OLN: Daybreak on Hyperion
Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2013 9:53 am
(First Post Rewritten)
Daybreak on Hyperion (or just Daybreak) is an original English light novel I write as a hobby. Although not a professional, I take this interest very seriously and has spent years honing my skills. Now, thanks to the Baka-Tsuki community and the support of its readership, I've managed to get this story posted here. I sincerely hope you enjoy the story. Since this is still purely a non-profit hobby, the appreciation of the readers is what really motivates me to keep going.
For those with critiquing thoughts: please feel free to give them. I greatly appreciate any literary criticism (even if just a matter of personal opinion or tastes). It's what drives progress forward. Any thoughts would be much welcomed.
(main hosting found on Krytyk's Translations at http://krytykal.org/daybreak/)
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Daybreak on Hyperion - Story Synopsis
Born into noble prestige and gifted with genius intellect, Pascal was a promising officer cadet who rose to national fame before even graduating. At the mere age of nineteen, he had everything a young man could wish for...
Except his habitual arrogance had destroyed every opportunity of a close friendship.
Seeking a companion that would meet his protracted list of requirements, Pascal decided to craft the 'perfect spell' for the upcoming familiar ceremony. If those in his world were not fit to accompany his brilliance, then he would summon a best friend through his own hands -- one that was mature, intelligent, knowledgeable, bright, and cute to boot.
He received far more than he bargained for.
This is the story of how two wills joined to altered a continent, and the third who supported their entire journey through.
Main Genres: Fantasy, Adventure, Genderbender, Action, Military (Strategy), Politics, Romance (Slow)
Thanks to the readers, Daybreak may now also be found on TVtropes
Cho also wrote a Review on EnglishLightNovels
Daybreak on Hyperion (or just Daybreak) is an original English light novel I write as a hobby. Although not a professional, I take this interest very seriously and has spent years honing my skills. Now, thanks to the Baka-Tsuki community and the support of its readership, I've managed to get this story posted here. I sincerely hope you enjoy the story. Since this is still purely a non-profit hobby, the appreciation of the readers is what really motivates me to keep going.
For those with critiquing thoughts: please feel free to give them. I greatly appreciate any literary criticism (even if just a matter of personal opinion or tastes). It's what drives progress forward. Any thoughts would be much welcomed.
(main hosting found on Krytyk's Translations at http://krytykal.org/daybreak/)
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Daybreak on Hyperion - Story Synopsis
Born into noble prestige and gifted with genius intellect, Pascal was a promising officer cadet who rose to national fame before even graduating. At the mere age of nineteen, he had everything a young man could wish for...
Except his habitual arrogance had destroyed every opportunity of a close friendship.
Seeking a companion that would meet his protracted list of requirements, Pascal decided to craft the 'perfect spell' for the upcoming familiar ceremony. If those in his world were not fit to accompany his brilliance, then he would summon a best friend through his own hands -- one that was mature, intelligent, knowledgeable, bright, and cute to boot.
He received far more than he bargained for.
This is the story of how two wills joined to altered a continent, and the third who supported their entire journey through.
Main Genres: Fantasy, Adventure, Genderbender, Action, Military (Strategy), Politics, Romance (Slow)
Thanks to the readers, Daybreak may now also be found on TVtropes
Cho also wrote a Review on EnglishLightNovels