people will begin to hate whoever was beyond their borders.

Even so, Europe just seemed to particularly hate the French. Who could blame the coalition? Many of the members of the different coalitions have been defeated and humiliated by the Emperor Napoleon and his armies in the previous wars.

The only problem...? The coalitions were the ones that usually declared war on France, only for their armies to be routed and destroyed. In addition to that, Napoleon had a habit of ending the war by marching into the capital cities of the countries he had soundly defeated... of course, the consequences being everyone in the country hating Napoleon.

This seemed to have reached the last straw though, as the Russians released all their pent up rage and hate on the fleeing French right in front of them.

“Aaarrrghhh! Aaaaahhhhh!!!” the French soldiers screamed in terror as they desperately ran away from their pursuers all the while being cut down in the process.

Even with all of this chaos going on around him, Reinhard effectively evaded both the Russian cavalrymen and the French troops by moving from one tree to another... until his luck seemed to run out.

“Oh shit!!!!” Reinhard cursed in a concealed shout.

He was about to move towards another tree and take cover, but abruptly stopped in the middle of the way and took cover behind a huge hollow log that had fallen.

There was someone in front of him. He barely caught them by the corner of his eye.

Gulp. He swallowed and exhaled forcefully.

He looked around, trying to find somewhere he could hide; he was out in the open.
The only thing that stood between him and the threat was the fallen log.
Slowly, he moved his head up. He peeked nervously at what was on the other side of the log.

What stopped him was a Russian hussar. He was proudly sitting on his horse holding the reins with authority. His eyes were going from left to right, surveying the area for any signs of French infantry.
His stance was that of an aggressive horseman ready to charge at anything that would come into his field of vision. The scabbard which contained his sabre looked infinitely dangerous.

“Dammit!” Reinhard whispered to himself and crouched down as low as he can, making himself as small as possible to be able to hide from the eyes of the hussar.

“I don’t want to be mistaken as a Frenchman on so many levels,” he mumbled. The thought of being mistaken as French gave him the chills.

Tch! Looks like I got no other choice.
He crawled ever so slowly on all fours towards the end of the log, hoping he could get inside it to hide, to wait for all of this to pass. After all, the log was big enough to fit about three people.

“C’mon......... just a little more,” he mumbled to himself again and slowly moved his limbs one at a time.

Every little inch he moves towards the end of the log, the closer he gets to safety.
He was sure that when the afternoon sun began to set and the darkness took its place, the horsemen would leave and he would be safe.

“Now the hard part... I need to enter without being noticed.”

He was now on the end of the log; the only thing left to do now was to go inside... the problem was that he’d be exposed if he just suddenly jumped into the opening. He needed to distract the rider.

He picked up a rock the size of a fist from the ground. He was going to throw it and distract the horseman with the noise it would create, hopefully buying him enough time to enter the log.

This is the oldest trick in the book but I guess it will work.

He was about to throw the rock, but then, from out of nowhere, there came a loud crashing noise.The sound of the bushes shaking and rustling followed suit.
It sounded like something the size of a man fell and crashed into some bushes somewhere behind him.

It was a sound that almost made Reinhard’s heart skip a beat.

“W-W-What the hell was that?!” in shock, his trembling hands dropped the rock and he looked around to find the source of the sound.
Suddenly, he heard a disconcerting *kaching* sound. The sudden sharp sound sends chills down his spine.

Reinhard’s head instinctively cocked back into the direction of the unsettling sound.

Just from his instinct, Reinhard knew that the sound meant bad news. His eyes widened even more in shock as he saw what it was....

It was the Russian pulling out his gleaming sabre and then suddenly galloping towards Reinhard’s location.

The hussar had clearly heard the noise of the moving of bushes and the loud thud coming from Reinhard’s side of the hollow log.
With his sharp sabre in hand the hussar ordered his horse to charge. The horse began to advance forwards with reckless abandon.

“Aw shit, you’ve got to be kidding me!” Reinhard groaned and quickly tried to come up with ways to defend himself from the sudden attack.

I don’t have any cartridges left!

My rifle doesn’t have a bayonet. he noted, all the while giving a sarcastic smile at his rifle.

“Sometimes I just really hate you Musky,” he whispered to his weapon, talking to the rifle as if it was alive.

Time seemed to slow down for Reinhard - the movements of anything and everything around him seemed to stop, as he looked at the eyes of the Russian atop his mount.

“C’mon you Russian!!!!!” he yelled out at the Russian horseman and stood up, preparing himself for combat.

His hands held tighter on his rifle. He held it by two hands on the muzzle end much like a club. He gritted his teeth and his eyes sharpened its look as if the stare itself would be enough to kill the enemy.
He bent his knees a little, lowering his centre of gravity, in a stance that seemed like he would swing the rifle like a club or a bat at the incoming Russian.

Oh shit! Oh shit he’s really coming.

His hands held his rifle with such force he could hear his skin squeak as it rubbed against the wooden part of his weapon.
Reinhard prepared to stand his ground against a clearly advantaged foe.
Adrenaline gushed into his system and cold sweat slid down his forehead.
He planted his foot down to the ground hard, ready to battle.



Part 2

“Dammit, how long will these Russians chase us for?” Nathalie screamed in frustration, breathless from the elongated run from the enemy.
Through skill and a little luck, she somehow managed to fight her way through the enemies in the city. She found a shallow area of the river where she crossed without getting much of her equipment wet.

Along with several other French soldiers, she managed to reach a wooded area a few kilometres away from the city. It was an area where the advantages of the chasing Russian Cavalries was limited to some extent.

“H-Hey! Voltigeur, you are part of the young guard, right? ....Under Marshal Oudinot?" a French soldier asked Nathalie after noticing her outfit.

The blue uniform with the green epaulettes was clearly visible even from a distance. Along with her shako which was also adorned in yellow linings, the green and red coloured plume on top strongly implied that she was part of one of the regiments of voltigeurs of the Young Guard.

The voltigeurs were a body of soldiers that act as the elite skirmishers of the French Grande Armée. They were grouped together with other young soldiers in the imperial guard to form the Young Guard, its youngest members. They served alongside the Middle Guard and the feared personal units of the Emperor of France himself... the Old Guard.

However, the French soldier did not recognize that the voltigeur he was speaking to was a female due to the scarf wrapped around her which covered her face well.

“Yeah... do you know what happened back there? Did Marshal Oudinot make it out?" Nathalie replied to the soldier as they continued to run as far away from the city as possible.

“I don’t know what in the world happened to the bridge, but I’m sure the marshal made it out. The same goes for the majority of the Young Guard... but why were you left here?" the French soldier asked.

“I got separated from the rest of my regiment along with a few others during an intense attack from the Russians in Oudinot’s sector,” she replied. “I joined the rear guard to try and hold off the enemy while the main body retreated. I didn’t think I’d end up here.”

Just as she finished her reply, a bright line blurred past her face. The French soldier she was talking to mere seconds earlier was now lying on the ground - either dead or dying from sustaining a long cut through his back.

“What the....?!” Nathalie’s eyes were filled with shock.
She looked up and saw a threatening sight.

A hussar stood in front of her. The white shiny line that passed near Nathalie’s face moments ago was the sabre the hussar was wielding. It was now coated with thick, crimson liquid.
He sat on his horse as he looked down upon the voltigeur. He raised the sabre above his head before swinging it at her.

“Oh... for the love of...!”
Nathalie jumped to one side. She evaded a deadly blow as the Russian hussar swung the sabre at her trying cut her head off with one clean strike to the neck.
She could clearly hear the sabre produce an unnerving *whoosh* sound as it cut through the air, missing her by inches.

“Die, you French pig!” the Russian roared, swinging his sabre violently once again, trying to land a decisive strike on Nathalie.

Being on top of a horse, his advantage was overwhelming in a melee combat. He could easily wound Nathalie with the sabre, but she could barely reach the rider because of the height disadvantage.
Another factor was also her own short stature. The Russian hussar could also order his horse to move wherever he pleases, making him more mobile than a lone infantryman. These detrimental factors forced Nathalie to be on the defensive.

“...Ugh!” blocking and evading the repeated attacks of the horseman left Nathalie with no time to shoot the Russian with her smoothbore musket.

Turning her back now and running away to escape was out of question. Doing so will only leave her open to be hacked down.
The only choice she had left to escape was to stab the Russian with her musket’s bayonet.

She waited for the perfect angle for a decisive blow against the enemy. One wrong move from the hussar that would reduce his height advantage. A move that will leave him vulnerable for a counterattack.

“Come on!”
Nathalie jumped a few paces back to draw an attack that would leave the Russian to stoop down in order to attack, allowing her to reach him with the bayonet.

The Russian bit the bait. He swung his sabre and leaned down as he tried to reach Nathalie with it. With a quick flick of her musket, Nathalie parried the sword aside before she continued to thrust it into her foe's chest.

“...Aaaaaaargh!” the Russian hussar fell to the ground and his horse ran away. The bayonet was impaled deep into his chest.

Nathalie, somewhat astounded by her success, was left breathless from the battle.

I can’t afford to get into a scrap like that again. she thought.

She adjusted her shako and wiped the sweat on her forehead before proceeding to run deeper into the woods with the other French troops. The enemy cavalries were relentless despite the trees that slowed them down.

“Damn, here they come again!” a Frenchman once again yelled to his comrades, pointing at the incoming Russians. Another squadron of cavalrymen was headed straight for them.

Some of the soldiers in the ragtag group fired their muskets, trying to shoot down the riders or the horses. Others ran as fast as they can, trying to shake off their pursuers or at least finding a safe hiding place to shelter them from the attack.

“It’s every man for himself!” some of the French soldiers yelled as they ran away. They abandoned their weapons and other equipment to reduce the weight that they were carrying in a desperate bid to escape from the carnage.

However, the Russian hussars managed to close the distance and the wholesale butchery of the fleeing French soldiers continued even though they were several kilometres away from the city.

“Damn, these Russians never know when the hell to quit!”
Nathalie became extremely frustrated at the stubbornness of the Russian pursuers.

There were just too many Russian horsemen in the area. Nathalie ran and hid behind the trees, trying to make her way into a safe area to find a way to escape from them.
She knew she wouldn't last a minute if she got caught in a fight with that many horsemen.

She looked at all directions. The only things that she could see was the Russians chasing and cutting down her fellow French soldiers as they fled in panic.

Knowing that it was pointless to run away from the horses' speed, she looked around and surveyed the area quickly. She was looking for anywhere to hide in. Anywhere.

Just then, she saw movements by the corner of her eye.

She cocked her head to her left to confirm that what she saw wasn’t only her imagination. It wasn't.

At first glance, she couldn't move. She just stared at that direction, awestruck at what she saw.

There were two horsemen.

Russian horsemen.

With their sabres drawn.

Coming right at her.

“Dammit! Dammit!” she screamed out in irritation, turning around and running away from the pursuers.

She had extreme difficulty dealing with just a single rider. There was no way she’d survive fighting two at the same time while she was alone.

“You have got to be kidding me!” she grumbled, voicing out her frustration.

“You’ll be dead in a matter seconds after I cut your head off! So you better make it easy for the both of us and stop running so I can swing my sword at you!” the Russian yelled at her, taunting the voltigeur with his cocky words.

She did not even dare to look back. All it took was one mistake. One error, and it would all be over.

Nathalie continued to run away as fast as she can. But she knew herself that a man can never outrun a horse. Despite her effort in trying to escape, the horsemen only got closer and closer.

The distance between Nathalie and the two Russians was quickly shrinking. It would just be a matter of time before she was slashed by the sharp Russian steel.

“Hahaha! There is no hope now! This is where you will fall!” one of the Russian horsemen yelled again, his sabre raised high.

Need... to...... find a way... out!
Even though all hope seemed to be lost, she still continued running. She was not the type of person to easily gives up.

It was then that her foot suddenly slipped on a rock on a steep slope. She started to fall and tumble out of control, hitting trees and bushes and rocks on the way down to the bottom of what seemed to be a small ravine.

“Aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

She screamed, curling up into a little ball in instict. She placed her arms over her face and head, trying to shield her vulnerable head from the violent descent.

She could not even see where she was falling; she just closed her eyes and hoped for the best.
Her body bounced around like a ragdoll, seemingly lifeless as it finally met contact with a strong loud thud when she landed on a big bush.
It was almost like it was all planned; she just fell and disappeared from view.

The two Russians saw her fall and tumble, but they could not see her in the bottom.

“No one would survive that kind of fall," one of her pursuers said to his fellow horseman after examining the area where he thought the voltigeur could have landed.

“Yeah, you’ll be lucky as hell if you got only a few broken bones from that!” the other Russian replied in agreement.

Convinced that their enemy was done for, the Russians left the area, not even doubling back to look at the site once again.
They were so sure that fall and the impact on her body was enough to kill her that they never bothered checking.

However, at the bottom of the ravine, amongst the twigs and fallen branches, Nathalie slowly crawled out of the bushes.
No matter how little the probabilities are, she survived the fall without any major injuries. All she got were a few scratches here and there and a really dirty appearance from being covered with leaves and dirt from the fall.

“Ow! Ow, my butt, my butt! That hurt.”
Nathalie held her bottom in pain and got up from what looked like a pretty serious fall. She survived the accident because she had fallen on a large bush which cushioned her fall well enough that she didn’t suffer any serious wound.

“Looks like I finally got away from those bastards,” she brushed the dirt away from her body.

Nathalie looked around to check if she really was safe. She walked out of the bush where she fell and looked up.

She felt her heart sank.

Oh! For the love of....! Give me a break!

To her dismay, there was a lone Russian hussar standing about fifty yards away from her. Another Russian eager to cut a French soldier in two.

Just how many of these bastards are here chasing us anyway?! Nathalie thought after she realized that there seemed to be no end to the number of Russian hussars.

The enemy caught sight of her and unsheathed his sabre. With a cocky and confident smirk on his face, the Russian began charging straight into her at almost a full gallop.

“Shit! Seriously?!”

Without her even thinking, her body reacted based on muscle memory. As the threat approached her, she quickly placed her musket on her shoulder and cocked the flint mechanism of the musket.

She was totally guessing where the musket ball will land if she shoots now. She had to wait for the Russian to come closer - if she pulled the trigger too early, she’d probably miss considering it was a moving target.. She aligned her eyes with the musket’s barrel.

The muskets issued to soldiers did not have sights... they never needed them as soldiers in this kind of warfare relied on mass volleys of disciplined musket fire and not on individual shots to defeat the enemy. This was because muskets were not that accurate past 100 yards. However, they compensated this inaccuracy by forming lines and firing in unison in order to shoot out the maximum firepower they could dish out for the shortest amount of time possible.

But Nathalie was no regular infantryman, she was a voltigeur... an elite. The best shots anyone could find in the entirety of the French Grande Armée.
She readied her weapon, taking aim. Eyes focused on the straight barrel of her musket, she carefully lined it up with her target.

Just a little closer... a little more... a little more...
Allowing the enemy to move closer will increase her chances of hitting. She let the horseman charge towards her closer. She only has one shot... one chance to do this.
Nathalie knew that missing meant death. She took her time aiming, letting the horseman fill her field of vision.
Her finger was ready to pull the trigger; she was already squeezing and applying slight pressure on it when suddenly a black figure appeared in her line of fire.

“W-What in the...?!” Nathalie blurted when she saw the figure that blocked her shot at the Russian.

W-Where did....? Where in the world did he come from?!
She haltingly looked at the figure that suddenly popped out from nowhere. Needless to say, she was extremely annoyed by the sudden appearance of what she thought was another threat.

It was Reinhard. The abruptness of the charge of the Russian hussar took him completely by surprise that he did not even notice the voltigeur. He thought he was the one being charged at. In reality, it was Nathalie that was only a few paces behind him that was the actual target.

Who do I shoot?! Who do I shoot?! confused and shocked by the sudden appearance of the Prussian hunter ahead of her, Nathalie faced the dilemma of who’s the one she needed to deal with first.

Her eyes quickly went to and fro between the charging Russian and the Prussian who suddenly appeared out of nowhere.

“This day just keeps on getting more stupid!” the voltigeur shouted out, then stepped a few feet to the side to get Reinhard out of her line of fire.

She deemed that the greater threat as of now was the Russian. She will just deal with the mysterious black figure later.
Nathalie adjusted her aim as quickly as she can and shot at the horseman, missing Reinhard by mere inches.

“Gyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!” she screamed as she pulled the trigger, letting out accumulated frustration and anger along with the shot.

The Russian went down with a loud thud and his horse shook its head before it ran away. Reinhard turned, noticing the French soldier.


Part 3


Part 3


As the smoke from the musket's shot diminished in the air, Reinhard saw Nathalie's covered face through the cloud of smoke. Still in her shooting stance, Nathalie glared at Reinhard with a confused expression, as if she was pondering whether he was or was not a threat.

This guy is probably the one that shot the Russian.
As this thought went through Reinhard’s head, he saw the French soldier looking straight at him with inscrutable sapphire eyes.

Oh man! H-H-He’s staring at me! What the hell is he thinking?
Reinhard thought, panic and bewilderment replacing his otherwise aloof emotion.

He noticed that Nathalie’s gaze suddenly shifted from his eyes and down to the rifle he was holding. The cryptic pair of eyes focused on the rifle intently, as if absorbing the image of it by staring at it.
Reinhard could almost hear his own heartbeat with every second that passed.
Before long, Nathalie’s gaze shifted back into Reinhard's eyes and a moment of fear and uncertainty left the two completely motionless.

He surely thinks that I’m an enemy. Dammit Musky, I really hate your uselessness right now. Reinhard thought while desperately thinking of a way to communicate with the French soldier and try to persuade him that he was not an enemy nor a threat.

“W-W-Wait, good sir... I am... I am not...” before he can finish his explanation, Nathalie came charging at him at an alarming speed.

Reinhard's eyes widened upon seeing the tip of the bayonet heading straight for his face.

With threatening intensity, Nathalie thrust the bayonet at Reinhard in an attempt to kill him.

Man, this guy is quick!
Reinhard evaded the sharp tip of the blade with little inches to spare by ducking. He felt the air move as the musket thrust past over his head. The bayonet was so close that he could see the sharp point very clearly.

This soldier wasn't just some pushover that would back down - Reinhard needed to do something... and fast.

“Oh no you don’t!!!!” Nathalie swiftly changed the trajectory of her musket from horizontal into vertical, attempting to bash Reinhard’s skull with the butt end of her weapon. Reinhard easily jumped out of the way, staying clear out of the weapon’s path.

Damn, I can’t hit this guy! He’s too agile!
Nathalie thought in dissatisfaction. She was about to perform another attack but stopped when she felt a strong tugging on her weapon.

Reinhard threw his Musky to the ground, then grabbed Nathalie's musket with both his hands and pulled the weapon towards him - pulling Nathalie along with it. He bashed her with his shoulder, ripping the musket away from her hands. She fell to the ground with an audible thud.

He has such a weak grip on his weapon, just what kind of a soldier is this?
Reinhard asked himself as he wondered about the unexpected weak strength of the soldier. The puzzled Reinhard threw the musket away and took a closer look at the soldier clad in blue and white.

He was utterly surprised when he saw Nathalie wielding his rifle that he named “Musky”. His own rifle was pointed straight at him, ready to be fired at any moment.

“I already told you that I’m not the enemy,” he said to Nathalie, still trying to persuade her. “And you! Are you really gonna shoot me? Musky, why?!” he added, waving and moving his hands as if trying to court a lady.

“You’re talking to your weapon, weirdo? Seriously?!! It’s really getting on my nerves.”
Nathalie scowled at Reinhard with a clearly irritated voice. The annoyed Frenchwoman then cocked the gun and pointed the muzzle at Reinhard’s crotch.

“...”
Reinhard was silenced by where the French soldier aimed his rifle.

“What are you doing?” he asked, wondering of the intentions of the blue clad soldier.

“...”
Nathalie didn’t even reply. She pulled the trigger and the rifle’s flint produced sparks but there was no familiar sound of a musket's shot. Nathalie’s eyes widened in surprise when the rifle did not fire.

“Shit! It’s not loaded?!” Nathalie's jaw dropped in shock.

“Ahem! What are you doing?” Reinhard asked her again, resting his hands on his waist.

“Tch! I thought I could have blown your balls away,” Nathalie grumbled with clear disappointment.

“W-what did you say...?!” Reinhard nonchalantly walked behind Nathalie. He wrapped his arm around her neck and placed the voltigeur in a playful chokehold. “Dammit! Trying to use my own gun to blow my balls away?! How evil of you!”
Reinhard applied pressure down on her neck. Nathalie tapped out as fast as she possibly can before her face turned even more blue from the lack of oxygen.

He’s way too small.
Only then Reinhard was able to examine the soldier in detail. He was baffled by the weakness of the soldier’s grip on the musket. Even now, he wondered about the body build that was very thin and small for the average soldier. Another thing he noticed was the the soldier seemed to be very soft and very warm.

Wait a minute... is he...??

However, before he could come to a conclusion, he suddenly heard the nightmarish sound of a horse galloping again. “This way, it was this way!” the voices came from the same direction of the heavy stomping of the horses.

Reinhard stopped his chokehold and covered the mouth of Nathalie with his left hand and across her chest with his right. He pulled himself and the soldier he was holding into the big hollow log.

He felt something weird in his hand. It seemed that something filled the grip of his right hand.

What the hell?

However, he could not focus on at the moment. There are Russians outside and they weren't exactly the most friendly chaps right now, especially now that they saw a comrade of theirs lying lifelessly on the ground.

He overheard the Russians after they found the dead body. From the sound alone coming from the Russian cavalrymen, he knew that they were a few feet away from him at most. Uncalled noises simply wasn't an option.

Reinhard brought his lips closer to the ear of the mysterious French soldier in his arms.

“Hush. Stay quiet, they must not know we’re here,” Reinhard whispered with an anxious voice, trying to keep both of them hidden from the Russians. “I’m going to remove my hand from your mouth. Don’t make a sound, alright?”

She answered with a gentle nod. Following suit, Reinhard removed his hand.

“What in the world do you think you’re holding right now?!” Nathalie quickly denounced as soon as Reinhard let go of her mouth.

Nathalie looked over her shoulder at Reinhard, her soft but noticeably annoyed voice muffled a little by the scarf covering her place.

“W-W-What are you talking about?” the confused Reinhard asked.

“Y-You are groping my breast, you damn pervert!” she fretted, and Reinhard soon noticed that the little face of her that was exposed was glowing red.

Reinhard's face also showed a faint sign of blushing when Nathalie revealed that she was a woman. All this time, he was thinking that the soldier he was with was a “he”.

Wha... What the....?! So that was the soft thing that I felt in my hand?!

“Y-You mean what I’m holding isn’t a bag of loot inside your uniform?” the flustered Reinhard replied. Cold sweat dropped from his forehead and his jaw trembled from the awkwardness of the situation.

“WHAT?!” she angrily shouted out loud. “You mistook a woman’s breast for a bag of loot?!”
The sudden outbursts of Nathalie caused Reinhard to panic, who quickly covered Nathalie's mouth again to keep her quiet, while his right hand, maybe due to the astonishment, squeezed her breast tighter as he pulled her closer into him.

Nathalie’s face turned bright red from the sudden pressure applied to her chest.

“Eeeeep!” the muffled scream of a woman being restrained echoed inside the log.

“I’m sorry! I’m sorry but please keep quiet for a moment,” Reinhard said after hearing the embarrassed scream of the woman, he was in such a panic that he had no clue of what he was doing.

One of the Russians, who was only a few feet away, heard the muffled screams but wasn't sure where the source of the sound was.

“Did you hear something?” he asked, signaling the other Russians to quiet down.

“No, what did you hear?” another replied.

“Some sort of scream from somewhere, about boobs and loot,” the first Russian said as he looked around.

“You’re a damn pervert as always, you make me sick!” a third one remarked with disgusted eyes.

“Let’s just get out of here; we need to get back before it turns dark,” a fourth one uttered upon noticing the slowly dimming sky.

With this, they picked up the dead body of their fellow soldier as he was an officer, and started to go back towards the direction of the city.

Reinhard and Nathalie stayed immobile inside the log for a couple of moments. They listened for any signs that the enemy might still be in the vicinity. They just wanted to be sure that the Russians have left for good and that they were safe.

“Alright, it looks like we’re in the clear,” Reinhard said in relief after a few minutes after the Russians' departure.
Reinhard released Nathalie from his clutch and crawled out of the log. He slowly stood up, scratching his head, wondering and trying to understand what had just happened.

“Damn you,” Nathalie grumbled at Reinhard with eyes that were filled with both anger and embarrassment. She clenched her fist with the intent to knock him out.

Chills went through Reinhard’s spine when he heard the threatening voice. Feeling a dark, deadly and ominous aura rising from behind him filled his heart with fear. His hands shook and his knees trembled. His feet started to get cold.

W-What... should I do? He thought, genuinely fearful of the woman.

He gulped nervously and turned around, ready to apologize, and even beg forgiveness for his sins to the woman. He had his hands raised at his chest level, trying to tell the woman that he was very sincerely apologetic for what happened.

“I’m sor...."

He wasn't able to finish his sentence.

The moment he spun around to face Nathalie, a vigorous punch greeted his face. The punch, filled with the power and strength of an embarrassed and enraged woman, made contact with such ferocity that it sent Reinhard flying back a few feet.
Landing on his back with a thud, he really thought that he was going to die.

“Aaaaaargh!” he shouted in pain and tried to get up, only to end up falling back onto his knees. Holding his face in pain, he looked at Nathalie through the gaps of his fingers, who was burning in anger.

“What the hell did you think, suddenly grabbing me right there?!”
Nathalie inquired with her arms crossed in discontent,throwing daggers at Reinhard.

“To top that off, you... you... you mistook it for... a bag of loot?!” she continued as she blushes, stomping Reinhard over and over again, releasing her rage on the hapless Prussian. “What? Is it so hard that it felt like a bag of coins in your hands?”

“Ow! Ow! Ow! Forgive me... forgive me...” Reinhard said, pleading for his life and trying his best to shield himself from the relentless onslaught of stomping.

“Gyyyaaaaaaa!!!!!!” Nathalie yelled in answer and continued to stomp relentlessly. She released all her emotions into the devastating blows that she delivered to the Prussian.
Releasing such rage and embarrassment left Nathalie exhausted, her heavy breathing clearly audible despite being covered by a scarf. Her face was red like a tomato at this point.

“Who are you, anyway?” she asked and stops stomping, readjusting his shako and trying to calm herself down.
Reinhard, still on the ground, slowly lifted his head to face her. He tilted his head to one side and winked at the woman.

“Before asking the name of someone else, shouldn’t you introduce yourself first?” he replied in a somewhat mocking tone, smiling at the woman.

Ticked off by the response, Nathalie lifted her foot again, exhibiting the frightening sole of her boot at Reinhard, threatening to stomp him again.

“Just answer my question already ,darn it!” she shouted with a threatening voice.

“Okay, okay! Chill down, miss.” Reinhard frantically waved his hands in surrender, fearful of the painful blows from the Frenchwoman that stood before him. “But could you please put down your foot? It’s kind of hard to answer while seeing the soles of your boot from this angle.”

“...”
“...”
The two of them just stared at each other.

“Fair enough,” Nathalie responded, lowering her foot.

Standing up, Reinhard dusted himself and proceeded to introduce himself, “I’m Reinhard Jaeger, a hunter. I just wanted to hunt some food and rest when you people suddenly came here, running with horse guys chasing you.”

“I just asked for your name, yet you already spew out a lot of crap,” Nathalie replied, clearly unimpressed.
Reinhard’s eyebrow twitched in annoyance at the soldier’s response.

“Well, it’s not like it’s very common for a woman to be an actual soldier on the battlefield. I didn’t actually expect that you’re a girl until...” he stopped before finishing his sentence, knowing that she would start to abuse him again if reminded of what happened inside the log.

“Um, well, now that you know me, I think it would just be right if you introduce yourself too, right?” Reinhard said as he picks up his rifle “Musky” from the ground. When he stood up, he saw the woman looking for her musket, not even listening to what he has said.

“Oi! You could try to listen to people from time to time, you know?” he said.

“Me?” she responded, picking up her musket from the ground.

“Who else would I be talking to?” Reinhard replied.

“Right.... there....” Nathalie responded and pointed her finger at Musky, making fun of Reinhard’s weird habit of talking and communicating with his rifle.

“...”

It’s amazing how easily this woman can piss me off, he thought.

Nathalie checked her musket, making sure that its mechanisms are undamaged. Without loading the weapon, she cocked the musket and pulled the trigger. The hammer struck forward, confirming that her weapon was functional.

“Nathalie,” she said with a soft and very feminine voice.

“P-Pardon me....???” Reinhard said, failing to pick up Nathalie's barely audible voice.

Nathalie removed the scarf on her face and the shako on her head, revealing her long blond hair that slowly fell down almost to her hips, just beside her scabbard where a short sabre was hanging. The yellow collar, the primary distinction of the voltigeurs, was very beautifully wrapped around her slender neck. The French blue coat with its intricate designs harmoniously blended in well with the colour of her hair.

The afternoon sunlight slowly setting behind her, hidden by the woods produced a scene that mesmerized the hunter. Her sapphire eyes looked at Reinhard. The mysterious pair of eyes moved him as if it was piercing his soul from within.

“....Nathalie ........My name is Nathalie Toussaint,” she said as she gently brushes her beautiful long blond hair behind her ear, repeating her name for him.

“........Nathalie... Toussaint...,” Reinhard whispered to himself.

He smiled warmly at Nathalie, "Well then... It's a pleasure to meet you!"



There's the first chapter. I'll post the remaining two a little later. Any tips or feedback is appreciated. Thank you so much for reading!

Made some editing and some other corrections.
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Here's the rest of the chapters.

Chapter 2:
Spoiler! :
Chapter 2: Bread for the hungry stomach.

Part 1

“Oi! Time to wake up!” Reinhard poked Nathalie softly on her cheek in an attempt to wake her up. Shafts of sunlight shined thinly through the trees, on the profile of the sleeping lady in a blue French army coat.

It was 8:30 am; the familiar chirping of birds could be heard in the distance and the golden ray of sunlight illuminated the otherwise dark woods. A very gentle breeze blew upon Reinhard and Nathalie.

It was such a peaceful morning. Far from the chaotic events that happened the past day.

“I can’t imagine a lady as beautiful as this fight in actual battles,” Reinhard mumbled to himself with his eyes fixated on Nathalie.

She was sleeping soundly with her petite figure leaning against a tree. Her head was tilted slightly to the right, comfortably resting on the tree trunk. Unlike the night before, her hair was left untied, revealing the beautiful long strands of hair that stretched down to her waist.

Her mellow face with its fair skin glowed as the sunlight gleamed on her, further emphasizing the young beauty beneath the blue French soldier’s uniform. Her upper torso gently rose every time she breathed, and slumped back as she exhaled. With her legs folded, knees pointing towards the right and her right hand resting on her lap, it exhibited a very feminine display that seemed unfitting for an elite French soldier.

“Oi! I said it's morning! Time to wake up, woman! You still plan on leaving, right?!” despite his shouting, Reinhard was unable to wake her up.

In fact, Reinhard had been trying to rouse Nathalie from her deep slumber for the past half an hour. He tried various methods to try and wake her up - calling her, making loud noises and tapping on her face.

None of them seemed to have work. Nathalie was still sleeping with a peaceful expression, apparently unaffected by Reinhard's attempts.
Reinhard took a closer look, gently tapping on her cheek again. Moving his face closer to her, examined the woman's face. He was so close that their lips were almost touching.

Her face is so soft and smooth like fine silk, he thought as his fingertips made contact with her cheek. He felt it would be extremely rude to wake her up from such a peaceful sleep.

However, Reinhard knew that she should not stay in this area.

Nathalie’s army had been just been defeated the previous day by an army much larger than them... by the army of the sixth coalition. Even though she and her fellow soldiers put up a fierce resistance, the might of the combined armies of Prussia, Russia and Austria was simply too much. The French had now lost control over this area and she would be in really deep trouble if she was caught by the garrisons set up by the victorious army of the coalition.

“Oi! Are you still alive? Wake up already!” Reinhard poked her cheek one last time with his index finger. His face was only centimetres away from the sleeping woman’s face.

“Nnnnnggghhh.........” Nathalie reacted with a slight moan as she stretched her arms over her head. “What.....? It’s morning already.......?” she slowly opened her eyes and noticed something was extremely close to her face.

At first, she could not recognize what was before her due to her blurry vision. All she could distinguish was a blurry mix of skin toned colours staring right at her face.

She rubbed her eyes and tried to focus on what she saw.

Her vision slowly cleared.

And recognized Reinhard's face.

She was stunned. What is this freak going to try to do to me?!, was the first thought that went through her head.

He was close... in fact, way too close. She could see even the most minuscule details on his face.

“Eeeeeeeekk!” a loud shriek broke the peaceful ambiance of birds chirping in the area. It was so loud that it caused the birds to scatter, flying away from the source of the sound.

The scream was then followed by a loud series of thuds, the sound of something hitting the ground at high speed and bouncing around like a ball before finally stopping.

Nathalie was gasping and breathing so hard that her shoulders were visibly heaving. Her hands were trembling uncontrollably. Her heart felt like it would jump out of her chest.

She was so shocked from seeing a man’s face so close the moment she woke up that her eyes widened and spun from bewilderment.

“Aaargh!” Reinhard screamed in pain as he rolled on the ground, hands covering his stomach, trying to endure the pain in his gut. “Why did you... why did you do that?!”

Being kicked on the stomach by the surprised Nathalie sent him flying across a few meters away, rebounding multiple times on the ground before coming to a complete stop.

"And please keep it down! The coalition troops will hear you if you keep screaming like that!" he continued.

“Y-Y-Y-You were j-j-just too close! It was self-preservation. I don’t want to wake up to a pervert's face!” she protested, then bent down to reach for a long object.

She picked up Reinhard’s custom-made rifle called Musky and slowly walked towards the man.

“W-w-what are you planning? Oi! That looks really dangerous!”

Reinhard saw Nathalie walk towards him and sensed a very dangerous intention emanating from her. He knew something bad was going to happen to him if he just continued to lie there and roll in pain.

Wielding the rifled musket much like a club, Nathalie was grasping the barrel end with both hands. She stepped closer and closer into Reinhard. With trembling hands, she lifted the rifle above Reinhard.

It was a truly frightening sight. Nathalie’s manner of holding the rifle resembled an executioner slowly walking towards their victim, wielding an axe that would decapitate the doomed person with one clean blow.

“Hiiiyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!” she let out a semi-concealed but frightening cry; her eyes still spinning in bewilderment, she swung down the rifle at Reinhard.

“W-W-Watch it!” Reinhard screamed out as the rifle butt struck the ground between his legs. He managed to dodge a deadly swing from his own rifle.

He tried to get back on his feet - but before he could, Nathalie had the rifle up over her head, preparing another strike.

“Whoa! Whoa! Whoa! What are you doing?!” Reinhard rolled on the ground left and right, doing his best to avoid the butt of the rifle from hitting him. “If that hits me it’s gonna hurt like hell, so stop - for the love of God, please stop!”

Nathalie paid no heed to Reinhard’s desperate pleas for her to stop. She continued to swing the weapon down mechanically, trying to get a hit.

It seemed like she would land a good hit any moment from now. Her relentless assault was pushing Reinhard’s agility to the limits.

However, she stopped swinging the rifle abruptly. Just like that, she remained motionless with her arms raised high, rifle still in hand.

Her stomach suddenly rumbled loudly and her grip on the rifle slowly loosened, eventually dropping Musky to the ground. Her knees suddenly buckled under her weight and she sat on the ground, clutching her stomach.

“Wha...?” Reinhard breathed a sigh of relief. Somehow he got away relatively unscathed from the barrage of swings that Nathalie threw at him.

He slowly stood up and dusted himself.

“Oi! What happened to you?” he said.

“I’m starving,” Nathalie said in a soft and weak voice, her stomach continuing to rumble from her hunger.

“You can still kick like a horse and you say that you’re hungry?”

“What do you mean like a horse?!” Nathalie lifted her head and glared at Reinhard sharply.

“You just kicked me earlier, right?! I even flew back a few meters from that sheer strength of yours!”

Nathalie frowned momentarily before quickly turning her head around away, saying, “Well it was your own damn fault for trying to wake me up in such a frightening way!”

“I’m the one who should be saying that! I’m the one who’s starting to become afraid of you!” Reinhard retorted, waving his arms around in agitation.

Nathalie’s stomach rumbled again. “I’m really hungry right now. I really need to eat.”

Reinhard scratched his head. “Then... what do you want to do?”

Nathalie kept quiet for a moment, trying to come up with something that would satisfy her growling stomach.

“Hey, you are a hunter right?” Nathalie’s eyes lit up in delight. “Teach me how to hunt,” she enthusiastically demanded.

She was so eager and optimistic that Reinhard felt he would be blinded by the glow radiating from her and her sparkling eyes.

“Oi! Let’s be reasonable here. You can’t learn hunting in just one morning.”

Hearing this reply, Nathalie’s expression changed dramatically, her radiant, positive glow was replaced by a dark, depressed aura.

She placed both of her hands on the ground and looked at her fingertips with an obviously disappointed expression. “But I’m really hungry...”

What a sudden change of mood., Reinhard thought as he looked at the depressed woman.

“......Ugh. There must still be something here....,” Nathalie crawled on all fours towards her backpack and started to search for anything edible.

Reinhard blankly stared at Nathalie who was going through her backpack frantically.

He remembered that he still had some food inside his bread bag. Reinhard retrieved a piece of rye bread the size of his fist and slowly went to Nathalie.

“Hey,” he called out to her and sat down. “You can have this, so eat up."

“Aaaaahhhh!” Nathalie’s eyes and face was filled with childish delight the moment she looked at the bread.

“Where did this...?” she asked in a small voice.

“It was from my bread bag... you can go ahead and eat it.”

Nathalie took the piece of bread from Reinhard and looked at it carefully.

“...”

“What’s wrong? You don’t like rye bread?” he asked.

She looked at Reinhard in the eyes, questioning his intentions.

“This thing isn’t poisoned right?” she asked in response.

“Wha....? If you don’t want it just give it back!” Reinhard reached for the bread, trying to reclaim it from the woman’s hands. However, Nathalie pulled away; she had no intention of returning the bread.

“....”

She just stared at him before softly murmuring with a slight blush on her cheeks, “Thanks.”

Nathalie paused for a moment before starting to munch on the bread happily. A gentle smile could be seen on her usually sullen facade.

“This is really good! This is really good!” she said in praise of the bread, chewing on the bread eagerly.

“You must be really hungry to be able to be able to munch down on that bread like that.” Reinhard said to Nathalie while she ate. Her face was almost constantly buried into the bread.

“Well, it’s because I haven’t eaten for almost two days,” she replied with her mouth stuffed, her jaws still busily chewing.

“I see, I see. I’ve been here in these woods for the last two days and most of that time all I hear were cannons firing. I guess you really fought a hard battle.”

“Yeah, and there was no time to have breakfast, lunch, dinner or even a snack during that time.”

Reinhard rested his head on his hand with an expression that seemed unamused. Somehow these two people have started to get along pretty well despite their rather peculiar initial encounter.

“By the way, that huge explosion and the massive smoke, what were those?” the thought of the massive plume of smoke rising from Leipzig suddenly went through Reinhard’s head. He wasn’t able to resist asking if Nathalie knew what happened there.

“Oh! That? We were about to cross the bridge across the Elster when it suddenly blew up!”

“What?! How did that happen?”

“Don’t ask me, because I totally have no idea.”

With Reinhard's questions about the battle ending, Nathalie also finished the last of the bread, consuming the last chunk of bread.

Nathalie was still chewing when she reached out her hand towards Reinhard.

“What?"

“Can I have another one?” she replied and she raised her hand a little towards Reinhard’s face as if telling him ‘come on; give me one more, I know you still have one’.

“Oh man, she’s starting to get carried away.” Reinhard, with a confounded face, reached in for another piece of bread inside his bread bag and found one last piece.

It’s... the last one? he was surprised as he thought he had more pieces inside the bag.

He looked at Nathalie, who looked very content. She licked her fingers, savouring the last of the flavours and the bits and pieces of the bread left on her fingertips.

“Mmmmmmmm! That was so good!” a gentle smile reappeared as she praised the bread again.

It was a gentle smile that could cause any sane man’s heart to melt.

No matter how hard he thought of it, Reinhard could not bear to refuse her request after seeing her smile. It was as if her smile was slowly hypnotizing him.

“Huah...” he sighed before withdrawing the last piece from his bread bag. “Here you go,” he said, tossing the bread at Nathalie.

Without even skipping a beat, she began munching down on it again.

Nom nom nom nom.

Her innocent face as she munched down somehow gave a sense of satisfaction to Reinhard who was witnessing it all.

Although Reinhard was hungry, he felt no hard feelings giving his last piece to her; somehow, he was just happy he could help someone in need.

He didn't know it, but somehow, he was getting drawn in by Nathalie. He unconsciously stared at her.

“Hmmm? Is there something on my face?”
Seeing Reinhard all quiet and unmoving, Nathalie suddenly stopped eating and looked at him.

Reinhard continued to stare at her.

“Hey pervert! Is there something on my face? Snap out of it!”

“Oh! No... nothing. I-its nothing!” he frantically replied.

“Hmmmmmmm???” she lowered her hands a little and looked at the piece of bread that Reinhard had given her. She then carefully tore the bread into two halves to share the clean, uneaten half to Reinhard.

“Here you go,” she reached out and offered the half of the bread.

“...”
Reinhard was taken aback. Not knowing how to react, he was silenced by Nathalie’s action.

“Oi, come on... take it,” she said, swinging the bread in urge for Reinhard to take it from her hands.

“You’re still hungry, right? You can continue eating that. Don’t worry about me.”

“Oh come on. Take it, the bread is delicious and I have to thank you for it. It would be very unladylike for me if I continued to eat without even thinking of the one who gave me food.”

Reinhard’s face contorted slightly upon hearing the word ‘unladylike’.

“Oi, you’re not even acting very much like a lady in the first place, so don’t tell me that.”

“What was that??!” Nathalie stared at him with vicious looking eyes.

“O-oh nothing! Don’t mind me, really!”

“Hmmmmmmmmmm?!”

“It’s nothing. Really!”

“Okay then. Take the bread already and eat too. Don’t make me feel so bad by you starving because of me.”

“Hmph! Then don’t act like that bread was yours to begin with....”

“I know that, that’s why I’m giving some back. I don’t want to be indebted more than I need to be.”

A small smile appeared on Reinhard's relaxed face. He reached out and took the bread and proceeded to munch it along with Nathalie.

“Hey Nathalie.”

“Hmmmm?”

“Thanks.”

“Hmph! Idiot, It’s me who should be thanking you...”


Part 2

Nathalie’s face was filled with joy and satisfaction, her cheeks puffed out a little as she chewed the bread. Looking at the innocent face made by Nathalie as she eats, Reinhard could not help but notice that somehow she is a very different person as he recalled from the events night before.........

It was nearly 7:00 pm, Nathalie and Reinhard had just met for the first time, the sun was going down and darkness was starting to set in.

“...Well now that I have introduced myself I’ll kindly take my leave.” she declared after introducing herself to the hunter.

“Are you sure? It’s going to be pitch black a few minutes from now, it’s going to be an arduous march. ...Also, a lone French soldier in the middle of enemy territory would pretty much guarantee that you’ll be killed once they spot you.” Reinhard replied.

“One more reason that I need to move during the night.” she replied in a serious voice as she puts her shako on without tying her hair back and hiding it inside.

Reinhard was impressed by the determination and willpower of the woman. He sat on the ground and leaned on a tree behind him and looked at her. He admired her strength and resolve.

“You’re a really courageous person. Take care then... you’ll need it.” he responded, wishing the best for the Frenchwoman.

“...”

Without even a single word of reply Nathalie turned and started to walk, disappearing into the darkness of the woods.

“Well then I guess I’ll sleep and start walking to Berlin early tomorrow.” Reinhard said to himself as he walked towards a tree and rested his exhausted back on it.

A few minutes of silence passed as Reinhard sat in the darkness of the night alone. His thoughts were of the events that happened just a few hours before... the Russians, the French and the mysterious female soldier that had almost killed him.

“Oh man! I’m beat! What the hell is wrong with this world and I can’t even walk straight into Berlin without seeing soldiers moving about and shooting each other?” he complained in annoyance.

Ever since the French revolution and the French revolutionary wars, Europe had been in turmoil. Even the rise of Napoleon Bonaparte saw radical changes in the politics and balance of power in the continent. A king and a queen had been guillotined. A monarchy had been abolished. A Corsican general had risen from obscurity becoming the Emperor of France in just a matter of years. The other monarchies consequently declaring war on France because of fear that the destabilizing effect of the revolution would spread and their own regimes abolished.

What followed was a series of wars declared by a series of coalitions against France. The first and second coalitions were beaten in the revolutionary wars and Napoleon himself had already destroyed the third, fourth and fifth coalition before he tried invading Russia just the previous year in 1812. This invasion had failed miserably even though the French had reached the Russian capital of Moscow. The retreat back towards France from the frozen and barren Russian plains effectively destroyed Napoleon’s beloved Grande Armée.

Sensing weakness from the French; the Austrians, Prussians and Russians along with other states have decided to form another coalition, the sixth coalition... the SIXTH! Once again to try and destroy the current destabilizing influence of France once and for good.

Reinhard, in his nineteen years of life has never known a long period of peace. He was born into a world that is collectively starting to go insane.

It must be the same for her right? I feel sorry for her and for myself, he thought.

He stared at the dark sky overhead, thinking about Nathalie. However he knew that only feeling sorry would not do him any good at all, in order to survive in these dark times one must do everything in his power to live.

It has become quiet; after the woman left him alone in the woods an eerie silence surrounded him. He just continued to lean back and relax on the tree.

With the prospect of a very long walk into Berlin swirling around inside his head Reinhard slipped into a slumber.

A person suddenly came walking towards Reinhard from the darkness of the woods. Stepping on the fallen leaves on the ground produced rubbing sounds that filled the air.

The mysterious figure picked up a stick from the ground and started poking him on the cheek with it.

“Hey... wake up...” the voice of the mysterious person whispered to Reinhard.

He was unmoved, apart from moving his face away from the poking of the stick Reinhard had no other reaction.

“Hey... I said wake up...” the voice whispered again, this time closer into Reinhard’s ear. This second attempt managed to wake him up.

Reinhard’s sleep, once again, was interrupted.

“What...?? Who...??” he opened his eyes and looked at the person poking him in the face with a stick. He was utterly surprised to find out who it was.

It was Nathalie.

“What the hell... are you doing? Why are you still here?” Reinhard asked with a slightly irritated tone. He stared at the person poking at him and realizes that it is the female soldier that had left mere minutes ago. For some reason she came back to Reinhard and disturbed his sleep.

“Er... ah... I’m kind of... terrified of the dark... so... ” she replied as she continuously pokes Reinhard on the cheek, her hands clearly shaking and trembling.

“What...?” the baffled Reinhard asked with raised eyebrows “...And could you please stop poking my face with that stick?”

“Er...I can’t... walk tonight... I’m terrified of the dark.” she replied again admitting her fear, fiddling the stick with both of her hands.

“Wha...? Hahahaha! You’re still afraid of the dark at that age?! Hahaha!” Reinhard suddenly burst into laughter. He held hi his stomach in pain of laughing too hard and his eyes started to water.

“H-hey... H-hey! Don’t laugh... it’s not funny.”

“Sorry... sorry... I just can’t stop... hahahahahah!”

Reinhard continued to laugh, he was laughing so hard that he actually got himself hurt with stomach cramps.

Nathalie’s face turned bright red and, embarrassed by her phobia and annoyed by Reinhard’s reaction. With a quick motion she raised her hand over her head and then brought it down, swinging the stick down with it.

She hits Reinhard’s head with such force that the stick broke in half when it struck the top of his head.

“Ow! Ow! Ow! W-What the hell was that for?” Reinhard roared, holding his head in pain.

“Why do you need to laugh so hard?! I told you not to laugh!!!”

“Because your fear is so embarrassing. Hahahahaha!”

“What’s so funny about being afraid of the dark?!”

“Nothing, nothing... I just thought that at your age you’d be over that fear.”

“I know... I’m already eighteen, my fear in this age of mine is crippling.... BUT STILL!!!”

Nathalie pointed her bayonet at him threatening to stab him if he didn’t shut up, looking at him with an intimidating face.

“Okay! Okay! No more, I’m done.” the snickering Reinhard said, trying his best to contain his laughter.

“Huah...” Nathalie sighed “I hate my phobia.”

“I get it... You can’t walk tonight because of your fear.” Reinhard moved a little bit from where he was sitting, making space for Nathalie. “Why don’t you sit and rest, wait until morning before you head out again.”

“Oh... T-Thanks” Nathalie responded as she removed her military backpack. She sat down beside Reinhard. “Jeez... I’m really exhausted.”

“Yeah you sure do look like it...” crossing his armed over his chest, Reinhard once again rested his back upon the tree.

“This is the first time that I actually had time to rest and reenergize myself properly.”

“Well, I’m sorry to hear that... at least now you can rest all you want.”

“Yeah... finally...”

“What do you plan on doing tomorrow?” the intrigued Reinhard asked.

“I’m going west back to France; I’m already separated from the French army for who knows how many miles now. I need to be able to join them again somehow.”

“Speaking of which, what happened in Leipzig? How did you end up here?”

“...”

Nathalie became silent for a few seconds, taking a few deep breaths as she prepares to answer.

“Can’t we just make a small campfire here? ....It’s really dark.” she said, holding the two halves of the stick that she had broken on Reinhard’s skull.

“Oi! Stay on topic.... and we can’t light a campfire here, it’ll be risky.”

“Why????”

“Because the fire could be spotted miles away, it’s a given that the Allied army would still have troops garrisoned in Leipzig.”

“Sooooooo????” Nathalie innocently asked, her head tilted slightly to one side.

Man what an airhead. Reinhard thought, realizing that Nathalie, even though she’s a trained soldier, has no survival skills whatsoever.

“Because if they see the fire they could send a patrol here, you’re dead if they see you in that uniform..... Are you really a soldier?”

“Yes, I am!” Nathalie quickly uttered back.

“H-how did you become a soldier anyway? How did you pass screening and training?” the baffled Reinhard asked, he still could not wrap his head around the idea that a soldier he is talking to at the moment is a woman.

“Because I cross dressed? For your knowledge, contrary to what you said earlier, women soldiers aren’t that uncommon anymore you know. We have our own reasons on why we join. It’s just that we have to cross dress and hide the fact that we are females.”

“Reason? Hmmm? Then, what could your reason be...??”

Nathalie’s mood began to change; she looked genuinely distressed and became eerily silent.

“L-Let’s skip that question.......... can we?” she softly said.

“O-okay... sorry.”

Reinhard saw her sad face and agreed to not bother her with such an intrusive question anymore.

“Okay... then can I ask you what really happened in Leipzig? How did you end up here?”

“...”

Nathalie was silenced for a moment once again. She breathed in deeply before speaking:

“They were just too many.” she replied with a gloomy voice “The combined might of the Russians, Prussians, Swedes and Austrians was too much for us. They came from all sides, surrounding Leipzig. We tried to at least hold them back but we can’t, I was separated from my unit along with a friend of mine during the chaos... Claire... I hope she too is safe.”

“...”

Reinhard was silenced, seeing her depressed state somehow also affected his mood.

I must think of something to get her out of this awful mood, damn I’m such a jerk for asking such stupid questions from out of the blue, he thought, guilty of making a person feel bad.

Reinhard quickly thought of ways to break the eerily uncomfortable mood of depression lingering in the atmosphere.

“I’m sure your friend Claire is okay.” he replied, trying to cheer her up “Just try to get some sleep there and get back to you friend as soon as you can.”

The moment Nathalie heard this, she grabbed her backpack from the ground and placed it in between her and Reinhard, putting it there as a makeshift barrier between them.

She stared at him with a very sharp look. She held her musket at the ready as if saying to Reinhard with her actions ‘stay away’.

Even in the darkness, Reinhard’s eyes had adjusted quite well that he could clearly see the sharp pointy end of the bayonet.

“W-Why are you looking at me like that?” Reinhard asked, unsure of what he said that caused Nathalie to take up her defensive stance. “Please point that thing somewhere else!”

“I’m keeping watch on you... pervert.” she responded almost immediately “I won’t allow you to grope me again in my sleep!”

Reinhard was flustered by Nathalie’s reply. His face turned bright red.

“Oi! I told you that it was an accident.” he said as he makes an ‘X’ by crossing his arms in front of him, trying to say that Nathalie is wrong.

“I just need to make sure...”

“Okay okay, I’ll go to the other tree so that I’m far away from you.”

Reinhard slowly stood up to move to another place to sit when Nathalie suddenly grabbed his sleeve trying to prevent him from walking away.

“H-hey... let go of my arm.” he said.

“I’m keeping watch, but don’t go... It’s still too dark.” she softly replied, her hand noticeably shaking.

What in the...? Is her fear that severe? Reinhard asked himself when he saw the distraught image of the woman.

“Okay, but don’t hit me again with the musket...” he said.

“...” Nathalie just stared back.

“So...?”

“Okay, I won’t hit you with the musket.”

Reinhard quietly sat back down beside Nathalie. The backpack still in between them. Nathalie however was still holding her musket with her left hand.

“H-hey... can you let go of the musket now? It’s kind of really unsettling whenever I see you holding on to that.”

Nathalie stared at the musket before quietly placing the weapon beside the tree.

“We’ll what about you...? What brought you here....?” Nathalie asked.

“W-what?”

“It’s my turn to ask you... why are you here in Leipzig?”

“Well...it’s not really important, it just so happens that I am in the middle of hunting in the woods and forests in the south so I can sell meat and furs for my livelihood when I noticed that my rifle needs maintenance.”

“That rifle?” Nathalie pointed at the rifle Musky which was beside Reinhard.

“Yeah... I’m going to meet a friend of mine up north that is the creator of that rifle; he can fix her better that I can. To get to him I needed to pass Leipzig.”

“That’s some kind of special rifle isn’t it.....?”

“Yeah, she’s custom made by that friend of mine...” Reinhard said as she looked at Nathalie, he notices that woman looked a little injured “...Oi, you look pretty beat up there. What happened to you?”

“Oh this...? I fell from a slope somewhere before landing on my butt on some bush. I’ve got a few scratches on my hands but apart from that I’ve got no other injuries thanks to the long sleeves of this uniform.”

“You want me to treat that? That could get worse if you leave them like that.”

“Huh...?” Nathalie was confused; she tilted her head to the side as she raised her eyebrows at Reinhard.

“I asked if you would like me to treat those scratches of yours.”

“Are you a doctor or something?”

“No, I’m not.”

“Do you know medicine? I can’t even trust our army’s surgeons, they suck at treating wounds.”

“Well, I’m not a doctor but I can treat and patch up some serious injuries. I’m a hunter after all. I sometimes get bitten or scratched by animals so I needed to learn a way to take care of myself. Amputation is out of my league though.”

“Who said anything about amputations idiot?! These are minor scratches anyway; it’ll be fine if I just let them heal on their own.”

Reinhard pulled out a hip flask from his pocket and opened it; the smell of rum filled the air.

“At least wash your hands with this.”

“With rum? You should just drink that; it will be wasted if I use it to wash my hands.”

“I did drink some, when I was totally hungry... I got sick real quick...” Reinhard said with a slight hint of a regretful expression on his face, clearly disliking the feeling of being drunk with an empty stomach “...so just use this, at least it went to some good.”

"O-okay then..." she said as she reached out her hands.

Reinhard then tilted the hip flask half full with rum and started to pour it on the scratches on Nathalie’s hands.

“That stings!” Nathalie twitched in slight pain as the strong alcohol poured on her wounds.

“It stings now but at least your hands will heal better. Just wash your hands tomorrow with water to get the smell of the rum removed from your hands.”

“T-thanks...”

After getting her wounds treated, Nathalie and Reinhard went awkwardly silent... there’s nothing to talk about. It can be expected as these two people have just met each other just a few hours in the most uncommon of all circumstances.

Suddenly, they heard a rustle from the bushes just ahead; they could not see clearly what made the noise as it was very dark.

The sudden sound caused Nathalie to reach out for Reinhard’s sleeve once again. “What the heck was that just now?”

“I don’t know, maybe some animal or something... maybe a wolf.” Reinhard teasingly replied. He wanted to see how Nathalie will react knowing that she’s afraid of the dark.

“A... a... a... wolf?!” Nathalie suddenly looked at the unknown in the dark once again, her face clearly showing a terrified look.

“Haha! Just kidding! Don’t worry I know when wolves are prowling, relax.”

Nathalie, once again annoyed by Reinhard, pulled the sabre from her hip and pointed it at him.

“Dammit, I said quit making fun of my phobia!” she said, her hands and the sword she’s holding visibly shaking.

“Okay okay. Haha!” Reinhard responded as Nathalie sheathes her short sword again.

Though Reinhard was playing and messing with Nathalie, he stared at the bushes where the noise came from, checking whether if the thing that caused the noise could be dangerous.

To some twisted joke played by nature at him a hare popped up from the bushes. It’s the same hare that he attempted to hunt to eat for dinner. It just hopped and hopped before once again jumping into the darkness, never to be seen again.

“Damn, that was cruel.” Reinhard said to himself as he saw the rear end of the hare jumping away from him again.

“Hey woman, we feared for nothing... it was just a small hare.” he said as he looked at Nathalie.

Nathalie was quiet, Reinhard expected that she would at least continue to babble at him because he teased her but there was only an eerie silence.

“Hey... what happened to you now?”

His curiosity aroused by the sudden silence, Reinhard looked closely at Nathalie and found a very peaceful face. Her head rested on the tree trunk and her hair dangles from it like beautiful golden stands.

She... she’s sound asleep. Reinhard thought as he looks at the exhausted woman that’s quietly sitting beside him.

She fell asleep as Reinhard was in the middle checking the sounds from the bushes. She was so exhausted that she had fallen asleep still with her right hand holding on to Reinhard’s sleeve.

“Heh... she wasn’t even listening to me...” he removed her hand from his sleeve and gently placed it on her lap.

“Goodnight... Nathalie” he very softly said to her before closing his eyes and proceeding to take a sleep for himself.


..........That was the night before, but this morning Reinhard was stuck with a very hungry woman that is just happy to be munching on some bread that he has given her.


“Hey! Where do you plan on going now?” he asked.

Nathalie finishes her second piece of bread and pulled out a map from under her blue French army coat. She unfolded the map on the ground and confidently pointed at a city on it.

“I need to go here; this is 'the hat's' most likely line of retreat.” Nathalie said as she showed the map to Reinhard.

“Warsaw...? Oi! Are you an idiot? You need to go west... not east.” Reinhard told Nathalie in an unconvinced tone.

“What...?? I’m definitely going west I know. Why is Warsaw in the west by the way?”

Nathalie looked closely at the map. She examined it carefully. She wondered why Warsaw is located in the west. Reinhard however took her map for a moment and rotated it.

“You’ve been looking at it upside down idiot.” he said as he placed the map back on the ground “So... where will you go now?”

“Hehehe. So it was upside down... sorry about that. Here! I’ll go here.” Nathalie then pointed at a city on the map once again.

“Wow, you’re really an airhead aren’t you?”

“Don’t call me an airhead!”

“Frankfurt huh...” he said as he sees where she is pointing “Well... I guess it’s time to part ways.”

“What about you? Where do you plan on going?” Nathalie asked Reinhard, curious as where the hunter will go.

“Berlin. I told you last night that I needed my weapon fixed right? It’s been two days since I’ve been stuck here because of that battle, maybe now I’ll be able to get to my destination without anything else ruining my schedule.” He replied as he picked up Musky from the ground. “Take care of yourself out there, don’t get lost.” He jokingly mocked Nathalie.

“I won’t get lost dammit!”

Nathalie picked up her musket and started to put on her backpack and other equipment.

“Haha! I sure hope that is the case... you can’t even read a map!”

“Oh! Shut up!”

As they were just about to part ways Nathalie decided to ask a question that had bothered her quite a bit.

“Hey Prussian... W-Why didn’t you try to kill me last night? I almost stabbed you in the face with a bayonet and almost smashed your skull too.” she asked Reinhard, wondering why he didn’t try to kill a person that threatened his life. "You must really hate me because of that and because I'm French right?"

Reinhard pondered for a few moments thinking what to reply to her.

“Why? ............Well you could say that... I could not kill a woman as innocent looking and as defenceless as you.” he said "Also..... I can't hate you just because you're French, I've been there... done that. I didn't like it."

Hearing this, Nathalie gets flustered and her face blushed slightly and her heartbeat speeds up.

“What.... was.... that????”

She jumped towards Reinhard. With a flurry of vicious kicks, she sent him down to the ground and then placed him in a vicious camel clutch.

“Is that so?! Just because I am a woman you think I could not defend myself? I’ll teach you a lesson or two about how strong a woman could be when she’s serious you idiot!” she ranted all the while pulling Reinhard deeper into the camel clutch.

“Ow! Ow! My back! Stop! Stop it! You’ll snap my back in half!” he exclaimed in pain.

“................”

After letting out her emotions at Reinhard, Nathalie’s demeanour changed and she became a little softer towards him.

“Still... thank you so much for your help. The bread was really good.” she said as she loosened her grip on the Prussian and releases him from the hold.

“Well then it’s time for me to go west. It’s a little improbable, but if we do meet again I’ll definitely return you the favour. Though I doubt it would be a piece of old bread when I return it.” She sarcastically said to Reinhard with a slight smile on her lips.

“Yeah I know...... see you Nathalie.” he replied.

“Later then....... Prussian idiot.” she replied as she waves goodbye.

After this parting gesture Nathalie continued to walk west.

Reinhard, who was still lying flat on the ground, looked at her as she slowly fades into the distance with her long blonde hair waving behind her as she walks before she disappeared from view, obscured by the trees and vegetation of the woods.

“Okay then... now it’s my turn to start heading to Berlin.” he said to himself as he stands up and picks up Musky from the ground.

He dusted himself as he whistles. He resumed his walk towards Berlin, two days behind schedule.


Part 3

It has been a few days since Reinhard had started to walk again after he met Nathalie in the aftermath of the battle for Leipzig. Even though hungry and exhausted, he continued to walk along the road headed for Berlin, making very little progress.

“.....Uuuuuuugggggghhhhhhh.....”

As he slowly walked, wobbling from his pitiful condition, he saw a horse drawn wagon covered by a canvas roof being pulled by two chestnut coloured horses in the distance. He quickly ran towards it and saw that the man driving the horses was a familiar sight to him.

“Oi! Erich!!!!!” he yelled.

The driver was a fairly well built man. A little bit more muscular and a little taller than Reinhard. He was a skilled blacksmith and mechanic; he wears a leather apron over his everyday clothes that are of similar style with Reinhard’s, only he does not wear a vest. He was talented in the art of making and customizing the weapons of their age, from muskets to sabres and, to an extent, even cannons. He was also a Prussian, a friend of Reinhard since they were children, his name was Erich Brandt.

“Oi! Erich! What in the world are you doing here?” Reinhard asked in a loud voice.

“Oh, it’s you... Is that the way you really talk now? You yell out without even asking how I have been?” Erich replied in an annoyed voice.

Reinhard looked at Erich in the eyes and said “Hey Erich, are you....?”

“I am not gay!” Erich very loudly shouted back, interrupting Reinhard from completing his question.

As he laughed at his friend’s reaction, Reinhard waved the back of his hand to Erich in a 'shoo' motion, signalling his friend to move a little and let him sit on the wagon.

“I was about to go all the way to Berlin to find you. It’s a good thing we bumped into each other here, now I don’t need to walk for miles and miles.” Reinhard said with an exhausted voice as he sits on the wagon. “What are you doing here?”

“I was thrown out by the landlord because I could not pay my dues.”

“What?? Why?”

“Someone stole my strongbox; all of my money was there.”

“Strongbox??”

“My safe, my coffer.”

“Hahaha! Unlucky indeed, the greedy ass got robbed.” Reinhard laughed out, rubbing salt into his friend’s wound.

“Shut up! Why are you looking for me anyway?” Erich asked.

“It’s because of this....” Reinhard said as he showed Musky to Erich “Musky was damaged in the last few days, the barrel is also so worn down that I couldn’t hit anything.”

Erich took the rifle from Reinhard and checked the weapon with his eyes. “Well I have not seen Musky for the last year, it’s no wonder it is in this bad condition.” he said as he handed the reins of the horses to Reinhard.

As Erich was checking the rifle, the horses and the entire wagon went off course, off the road and the horses started running out of control as Reinhard struggled with them.

“Erich you jerk! You know as well as I that I do not know how to drive horses!” Reinhard yelled out to his friend, trying to stop the horses from galloping at full speed.

“Just wait a minute, I’m almost done checking the rifle.” Erich nonchalantly replied.

“Erich! Dammit! Take the freaking reins! Drive your stupid horses!”

The horses, as if they knew they had been insulted by Reinhard began to zigzag, trying to throw Reinhard away from the wagon.

“Whoa! Whoa! ....Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!”

Unable to keep his balance, he was thrown from where he was seated and landed on the hard ground. The horses then stopped their rampage.

“Ow! I... hate horses.” Reinhard complained in pain as he stood up and limped towards the wagon. As he was doing so, the two horses seemingly looked at him and let out an insulting sound as if they were laughing at Reinhard, mocking him.

“I’m going to cook the both of you and turn you into sausages!” Reinhard yelled in annoyance at the two equines.

“Hey! Reinhard! ” Erich called out after finding some oddities in the rifle “You’re not the only one who handled this rifle aren’t you?”

“What? Why?”

“There’s a big gash on the flintlock mechanism of the rifle, the butt stock is also slightly cracked! It looks like you swung Musky into a tree trunk like an axe!”

Oh crap! Reinhard then remembered that Nathalie had swung the weapon around violently at him, causing the already worn out Musky more damage in the process.

“Oh man! I can’t tell him that Musky has been swung around and dropped by a weird Frenchwoman.” He whispered to himself, trying to think of an excuse.

“You should take better care of your weapon. It’s really hard to repair a weapon this worn out you know.” Erich said with an unimpressed tone.

Reinhard answered back with a quick nod before making a follow-up request. “Erich, can you attach front and rear sights to the barrel?” he asked as he points at the rifle showing Erich where he wants the sights be placed on the weapon.

“Sights huh... why do you need them? You’re already a good shot as it is.”

“I just want to be able to aim faster so I could hit smaller and faster game.”

“No problem, just give me a day and Musky will be as good as new.” Erich replied as if he was bored.

“By the way Reinhard... how the hell are you gonna pay me?”

“Ah.... umm... uh..." Reinhard was gobsmacked by the sudden question.

“As I thought...” Erich sighed in disbelief “Hey, you can still make that rye bread your mom used to make right? I’ll make you a deal, I’ll fix Musky but you need to bake me that bread.”

“The rye bread?”

“Yeah! Exactly that”

“Wait, I think I still have some...” Reinhard reached out for his bread bag, he found it empty.

“I forgot I gave my bread to that Frenchwoman.”

“Where is it?” Erich impatiently asked.

“Okay okay. I get it, I’ll make the bread so get me to a place anywhere that has the equipment and I’ll start making them for you.” Reinhard replied as he cracked his knuckles, pumped up that he had made a fair enough deal with Erich to get his weapon fixed.

“Okay, now hop on the wagon and I’ll drive as quickly as I can.”

“Where are we going anyway?”

“Grab some cheese and a few biscuits there in the back; we’ll be travelling for a few more days.” Erich said as he ushers the horses forward “We’ll be going to my workshop in the town of Hanau.”

“Oh, that’s quite far. W-W-Wait! You have a shop in another country?” Reinhard gazed in amazement of his friend.

“Hmph! I sure do.”

“What are you gonna do there anyway?” Reinhard asked, curious why they still need to go so far.

“I need to get my things from my shop; the landlord there is going to kick me out soon too.”

"W-what?"

Part 4

October 28, 1813. French prisoners were escorted out of a town by Bavarian troops. To the utter surprise of the French garrison of the town, a sudden attack just came out of nowhere by what looks like the advanced guard of a Bavarian Army.

“Treacherous scum! Treacherous Bavarians.” the French soldiers, with their hands raised above and behind their heads, cursed the passing Bavarians that are heading for the town.

“Shut up and move forward!” one of the escorting Bavarian soldiers said as he points a musket equipped with a bayonet at the back of the French soldier, making them move towards the rear of the Bavarian front lines.

“Tch! Bastards!” the French solders complained in frustration and anger, feeling betrayed by the Bavarians.

Bavaria had been one of the staunchest and at times once of the most dependable allies of the French. A member of the Confederation of the Rhine that was created by Napoleon himself after the battle of Austerlitz and the end of the third coalition years ago in 1805, the Bavarians gave the French a buffer zone between France and her enemies to the east, namely Austria, Russia and Prussia.

However, with the defeat of the French army and Napoleon during the Battle of Leipzig, the French emperor had lost most of his power and influence east of the Rhine River, and the confederation of the Rhine... an entity that he had created, turned on him and on France.

“Hmph! French fools! Don’t they know that they have pretty much lost the war?” an arrogant and prideful voice came from the lips of a Bavarian light cavalryman or Cheveauléger as he sees the Frenchman’s faces contort with anger in their defeat.

“Hey Altmann... return to Marshal Wrede and report that we have captured the town. There are still some sporadic resistance from the French troops still holding out but other than that the town is secured.” Aan officer ordered the cavalryman to return towards their commander and report the situation in the front.

“Yes sir!” Altmann replied. He waved the reins of his horse and proceeded to gallop back towards their commander, the Bavarian Marshal Wrede.

“Marshal Wrede sir!” Altmann reported to his general as he rides his horse beside him, “Sir, the town has been captured! We are ready to prepare the defences and block what’s coming on our way. What are your orders sir?”

Wrede smiled a little as he looked into the town “We’ll be expecting a Corps of Austrian troops to march and join us here. Just continue with the clean up and make sure that you patrol the town and the surrounding countryside for any signs of the French army.”

Altmann looked straight towards the town wondering what his general is planning. “The French army sir?”

“Yes soldier, the French are retreating from their defeat at Leipzig. We must not let them lick their wounds... we will stop them here...in this little town right here.”


There we go. I'll post chapters 3-5 and the epilogue next. Might as well post the entire novel before I head to work.
To those who have taken their time to read my work, thank you so much! Again any feedback are most welcome.

Made some edits with this chapter too.
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Chapter 3: A sister’s tears

Part 1

As she saw a large body of soldiers in front of her, a woman tied her long hair and hid it underneath her shako. She then wrapped her gray scarf over her face leaving only the eyes uncovered.

The woman was Nathalie. She somehow managed to find the French army even after being separated from it for days. She went and ran towards the huge column of soldiers marching west.

“Where are the voltigeur regiments?” she asked a soldier marching along the column.

“They should be a few regiments ahead of the column.” the soldier answered, pointing into the front of the column.

There were so many soldiers in the marching army that Nathalie was initially daunted by the prospect of searching the blocks of marching people.

“I hope you’re safe.” Nathalie mumbled to herself.

She inhaled deeply and swallowed. Adjusting her shako, she composed herself before the task ahead.
She started to run towards the leading columns of the formation. She searched the hundreds of different faces as if looking for a specific person than an entire unit.

Where are you? Please be safe, her thoughts for the safety of an important person to her continued to swirl inside her head making her worry.

“Where are you? I know you could make it alive out of Leipzig, please be alright.” Nathalie continued to look around, her eyes going left and right focusing on anything that might look like her friend.

This searching went on for several minutes without results. Her mind was starting to think of the worst believing she will never see her friend again.

It seemed like all hope is lost when she was suddenly pulled by another soldier to the side of the road, away from the marching column of soldiers.

“Hey, Nathalie, come here with me.” a voice whispered into her ear as a hand tugged her on the shoulder.

The voice was unmistakable for Nathalie. She turned around and saw the face she was looking for. It was her friend in the army.

She too was a cross dresser, wearing the same voltigeur uniform and equipped with the same Model 1777 Charleville musket.
She has brown eyes which were framed by her glasses, showing a gentle yet strict look. She was as tall as Nathalie.
Her brown, shoulder length hair shows from her shako, somehow almost magically avoiding the suspicion of the army about her gender.
Her name was Claire Descoteaux.

“You’re alive! Thank goodness you’re alive! I thought I lost you too in Leipzig!” Claire said to Nathalie in relief as she wrapped her arms tightly around her friend and hugged her.

Nathalie was overjoyed by the hug. She felt that finally she could relax a little after her long and arduous search for the army. The warmth of her friend hugging her seemed to have given her renewed strength.

She raised her arms and wrapped it too around Claire, hugging her friend back as tight as she could as if she would never want to let go of her again and get separated once more.

“It’s also good to see you again!” Nathalie responded with a smile on her lips.

She was happy and relieved that Claire was alive and well but somehow bothered by her friend’s words, an uneasy feeling continued to linger inside her after her friend’s sentence.

What does she mean by that? Nathalie asked herself in her head, wondering what her friend meant. It felt to her that something was missing; it’s just that she can’t remember what it was.

Their heart warming reunion was interrupted when an officer suddenly yelled at them to return to their regiment.

“You two! You can celebrate your reunion later when we’re back on French soil. Get back to you regiments and march!”

“Okay! Okay!” Claire waved her hand to the officer and replied without any sort of formalities as she started to run towards her regiment, pulling Nathalie along with her by her arm.

“Nathalie. How did you get here so fast?” she asked, amazed at the speed her friend found and reunited with the army.

“An individual person can still move faster than an entire army you know.” Nathalie replied.

“You’re really amazing!” Claire exclaimed in awe of her friend “Anyway, when we stop at the next town I’m going to sleep on the softest bed I could find. I also need to relax my feet because they hurt like crazy. I’m gonna eat some bread too.”

“Bread huh?” Nathalie whispered to herself as she remembered how much she liked the bread Reinhard gave her.
She liked the bread so much that her taste buds could still taste the deliciousness and her nose can still smell the aroma and scent of such a great piece of bread.

“So Claire, where are we heading to anyway?" Nathalie asked, interested to know where the next town that they can do their plans of resting and eating bread is.

“Frankfurt, but before we get there we need to pass a town called Hanau.” Claire replied as she lets go of her friend’s hand “By the way... what happened to you after what happened in Leipzig?”

Nathalie looked a little towards the sky as she remembers what happened.

“Well, I was chased by Russian cavalry all the way into a wooded area from Leipzig. I managed to evade most of them though and I tried to hide behind trees but I fell from a slope.”

“Hahaha! That explains why you are all dirty like that.” Claire replied, teasing Nathalie.

She was covered in dirt. Some remnants of tree barks and little chips of wood can also still be seen clinging on her uniform.

“Hey... it’s not something I want to recall. I’ve been picking branches out of my butt for days after that fall. Actually my body is still hurting a little from that.”

“Hahaha! I wouldn’t like to recall something that made me look like that too.”

“Hmph! Well... at least I don’t have mud all over my boots and trousers.” Nathalie replied back, trying to get even with Claire as she points at her friend’s mud covered clothes.

“W-Wh-Whaaaat?? If I remember correctly you were the one that pushed me into the river and made me swim all the way into the other bank! I even had to drag myself out of the river! That’s why I look like I wallowed in mud.”

“Hahaha! It’s a good thing that you’re a great swimmer then!”

Claire held Nathalie's hand tighter.

“But still..." she said with a serious tone "it seriously pisses me off that you pushed me into the river and made yourself the bait.”

Claire’s eyes were filled with seriousness and slight anger. She still believed that Nathalie’s thought of sacrificing herself for her to escape was unneeded and unfair.

“Hehe... well... sorry about that, well I got back safe right?”

“Dammit...don’t you do dare that again okay?” Claire sighed before continuing to ask Nathalie of her fate after Leipzig, curious about her friend’s almost superhuman exploits.

“So... what else happened after that? Did you find any help?”

Nathalie stopped running and looked at her friend. Her eyes started to spin and her face brightened up into a red colour.

“What’s the matter?” Claire asked as she too stops from running. She was baffled about Nathalie suddenly being flustered.

“W-W-W-Well... there was this Prussian... that helped me.” Nathalie replied. Her voice was all nervous and choppy.

“What?! A Prussian?” Claire asked.

“Yeah... I believe he was a hunter or something. H-He helped me a lot.”

“He didn’t try to kill you?” Claire said as her eyes slowly sharpened in appearance “Wait! Could you clear it up? I couldn’t follow what you are trying to say.”

“N-N-No... he was not a soldier... s-s-s-so... he h-helped me. He even g-gave me food.” Nathalie’s sentences are becoming so broken Claire could not understand her clearly anymore.

“So a Prussian helped you and even fed you. So you became sure he’s not an enemy?”

“Well... um, yeah. I guess...?”

“Wait...hey, Nathalie what are you so flustered about?” Claire asked as she slowly moved her face closer to Nathalie’s like she was inspecting her. She became curious as to why Nathalie was so blushed and anxious.

“W-Wait why are you so close?” Nathalie asked, intimidated by her friend's close up investigation. She was being stared at by Claire only a few centimetres away from her face.

“I’m in ‘serious mode’ now. So tell me.... what happened?” Claire replied. It’s like she is a completely different person. Her eyes were sharp and almost seem to see through Nathalie.

“Oh please God... not serious mode, not serious mode.” Nathalie pleads to Claire as if she wanted mercy.

“Why do you not want me in serious mode?”

“B-B-Because you’re scary as hell! I get uneasy whenever you become like that even since when we were still kids.”
Nathalie crouched into a small ball on the ground. Her entire body shook and trembled like that of a little puppy, afraid of Claire’s sudden conversion into her “serious mode”.

“Hahaha! Don’t be scared now... I won’t bite you, I’m just really interested. So what happened after you met him?” Claire asked again, her interest and curiosity about the Prussian slowly rising every moment that passes.

“He saved my life... well... sort of, and he gave me something to eat too so I’m thankful to him............... however.........”

“However......? What...?” Claire asked.

Nathalie slowly stood up from her crouched position and she clenched her fist. Her eyes became filled with rage and her teeth ground against each other. A dangerous aura seemed to be flowing around her due to her anger.

“T-T-That idiot, h-h-he groped my breast!!!! That Prussian idiot groped me!!!”

“Wait......? Wha...? What.......................?!”
Claire was out of words. She wasn’t sure how to react. Nathalie’s sudden statement of her embarrassing moment with the Prussian just came so quickly it didn’t have time to sink in.

In the end she finally and suddenly burst out in laughter.

“Ahahahaha! So that’s what happened! I understand now why you are so flustered!”
As she was laughing her heart out, Nathalie was stomping the ground in embarrassment and frustration.

“I-Im gonna do more damage to that man when I see him again... ooohhhh I’m gonna break his back with my camel clutch. I’ll definitely kill that pervert!”
Claire walked beside her and held Nathalie’s hands. Her eyes were so bright it seemed like stars sparkled inside them.

“So... you finally have a lover. I’m so proud of you.” she suddenly blurted out.
Nathalie was taken totally off guard by Claire’s statement that her face became even redder than before. Her heartbeat continued to rise and she started to breath heavily.

“Dammit! What are you saying! I’ll never have a perverted lover like that guy!”

“Oh? Really? But you seem rather excited whenever you talk about him.”

“I definitely am not!!!! Blame the events that happened as to why I’m like this!”

“I don’t believe you! Look at how flustered you are right now... you’re as red as beet!”

“I’m only embarrassed because of what he did! There’s no other reason!”

“Oh? Is that really so? Hahaha!”

“Jeez Claire! Stop teasing me already!”

“Haha! Okay okay! Let’s go back.”
Pulling Nathalie by the arm again, Claire started to run towards their regiment.

“So Nathalie, what was the Prussian hunter’s name?”

“Well... his last name was Jaeger, I can remember that because he’s a hunter and Jaeger means hunter in their language. However I can’t remember his first name.” Nathalie replied as she looked into her fingers as if deducing a math problem.

“His name is Jaeger and he’s a hunter... the hell? Was that a lame pun?” Claire mumbled to herself as she held her head in confusion while Nathalie was starting to get irritated in trying to recall.

“Aaaaaaaaaagggghhhhhhh!” Nathalie screamed, finally giving up trying to remember.

“I know! Let’s just call him what I had called him before... Prussian idiot.”

“What?? Don’t make fun of people’s names will you.”

“Don’t worry! He’s an idiot! An honest to goodness idiot.”

“Hh... ok then... Well, I think it’s decided then... he’s the Prussian idiot.”



Part 2

“Achooo!” a loud sneeze burst from Reinhard’s mouth and nose.

“Hey! Did you catch a cold or something?” Erich, Reinhard’s friend and companion towards Hanau asked.

“I don’t think so, but somehow my nose really tingles. Maybe some beautiful babe is remembering me right now.... Oi! Erich how far are we from Hanau? Are we there yet?” Reinhard asked to Erich in a grumpy and impatient voice.

He was lying inside the canvass roofed wagon, complaining almost every other minute to Erich about how slow their travel to Hanau is. The day was October 29, 1813.

The two have been travelling a few days now since they met up a few miles north of Leipzig. Reinhard, who was not used to riding horses or wagons, was starting to get green again from motion sickness. He’s trying the best that he can to keep down the contents of his stomach from going up. He crawled out of the wagon and sat beside Erich who looked at him almost with pity.

“Hey, are you alright?” Erich asked his friend as he slowed the horses a bit.

“Don’t worry I’m fine.”

“Well... It’s not you that I’m really worried about but my wagon, I don’t want it getting dirty you know.”

“Damn you, I’ll definitely get payback for this.” Reinhard responded again in a grumpy voice before suddenly puking to the side.

“Damn, not again... you better stop that.” Erich said in a shocked voice.

“I can’t... hold it.... Brrrruuaaarrrrkkkk!” the sound of Reinhard puking resounded in the air. It was then followed up by a few coughs as he tried to stop anymore from coming out.

“Motion sickness is a real pain in the ass is it?” Erich teased his friend.

“Damn you Erich, you could try and drive more smoothly.”

“I am driving really slowly now. Don’t worry now, look over there, we’re finally in Hanau.”
Reinhard’s expression suddenly changed. He wiped his face clear and looked straight at Hanau with eyes that looked like a kid who went to a candy store.

“Whoa, that was a fast recovery.” Erich commented on Reinhard’s quick change. His contorted, motion sickness-ridden face changed into a relaxed but excited state.

“Well of course, I can’t wait to get off this accursed wagon.” Reinhard said.

Somehow Erich became a little pissed with the statement.

“Call my wagon accursed again and I’m gonna make sure I’ll throw you out.”

“Hahaha! The irony. No need to be pissed off my friend. Anyways, I leave my Musky to you.”

“I’ll make sure I fix the rifle into a pristine condition. Just make sure you give me my payment later.”

“Oh! The bread right? I’ll make an entire basket for you.”

Their wagon finally reached Hanau, after a long journey all the way from Leipzig.

However when they entered the small town the relaxed expression of the two men changed in confusion.

Austrian and Bavarian soldiers were roaming in and around the city. The white uniform of the Austrians and the light blue of Bavarians stood out from the citizens of the town. The tents that the troops were using could be clearly seen in the distance.

Reinhard jumped down from the wagon. His boots hit the ground with a tap sound. As he fixed his clothes, he turned his head around from side to side, surveying the area around him with his sharp eyes. It looked like most of the town’s population had left the place.

“Hey Erich, it looks like we’ll have trouble making the bread for you. Go and park your wagon in your workshop, I’ll be right behind you.” Reinhard said as he started to walk towards the townspeople.

“Where are you going?” Erich asked as he scratches his head “Just make me the bread next time!”

“I’m going around town to ask for information, maybe we could find out what on earth is going on.”

“Well then, just look for a building with two chimneys. That’s my workshop.” Erich replied before driving his wagon towards his shop.

Reinhard then started to ask questions to the people of the city, careful to avoid the ears of the patrolling soldiers. He walked and stopped in front of every stall or a group of people, asking question after question. He went from one person to the next trying to find any relevant information on the massive amount of troops in the town.

A long time had passed on but still he could not find a reliable piece of information.
He could just give up trying to know what purpose the soldiers are there for, but deep inside him he knows something big will happen.

Somehow, something inside his head is causing him to feel uneasy to be in that town, during that particular time.

He scratched his head in frustration as he cannot get any usable answer from any of the townspeople. Many of the people he asked only saying that they are afraid and they are also as confused as he is. Some had reported a small skirmish for the town.

“Gah! I’ve been asking for almost an hour now. This is hopeless.” He said to himself, scratching his head. Exasperated in the lack of information he got.

Suddenly, an old man called out to him. He looked like an ordinary old merchant with him atop his horse cart, carrying within it a small amount of rolled cloth that he uses for trade.

“Hey young man, you look quite troubled there! Is something wrong?” the old man asked, curious about the reason of Reinhard’s irritation.

“Nah... Just can’t understand anything in this town.” Reinhard replied “Oi! Old timer, you have any idea why Austrian and Bavarian troops are here?”

“W-W-What was that young man?” the old man replied as he placed his hand cupped beside his hear trying to hear better of what was asked of him.

“I said... Do you have any idea why Austrian and Bavarian troops are here?!” Reinhard loudly yelled back at the old man.

“Ah... I heard a few days ago that the Bavarians, as you can see, changed sides. If I remember correctly, it’s after the French lost in a big battle somewhere.”
Reinhard’s eyes suddenly widened from the old man’s response. Somehow he started to have an even worse feeling than before about being in Hanau.

“Thanks old timer.” He softly thanked the old merchant before walking away. Deep in thought, piecing together all the information he knows.

“Hey young man!” the old man called out.

Reinhard reacted by turning around and looking at the face of the merchant.

“What?”

“Take these; I won’t be able to sell these rolls of cloth anymore anyway... the people left.”

“Whoa? Really? These are still in pretty good shape, you sure you want to give them to me?”

“Of course, those would just be wasted if I hold on to them anyway.” the old man said as Reinhard took the rolls of cloth from the back of his cart.

“Thanks old man!”

“You’re welcome kid... well... now.... did that relax you a little? You can think clearer now that you are more relaxed right?”

“....”

“Just a piece of advice from an old timer to a youngster. Well then, see you.”

The old man uttered those words with a slight smile before driving away; somehow, he noticed that Reinhard was bothered too much about something that he could not think clearly.

He gave Reinhard his merchandise partly to get rid of it and second, just to remove his mind a little bit from what was bothering him. In doing so he has cleared the mind of the young Prussian on what to do.

“Hehe. That’s clever... thanks old man.” Reinhard softly spoke out words of gratitude to the air before thinking about the troops again.

“Bavarians, Austrians, Hanau, Leipzig, the battle in Leipzig...” he whispers to himself as he walks, trying to understand what was going on.

Suddenly, he remembered Nathalie’s words when they first met, the words of a person that was in the actual battle itself...
“We had just lost a huge battle in Leipzig...”
“The Russians, Austrians and Prussians were just too many...”
“I may be able to join the French army if I hurry west...”

... All these words from the female soldier that he encountered on that night of October 19, 1813 flooded his thoughts.He pieced these bits of information together until he finally came to a conclusion.

“I-It.... it can’t be....”
He was so shocked on what he discovered that cold sweat started to pour down his face. He looked up into the skyline, imagining a scenario that seemed to be slowly creeping into realization every passing minute.

He ran as fast as he can towards Erich’s workshop, looking for the two chimney roof that his friend told him to look for.
His head was filled with uncertainty.
He had figured out something that he doesn’t want to believe.
Although he knows in the back of his head that it is the most likely answer.

He ran around the town, looking up on the roofs of the buildings looking for the chimneys. His arms wrapped around the rolls of cloth that the merchant has so kind heartedly given him.

He’s so preoccupied of looking at the roofs of the buildings in the town that he suddenly bumped into what he felt was a large wall of pure muscle. The rolls of cloth that he was carrying fell to the ground.

“Ow! Ow! Ow! What the hell...???”
Slowly looking up, Reinhard saw a small group of Bavarian Cheveaulégers (or light cavalry).
He had just bumped into one of the horses by mistake as they patrolled the town.
The horse was a little startled by the sudden bump to its side that it pranced around a little, angering the rider.

“Sorry about that.” Reinhard said as he retrieved the cloth from the ground.

“Watch where you’re going!” The rider yelled as he pulled the reins of his horse to calm it down.

“Wait a minute... you’re that guy who is roaming around the town earlier and asking people around for information why we are here right?” The rider in the green Bavarian cavalry uniform slowly dismounts from his horse and walked towards Reinhard with his sword drawn.

Even with every caution that Reinhard has made, someone in the Bavarian army still noticed him gathering information and mistook him for something else.

He pointed the sword at Reinhard before asking: “What are you doing here? Are you a spy?”

Reinhard just stared at the tip of the sword, without so much a hint of fear on his face.

“Hey now... do I look like a spy to you? I mean I have rolls of cloth over here with me but... seriously...?!”

“Don’t play dumb with me.” the Bavarian cavalryman just stared at Reinhard. His sword still threateningly brandished at Reinhard's chest.

Suddenly and without warning, the Bavarian swung his sword with lightning speed towards Reinhard’s neck.

Reinhard calmly jumped backwards and avoided the sword with inches to spare.

“Whoa! Oi! What’s your problem?!” Reinhard yelled as he dusts the rolls of cloth with his hands.

“Nothing really, I just thought I’d get a little practice swinging my sword.” The Bavarian responded. Without really much of a reason he just suddenly attacked Reinhard almost decapitating the hunter with his earlier swing.

The Bavarian was once again taking a stance planning to attack Reinhard a second time. However before he could swing his sword again his fellow soldiers called out to him.
“Hey! Altmann! We know you’re getting all worked up but enough with that! Marshal von Wrede will really punish us if he knew you just killed a civilian.”

“..........”

Without another word, Altmann sheathed his sword, walked towards his horse and mounted it. He and Reinhard looked sharply at each other before he departed along with his patrol group.

“Man, what an idiot.” Reinhard sighed as he cursed the Bavarian. He again looked around and resumed to search for Erich’s workshop. Slightly pissed by his sudden and violent encounter.

He hurriedly ran through the town once again looking for a building with two chimneys sticking out of its roof.

“There! Finally, it took me an eternity to find this place.”

Finally, as the sun slowly goes down, he found the workshop. It’s a simple building with double doors as the main entrance and has a little stable in the back for the horses to rest. The wagon that they travelled in is parked near the stables.

He quickly threw in the rolls of cloth inside the wagon before going inside the workshop.

Bam! The slamming open of the double doors surprised Erich who was busy working on the repairs of Reinhard’s rifle.

When Reinhard reached Erich he was exhausted. He breathed heavily, his shoulders were going up and down as he chased his breath and his sweat poured down his face.

“Erich, do you have a map on you?” Reinhard asked his clearly baffled friend.

“What for?” Erich replied in a very confused tone.

“Just give me a damn map!”

Erich reached beside his worktable and threw a large rolled map. It was similar to what a general would use in planning out his manoeuvres and strategies.

Reinhard quickly unrolled it and checked out the locations on it.

“What are you doing? And why are you looking so exhausted?” Erich asked, curious as to what his friend was up to.

“I just ran around town trying to find this small building of yours. You could have just told me the street this building is standing on earlier to save me the time and effort.”

“Haha. Sorry about that. You were in such a hurry earlier that I just shouted it.”

“Furthermore I also ran into some stupid Bavarian.”

“Hmmmmm? Why? What happened?”

Reinhard sighed, remembering the Bavarian’s face just pisses him off.
“That Bavarian jerk, that Altman.... or something-or-other soldier that he is just tried to chop my head off. Mistook me for a spy or something.”

Suddenly, Nathalie’s image flashed in his head. The moment when she just suddenly charged at him and tried to stab him with her bayonet when she mistook him as an enemy made him sigh.

“Anyway, why did you need that map again?”

“I figured out why the Austrians and Bavarians are here.” Reinhard said as he points at the town of Hanau on the map “Erich look. Heading from Leipzig towards France, the logical route of retreating army would be the shortest route towards a crossing over the Rhine River.”

“And the nearest safe haven for them is...?

“The most probable safe rear base of the French is the city of Mainz by the Rhine River, and to get there they will have to pass Frankfurt and to get to Frankfurt they need to pass through........ Hanau.”

Reinhard looked into Hanau’s location in the map with serious eyes, his tone of voice is relatively calm and collected despite about what was about to happen.

“Erich, the Bavarians had switched sides, they have joined here with the Austrians to block the French army’s route to safety.” Reinhard said as he stared at the map.

“What makes you so sure about that?” Erich asked, unconvinced of Reinhard’s theory.

“The Bavarian soldiers I got into the scrap with earlier said that their Marshal seems to be von Wrede. Karl Philipp von Wrede wouldn’t just stand here idly with the Austrians and his own troops without a reason."

“Are you sure?” Erich, unconvinced, again asked.

“I’m quite sure that the Austrians and Bavarians will try to do their best and inflict as much casualties as they can to the French army.” Reinhard replied.

The face of the female soldier that he met in the outskirts of Leipzig flashed once more in Reinhard's head.
As he remembered the mysterious blue eyes of the soldier he became more confident that his theory could be correct.

“Just trust me; we need to get away from here.”

Erich scratched his head; he would also want to leave if needed be however:
“Well, if we get out of town now I won’t be able to fix your rifle... as you can see I have already dismantled it to begin repairs.”
Erich pointed at his worktable, where he is fixing his friend’s weapon.

Musky was in bits and pieces on the worktable. Every little part will be needed to be changed, the barrel, the flintlock hammer and definitely the wooden stock. And the sights Reinhard wanted to be attached must be attached with great care... a work that cannot be rushed.

Reinhard looked upon the work table in disbelief.

“Ugh........ How long will it need to get fixed?”
Asking what seems to be a stupid question given the bad condition of his rifle, Reinhard sat down on the floor near one of the shops windows to relax.

“Just give me until tomorrow morning.” Erich responded “Also, about your theory that a battle might fall upon us... It’s not like we’ve never been under fire right?!”

Reinhard moved the makeshift curtains of the window and looked towards the sky outside.
“Well, we had... but I don’t want to remember once being part of this stupid war anymore.”

Part 3

“Claire, what is the date today?” Nathalie asked her friend. She slightly pulled the scarf wrapped around her face with her fingers so that her friend could hear her better “I lost track of time when we got separated.”

She and her friend, Claire Descoteaux, were marching along with the rest of the French army. They were moving towards Hanau at great speed, trying to outrun the coalition army that they believe are pursuing them after the defeat that they suffered in Leipzig.

“I believe it is October 29.” Claire responded to the question, counting with her fingers.

“Is that so... H-Hey, Claire?”

“Yeah? Why?”

“When this stupid war is over, when we’re back in France, can I stay in your house again? I don’t like to impose... but I just don’t have anywhere to return to anymore.” Nathalie, with a soft and gentle voice, pleaded to her friend. Her face noticeably marked with distress.

Claire gave her a big smile as a reply. She raised her arm and wrapped it around Nathalie’s shoulder pulling her closer.

“It’s alright! We’ve been friends for a very long time that it feels to us like we’re sisters now, so don’t sweat it okay?!” Claire replied, reassuring Nathalie with her words.

Hearing this reply, Nathalie’s eyes started to become teary as if she was about to cry, however she managed to hold it back.

“Thank you very much! Thank you.” she replied, holding Claire’s hand that was around her shoulder, thankful to her friend that was always there for her.

“Haha! No need to thank me.”

As the two were marching, they shared laughs and giggles with each other for a few moments. Some precious time to take their minds away from the war.

Then an order from an officer suddenly flooded the air.

“Stop! We spend the night here soldiers! Set up quarters and get some food and rest.” the voice of a commander declared as he hurried off towards small castle not far to the distance.

It was already beginning to get dark. The army needed to stop and rest.

Just as Nathalie and Claire began to move to find a good place to rest, a figure atop a horse accompanied by soldiers and other men in horses went by them. The leading figure on horseback looked upon the soldiers as he heads with his group towards the castle. His coat was unmistakable, his face easily recognizable... he’s Napoleon Bonaparte, the emperor of France himself.

“Look Nathalie, it’s ‘The Hat’”. Claire softly whispered to Nathalie’s ear as the two of them looked at the emperor and his entourage.

“I hate that man.” Nathalie softly mumbled, her eyes sharply staring at the emperor.

"He's done some good things for France Nathalie, you know that. Better than the last royals and their monarchy." Claire said.

"I know" Nathalie replied "Reforms in education for the men, reforms to the economy, prestige and power for France, even the code. He has done great things, for the male population at least."

But even though she admitted that the emperor had done better things than the previous monarchy, Nathalie's face showed a slightly depressed expression. Claire looked at her friend and said "In 1807. It's because of that isn't it?"

Nathalie slowly looked down to the ground. She bit her lip slightly.

“It looks like he will set up headquarters in that castle up ahead.” Claire said as she pulled Nathalie by the arm trying to snap her friend out of her depressed state “Anyways we should find a good place to eat and sleep.”

“It seems we would not be able to set up tents, let’s just use our greatcoats to keep us warm.” Nathalie suggested, putting down her backpack on the ground and unrolling her greatcoat from it.

It was a standard issue gray greatcoat of the French Grande Armée. It was an overcoat that stretches all the way approximately past the knees. They were designed to keep the soldiers warm and protected from the weather.

“You’re thinking the same way I am. Look I’ve already worn mine.” Claire boasts as she bends down to the ground and searched something from her backpack.

“What are you looking for?” the curious Nathalie asked.

“Well... just a little something to eat. Here take some and get your fill, it looks like we still have a long march for tomorrow.” Claire said as she offered a bag full of biscuits to Nathalie.

The two sat down under a tree and began to eat the biscuits that they have. Sitting side by side as they lean on the sturdy tree trunk they talked about anything that came to mind.

“Oh that feels good.” Claire exclaimed as she stretches her legs, relieved of taking the weight of her feet.

“It sure feels good to actually sit down and eat something again.” Nathalie said, pulling down her scarf to eat, revealing more of her beautiful face.

As she does so, Nathalie looked around. It was as if she was waiting for someone to come.

“Hey Claire, I almost forgot... where is Denis?” Nathalie asked as she pulled slightly on the scarf around her face again and takes a bite on a biscuit “I haven’t seen him since I got back, he usually visits you every night before he sleeps right? You got in a fight or something?”

Denis was Claire’s lover. He was the reason why Claire joined the army.
She did not want to be separated from him as he joined the military so she cross dressed as a man with Denis’ help to be able to be with her beloved even in battle.

He had a habit of visiting Claire almost every night to make sure she’s safe.

However he didn’t show up which aroused Nathalie’s curiosity.

“Denis...............” hearing Nathalie's question Claire started to break down.

Her heart began to beat faster.

Her breathing became more pronounced and her eyes began to water.

She bit her lip as the tears began to flow. It slowly went down her soft cheeks and dropped from her chin.

Her glasses became wet as the result from the amount of tears that she cried out.

“Whoa... whoa... why are you crying? Is your fight that big?” Nathalie said, surprised her friend just very suddenly cried.

Claire shook her head. She continued to stare at the ground between her feet.

“Nathalie...” she said in a very soft voice, her face looking like the face of a depressed and helpless crying child “Denis is... Denis is... Denis is gone.”

In her disbelief Nathalie dropped the biscuit that she was enjoying earlier. Her hands shook violently from the sudden burst of emotions and the shock of a sudden revelation.

“What...?! When...?!” she asked her crying friend. Stunned from what she had just learned.

“Leipzig... during the retreat. He was shot then... he... he... I wasn’t even able to reach his body, he just sank in the river.” Claire replied in broken sentences, bending her knees towards her face and resting her head on it continuing to cry out in despair and in sorrow.

Seeing her friend’s suffering, Nathalie removed her greatcoat and placed it for a moment on the ground beside her. She reached out for her friend.
She removed the glasses off her tearing eyes. She also removed the shako from her head.
Putting them beside her greatcoat, she placed Claire's head on her bosom.

“I’m sorry Claire. I’m sorry.” Nathalie whispered to her friend as she gently caressed her head, trying to comfort her and console her as best as she can.

“No don’t say that, you don’t have to apologize.” Claire replied “It’s just... it’s just...”

“Hush... no need to explain. Just let it all out, let it come out.” Nathalie picked up her greatcoat from the ground and blankets Claire with it. She was protecting her identity from other people and more importantly, the privacy of her grieving for her recently deceased lover.

So that’s what you meant by ‘too’, Nathalie thought as she moves her arms and hands to embrace her friend tighter.

“I never got to do anything for him. I wasn’t even able to reach him and see his face clearly one last time. I wanted to say how much I loved him.”

“Claire...”

“Nathalie... I... I...”

“I’ll protect you!" Nathalie declared "I’m going to support you too! I’ll always be here too every step of the way for you!”

“W-wha... Nathalie....?”

“I know you miss him so much! I know how it feels to have lost a loved one." Nathalie said forcefully

"But as you said we’re sisters! I am your younger sister and I will do my part to help you." She added. She's trying to put back strength into Claire's heart.

"You have done so much for me and I want you to know that I’ll always be beside you... it’s my turn to help you... so please Claire, let me be the one to help you now.”

“Nathalie..." Claire softly uttered back "I’m sorry... I’m sorry...”

“It’s okay to be weak and vulnerable from time to time. It’s okay to let it out.”

Hearing Nathalie’s words, Claire let out the vulnerable and soft part of a woman from herself. She cried upon her best friend’s... her sister’s bosom to release the pain and anguish of her recent loss.

I need to be strong for you now... Nathalie thought as she holds on to her grieving friend ...you’ve been there for me the whole time when tragedy struck my life. You’ve been a real family to me. You’ve been strong for me all that time... now it’s my turn to be stong for you.

As she was comforting her friend a group of three French infantrymen walked by them. They were aimlessly walking around just trying to pass the time. Nathalie quickly raised her scarf again over her face.

“What happened here?” one of the soldiers asked in an aggressive tone. His attitude seemed like was speaking just to pick a fight.

“We just lost a good friend, please let him be.” Nathalie replied as she looks at the soldier straight in the eyes.

“Lost a friend? Tch! We all have lost friends, you need not cry like that from losing one.” the aggressive soldier uttered again in a louder voice.

Hearing this, Nathalie looked at the soldier with a very sharp stare. This in effect caused the soldier to take a step backwards, intimidated by Nathalie’s sharp eyes.

“We all have our own ways of grieving for the dead, so if you’ll kindly excuse us” she said as she slowly stretched her arm and reached for her musket “or do I still need to stab your face with my bayonet for you to understand what I’m saying?”

The aggressive soldier snapped.

“Why you!” the soldier screamed as he jumped straight into Nathalie and Claire. His fists were ready for a brawl.

Nathalie grabbed her musket and pointed the bayonet at the charging Frenchman. She really was serious and will try to impale the soldier with her weapon.

“Whoa! Whoa! Relax guys.” fortunately, a more reasonable soldier in the group said as he suddenly grabbed his companion by his arms and pulled him away avoiding certain trouble.

“We’ll take our leave" he said "please accept my apologies for my friend’s rudeness. We’ll go now.”

“But...!” the aggressive soldier tried to rebut.

“You stay quiet there, now is not the time to be fighting amongst ourselves. We still have the Bavarians as problems.” his calmer companion said.

He lets the third Frenchman in their group to escort the hot headed soldier away, while he stayed behind and talked to Nathalie.

“I apologize for my friend’s actions. We too just lost a friend in Leipzig." he said "I think he’s just jealous because he can’t express the emotions that the two of you can. You have my condolences. And once again, for what it’s worth, I’m sorry.”

“You also have our condolences...” Nathalie replied “...But what do you mean that we have a problem with the Bavarians?”

“Oh... so you didn’t know? We had reports from the scouts that the Bavarians turned on us after the Battle of Leipzig. They will try to block us from home somewhere up ahead.”

After these words the Frenchman left, leaving the two women in peace.

“Finally. It’s ok now Claire, don’t listen to whatever that soldier said.” Nathalie said as she released her grip on the musket and placed her hand over Claire. She embraced and comforted her once more.

“Thank you... thank you Nathalie.” Claire replied with a very soft voice as she made a gentle nod.

Nathalie looked at the night sky, asking herself of what lies ahead for her and her friend.

The stars and the moon were blocked by the clouds that somehow seemed black and heavy. It’s as if even the night sky is refusing to give them any hope.

A gentle breeze blows past them, bringing with it a cold,icy sensation.

“Dammit. What are we supposed to do now? We’ve lost everything... this whole war has taken everything from us.” She whispered to herself as she clenched her hands into a hard fist.

She was frustrated.

She was angry.

She was confused at the whole point of the war.

“Nathalie...” the muffled voice of Claire under the greatcoat called out “... can I sleep here? ...In your arms?”

“Of course you can...” she replied as she caressed Claire’s head through the greatcoat before she began to hum.

It was a very peaceful and heart warming song.

The humming of Nathalie made a calm and relaxing atmosphere. Even the grieving Claire felt a little bit more at ease when she heard the beautiful melody coming out of her friend’s lips.

“I like this song...” Claire said in appreciation of the warm song before she snuggled herself into Nathalie’s chest and wraps her arms around her friend.

“I like it too" Nathalie replied "after all, it’s the song my father composed for me for my birthday.”

“................” silence had surrounded Claire under the greatcoat.

She had fallen asleep from crying.

The two women spent the rest of the night in this way. With Nathalie deep in thought of everything that had happened for the last few days before she slowly slips into a quiet slumber. The sleep giving them a much needed rest and, hopefully, a much needed momentary escape from the chaos and horrors of the war.


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A good story so far.

I like the chemistry between the characters.

When Altmann suspected Reinhard of being a spy, why didn't he detain Reinhard for further questioning? Or keep him under surveillance? It seems rather risky to let a possible spy run around freely. Or maybe Altmann really hated him for some reason and the spy accusation wasn't serious?

Btw the system automatically changes swear words into another word.
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Re: Original Light Novel: The Lady Voltigeur

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Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you found the story and the characters interesting.

So that's what happened. I got confused when I saw the words poke and itsuki out of the blue. I was like "French and Germans suddenly knew how to speak Japanese?"
I'll edit my posts and correct them.

And while I'm at it here's the next chapters.

Chapter 4:
Spoiler! :
Chapter 4: The Battle of Hanau

Part 1

A warm, bright light pierces through the window. The light was bright enough that one could see dust particles floating around in the air like little flashes of light.

“Wah...” Reinhard was awakened by the stream of the warm, bright light coming from the window striking his eyes. He had fallen asleep beside the window the night earlier when he was waiting for Erich to finish repairing his rifle.

“It looks like I woke up late...” He said as he brushed aside the single piece of cloth that acts as a curtain on one of Erich’s workshop’s windows, he looked outside and checked the area. His vision was still a little unfocused, he could not see clearly what was going on outside.

It was now the morning of October 30, 1813.

“You were sleeping the whole darn night while I fix your weapon.” Erich complained to his friend with a rough voice.

He was clearly sleep deprived; huge black eye bags were clearly visible on his face.

“Here...” reaching out with Musky in his right hand, Erich offered the return of the rifle to its master. It brought a happy and excited smile on Reinhard’s face.

“Oh! She’s fixed! Hurray!” seeing his beloved rifle in an almost brand new condition, Reinhard could not contain his joy as he reached out for the weapon.

“Oh! Musky! Welcome back my partner!” he exclaimed in happiness as he ripped the rifle from Erich’s hand into his embrace.

“I see that you also have a new look.” gently feeling the newly attached front and rear sights to his weapon with his fingers, he adored the new profile of the rifle.

“I don’t like to interrupt your sweet moment but I need to say this... when are you gonna pay me?” Erich asked in a bored tone, his chin rested on his hand in a lazy way. It looked like he was really tired after fixing Musky for his friend. His eyes even started to droop a little.

“...”
Reinhard just stared at his friend.

“Don’t tell me you forgot that you need to pay for that?” Erich asked in a frustrated manner.
Erich slowly stood up from where he sat in front of his worktable and grabbed Musky by the barrel end.

“You need to pay me for my services! Preparing your custom built rifle isn’t easy even though I’m the original creator of that weapon!” he said as he pulled at Musky, trying to retrieve it back from Reinhard.

Reinhard held on the rifle as tight as he can, he has no intention of giving it back to Erich.

“Dammit Reinhard! Quit acting like a kid and let go of the rifle.”

“Eeeeeehhhh?!” Reinhard complained as he pulled on the rifle. “I’ll pay you later; I’ll bake you your bread or even make money for you... so please just don’t get Musky from me now.”

Realizing that Reinhard would not let go of the weapon, Erich released it, took a few steps back and sat once again on the seat beside his worktable.

“Hahaha! I thought that this would happen. It’s all right, were still even.” Erich said in a condescending way.

“Why is that...?” Reinhard, curious about what Erich meant, asked.

“You can’t fire your rifle yet. I haven’t made any ammunition yet.”

“.............”
“.............”
They just stared at each other.

“W-W-Whaaaaaaaaat!!!!?!??” Reinhard yelled “Why is there no ammunition yet? You haven’t made any cartridges?”

“I was working all night long, it was a complicated job and it’s even a miracle that I can finish the overhaul of your rifle in just one sitting!”

“B-B-But? Why no ammo? Then she’s still practically useless.”

“Exactly.”

Reinhard was so disappointed that Musky still doesn’t have any ammunition that he sat in a corner and started to write little doodles on the ground with his finger.

“Hey... you also got some mechanical skills. You could even fix Musky yourself; why even bring it to me?” Erich asked.

“Well... that because you’re better than me with mechanical stuff.”

“You’re just too lazy to try.”

“I am not; I’m just not as good as you.” Reinhard’s eyebrow twitched in disbelief after he heard that kind of insult from his friend.

Erich stood up once again and walked towards a dimly lit corner of his shop that is filled with empty wooden boxes and barrels. There he lifted a sheet of cloth covering something big on wheels, something that looked like it’s really heavy.

“Hey Reinhard... can you help me move this onboard the wagon?”

“What the hell is that now?” Reinhard walked with very low energy that he seemed to wobble towards the thing Erich was looking at.

“That is....” his eyes widened as he took a step back, shocked at what he saw.

“How in the world did you get your hands on that thing?!” he asked Erich in a surprised tone.

“Well, it’s a long story but it won’t matter anyway... so can you help me?

“Huah...” Reinhard sighed “Okay I’ll get a ramp or something and let’s get this over with.”

Reinhard tossed Musky back to Erich before opening the double-door which was the main entrance of the workshop. The bright light once again struck on his face and everything momentarily turned to white before his eyes have adjusted and he could see things clearly.

The very moment he stepped out of the door, the reality of the situation slammed into his face. The Austro–Bavarian army had already deployed around the town of Hanau, the neat lines of soldiers clearly from seen from his position. Their flags and standards waved and fluttered in the wind and the bayonets of the troops gleamed under the morning sun. Cavalry units were moving to and fro, the sounds of their horses’ hooves striking the hard stones of the roads with audible *clack, clack, clack* sounds.

Hanau was only a small town. On one side sits the Kinzig River, a tributary of the Main River that is on the other side of the town. The Kinzig weaves like a huge letter “P” without the spine on the bend with the town in its place.

“Oh shit! Oh shit! We need to get out of here now!” Reinhard said as he entered the workshop again and slammed the door behind him.

“Whoa! What’s with the ruckus?” Erich replied, confused on the sudden return of Reinhard, who had actually just set foot outside and then quickly jumped back in.

“The battle could begin any minute now... we need to get out of here.” Reinhard replied as he leaned on the closed door.

“What?!” Erich, confused and startled by the sudden ruckus made by Reinhard stood up and looked outside.

“The battle can start any moment from now... we should really go now!” Reinhard uttered as he opened the door and peeked outside.

“Then give me the ramp or something and we’ll get out of here.” Erich said.

“Okay, I’ll search the town for anything that could be used as a ramp. You get your wagon and park it with the back end right in front of the door okay?”

Erich went to the stables in the back of his workshop to ready his horses and wagons.
He retrieved the horses from the stables and strapped them into the wagon, making sure that they were secured and prepared for the heavy cargo that they will place inside the wagon later.

“Come on boys, we need to hurry up.” Erich patted his horses as he got on the wagon.

He started to drive it to park it in front of the door just as Reinhard had asked, however when he returned he saw Reinhard there by the door, leaning on it and relaxing.

“What the heck? I thought you’ll search for a good ramp?” Erich cried out in disbelief.

“I did find one, its right here.”

“Where? I don’t see a ramp anywhere.”

“Here it is! See for yourself!” Reinhard declared as he kicked down the right side of the double doors “We’ll use your door as the ramp.”

“What did you just do?!” Erich screamed out loud, the door was completely torn from its hinges and fell into the ground with a loud crash.

“Don’t mind the door now; help me get this thing you want loaded into the wagon already.” Reinhard urged his friend to hurry up and retrieve their heavy cargo from inside the shop.

“I guess its fine; I’m going to get evicted by the landlord anyway.” Erich said as he looked at the door. He had already stopped worrying; the landlord will kick him out soon anyway because he has not been able to pay his dues recently so it’s not his problem anymore.

The two men started to push the big and heavy thing towards the wagon. Even though it has wheels, the two men struggled to push such a heavy object up the ramp.

“PUUUUSSSSHHHHH!!!!”
The two men tried their best in rolling the object, even with their strength are combined the task of pushing such a heavy object still took its toll from them.

“Oh man, can’t we just leave this here?” Reinhard exclaimed in annoyance.
He wanted to leave the wheeled item that Erich so desperately wanted to bring with them and just start to make their way out of the town, however Erich doesn't agree and forced him to help.

“This thing will fetch a hefty price if I manage to sell it so we can’t leave it here.” Erich replied as he pushes harder.

“You never really think of anything besides money do you?” Reinhard said in reply.

“PUUUUSSSSSHHHH!!!!!”
Loud clanking noises came from underneath the canvas cover of whatever they were pushing. It looked like they won’t be able to push it all the way up inside the wagon with just the two of them but Erich’s determination and perseverance paid off.

Finally, after much effort and sweat, the two men managed to push the heavy, wheeled object into the wagon. They sat for a moment to rest after such an exhausting ordeal.

“Huah...” they both sighed as they wiped the sweat of their faces.
They again went inside to carry and load a few more supplies inside the wagon before they jumped on and began departing.

“Is everything ready now?” Erich asked Reinhard for confirmation that they were ready to move.

“Yeah! Let’s go!”

“Hiyaaaaa!”
Erich began to drive the horses, his hands firmly held the horse’s reins.

Just as the wagon started to roll, a sudden cracking sound came from under it.

“Oh! Man what in the world is that now?” Reinhard voiced out in frustration. He knew that that sound meant something bad had just happened that he and Erich will have to deal with it in this kind of stressful environment.

“Shit! What was that?” Erich asked as he looked at the direction where the sound came from.

Reinhard jumped down of the wagon and looked at it for any damage. He saw the wheel with a big crack, it may be due to the old age of the wheel that made this kind of misfortune to be inevitable. Reinhard and Erich were just unlucky enough to have it break when a battle is just about to start right in front of them.

“I think the wheel of the wagon just gave way” he said as he scratched his head in disbelief “Your old flimsy wagon could not handle the weight of that thing.”

“Man we’re really unlucky today.” he added as he quickly made his way back into the workshop.
Erich also jumped down from the wagon and looked at the damaged wheel just as Reinhard came out of the workshop, tools in hand.

“Damn, I didn’t think that the wheel will give out like this.” Erich commented after seeing the damaged wheel.

“Hey Erich... let’s get to work, let’s fix this thing and get out of here.” Reinhard said, tossing a hammer to his friend.

“Huah...” Erich sighed “I think this is just the beginning. I hate to think about it but I can totally see this as the beginning of an awfully long day.”

“I told you to not bring that big piece of crap anymore... look at what happened now.”

“Oh shut it. We need to move fast now.”

“.....................”
“.....................”
With faces that are full of disappointment the two men began to work on the wagon’s wheel for repairs.


Part 2

“Here comes the French!” Altmann stared in the distance as he saw the columns of French soldiers deploying outside the town.
He’s currently deployed on the extreme left flank of their army, along with almost all of the available cavalry of the Bavarian army.

“Whoa. Whoa. Relax Altmann, you’ve been really hot headed since yesterday. You’ll get your chance to swing your sword at the French soon enough.” a fellow of his said.

“He’s been like that since that Prussian bumped into him yesterday; he just suddenly accused him as a spy.” another light cavalryman said.

“Tch! I really wanted to kill that Prussian yesterday!” said Altmann, his voice clearly full of rage.

“Why are you so obsessed about that? He’s clearly not a spy Altmann, we just saw him arrive that very same day.”

“It maybe because of what happened to his brother years ago... isn’t that right Altmann?”

Altmann’s demeanor changed for the worse, he gnashed his teeth as he replied to his fellows. “My brother was killed in front of me by the Prussians years ago. I will never forget the painful expression on his face that I saw that day.”

“So, you’re sole reason is sheer hatred for the Prussians? You accused of him of being a spy simply just to have a reason to kill him didn’t you?”

Altmann looked at his fellow cavalryman in the eyes. “Is there a problem with that?”

“Nothing man, I just thought that because we are now against the French it means we’re now on the side of the Prussians too.”

“I couldn’t care less.” Altmann replied “If I see him again I will definitely bury my sword in him.”


Part 3

“I can’t believe how quickly the Bavarians turned on us.” Nathalie said in an irritated voice as she looks at the enemy battle line near the town.
She was checking her musket, preparing for the battle ahead.

“Well, Saxony and Württemberg defected to the coalition during the battle of Leipzig itself. I’m not too surprised that the Bavarians have defected to the coalition too.” Claire said in an unconcerned tone as she bites on a biscuit.
Nathalie and Claire have just arrived near the town of Hanau; they are currently on standby and are awaiting orders to come down from the officers.

“You still have biscuits left?” Nathalie asked.

“I wasn’t able to eat my share last night because of what happened.” Claire replied quickly as she looks at her friend “....Sorry about last night, I didn’t mean for you to see that.”

“............”
Nathalie didn’t say a single word in response; she just smiled and shook her head telling Claire that it’s all right.

“So another battle is ahead of us...” Claire softly uttered, her eyes fixed on the flags fluttering in the air that the enemy are holding.

“Yeah. They’re really trying to stop us returning to France.”

“Look at the faces of our fellow soldiers; they are also filled with anger. I can’t blame them, even I, myself, am a little angry. The Bavarians were once our most steadfast ally.”

Nathalie looked around and saw that Claire is absolutely correct. The majority of the French soldiers that she could see all have contorted faces of anger. Their eyes are filled with hate.

“Hanau is right there in front of us, it’s so close I can almost touch it. We can’t just let them stop us here, even if they brought the Bavarians on their side.”
Nathalie raised her right hand in front of her and closed as if she is grasping the town of Hanau and taking it for herself.

“You’re absolutely right. Just because the Bavarians are on their side doesn’t mean they will win.” Claire confirmed her friend’s words as she points out something in the distance in the town “Can you see that house over there Nathalie?”

“What house?” Nathalie squinted her eyes as she tries to look for the house that Claire was pointing at.

“There, the two story house by the river.”

“I see it, that little house over there?” she said as she spots the small two story house.

“Yes that’s it.”

“Why? That’s a cute little house but what are y.....”
Nathalie wasn’t able to complete her sentence, as she was replying she started to look at Claire and saw her in a trance like state once again. The sharp eyes and devilish grin caused her to stop mid sentence.

Ugh! She’s in serious mode again. Nathalie thought as she looks at her friend, she still feels a little uncomfortable whenever Claire is in her ‘serious mode’.

“S-So... what are you planning to do in that house?” She asked as if she was expecting some crazy answer to come from Claire.

“There has got to be a soft bed in that house, when we capture the town I can finally have some decent sleep!” Claire’s serious mode suddenly fades and she looked at Nathalie with eyes that looked excited and lively.

“Also a good bath... hehehe! A good bath would sure feel nice.” Nathalie commented as an addition to Claire’s statement, imagining a big tub filled with warm water.

As they are imagining what they would do after they capture the town of Hanau different shouts began to fill the air. They are the voices of the offices, shouting out orders to their respective troops. The fife and drums of the various regiments sounded, the time to march into position has come.

The battle of Hanau has begun.

“Here we go.” Nathalie softly whispers as she adjusts her shako and takes a few deep breaths, preparing herself mentally for the battle.
She looked around and saw thousands of men and horses marching and manoeuvring. Dust filled the air as the feet of the troops agitate and disturb the soil underneath them.

Boom! Boom! Boom boom boom boom! The beating of the drums resounded throughout the French lines. It’s a sound that one can feel on his chest as much as he can hear it. Each regiment of soldiers slowly moved up to their respective positions for the upcoming battle, guided by their standards that fluttered in the wind.

The French army deployed in the forest just beyond the river, outside of the town. The trees provided perfect cover for the French to move ever closer to the enemy lines without being detected.

“Hey, Claire...” Nathalie called out as she looks straight forward, looking into the forest.

“We will not get separated again.” She declared with eyes that are filled with determination.
Claire closed her eyes and slightly lowered her head before nodding at her friend.

“I think I just got told by you...” she said “...It’s all right, we’ll get through this!”
Giving a thumbs-up, Claire smiled at her friend.

“Yes! We can!” Nathalie responded with a big smile on her face, relieved to see her best friend in a better state of mind that the previous night.

Looking at her friend now, Nathalie recalls the sad and grieving face that she tried to comfort. It was a face that could only be made by a person who understands the pain of losing someone dear and important to them without even being able to do a thing.

That face that Claire has shown her the previous night is not the usual face she sees on her friend. Since they were kids Claire has always been the stronger of the two of them, she had always looked up to her, never even once did Nathalie saw her in such a vulnerable state.

She remembers vividly that she herself too had cried like that.

But today is different; somehow Claire managed to fight off the sorrow and grief... even for just a while.

The artillery of the two armies started firing, the loud booms of the cannons echoed in the town and the immediate surrounding areas. As the cannonballs splintered the trees and bounced off the ground, soldiers from both sides suffer casualties from the bombardment. Some men were hit by splinters form trees, others were struck by flying rocks and other debris, the unlucky ones that got hit directly by the cannonballs were simply reduced to a bloody mist. Then as quickly as it began, the bombardment stops.

“Forwards!” A French officer then yelled out, a signal to finally close in with the enemy.

Marching along with their regiment, in line formation, navigating the trees and other obstacles along the way, Nathalie makes her way towards the enemy lines.

The officer suddenly gave an order to Nathalie’s company of voltigeurs: “Voltigeurs! Peel off and make a skirmish line, cover the approach of the grenadiers!”

With that order the voltigeurs peeled off their regiment and advanced forward ahead of the main battle line as skirmish troops.

“Well this is better than just standing idly by, waiting for a cannonball to hit me.” She said as she steps over the craters and fallen branches made by the earlier bombardment.

“We must not get separated again... I don’t want to lose another person dear to me.” Claire declared as they moved closer to the enemy battle line, the silhouette of the enemy troops starting to become recognizable.

“Yeah!” Nathalie said as she nodded in approval, holding her musket tighter with her hands.

They are now standing very close to the enemy, so close that they can see the details on the uniforms of the enemy troops.

Nathalie’s company was ordered to stop; they were only less than a hundred yards away from the enemy. However the Austrians and Bavarians aren’t shooting, they haven’t spotted the French skirmishers move in.

Just like that a few minutes pass by.

The company officer raised his hand holding his sword and the company followed suit, raising their muskets and aiming at the enemy.

“...”
Silence... an eerie silence filled the air, it only lasted for a few seconds but for the French soldiers that are waiting for the command to shoot it seemed like an eternity until...

“Fire!” the officer shouts as he swings his sword down, signalling the company to shoot.

Bang! Pop! Crack! The sound of a volley of musket fire suddenly flooded the air; the volley was so sudden that the Austrian and Bavarian troops on the receiving end were totally caught with their pants down. Very few of them returned fire as the French volley ripped its way through their lines dropping soldiers to the ground.

“Aaaargghh!” the shouts and wails of soldiers hit by musket balls filled the air.

“Return fire! Return fire!” an officer in the Austro-Bavarian line yelled out.

Bang! Pop! Crack! The Austrian and Bavarian soldiers responded with a volley of their own, firing wildly into the thick forest in front of them, trying to hit the enemy that they know are there but don’t know exactly where.

The trees provided excellent cover for the French, they suffered few hits, but they were hits nonetheless... a Frenchman directly in front of Nathalie dropped dead after being struck by a musket ball in the chest.

Nathalie took this hint that it is bad to stay there and moved to a different cover before she fired her musket.

Bang! Nathalie’s first shot of the battle was let loose. A huge plume of smoke jets out of the barrel of her musket forming a cloud in front of her that screens and blocks her vision.

Just as she was reloading, another volley from the Austrian and Bavarian side came ripping into their lines dropping more men in the process.

“Shit! Claire yelled out as a soldier beside her got hit and dropped to the ground.

“Men! Use all available cover! Spread out if you have to. Pick your targets and fire at will.” The French officer ordered after realizing that they will take too many losses if they continued to exchange volleys against a numerically superior enemy while his troops are arrayed in a skirmish line but still densely packed together.

“That’s more like it! This is how voltigeurs are supposed to fight!” Nathalie exclaimed as she crouches behind a tree and shoots behind her newly acquired cover.
Claire, was still standing in the open, she fired her weapon before diving into the same tree beside Nathalie.

“Well there’s a difference between us line voltigeurs and the light voltigeurs.” Claire commented on Nathalie’s statement.

Nathalie looked at Claire with somewhat aggressive and non-caring eyes.

“Nobody gives a rat’s ass about the difference between the line and light voltigeurs! We are all voltigeurs; we take cover and shoot at our discretion! Don’t rank me with those line troops that stand in a neat line waiting to get shot!” Nathalie said aggressively as she reloads her weapon, ramming the bullet down into the barrel of her musket.

“Haha! That’s what I like about you Nathalie! You don’t give a shit about military formalities when you want something!”

“Hmph! You’re the same right? So you want to get serious or something now?”

“Haha! Okay... you’re the one who asked for it!” Claire said as she enters a trance like state, she’s in serious mode once again.

“Hahaha! I want that bed! I want that bed!” she mumbled to herself as she shoots.

“Hehehe! The bath, I need the bath!” Nathalie also mumbled to herself as she continues to reload her weapon.

The two women seem to have entered a world totally of their own. They were so consumed by their desires of a good sleep and a relaxing bath that their desires became an obsession. The devilish grins in their lips and their terrifying eyes gave an aura of uneasiness to their fellow soldiers.

“Those two guys are demons... demons I tell you.” The officer said as he witnessed the two voltigeurs under his command shoot their muskets like it was nobody’s business. Cold sweat rolls down his face as he looked upon them in disbelief and awe.

The officer looked around and saw his other troops fighting. Inspired by the Claire and Nathalie he rallied his troops to fight harder.

“What about the rest of you?! Are you just gonna take cover there like sissies?!” The officer yelled at the soldiers under his command “Take a page out the book of those two and shoot!”

“Hiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!”
The company yelled out a ferocious war cry.

“Look, the troops are fired up. If this continues and the line troops come here then victory is as good as ours.” Claire looks back at her fellow soldiers and saw them fighting as best as they can.

“I sure hope so.”
Nathalie is confident about how the battle is developing for them. However she can’t help but feel uneasy. They are doing a good job of pushing back the Austro-Bavarian lines in front of them... but perhaps they are doing it too good.


Part 4

“Damn! That took us a long time.” Erich said as he hopped on the wagon and started to drive.

Behind the Austro-Bavarian army, Reinhard and Erich have just finished repairing the wheel of the wagon.

They just patched up the cracked wheel and the snapped axle of the wagon.

Their planned early departure was ruined by the wagon’s wheel giving out due to the weight of a mysterious item that Erich insists they must bring along.

It is now mid afternoon and the battle was intensifying every passing second, Reinhard is looking at its development as he sits on the wagon.

“Wow! That’s a pretty intense battle raging over there.” Reinhard softly muttered as he surveys the area just beyond the Kinzig.

The smoke from the musketry from both sides rolls about and lingers on the battlefield.

From his point of view the Austro-Bavarian army’s left flank is starting to bend and give ground under intense attack from the French right. The French have managed to move cannons into a position in which it has bombarded the artillery battery of the Bavarians, silencing it in the process.

“As usual, the French army’s artillery really excels in causing so much destruction in enemy formations.”
He muttered after seeing the devastated artillery battery of the Austro-Bavarian forces.

“It’s understandable; Napoleon was once an artillery general early in his career after all.”
Erich said, gazing at the crews of the French artillery.

“What?!? That midget??”
Reinhard’s eyes widened, surprised at the fact Erich has said.

“Also Reinhard... Napoleon’s not a midget; he’s actually average in height for a Frenchman. He just looks so short because he’s always surrounded by his Imperial Guard... men that are so big they intimidate you just by seeing their bearskin hats on their heads.”

“What? Really? All my life I thought he was a midget.”

“Well, he’s not.”

“Okay so he’s not.... but still....”
Reinhard paused for a bit, turning his head looking inside the wagon.

“....but still Erich, if you hadn’t lugged that big, heavy piece of crap onto your wagon we would have been out of this place and this mess hours ago.” Reinhard said out of frustration as he looks at the immense thing hidden within Erich’s covered wagon.

“I just couldn’t leave that behind, that ‘big, heavy piece of crap’ will surely fetch us a good fortune once we sell it.” Erich replied in defence of the item.

“It won’t matter now if that does fetch a lot if we get killed in the middle of this battle does it?”

“Just shut up you damn hunter.”

Reinhard just stayed quiet as told, realizing that arguing would only make him more tired as the both of them weren't able to eat breakfast because of a series of unfortunate events.

With his stomach grumbling in hunger, he crawled inside the wagon and began to search for anything edible.

There is only a bottle of schnapps, a bag of flour and a sugarloaf on a basket that used to have the cheese and biscuits that he ate during their trip into Hanau.

“Hey Erich, you got something else to eat back here?”

“Supplies are out... that’s why I told you to make bread.”

Hearing this, Reinhard’s body went limp and he just lied there lying inside the wagon like a rag doll. He stared blankly into the canvass roof that covered the wagon.

He can still hear the mass volleys of musket fire from the infantry of both armies as they try to destroy each other and the occasional cannon shots beyond the River Kinzig.

“I can’t believe that my theory was spot on.” He silently mumbled to himself as he listens to the battle raging outside.

Looking straight into the canvas roof while the wagon moves around however was not a bright idea, the rocking motion of the wagon as it moved through the cobbled road shook Reinhard’s head in a variety of directions that it triggered his motion sickness.

He suddenly felt his head getting lighter and lighter, the roof seems to spin around and he feels that he was off balance. He slowly sits up, pulling himself up by one of the wheels of the item that they placed inside the wagon.

He felt something was about to come out, even though he has not had anything to eat yet, his stomach seems to want let something out. The urge to puke was too much; he quickly jumped into the seat of the wagon beside Erich and tried to puke on the side.

“What the...! Don’t tell me that you forgot you have motion sickness?!” Erich asked.

“I-I-I did...” Reinhard replied as he waves his hand over his head as he was puking on an empty stomach telling Erich to leave him alone.

Part 5

“Where are the grenadiers? .......The cavalry?” Claire shouted in question to anyone who can hear her, sweat rolling down her face in the midst of an intense shootout.

The battle for Hanau is becoming more and more ferocious, taking into consideration that the smoke and the dust that lingers on the battlefield is adding into the confusion and the chaos, the tired and battered troops are starting to become battle weary.

The grenadiers that are supposedly being screened by Nathalie and Claire’s Voltigeur Company are still nowhere to be found. Simply put, the way the voltigeurs are deployed in Hanau meant that they cannot hold the line for long and the Austro-Bavarian forces are making a counterattack.

“They should have been here a few minutes ago! I have no idea if we advanced too far ahead or if they are lagging behind.” A French soldier shouted back in reply.

“We should head back, their counterattack is intensifying!” Another Frenchman replied, firing a shot as he slowly backs up.

They didn't notice it just yet but they have advanced too quickly, too far ahead of the main French battle line. They were now even out of the forest that gave them such great cover earlier and are now out in the open field with only a few isolated trees to be used as cover.

Reloading her musket, Claire looks around, trying to find a better place for cover. The Austrians and Bavarians slowly creeping closer and closer in a counterattack that threatens to overrun them.

“Dammit! The grenadiers are taking a long time.” Claire exclaimed in frustration, waiting for back up to arrive and help them.
A hand suddenly grabbed her by the shoulder, causing her to turn around; it was Nathalie looking at her with worried eyes.

“We should really head back! It’s getting too dangerous in here!” Nathalie said with a worried voice.

“Okay, you head back and I will cover you.” Claire replied just as she finishes reloading her musket “I’ll be right behind you!”

The French started to fall back under the intense resistance and sudden counterattack of the enemy, the Austrian and Bavarian soldiers shooting at the backs of retreating Frenchmen, causing casualties to pile up.

“Shit! These guys are tougher that I thought!” Nathalie cursed in frustration as she leans behind a tree, using it as cover from the relentless barrage of musket balls coming from the enemy.

She reached for her cartridge box on her hip for ammunition, flipping the cover and searching it with her hand. She finds that she has already expended all of them, not even one paper cartridge remained in her cartridge box.

“I’m out of cartridges!” She exclaimed as she looks at Claire.

“Just proves that we’ve been out here in the thick of battle for a long time now. I’m also running low on ammunition.” Claire responded as she takes three paper cartridges from her cartridge box.

“Make your shots count!” With a quick flick of her wrist she tosses the paper cartridges to Nathalie.

“You don’t need to say that! Also, remember that I’m a better shot than you!” Nathalie replied as she stores two of the cartridges. She loosens the scarf on her face a little more to make room for her to be able to bite the cartridge that her friend handed her.

Musket balls continued to whiz past them as the enemy fired volley after volley at their location.

The bullets struck the ground around them; some are even ricocheting from the ground and continued to travel with lethal speed.

“These guys just won’t let up, do they?” Peeking around the tree, Nathalie sees that the enemy are coming way too close for comfort.

“Sir! What’s the plan now?!” She shouted at her officer, who was crouching down in the open, keeping himself as low as possible as he observed the situation.

“We have done all we can. We fall back and regroup with the other troops and push again later.” The officer replied as he slowly moves back, waving his hand in the air commanding his men to commence an orderly retreat.

Giving the signal to fall back and regroup the officer stood up and headed back, the company will make a tactical retreat towards their regiment, then retreat towards the main line before attempting another push to try and break the Austro-Bavarian lines.

“Let’s go Claire! We need to fall back with the company now.”

“Okay, let’s go!”

The two women started to fall back along with their company towards their regiment.

Just as they stood up another volley from the enemy was fired at them, the bullets were getting more and more accurate which means that the enemy are now less than 100 yards from them.

Nathalie felt a sudden stinging sensation on her left leg, she fell down to the ground after feeling the pain from her leg.

“Ah shit!”
She looked down and saw a gash in the area where she felt the pain, blood is slowly dripping from the side of her boot. She felt like her leg is being burned from the inside. She held her leg tightly trying to shake of the painful sensation.

“Dammit! Are you shot?!” Claire worriedly came towards Nathalie and checked her wound.

“No, I’m fine... I just... I just got grazed by a ricochet.”

“Are you sure you’re fine? Can you stand up?”

“Yeah... I think so. I can still walk so don’t worry about me. Right now we need to fall back.”
Nathalie stood back up as quickly as she could, using her musket a means of support.
“Come on Claire let’s head back.”

“Okay, go! I’ll keep you covered.”

Nathalie ran back as quickly as she can, she was slightly limping from the pain of her wound with Claire a few paces behind her keeping her company as they head back towards safety.

“At this rate the enemy will surely catch up to us.”
Claire whispered to herself seeing her friend’s injury.

With Nathalie’s leg injured she cannot keep pace with the speed of the retreat, the two of them are starting to fall behind the retreating French soldiers.

Suddenly, inside her head, the moment of her lover’s death flashed quickly. She started to fear that Nathalie would get shot in the back much the same as Denis had been shot in the back before he sank and drowned in the Elster River during the battle of Leipzig.

“Dammit! Dammit! Dammit! I won’t let that happen again!”
Claire gritted her teeth and stood her ground.

“Nathalie! Run as fast as you can towards our lines, I’ll hold them back here with the others and act as a rearguard!”
She shouted as she fires, trying to persuade Nathalie to run as fast as she can as she and a few of the other still able bodied soldiers act as a deterrent against the enemy.

Upon hearing these words from her friend, Nathalie stopped; she turned around with a face that looked worried and angry at the same time. She did not like those words that came out of her friend; it’s as if her voice is saying its final goodbyes.

Limping towards Claire, she inhaled deeply preparing to shout with force.
“No! We don’t get separated! You promised me that we won’t get separated anymore!”

Claire couldn’t do anything but look upon her friend, she made the promise to stay together, but thinking of the worst thing that could happen if they fell behind the retreat she shrugs off her emotions and said:

“Now is not the time to argue! Move your ass back to our lines so you’ll be safe!”

“And what?! Leave you here as my rearguard and die?”

“Tch!” Claire clicked her tongue “... it’s just the same as what you did in Leipzig when you pushed me over the Elster! I just want you to live!”

“That was a mistake! You don’t have any idea how worried I was back there when you dropped into the water! I don’t want anyone of us to feel that horrible feeling once again!”

Claire walked a few steps forward and grabs Nathalie on her shoulders.
“You just don’t get it! I don’t want to lose anyone anymore! I don’t want what happened to Denis happen to you too!”

Nathalie grabs Claire’s arm and looks at her with eyes that almost pleads with her.
“And you think I want to lose you here too? I trust your abilities to fight but I know that you are planning to throw your life away by staying behind! Even Denis wouldn’t want you to die in this place! I’m sure he would want you to live a long and happy life!”

“Nathalie...”
Claire uttered; realizing that indeed, she only intended to throw away her life in her grief of Denis’ death and use Nathalie’s injury as a reason for her to justify her actions.

“Please Claire! Let’s go. We don’t get separated! Okay?!” Nathalie said, holding tightly around Claire’s arm not intending to let her go.

Nathalie’s words seemed to pierce Claire’s heart, “O-okay...” she responded with a soft voice.

Hearing Nathalie’s voice pleading for her to come along, Claire came back to her senses and remembered that they promised each other to stick together and not get separated before the battle began.

She slung her musket over her shoulder and the two continued their retreat, Nathalie tugging Claire by her arm.

“Are you sure that you can run all the way back to our lines with that injured leg of yours?”

“It can still hold out for a little while, I’ll have it treated when the battle is done.”

Nathalie was tugging on Claire’s arm the whole time that they are running back, just as she believes that they will be safe any moment from now she suddenly heard a loud cracking sound. The loud crack reverberated around her, she suddenly felt that the air somewhat became heavy. The sound was so terrifyingly loud that she thought that she had been shot... this time for real.

Nathalie stopped running, her mind completely terrified.

After the loud crack she could not hear anything, she just felt something weird, something abnormal, something that by instinct alone she knew is not right.

“W-w-what the....???” She felt a warm sensation on her hands. She felt that there is something odd, something was missing.
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Chapter 5
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Chapter 5: Fate isn’t written in stone

Part 1

“Hey! Are you and idiot or something? Stop eating that!”
Erich’s annoyed voice resounded in Reinhard’s ears.

The reason he is annoyed is because he is seeing his friend cracking and eating something that he took from the back of the wagon.

It’s a white substance wrapped in paper, something that is really not that great to be eaten as is.

“Why?? It’s good enough, it’s still food right?”
Reinhard placed another piece of the white substance in his mouth.

“Oh shit! It’s so sweet! Actually... it’s TOO sweet!”
Reinhard is eating the sugarloaf that he found.

He was so hungry that he felt like eating pure sugar just to relieve his hunger.

“Well at least it’ll get the taste of puke out of your mouth.”
Erich said, seeing his friend pop another piece of the sugarloaf inside his mouth.

“Werrll....wook atsh zhe bwasshelfielsh”
Speaking with his mouth full, chewing on the sugar, Erich could not understand what Reinhard was trying to say.

“What the hell are you saying?? Finish eating that first before talking.”

“Oshay!”

Reinhard swallowed the sugar and proceeded to rewrap what’s left of the sugarloaf in its original paper wrapping before tossing it back inside the wagon.

“I said look at the battlefield.”

“What about it?”
Erich is baffled by the way Reinhard looks at the battlefield, it’s like the hunter can see something that he could not.

They are wheeling around the battlefield, using the road farthest from the battle but they are still close enough that they could still see the entire battle unfold before their eyes.

“Most of the cavalry of both armies are concentrated opposite of each other, the Austrians and Bavarians on their left flank and the French on their right flank.”

“So it’s going to be a cavalry battle that will decide the battle in its entirety?”

“Well... yeah pretty much.... also look at that cavalry unit in the distance.”

Reinhard points at a unit of heavy cavalrymen; this particular unit is unique that it is a unit that looked very proud and extremely well disciplined. Their mounts are bigger and of a higher quality than that of their lesser brethren. They wear a blue French coat with white lapels similar to that of the infantry albeit with a few differences in design. What stands out most about them though is that they wear those tall and expensive bearskin caps atop their heads, pretty much like the infantry’s Old Guards.

“Must be a special unit.”
Erich raised his hand above his eyes, focusing on the unit of horsemen.

Reinhard retrieves a small circle item from inside his shirt and caresses it with his thumb; it’s the circle locket that he is taking care of for someone. He holds dearly to the locket as he stares at the bearskin wearing cavalrymen as if he knew them well.

“They’re the Grenadiers à Cheval de la Garde Impérial, the best unit of horsemen that the French army has to offer.”

“Horse Grenadiers of the Imperial Guard huh? Are they really that good?”
Erich is unimpressed by the Horse Grenadiers, for him wearing a bearskin cap that is almost one and a half feet tall on your head seems really impractical to wear as it looked like a hindrance more than a protection or an intimidation item for him.

Reinhard places the locket back inside his shirt; he stared at the battlefield once again.
“Yeah they are good; I’ve been close enough to see that once in my life.”

Erich sees the seriousness in his friend’s face, it’s like he was a different person.
He grabbed a bottle from inside the wagon and offered it to Reinhard just to relax him.

“Hey! You want some schnapps? This is good.”

“What in the world are you thinking? Don’t make me drink on an empty stomach.”

“Well... you already ate some of the sugarloaf; I think you can handle this.”

“Get that thing away from me! You’re gonna make me puke again if I drink that here.”

“Hahaha! It’s alright you’re the puke master after all. It makes no difference whether you’re drunk or not.”

“Shut up! I’m dumb enough to have tried that once... it felt astonishingly and stupidly horrible, I’m never gonna drink on an empty stomach again.”

“I guess you’re right. Hahaha! It could be fun seeing you like that though.”

“Idiot.” Reinhard uttered in annoyance.

Erich carefully places the bottle of schnapps inside the wagon.

Just as he did loud booms came from the battlefield, the French cannons have started to fire as one.

“They’re preparing for an all out attack.”
Erich voiced out seeing the bombardment develop.

Smoke and dust came rising from the Austro-Bavarian lines, the artillery barrage causing much havoc on their forces. The artillery barrage have done more damage this time to the artillery of the Austrians and Bavarians, much of their guns are now lying in the field inoperable either because of damage taken by the guns themselves or their crews were killed.

Erich sees movement from the French right, a massive cavalry formation is slowly moving into position.
“Reinhard, look at all of those horses, I believe even the Horse Grenadiers are moving in for an attack.”

“..............”
Reinhard was silent; Erich turned his head towards his friend and sees him focusing something far off into the distance.

“Hey, Reinhard! Reinhard!” Erich yelled at his friend, still Reinhard is so fixated it’s as if he did not hear him.

He continued to focus on something in the distance, it’s like he is focusing on something familiar.

“Hey Reinhard! What’s the matter?”

“Erich did you see that?”

“See what?”

Reinhard believes that he just saw something in the distance. He continued to look at the spot where he thought he saw it, focusing his eyes on that little spot in the battlefield.

“.....I know I saw something there...”

Suddenly, the wind picked up a little and swept away the thick smoke on the battlefield giving him another brief chance to confirm what he saw.

“I knew it!” He thought to himself. His eyes suddenly widened.

“Erich, Musky doesn’t have her custom calibre ammo right?” Reinhard suddenly asked as if he was in a hurry.
Erich was confused on why his friend would ask something so trivial in a situation such as now. But somehow he could feel that his friend is thinking deeply of something serious.

“Y-yeah... but I have some cartridges for the standard muskets.”

“I know you have a musket somewhere in there, load it and wait here.”

“Why?”

“Just do it and wait for me here okay? Load a musket and keep it at the ready beside you.”

“W-wait what are you planning?!”

Reinhard pointed out something again in the distance, its right smack in the middle of the battlefield. It looked nothing more than just a blur of colours being obscured by the smoke and dust that lingers about on the battlefield.

Erich can barely make it out but Reinhard seems to see it as clearly as if it was only a few yards away from them.

Erich squinted his eyes and focused on it.
“W-wait!!!!!!!! Reinhard those are.....!!?!?”

Erich finally saw clearly what Reinhard has seen. He’s utterly surprised to see what Reinhard is looking at all along.

“I’m going there! Get a musket loaded and wait for me here!”

“Are you crazy?! You’re just gonna jump in the middle of the battlefield?”

“It can’t be helped. I can’t let this happen before my very eyes.”

“B-but they are..... Are you sure you want to do this?!”
Reinhard looked at Erich and smiled. He knows that what he is thinking must be really strange and idiotic for his friend, but something that he just can’t watch and let unfold in front of him.

“Stop the wagon Erich. I’ll be back in no time.”

“Then hurry up! If something happens to you I’m just gonna leave you here!”
Reinhard just gave a thumbs-down to Erich as a sign of his disapproval.

“Haha! I don’t believe you! I know you’ll do something when I need help from you!”

Reinhard jumped out off the moving wagon and began a mad sprint towards the middle of the battlefield.

Erich was taken totally by surprise by Reinhard’s actions that he was not able to stop his friend from rushing straight into the battlefield with all of the chaos going on around. He stopped the wagon, dropped the horse’s reins and stood on the wagon’s seat before yelling from the top of his lungs....

“Dammit Reinhard! You better get ‘em and hurry back! I don’t want to die in this place!”


Part 2

It is warm. What on earth is this?!

Nathalie’s thoughts are going all over the place; there is this warm sensation on her hand that she could not explain, it’s something flowing down right into her finger tips.
It is followed by violent coughs that also seemed to be gargling something at the same time. The sound seemed to be coming from somewhere near that it felt like she could touch its source.

Have I... been shot?

She checks herself for any injuries; her hand still has that warm, flowing sensation so she looked at it.

I-it’s........ blood. It’s....No... I-it can’t be... It can’t be....!

She suddenly felt odd; she was no longer tugging on an arm that just moments ago she was pulling along with her.

She turned around to check what is happening behind her...... it’s an awful sight.

No.... no.... no.... no... The thoughts of disbelief filled her head.

A soldier was lying face down on the ground in a pool of blood... motionless. Nathalie’s only reaction was a sudden scream.

“NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! CLAIRE!!!!!!!!”

Claire had been shot!

She is profusely bleeding from the side of her waist and is coughing blood from her mouth causing the sound of mixed cough and gargling that Nathalie had heard earlier. Her face is buried into the soil and her glasses have been broken by the impact of her fall.

Nathalie looked at her hand once again.

“So.... Claire coughed her blood on my hand... this is... this is... this is hers. This is her blood.”
Nathalie is completely horrified; her eyes tremble as she sees her friend lying on the ground in a pool of her own blood.

“Claire!!!!! Claire!!!!!”
Nathalie quickly ran towards her friend’s side and places her in her arms. She removed her friend’s shako and embraces her as tight as she can.

“Claire! Talk to me!! Say something!!!”

Claire tries to speak, but the pain and the blood in her mouth prevents her from speaking clearly.
“Na.... tha..... ru....n...... *cough* save... you.... self...”

“Dammit! Dammit! Claire! Don’t you die on me Claire!!!!”
Nathalie removes her friend’s glasses from her face and places it inside her pocket. She also removed Claire’s backpack and cartridge box, removing anything that could be a burden leaving only her voltigeur short sabre in place.

She applied pressure on Claire’s wound, pushing down as hard as she can to stop the bleeding.
It’s not enough; Claire is still continuously losing blood every moment that passes.

“I’m not going to let you die here! Just hang in there Claire!”

Nathalie removes the scarf on her face and wraps it tightly on Claire’s waist; if she could not stop the bleeding at least she could somehow slow it down to get her some proper help.

Just then the last group of French soldiers that acted as their unit’s rearguard earlier also began to withdraw running past them. One of them saw Nathalie and called her attention.

“Fall back! Fall back! Leave him be! We’ll get him back once we make another push!

Nathalie heard the call and looked at the soldier.

“Dammit I can’t leave her here! Help me!!!!!” She responded back with a loud scream.

The Frenchman, either in an act of compassion or concern came in and tried to help. He knelt down in front of Nathalie and assisted in applying pressure on Claire’s wounds. He was utterly stunned when he saw Nathalie and Claire in uniform.

“Wait... you’re women??”

“That doesn’t matter right now! Help me move her!”
Nathalie angrily shouted at the soldier, begging for help.

With a nod the Frenchman agreed to help, however before he could even start to lift up Claire he was struck with a musket ball straight at the heart.

He was dead before he even hit the ground.

Nathalie eyes widened in disbelief, she stared at Claire and saw her bad condition.

“B*AASTAAAAAAAAAAARDS!!!!”
In a fit of rage, Nathalie aimed her musket at the enemy and shoots.

The enemy fired back, bullets whizzed past her, she was lucky that she was not hit.

“Damn! I need to get her out of here!”
Nathalie removes her backpack, slings her musket on her shoulders and mustered all her strength; she slowly lifts up Claire from the ground and places her on her back.

Carrying her friend’s entire weight, and with an injured leg, Nathalie began to walk as quickly as she can towards safety.

The enemy are still shooting at them, musket balls continued to whiz by all around. She can no longer see anymore French soldiers anywhere near her; it’s very likely that all of the survivors have withdrawn to safety and are reforming for another attack.

“Nnngggggnnnnnhhhhhhhh!”
Walking with the weight of two people being supported by her injured leg brought so much pain that Nathalie’s whole body began to tremble. Alongside the fatigue and the exhaustion that she is bearing with, it seemed like her body will give out any moment soon.

“Claire... I’ll bring us to safety. We’ll be fine.”

“Na....tha.... lie...”
Claire softly muttered trying to say something.

“Don’t talk right now! Conserve your strength, we’re gonna get through this!”
Nathalie’s ayes are full of determination, with allies too far to help and enemies too close for comfort it is all up to her and her alone to save her friend.

She must hurry for Claire is still profusely bleeding.

“Dammit she’s not going to last any longer if she continues to bleed out like this!”

Claire’s condition is worsening; her breathing is starting to weaken and her face slowly becoming pale.

Nathalie looked around, desperate to find anything or anyone that could be of help in their seemingly hopeless situation.

“The main line is too far off from us... dammit there must be some units close to us that could help!”

Just then, she saw something from the distance... an oddly placed vehicle pulled by two chestnut coloured horses slowly weaves its way through the extreme left flank of the Bavarian side of battlefield that is moving towards the opposing the French right where both of the armies’ cavalry are massing.

“Is... is that a supply wagon? Or is it civilian one? What in the world is that doing there?”
Nathalie sees the opportunity to save Claire, if the main French line is too far from them she’ll just carry Claire to the mysterious wagon in hopes that whoever is in there could help.

Nathalie speeds up her steps, all that is going inside her head is to get Claire to safety, even with an injured leg she still carried on moving.

Please notice us! Please! Please see us!
Nathalie waves one of her hands in the air trying to get the attention of the people in the wagon even though it’s a considerable distance away, hoping that they will get noticed.

She got a different kind of attention, moving out in the open they were easily spotted by the enemy and they fired upon them.
Bullets fly by as the enemy volley passes Nathalie and Claire. Nathalie responded by moving diagonally towards the road where the wagon is travelling to get away from the Bavarians’ musket’s range and to meet the wagon itself just a little further more away.

Nathalie, carrying Claire on her back loses strength every passing minute. She can clearly see the wagon but she doesn’t seem to have the strength anymore to walk any further.

The toll on her own body was too much; she started to feel her legs weaken.

Not now... please I beg of you just a little more... just let me bring her to safety.
She begs her body to continue on, desperate to help her friend live.

But try as she might, human body is still relatively fragile. Nathalie’s legs finally gave out, her knees buckled under her and Claire’s combined weight.

“No....! Not yet...!”
Nathalie can’t believe what is happening; she can’t feel her legs anymore and she sees the ground slowly closing in. The next thing she knew is that she and Claire are now lying on the ground. Her shako was thrown from her head, revealing her long blonde hair. Her musket also lies on the ground beside her.

She slowly sits, trying to get up.

Is this it? Is this......... the end?
With her hands on the ground, Nathalie believed that their deaths seemed inevitable.

“Nathalie..... run.... *cough* *cough* save... yourself....”
Claire, with everything she has, spoke those words to Nathalie, begging her to run away and save herself.

She is still lying on the ground right in front of Nathalie, slowly bleeding to death. Even so she has a slight smile on her face as she looked upon her friend. A face that looked content and pleased despite everything that had happened.

“Thank.... you.... I... can finally...*cough* join... Denis...”
Nathalie’s eyes began to shed tears, seeing Claire like this brings pain upon her heart.

“No! No! Don’t say that! You’re my big sister right?! You’re my big sister and it’s your job to show me how to be strong so you can’t give up! You can’t die like this!”
Claire reaches out her hand towards Nathalie’s face and gently caresses her cheek. She felt the soft and delicate skin of her friend with her hands that are starting to get cold.

“That’s why you must leave... me here. I.... can’t let... my adorable little sister.... die here... with me.”

“No! I’m not going to leave you behind! I’m going to help you!”

“Go.... run away... as fast as you can. I want you to... live.”

Nathalie grasps onto Claire’s hand that is on her face and just shook her head in disapproval. Tears flowed down her face; her determination to not leave another loved one is unbreakable. She will stay with Claire until the very end.

“You’re... really... stubborn... aren’t you?”
Claire softly said seeing Nathalie’s tears roll down her cheeks.

“You’re the one who taught me to become like this... so don’t complain.”
Nathalie held Claire’s hand tighter. They just held hands and waited for their end to come from the cruel world.

“I guess this is our fate.” Nathalie softly voiced out.

“Will the both of us finally find peace after this? I hope if there is a next life everything would be different... but I still wish you’ll still be my friend! Or even better yet my real sister!” She uttered with a tearful smile in her lips, at least trying to think that they will leave the world without any regrets.

“Nathalie....”
Claire, upon seeing the sad face of her friend, uttered softly.

The two young women closed their eyes; it will just be a few moments now before somebody ends all of this. Have they accepted their fate?
With her eyes closed from the chaos, Nathalie can hear everything around her very clearly... the beating of the war drums, the musketry of the battlefield, the cannons and the hooves of horses. Memories of the previous days flashed before her eyes, the battle of Leipzig, the Prussian hunter and then finally she remembers her vow to be strong for her best friend, her older sister in her hour of greatest need.

“...It’s my turn to be strong for you...” She remembers those words that she said to herself the night that Claire was in despair.

“Claire... I will be strong... this is not out fate! I will continue fighting! I will get us out of here! So you fight your way out of that situation too... you’re tougher that that sis!”
She slowly moves along the ground to try and pick up her musket, just as she does so there is one sound that somehow made her feel a little warm in the inside... a very faint voice that is coming somewhere from the distance.

“Nathalie!!” The voice is calling her name.

“Nathalie!!!” The faint voice continued to call out to her.

“What’s... that...?” Claire softly voiced out, she too can hear the faint voice shouting at them.

“I-I don’t know... I don’t know what it is.”

Nathalie slowly looked around with her eyes to try and look for the source of the curious voice, just as she had fully turned her head to the direction of the sound her shako is somehow suddenly back on her head, placed back there by a person that is now standing in front of her.

The mysterious figure suddenly bent down on his knees and quickly picks up Claire from the ground, putting her in a piggyback ride.

“Wait... who are... you...?” Claire asked as she is quickly lifted by the person on his back.

“I’m sorry miss but this isn’t the right time for introductions. Let’s get to know each other later when we are safe. Okay?” The person replied with a lively voice, trying to bring the fighting spirit of the two women back to them.

The person is illuminated by the afternoon sunlight from behind that Nathalie could not figure out who the person is.

She adjusted her shako, using its visor to shield her eyes from the sunlight.

She is completely surprised by what she saw.

A man is standing right in front of her, a familiar man of average build and height, the black vest and the brown eyes, the empty bread bag that is slung on his left shoulder and that face that she so remembers clearly as an irritating face.

“Come on Nathalie! Don’t just stare at me! Pick up and fire your musket!” The familiar figure exclaimed at Nathalie, urging her to stand up and continue on.

“The Prussian idiot!!!” Nathalie shouted in surprise.

“My name is Reinhard! At least try to remember that dammit!”

The figures Reinhard and Erich saw in their wagon when the smoke of the battlefield momentarily cleared is Nathalie carrying Claire on her back and waving at them. Reinhard just could not let her and her friend die as he watched helplessly in the sidelines knowing that could have done something for a person that he had befriended in the past.

Reinhard looked at Nathalie’s eyes and reached out his hand to her and to help her get up.
“Come on! I know you’re still able to fight!”

Nathalie took Reinhard’s hand as she simultaneously picks up her musket from the ground.

With renewed strength and hope, Nathalie held her musket tighter and proceeded to reload her weapon. Reinhard’s words and encouragement is the push Nathalie needed to fight on.

With Reinhard now carrying Claire, she can now focus in holding off the enemy as they make their way back to safety.

She quickly flipped the cover of her cartridge box and retrieved a paper cartridge from the inside. Quickly biting the tip of the cartridge off, she half-cocked the hammer of her weapon poured a small amount of black powder inside the flintlock musket’s pan and closed it. She then placed the musket’s butt on the ground and poured the rest of the black powder and the bullet into the barrel before getting the ramrod and ramming everything down in one fluid motion. She replaced the ramrod back in its place under the musket’s barrel and fully-cocked the hammer of the flintlock mechanism. She is now ready to fire her musket.

10 SECONDS! 10 seconds was all that it took for her to reload and ready a weapon that would take an average soldier 20 seconds or more.

Reinhard saw the entire sequence and is completely impressed by the woman’s skills.
“Oh man! That girl... that girl is something else!”

Reinhard could not believe his eyes, Nathalie is already wounded, exhausted and fatigued from fighting for hours yet she still has the same reload time as that of an elite soldier that was held in reserve, still fresh for combat.

She fired her weapon at the Austro-Bavarian line and struck an officer bringing him down.

She’s such a skilled marksman that she even managed to hit her target accurately at such a distance even though she’s using the smoothbore Model 1777 Charleville musket.

Although their officer is down and it has caused quite some confusion in their lines, the Austro-Bavarian soldiers continued to fire at them.

Reinhard suddenly ran, carrying Claire on his back, as quickly as possible towards the direction of Erich’s wagon... just outside the battlefield which has moved from the Bavarian left to stop near the right flank of the French army.

“Let’s go! We should not stay in this place any longer!” He yelled at Nathalie who is reloading her weapon, once again it just took her 10 seconds to reload her musket.

“W-wait! Where are you taking her?!” She slings her musket around her shoulder and quickly ran, trying to keep pace with Reinhard.

“Just follow me! I’ll take the two of you to safety!”

“C-Can I trust you?!”

“What did I ever do to you for you to distrust me?”

“Well, it’s not like I knew you for a long time now! .....Also... also.....”

The groping that she endured when she first met Reinhard for the first time flashed again for a split second in her mind causing her to suddenly become red in embarrassment.

Dammit Nathalie! Why can’t you get that memory out of your head?! Forget it forget it!
Nathalie gently hits the side of her head with her hands, trying to tell herself to forget such an embarrassing moment.

“Also... what...?!” Reinhard suddenly asked. He wants to hear her complete her reason.

Nathalie was flustered and quickly responded back:
“N-N-Nothing! I-It’s nothing!”

They have managed to run away from infantry of the Austrians and Bavarians but they are still fighting a much more serious enemy now, an enemy that they have no control of.

Time.

Claire’s condition is continuing to worsen, blood is still gushing from her wound. Her breathing has become more erratic and she seems to have become paler than before.

“How long has it been since she’s been shot?” Reinhard asked Nathalie as he looks at Claire behind her, checking her condition.

“It’s been about thirty minutes. I managed to slow down the bleeding a little bit by wrapping my scarf around her waist and tying it there as tight as I can.”
Reinhard looked at the first aid that Nathalie placed on Claire and estimated the time it would take to get to Erich.

“Can you save her? Can you help her? Please Prussian, help my friend!”
Nathalie said with a brave face, trying to stop her tears from flowing knowing that crying at the moment would not do anything to save Claire.

“I will do my best. She will surely live if we hurry back.... so run faster.”

Even with an injured leg, Nathalie continued to push herself; she fights off the pain as much as she can though she’s still lagging behind Reinhard.

She spots someone waving in the distance as if trying to call them, however due to the distance Nathalie can’t hear what he is saying.

“Alright! That’s Erich; we’ll be safe once we reach him.” Reinhard said out loud.

Even though Reinhard could not hear Erich he could understand the signals that he is doing, he is pointing both of his hands on either side of the battlefield.

Reinhard looked at what Erich is pointing and saw the cavalries of both sides starting to charge. They are on a collision course with each other and they will be caught it the middle.

“Nathalie! Hurry up we have cavalry incoming!”
He yelled, urging Nathalie to pick up the pace and catch up to him.



Part 3

The thundering of hundreds of horses’ hooves cannot only be heard from where Reinhard, Nathalie and Claire are standing in the battlefield. They can also feel the vibrations caused by the galloping of the horses as they make their way through the battlefield, intent on charging at each other.

“Nathalie run faster we need to get out of here!”
Reinhard was the first one who is alert to the danger posed by the cavalry.

Light cavalry are charging towards them from the Austro-Bavarian side of the battlefield while heavy cavalry are charging too from the French side. They have no choice but to run straight through and as quickly as possible towards Erich.

“Quickly Nathalie! Run towards that wagon!”

Reinhard and Nathalie continued to run, however Nathalie’s injury is causing her to trail behind.

“What are you doing? Hurry up!” Reinhard waved his hand at her urging her to hasten up as the cavalry of both armies are closing in.

“I-I can’t run as fast as you right now! My leg is hurting too much!” Nathalie yelled back as she runs towards Reinhard, limping all the way.

“What?! You’ve been shot too?”

“It’s just a graze, however the wound is pretty deep and it’s really starting to hurt now.”

Suddenly Claire started to talk to Reinhard; her voice is so weak that he had to listen to her very closely to understand what she is saying.

“L-leave me... take Nathalie... please save her. I’ve bled too much... I’m only nothing more than a burden now.”

“Don’t talk like that Claire... Nathalie is strong; she has also been strong for you. I’ve seen her carry you across the battlefield in an effort to save you. Don’t let her hard work go to waste. Don’t tell me that you’re a burden, because I will do everything I can to save you.”

“B-but...”

“Please just stay quiet for the moment and conserve your strength. Do it for your friend.”

“...................... Then please... I’ll be in your care...”

“Don’t worry.”

Just as Reinhard and Claire had finished their conversation the light cavalry of the Bavarians came so close towards them that they have been spotted and a small group of was detached to chase them down.

Reinhard saw them coming and yelled at Nathalie, warning her of the threat from her back.

“Nathalie! Watch your back! Watch your back!” He yelled from the top of his lungs.

“Shit!” Reinhard cursed as he thinks of a way to help Nathalie, if that many horsemen charged at her she will be torn apart by the impact.

He turned his head towards Erich and decided to draw the last ace from his sleeve.

“ERRRIIIIICCCHHHH!!!! Come here and help us!”

Erich, who had been just a spectator all this time, never even heard his friend’s call but he understood Reinhard’s body language that seemed to him to be yelling for him to come. He retrieved the musket that he has already loaded before sprinting as fast as he can towards the three.

“Damn you Reinhard! So this is what you meant by ‘I will do something’ for you!”

As Reinhard sees Erich sprinting towards them he cocked his head the other way and saw Nathalie trying her best to defend herself.

She shot a cavalryman down, however she isn’t reloading anymore. She just turned around and tried to run towards Reinhard. She had expended all her cartridges.

“Come on Nathalie you can make it!” He shouted trying to encourage her.

Reinhard could not run back yet to her, if he does he will just be putting Claire, who is on his back, in greater danger.

Nathalie realized this too and stopped running, she stood her ground ready to get into melee combat with the horsemen.

Reinhard saw this is a foolish move and yelled at her:
“What are you doing?! You’re leg is injured! That will be suicide!”

“I can handle myself for a while Prussian! I have no intention of dying today! Not after all that you’ve done for us. So get Claire to safety first then feel free to help me out here will you?!”

Reinhard swallowed, he knows it will be a huge gamble but he decides to trust her.

“Don’t get yourself killed! I’ll come rushing back for you!” He replied before running towards Erich at fast as he can to meet up with him.

“Erich! Give me that musket! And take her!”

Finally reaching Erich after a tiring sprint Reinhard gets the musket and hands over the wounded but still miraculously conscious Claire to him.

“Whoa! S-she’s a woman?!” Erich exclaimed the moment he saw Claire.

“No time to explain. Get her to the wagon and apply pressure on her wound. I’ll treat her properly later”

“Where are you going then?”

“I’ll go and save her friend Nathalie. Come on now Erich every second counts! Try and stop the bleeding!”
But before Reinhard could run Claire grabbed his arm, he felt the weak grip of the woman and looked at her.

“Please... please... *cough* save... her...” Claire uttered; her voice barely audible.

“I will save her, so just concentrate on getting yourself better okay? My friend here will help you for the moment. I’ll come back and bring Nathalie with me.” Reinhard responded before looking back at Erich.

“Erich, do everything you can to stop the bleeding.”
Erich simply nodded back before turning around and running back towards his wagon as Reinhard heads back to Nathalie.

Hang in there Nathalie. I’m coming back to get you.

Nathalie meanwhile is fighting for her very life. Three light cavalrymen are fighting her all at once.

She could not even fight properly as her injury is causing her so much pain that she could not even stand up straight, her movements are very limited and constricted. All she could do is evade and block the swinging swords of the horsemen.

Dammit what is it with horsemen that they always seem to be my enemy?
Nathalie, annoyed, thought as she remembers that she had always fought cavalry in melee, even back in Leipzig she had been attacked by multiple horsemen.
She fought the horsemen as best as she can, but fighting three at the same time is just plain impossible for any human.

She got kicked by one of the riders and she fell to the ground.

“Damn where’s my musket?”

She had dropped her musket when the rider had kicked her; she is now left defenceless and vulnerable.

“Haha! Even though you’re a woman you’ll still part of the French army, it’s time to end this!” One of the Bavarian horsemen taunted her as he charged.
Fearing the worst, Nathalie closes her eyes and placed her arms over her head, trying to use them as a shield against the horseman’s sword.

Shit! I’m going to be killed! She thought as she heard the cavalryman closing in.


Part 4

Nathalie then heard the sound of two metal objects hitting each other just above her head. She looked up and once again saw Reinhard standing over her.

“It’s you!” She exclaimed, relieved of seeing him at such a crucial moment.

“Oi! Don’t pick on the woman!” Reinhard shouted at the horsemen as he stands over Nathalie. He had just parried the swing that was intended for Nathalie using the bayonet attached to the musket handed to him by Erich.

Looking upwards at the rider atop the horse Reinhard was surprised at what he saw. He saw a face he remembered he really wanted to punch.

“You’re.... that Bavarian! You’re that Altmann!” Reinhard screamed, clearly pissed at seeing the Bavarian horseman that attacked him inside the city just the previous day.

“It’s such a small world for us to meet in the battlefield! I see that you are helping this French soldier to escape!” Altmann screamed as he brings his sword up over his head and swings it straight back down towards Reinhard.

Reinhard easily dodges; with a quick flick of his wrist he cocked the hammer of the flintlock mechanism of the musket.

“Nathalie, search and pick up your musket! I’m going to need your help over here!” Reinhard yelled out, screaming for Nathalie to help her deal with the other two horsemen that is grouped with Altmann.

“O-okay! I’m on it!” Nathalie responded as she gets up from the ground, looking for her missing musket.

“It’s no use! She most likely doesn’t even have ammunition anymore, and with that injured leg of hers it’ll be just a game of cat and mouse for us!” Altmann once again attacked Reinhard, swinging his sword at the Prussian with killing intent.

Reinhard just dodges his sword once again, this time his weapon is ready to fire with its hammer fully cocked. He is ready for a quick counter attack.

“She might not have any more cartridges, but I do!” Reinhard declared as he aims the musket straight into Altmann’s chest.

“Altmann! Get out of there!” The other two cavalrymen with Altmann yelled.

“Shit!”
Looking straight into the barrel of the musket Altmann expects that it will be the end of him, Reinhard after all is only about ten feet away from him. There’s no way he could miss at such a close distance.


“Hiiiyyyaaaaa!!!!”
With a loud shout Reinhard shoots the musket upwards at the horseman right in front of him. A huge plume of smoke jets out of the musket along with a loud bang.

Altmann fell from his horse and landed on his back with a thud.

“Crap! Altmann!” The two other horsemen screamed out seeing their fellow fall, believing their comrade to be dead.

However, Altmann slowly stood up from the ground. With his heart racing he checked himself for wounds.

But not even a spatter of blood can be seen on him. No hole in his uniform, no gunshot wound... nothing.

Reinhard and Nathalie just looked upon him in disbelief, Reinhard’s jaw almost dropped straight to the ground.

“You... missed. Prussian idiot.... you just missed him! YOU JUST FREAKIN’ MISSED HIM AT POINT BLANK RANGE!!!!!”

Nathalie who had just retrieved her own musket saw the entire thing happen and screamed out in much frustration. Reinhard was just ten feet away from the enemy. Even a cross-eyed soldier would hit a target as big as a man at that distance.

“I-I-I I don’t even know how that happened! Maybe Erich didn’t load the musket correctly!” Reinhard screamed back at her, trying to hide his embarrassment.

“Don’t give me that! I saw it for myself! You totally missed him by a big margin! You’re a total failure of a shot!” Nathalie screamed once again.

Just as the two are screaming and yelling at each other, Altmann picks up his sword from the ground, recomposes himself and remounts his horse.

“This is not the time to have fun you little pests! I’ll totally cut you to pieces!” Altmann screamed in anger as his two other fellow cavalrymen charge past him to attack.

“Crap I don’t have any cartridges left now too. I forgot to take a few extra from Erich.” Reinhard muttered as he saw the two cavalrymen close the distance.

“You’re really an idiot!” Nathalie exclaimed as she takes up a fighting stance beside Reinhard, ready to get into melee once again with the enemy.

Suddenly from the corner of her eyes she saw Reinhard do a peculiar thing, Reinhard just held his musket as if he’s going to throw it.

“What in the world are you doing?!” She asked.

“Hehe! Desperate times call for desperate measures!” Reinhard said with a smirk on his face, throwing the musket at one of the charging horsemen very much like a javelin.

The horseman, stunned at what Reinhard just did wasn’t able to react in time and the musket’s bayonet impaled him and struck him down.

“Nathalie, deal with the other one! I’ll deal with Altmann.” Reinhard exclaimed as he runs towards the fallen Bavarian to retrieve his musket.

“I won’t let you!” Galloping towards Reinhard at full speed swinging his sword, Altmann forces Reinhard to evade... he cannot pick up his musket.

Once again Altmann wheels around his horse and began charging at Reinhard, the Prussian hunter could not react in time this time and the sharp sword tore through the right shoulder of his vest ripping his clothing but missing his skin.

Reinhard clicked his tongue in frustration. “Dammit! This is unfair!”

Dispatching the other horseman that she was fighting with, Nathalie turned to Reinhard and yelled: “It’s your own fault for throwing your weapon away!”

Altmann is now the only enemy left and once again he prepares another attack run on Reinhard.

“Hey! Prussian! Use this!” Knowing that she could not run fast with her injured leg to support Reinhard, Nathalie tosses her musket to him.

“Thanks!” As Reinhard grabs the weapon from the air he once again held it like a javelin.

Looking on, Nathalie couldn’t help but shudder when he did this. “Not again! He wouldn’t!”

“Hiyaaaaaaaaaaaa!” Screaming from the top of his lungs Reinhard threw the weapon once again like a javelin towards Altmann.

“Why do you keep throwing your weapon at the enemy?!” The utterly dumbstruck Nathalie screamed.

“That’s not going to work again!” Altmann, who already saw the same attack earlier impale his comrade, now knew how to counter the makeshift javelin. He swung his sword hard at the incoming musket and deflects it causing it to miss him as he continued to charge towards the Prussian.

However Reinhard didn’t just stand there idly and wait for the Bavarian to come to him, he actually charged towards the charging horseman!

With Atlmann’s arm still out of position for another strike after deflecting the makeshift javelin musket, Reinhard used the opportunity to run towards him, grab him by his waist and then forcefully tries to drag him towards the ground.

“What in the world are you doing?! Let go of me!” Altmann resists as Reinhard tries his best to pull him of his horse. Holding on to the reins of his horse tighter and squeezing his thighs to the side of the horse he tried to get the Prussian of by raising his sword arm up into the air to strike him.

However, with Reinhard pulling him with all his might, despite the hard struggle, Atlmann loses both his grip on his sword which fell to the ground and his balance which resulted in him getting unhorsed.

“Damn! I’m going to make you pay for this!” Altmann screamed in anger as he tries to get up from the ground.

“I won’t let you!” Reinhard clings onto the Bavarian with all his might trying to prevent him from reaching his sword which landed only a few feet away from them.

Holding onto the enemy Reinhard screamed. “Nathalie! Do it! Help me with your kick that’s as strong as a horse’s!”

“Shut up Prussian!” Nathalie ran as fast as she can, enduring the pain of her injury.

“Hiyaaaaaaaaaa!” The sound of the air cracking could be heard loudly as Nathalie’s boot strikes Altmann’s face. The Bavarian was knocked out cold by the impact, his helmet sent flying through the air by the tremendous force of Nathalie’s kick.

“Ow! Ow! My leg!” Nathalie complained as she sits on the ground and holds onto her injured leg.

Quickly confirming that the enemy is no longer a threat, Reinhard gets up from the ground and checks her wound.

“You call that a graze? You’re bleeding badly. Come on let’s get you to Claire.”
Reinhard crouched down and quickly scooped Nathalie up from the ground, carrying her in his arms he started to run towards Erich’s wagon.

“Whoa! What are you doing?!” Put me down!”

“I can’t do that!”

“Why?! What do you mean you can’t do that?!”

“There’s another group of cavalry riding towards us!”

“Oh God! Then run as fast as you can! Run! Run!”

With a new group of cavalry chasing them still far in the distance, Reinhard ran as quickly as he can towards Erich’s wagon.

“Erich! Let me use ‘that’ thing!” Reinhard screamed as he passed Erich who is still putting pressure on Claire’s wound as she lies on the wagon’s seat.

He placed Nathalie down near the wagon and proceeds to unravel the heavy object that they have placed inside.

“How is she?” Nathalie worriedly asked Erich for Claire’s condition.

“She’s not that good, but I don’t think she will die.”

Claire slowly opened her eyes when she heard Nathalie’s voice. She reached out her hand towards her friend.

Nathalie grabbed her hand and said: “You’re doing fine Claire, just rest.”

“Nathalie!” Reinhard suddenly called “Come inside and help me load this thing, this is the only weapon we have left to deal with those cavalry.

“Okay! I’m coming!”
Nathalie limped inside the covered wagon and saw a huge object in front of her.

“What the hell is this?” She exclaimed.

“Just help me load the darn thing. Those horsemen aren’t going to wait for us.”

Then clanking noises came from inside the wagon. It went on for several seconds before there was silence again from the inside.

“Okay on three!” Reinhard said as he and Nathalie began to count down.

“One...! Two...! Three...!!! PUSH!!!!”

Nathalie and Reinhard pushed the immense thing that is hidden inside the wagon, it is much easier pushing it down than pushing it up that almost without effort it fell to the ground with a loud thud.

The immense thing that Reinhard and Erich have pushed and manhandled into the wagon has a long barrel, is made of bronze and is on a large carriage with two wheels. The bore is wide enough to put someone’s hand inside.

It’s a massive artillery piece, 8-pdr cannon!

Reinhard waited for the cavalrymen’s charge to come into range before firing the cannon.

“Eat canister shot!” He exclaimed as he fires the cannon, the cannon shot out a massive puff of smoke and a lot of little musket balls onto the horsemen almost like an oversized shotgun. The massive artillery piece rolled a few feet back as it recoils, one could almost taste the black powder in their mouth as the cannon fires. The numerous musket balls shred through the small enemy cavalry formation totally scattering them.

“Let’s go Erich! Let’s get away from here!” Reinhard exclaimed ushering Erich to drive.

“W-what about my cannon?!” Erich exclaimed, but seeing the exhausted Nathalie and the severely wounded Claire in front of him, decided to abandon his precious cannon.
Erich then places Claire inside the wagon before starting to drive away from the battlefield, leaving behind his cannon out in the road.

“I’m going to treat Claire’s wounds now; sorry we need to abandon your cannon.” Reinhard said, apologizing for the loss.

“Tch! I don’t like leaving it. But we saved two people; it’s more than worth it.”



Part 5

“We need to get her wound fixed.”
Reinhard utters those words when he properly sees Claire’s wound for the first time. It has been a miracle that she is still alive after such a wound and through the combined efforts of Nathalie, Reinhard and Erich her bleeding has slowed down to an almost complete stop.

“Nathalie!” Reinhard exclaimed in a commanding voice “Get me that bottle of schnapps, that sugarloaf and those rolls of cloth over there.”

“O-okay.” Nathalie replied as she fetches the items that Reinhard requested “B-but what are you going to do with just this?”

“I need to clean her wound. It’s going to be bad if we just let her wound stay as it is.”

Somehow, in an age where even doctors and surgeons knew very little of or don’t even know the meaning of sanitation, Reinhard had the idea of cleaning up a bad wound with whatever items he has on hand.

He picks up a knife from somewhere inside the wagon and tears the makeshift dressing that Nathalie had tied on Claire’s wound, following this he also sliced open her uniform, exposing the gunshot wound.

He hands the sugarloaf to Nathalie and said: “Crack this and pound it as fine as you can, use whatever you can find to make a sort of powder with this.”

Nathalie reaches out for the sugarloaf and looked at Reinhard in the eyes; she slowly opened her mouth and said:
“Please save Claire. Please save my friend........, my sister.”

With a quick nod as Reinhard’s reply, Nathalie snatches the sugarloaf from Reinhard’s hand and proceeded to do what he requested.

“It’s gonna be bad if I remove that musket ball from her.”
Noticing that the bullet is too deep for him to reach with his fingers, Reinhard decided to just leave the musket ball inside Claire and concentrated on the wound itself.

“Claire I know you can hear me, I need you to bite down on this. This is going to hurt but you need to trust me okay?”
Reinhard tears a piece of the cloth that the old merchant in Hanau had given him and rolls it into a dense tube. He places it into Claire’s mouth where she bit it as best as she can. Even after losing so much blood she is still miraculously conscious and responsive.

“Are you ready?” He asked as he removes the cork from the bottle of schnapps.

Claire replied with a slight nod and prepared to endure some serious pain.

“Here I go.”

Reinhard began to pour the schnapps into Claire’s wound, washing away the blood and cleaning the wound at the same time.

“HHHNNNNNGGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!”
A concealed scream could be heard coming from Claire as she bites down hard on the roll of cloth in her mouth. One could only imagine what pain she is enduring right now as the strong alcohol is being poured into her wound.

“Nathalie! Where’s the sugar?!” Reinhard exclaimed as he reaches out towards the woman.

“H-here... what are you going to do with this?”
Nathalie hands over the sugarloaf that she has pounded into a fine dust to Reinhard; it is contained inside a small roll of cloth.

“I’m going to pour it into her wound.”

“W-w-wait! What?!”

Nathalie is utterly taken aback. Naturally anyone would feel a sudden fear when someone you barely know will pour sugar down your friend’s life-threatening wound.

But Reinhard calmly poured the sugar into Claire’s wound which he had cleaned earlier using schnapps.

“Just trust me okay? This will help her wound heal faster.” He softly spoke to Nathalie.

Finishing pouring the sugar on the wound; he quickly tore through the rolls of cloth and wrapped them tightly around Claire’s waist.

“It’s done. I’ve done all that I can.” He softly uttered, looking at the face of Claire who’s lying down of the wagon’s floor.

“She... she’s not moving. How is she?”

“She just passed out. However she has lost a lot of blood and she needs to rest. Don’t worry... she’s safe.”

Nathalie removes her shako from her head and sits beside Reinhard and looked closely at her friend. She felt like a great weight had just been lifted off her shoulders and her face shows great relief.

“Thank goodness.” She uttered softly, her hands holding onto her friend’s.

“Hey woman, give me your leg.” Reinhard suddenly said in a way that seemed really suggestive.

He suddenly felt a sharp pain on his cheek. Nathalie just slapped his face.

“Ow! W-what was that for?!”

“Y-y-you’re still perverted even at times like this!!?!?”

“W-w-what!?!?”

“Don’t just suddenly ask for woman’s leg in such a perverted way!”

“Are you an idiot? I’m just asking for your leg because your wound is pretty bad too.”

Nathalie looked down on her leg and realized that it is true. What she said as only a graze is in fact a relatively deep wound too, she was just so concerned about her friend that she forgot about her own injury.

“Oh, you’re right....”

“Give me your leg so I can fix that too. Otherwise that’s going to get worse.”

“O-okay....”

Nathalie leaned back a little and gave her leg to Reinhard who removes her boot and began to treat her wound. Reinhard does the very same process that he did in treating Claire.

“Hhhnnnggghhhh!!” Nathalie bit her lip as she endured the stinging pain of the alcohol of the schnapps making contact with her injury.

“...........”

Reinhard is just quiet as he fixes her wound.

“H-hey.... Prussian...” Nathalie softly spoke “....Sorry for slapping you... and thanks.”

“It’s alright.” Reinhard bandages Nathalie’s wounds with whatever clean pieces of the roll of cloth was left, before heading towards the wagon’s rear after finishing her treatment.

He looked at the battlefield, now some distance quite away, and saw an epic sight. Hundreds of cavalry have made contact with each other and are fighting in close melee.

“What’s happening on the battlefield?” Nathalie asked as she crawled behind Reinhard and sat behind him looking at the battlefield too.

“The French have won....” Reinhard said in a flat voice “the Horse Grenadiers of the Imperial Guard have just dealt a decisive blow against the Bavarians. The French infantry are pushing the Bavarians to the river. It’s just a matter of time before the Austro-Bavarian army collapses.”

“So... most of the men can head home now.” She mumbled as she looks upon her French comrades.

“Yes... however the war is most likely not over for them.”

“.............”

Reinhard suddenly felt something hit his back. He turned his head and saw Nathalie’s long blonde hair near his face.

Nathalie had fallen asleep from exhaustion once again.

“You must be really exhausted. I can’t blame you if you’re body suddenly gave way after such a fierce battle.”

Reinhard turned around and lifted up Nathalie, bringing her inside the wagon.

“You know...” he softly spoke as he gently lays her down on the wagon’s floor beside her friend “...you really are something else. Simply put, you’re amazing.”

He stood up and looked at the two women resting after such a long and arduous day. He walked towards the front of the wagon and sat beside Erich.

“So... you’re done in treating those two?”

“Yeah... I managed to save the other one even after such a serious wound.”

Erich just looked at Reinhard as he was driving his wagon.
“You know, for a second, I actually thought that you’re crazy when you suddenly ran towards the battlefield. Even more so when I saw that the people you are trying to save are French.”

“It just sort of came to me when I saw her face, Nathalie I mean.”

“Heh... as usual, I have no idea what’s going on inside that head of yours. And you actually recognized her face at that distance... its scary just imagining how sharp your eyes are.”

Reinhard lies back a little and crossed his arms behind his head.

“Anyway, where are you going now that you lost both your home in Berlin and workshop in Hanau?”

Erich suddenly smirked as if he had a great idea. Reinhard could help but feel uneasy about what it is.
“I know now what you’ll pay for my lost cannon” Erich declared with a sinister voice “I’m going to live in your house for a few months until I get enough money to get my own home.”

“D-damn you... you can’t do that!”

“Of course I can, you still owe me for Musky and my cannon too!”

“Darn it... AAAGGGGHHHH!!! Okay! Okay! You got me.”

“So.... we’re going back to Silesia. Also... are we taking those two with us?”

Reinhard paused for a bit, inhaling deeply before exhaling in disbelief of what he’d have to live with from now on.

“Yeah... we’ll take them for now. We can’t just leave them. So let’s go home... to Silesia... to Liegnitz.
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Epilogue:
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Epilogue: A new home

“Hmmm.... hmmm... hmmm.... hmmm...” a soft, sweet humming voice coming from a closed room fills the air. Inside the room is a woman with long blonde hair, she is inside a metal bathtub relaxing and enjoying her bath in the warm water.

“Hnnnggghh! It feels great!” Nathalie exclaimed as she stretches her arms and back before getting out of the bathtub.

“Hmmm... hmmm... hmmm...” She continued to hum a warm and beautiful melody as she dries herself with a bath towel. It is her favourite song, the song that her father had composed for her birthday when she was still young. She dries and wraps herself in bath towel and opened the door.

Exiting from the bathroom, she entered the main room of a small house about 30 square feet in area. It is Reinhard’s home in Liegnitz; there are only two rooms in his humble house, the smaller bathroom in which Nathalie had just taken her bath and the main room which contains a bed, a dining table with four chairs, a fireplace and a few dressers and cupboards for storage. Two windows on opposite sides give a great view of the outside whilst a single door is the only way in and out of the house.

“You have such a soothing voice as always... Nathalie.” A soft voice said. The voice has a warm, big sister like feeling to it.

Nathalie’s eyes widened as she looks at the source of the voice, she sees Claire sitting on the bed. Her heart began to beat faster in joy and she instinctively ran towards her friend, giving her a tight embrace.

“Y-you’re awake! You’re awake! Thank goodness!”

“Well duh! But Nathalie... it’s too tight! And... also... too wet!”

Claire had just recently awoken from her long sleep after she was shot during the battle for Hanau. Reinhard decided to shelter them for a while as Claire recovers from her injuries.

“Oh! Sorry. Sorry. It’s just that I’m so happy that you’re awake now!”
Nathalie released Claire from her hug and fetches a cup of water for her newly awakened friend.

“It’s so good to see your face once again Nathalie... wait let me get my glasses so I can see you better. Wait... where is it anyway?”

“The guys brought your glasses yesterday into the town to get your glasses fixed. You kind of broke it in Hanau. Don’t worry they said they will be back by today so you’ll have your glasses back soon.”

“The guys...?” Claire softly uttered as she tries to remember, she only has fuzzy memories of the events in Hanau because of her injury “I remember now, two people helped us.”

“So... how’s your wound feeling...?” Nathalie asked as she sat beside her friend.

“It feels fine now, although it feels a little weird, I see that you have fixed me well.”

Claire sips water from the copper cup Nathalie had given her and asked:
“I don’t recognize this place. Where are we anyway?”

“We’re somewhere in Silesia in Prussia... I believe in a wood about a few miles from Liegnitz.”

“Ah..................Silesia huh, Prussia eh.”

Swoosh! Claire suddenly spat out a jet of fine mist of the water she is drinking when she heard Nathalie’s answer. Her eyes widened and her pupils dilated. Her arms and hands were shaking from shock.

“P-P-P-P.... P-Pru... P-Prussia!!?!?” she screamed in total bewilderment.

“It’s alright, those two aren’t part of the Prussian army, and also...”

Nathalie stopped for a moment. She looked at her friend seriously in the eyes, breathed deeply and swallowed before continuing to speak.

“We... no longer have a place to call home anymore in France. I-I’m so sorry I had to make your decision for you. I just didn’t want you to..........”

“It’s okay... I’m alive because of you.”

Claire leaned slightly forwards and reaches for Nathalie and pats her on the head, extremely grateful for her younger friend’s efforts to save her.

“B-B-But... what about Denis?”
Nathalie’s voice is filled with worry as she asked about how Claire feels about her lover’s recent death.

Claire just shook her head from side to side and told her friend:
“It’s not easy, and I know I will still sometimes cry because I lost him... but I can’t stay crumpled up into a small ball forever. I also need to move on somehow.”

“...................”
Without words to reply, Nathalie’s eyes began to water. Her cheeks reddened like ripe tomatoes and her chin curled and crumpled as she tries to prevent herself from crying.

Claire ran her hand from the top of Nathalie’s head towards her cheeks and gently rubs the tears off her friend’s eyes with her thumb.

“Don’t cry... or we’ll look like cry babies now.” She said, smiling with the warmth like that of an older sister towards her younger sibling.

“....And Nathalie, put some clothes on, you’ll catch a cold if you stay any longer with only that wet towel wrapped on you.”

“...Yeah...”

Just as Nathalie was about to stand up, the only door of the house was unlocked from the outside and opened as Reinhard and Erich returned from town. Reinhard has Musky strapped onto his back, with Erich right behind him. They are carrying with them bags filled with food, clothing and bottled beverages. It seemed like they had a successful hunt.

“Hey Nathalie! We’re home, Erich managed to fix Claire’s glasses and..... we also...... got....... food.......”

Reinhard just stopped, as Erich bumped into his back.
“Hey Reinhard! Get a move on! It’s starting to get really cold in here.”

“...........................”
An awkward silence filled the air. The silence was so deep that one could hear their own heart thump within their chest.

Thump. Thump. Thump. Nathalie’s heartbeat was so fast and so strong that she felt it was about to jump out of her chest. Her face became so red it looked like beets as she stared at the two men standing by the door looking at her with only a towel on.

Reinhard sees Claire holding onto Nathalie’s face and suddenly shouted as he pointed at them:

“Oh shit! We took in two lesbians!!! Two of them!!!”

“B*ASTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARDS!!!” Nathalie yelled back as she grabs the copper cup from Claire’s hand and threw it at Reinhard as hard as she can. It flew at high speed, headed towards the hunter’s face.

Reinhard managed to duck down just in time and the speeding cup slammed into Erich’s face. “That was close.” He sighed in relief as he witnesses Erich fall to the ground.

“DON’T DODGE!”Nathalie then grabbed the nearest object that she could get her hands on and threw it again towards Reinhard. It is one of the chairs by the dining table. It struck him with such force that he was thrown backwards and landed on top of Erich.

“Jeez! Why is it that men don’t knock?!” She exclaimed as she slammed the door shut.

“Oh?! Hihihihi! What’s with this reaction? You got quite flustered when the Prussian idiot saw those voluptuous curves of yours aren’t you?” Claire squinted her eyes and partly covered her smile as she giggles, teasing her embarrassed friend.

“Oh shut up would you?!” Nathalie exclaimed as she walks towards a dresser by the bed.

“It’s a good thing I managed to persuade the Prussian idiot to buy us clothes when I went to Liegnitz with him a few days ago.” Nathalie said as she puts on a change of clothes.

“A few days ago?” Claire asked “How long have I been out?”

“A little over one week. It’s now mid November.”

A few minutes after Nathalie changed her clothes the men were allowed inside and the group ate what the guys brought home. Enjoying their meal, teasing and yelling at each other, one would not think that they were total strangers to each other to each other a few weeks back.

“Hey woman, I‘ve bought the lenses and fixed your glasses myself. You better pay me up later.” Erich said as he gives Claire her glasses back.

“The name is Claire! And don’t worry you greedy Prussian I’ll pay you back... well... someday.” She replied, twirling her glasses before putting them on.

“Is your wound okay now?” Reinhard asked her in confirmation of her well being and her recovery.

“Yeah. It’s okay now. I thank you both for saving my life.”

“Hehe. It’s nothing. Just take care of yourself. You don’t want that wound to open again.”

With these words, Reinhard quickly finished his meal, excused himself, stood up and walked out of the door. The intrigued Nathalie followed him out, leaving her hot meal on the table taking a piece of bread in her hand.

“Hey! Where are you going?!” She asked as she runs after him.

“I’m going to gather some firewood. We need them for the days to come.”

Nathalie throws the piece of bread towards him “Here! Take this and eat some more!” then quickly running back towards the house.

“What was that about?” He asked himself, wondering about the woman’s action as he looks at the piece of bread that she threw to him.

Halfway through the way towards the house, Nathalie stopped and took a deep breath.

“Reinhard!” She called out without even turning around, “....Thank you! Thank you so much! Thank you for everything!” she shouted her gratitude before quickly running back towards the house with a satisfied smile and a slight blush on her face.

“Well... that’s a surprise... she actually called me by my name now.” Reinhard whispers to himself as he continues to walk to search for firewood, biting a piece off the bread.

With the end of this conversation, the wind started to blow colder and the red and yellow leaves of the trees silently fall towards the ground. Winter is fast approaching.
Reinhard looked up at the sky and thinks about the people in his home, a slight smile appeared on his face.

“It looks like this winter will be warm and lively.”
So there you have it! It's the complete Volume 1 of my OLN, I might post the cover of my work if I can. As I said I prefer to have it here where some people might enjoy reading it rather than leaving it gather dust in my drawer. Thank you so much for those who took their time reading this work. Once again I am looking forward to any feedback that you might have. I'm currently typing Volume 2 on my computer, if anyone wants to continue the story please just PM me or post it here.
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A very unique way of a girl-meets-boy scenario.

Nice introduction of the story!
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Thanks for your time reading gamerbaki.

More things are to come, bombs are going to explode left and right as many secrets will be revealed next volume so stay tuned. :)
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The Battle of the Nations -- now there's an interesting place to start a tale.

I'm going to start with a word of advice that my beta-readers often tell me: your first scene runs too fast. Claire represents a very good opportunity in a pivotal moment of life and death. Yet before her relationship with Nathalie can be explored for even a moment, she gets "snuffed" without any real value. Basically the prologue goes through the up and down far too quickly, trying to climax without any buildup... and end up feeling more like a ripple than a wave.

Some misc thoughts on CH1:
1. Reinhard sure talks to himself a lot when he's trying to draw attention... so does the girl...
2. [“Hah... hah... hah...”] there's a lot of time when a short description would hit the mind much faster than an expression. This is probably just a personal taste, but it's also a habit of LN writing that makes a lot of people not like them...
3. Why does she understand Russian perfectly (or German for that matter)? Good linguists don't end up as common soldiers =P Saying the other side is just shouting or laughing might lack clarity, but it gives a much better "in-character" feel.
4. By the way, "locals" hate non-native soldiers back in those days. Especially since armies knew very little about "logistics" in that era and mostly resupplied by "foraging" -- pillaging and sacking the countryside. Napoleon's armies were particularly (in)famous in that regard. Add on the fact the French have humiliated the various Germanies of the day... I would expect Reinhard to enter the meeting with some degree of hatred towards any 'Frenchmen'.
5. How is someone who successfully disguised as a male soldier long enough to make it into the Imperial Guard blow her own cover (mentioning her breasts) when even the other side hasn't noticed? This feels like a really inappropriate and forced comedy scene.

(Haven't gotten any further. I'll come back if I somehow have time in recent weeks >_<)

But other than that, this was a pretty cool idea. I would honestly suggest doing early chapter revisions instead of pushing on though. There's a lot of useless lines when information density and mood highlighting is very important early on in order to pull the reader in.

It would also help to do some cultural research. One of the most interesting aspects when opposites meet is their different conventions and views (not to mention lost-in-translation misunderstanding) which... really don't come off here. They feel like they could have grew up in the same family. Their speaking styles and mannerisms often seem to blend together, which is a problem when the story is dialogue-driven.

Hope that helps some.

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Aorii wrote:The Battle of the Nations -- now there's an interesting place to start a tale.

I'm going to start with a word of advice that my beta-readers often tell me: your first scene runs too fast. Claire represents a very good opportunity in a pivotal moment of life and death. Yet before her relationship with Nathalie can be explored for even a moment, she gets "snuffed" without any real value. Basically the prologue goes through the up and down far too quickly, trying to climax without any buildup... and end up feeling more like a ripple than a wave.

Some misc thoughts on CH1:
1. Reinhard sure talks to himself a lot when he's trying to draw attention... so does the girl...
2. [“Hah... hah... hah...”] there's a lot of time when a short description would hit the mind much faster than an expression. This is probably just a personal taste, but it's also a habit of LN writing that makes a lot of people not like them...
3. Why does she understand Russian perfectly (or German for that matter)? Good linguists don't end up as common soldiers =P Saying the other side is just shouting or laughing might lack clarity, but it gives a much better "in-character" feel.
4. By the way, "locals" hate non-native soldiers back in those days. Especially since armies knew very little about "logistics" in that era and mostly resupplied by "foraging" -- pillaging and sacking the countryside. Napoleon's armies were particularly (in)famous in that regard. Add on the fact the French have humiliated the various Germanies of the day... I would expect Reinhard to enter the meeting with some degree of hatred towards any 'Frenchmen'.
5. How is someone who successfully disguised as a male soldier long enough to make it into the Imperial Guard blow her own cover (mentioning her breasts) when even the other side hasn't noticed? This feels like a really inappropriate and forced comedy scene.

(Haven't gotten any further. I'll come back if I somehow have time in recent weeks >_<)

But other than that, this was a pretty cool idea. I would honestly suggest doing early chapter revisions instead of pushing on though. There's a lot of useless lines when information density and mood highlighting is very important early on in order to pull the reader in.

It would also help to do some cultural research. One of the most interesting aspects when opposites meet is their different conventions and views (not to mention lost-in-translation misunderstanding) which... really don't come off here. They feel like they could have grew up in the same family. Their speaking styles and mannerisms often seem to blend together, which is a problem when the story is dialogue-driven.

Hope that helps some.

Also hope you liked Daybreak ^^ I'm quite honored you mentioned it as inspiring you to write...

Thanks so much for taking time in reading my work. I didn't expect that the author of Daybreak himself would read my LN.

Anyways I agree with most of your thoughts, though I would also want to clarify some points:
1: Reinhard was meant to do that. He even talks with his weapon. For Nathalie however I may need to revise a few of her lines so it looks like she is thinking in her head rather that speaking out loud.
2: Now that you mention it, maybe I could find a better alternative to show these kinds of scenes.
3: Nathalie... and to an extension, her friend Claire, will know how to speak multiple languages. This is a major plot point so I could not reveal it just yet.
4: There is a reason why Reinhard could not bear to hate the French, the other Prussian though (Erich) would be colder though not quite hostile as he will know why Reinhard have some tendency to sympathize with the French.
5: (Well, though this should be revealed in Volume 2 I'm gonna say it anyway as it won't affect the story that dramatically.) Nathalie and Claire haven't even been in the Army for a year, they are fresh volunteers. In 1813 the Guard Infantry, especially the Young Guard, were almost filled with conscripts in Napoleon's almost desperate attempt to fill the ranks of his army without them deserting. Putting the best of the newly trained conscripts in the guard infantry gave him a solution. The reason? ...Napoleon's army was destroyed by the winter in Russia. The reason why Nathalie and Claire were placed in the Young guard will be displayed in Chapter 5 of this Volume.

For all of that I thank you so much. It is a great help that you left this feedback. It will serve as a great basis for my future works and the revisions that I will do in this volume. I'll take your advice about cultural research, it would also be really helpful.
Once again thanks Aorii! :D
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Yo! I finished reading the Volume 1 last night (GMT +8) and I'm kinda impatient for not posting my reaction right after I finished reading it (thanks to my ISP being a BS).

So let me say things for your story.

Let's start with the good stuff first:
Spoiler! :
1. I kinda like your setting of the story which is an Early Modern Aged War. It is a great thing that you related the things that happened during the regime of Bonaparte to your story. I also wanted to write a war-themed story some time ago but it seem that I still lack some stuff needed in order to create such story like that.

2.
gamerbaki wrote:A very unique way of a girl-meets-boy scenario.

Nice introduction of the story!
I still mean this part. And it is quite entertaining how the pair went through different things even they only met a couple of days ago.

3. The climax is good, although the intensity stops at the gag part (where Reinhard missed the shot at point-blank range) but over all, it is a good one.

Okay, then I'll to the other stuff:
Spoiler! :
1.
Aorii wrote:Some misc thoughts on CH1:
1. Reinhard sure talks to himself a lot when he's trying to draw attention... so does the girl...
2. [“Hah... hah... hah...”] there's a lot of time when a short description would hit the mind much faster than an expression. This is probably just a personal taste, but it's also a habit of LN writing that makes a lot of people not like them...
3. Why does she understand Russian perfectly (or German for that matter)? Good linguists don't end up as common soldiers =P Saying the other side is just shouting or laughing might lack clarity, but it gives a much better "in-character" feel.
4. By the way, "locals" hate non-native soldiers back in those days. Especially since armies knew very little about "logistics" in that era and mostly resupplied by "foraging" -- pillaging and sacking the countryside. Napoleon's armies were particularly (in)famous in that regard. Add on the fact the French have humiliated the various Germanies of the day... I would expect Reinhard to enter the meeting with some degree of hatred towards any 'Frenchmen'.
5. How is someone who successfully disguised as a male soldier long enough to make it into the Imperial Guard blow her own cover (mentioning her breasts) when even the other side hasn't noticed? This feels like a really inappropriate and forced comedy scene.
I'm the type of person who does everything first before complaining. In order to make a good review, I read the said work until the end of it. I often do that to the other members of this forum such as caparo, Calculatrix, and many more. But I agree to what Aorii had said.

2.
Aorii wrote:3. Why does she understand Russian perfectly (or German for that matter)? Good linguists don't end up as common soldiers =P Saying the other side is just shouting or laughing might lack clarity, but it gives a much better "in-character" feel.
I am wondering what language Nathalie, Reinhard and the other guys are saying. Yes--they are all Europeans but didn't they came from different countries? It is quite puzzling to me on how they communicate normally despite their different nationalities.

3.
Aorii wrote:5. How is someone who successfully disguised as a male soldier long enough to make it into the Imperial Guard blow her own cover (mentioning her breasts) when even the other side hasn't noticed? This feels like a really inappropriate and forced comedy scene.
Somehow, I understand what he is trying to say. I don't know if Nathalie and Claire are lucky enough for their cover to not blow up or if the other men are just dumb enough to not realize that (including Reinhard)

4.
Aorii wrote:But other than that, this was a pretty cool idea. I would honestly suggest doing early chapter revisions instead of pushing on though. There's a lot of useless lines when information density and mood highlighting is very important early on in order to pull the reader in.

It would also help to do some cultural research. One of the most interesting aspects when opposites meet is their different conventions and views (not to mention lost-in-translation misunderstanding) which... really don't come off here.
Aorii's right. Although I still prefer for you to do some manual proof-reads in order to fix some typo's and contradictions in some sentences. Since it is war-themed story based on the real history of France, researching more about the event itself is a great thing to do.

Okay...that 's it.

Generally speaking, the story is interesting and it is worth looking forward for.

I hope to see your next volume in the near future!

--gamerbaki


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Nathalie is going for the tsun-tsun. And I feel that flags are starting to get raised 8)
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gamerbaki wrote: I am wondering what language Nathalie, Reinhard and the other guys are saying. Yes--they are all Europeans but didn't they came from different countries? It is quite puzzling to me on how they communicate normally despite their different nationalities.
Well, as I have said. Nathalie and her friend Claire, are able to speak different languages (uncommon for the majority of the women of the era). Whenever Nathalie and Claire talked to Reinhard or Erich they would be speaking German. When the other characters speak though they would be in their default langgauge. i.e. Russians speaking Russian and so on.

More of this will be explained by volume 2.
gamerbaki wrote: Generally speaking, the story is interesting and it is worth looking forward for.

I hope to see your next volume in the near future!

--gamerbaki
Yup! I'm also looking forward to be able to post volume 2. However, I want to polish this volume first as much as possible with the help of BitterSugar before I continue on.

By the way, I'm planning to upload the cover art of Volume 1 or maybe even 2. Is that allowed? It's totally cool if its not allowed, just askin. :)
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