Editing Tomoyo After:SEEN0629 (section)

== Translation ==
*[[user:EDGE04|EDGE04]](?)
**Translated lines 0001-0156
*[[user:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]
** The rest of the H-scene is not translated
*** H-scene begins at line 0064 and ends at 0279, and continues at 0323 and ends at 0479

'''Do not try to pass machine translations off as adequate translations.'''

*[[user:Romdeau|Romdeau]]
**Reviewed all the currently translated lines and made some edits so the translation sounds smoother. There was one line in the beginning of the H scene that said "the" palms and I have to ask-whose palms? If it's literal translation, can a translator assign it to one of them because it sounds awkward leaving it as is.
A translator still needs to go through lines 0156-0279 and 0324-0479 please.

*[[user:AbstractBlueSky|AbstractBlueSky]]
**Currently QC'ing existing translations.
***Reworded the palm translation on line <0069> for English audiences.
***Reworded <0243> to sound more understandable in English.
**Currently resuming translation of lines after <0156>. Currently up to <0388>. Requesting QC of lines <0323-0388>.

*[[user:kikyo423|kikyo423]]
**QC'ed lines <0156-0272>
**Currently QC'ing lines <0323-0388>

*[[user:ShadeShadows|ShadeShadows]]
** TL'ed lines 384 - 408, requesting QC before I continue.

*[[user:Pchan105|Pchan105]]
** QC'ed everything that was english.
** Fixed punctuation, i.e.,「...」 to " ... "  。to . and ？ to ? when appropriate.
** Some braces { } where missing from the names, so I added them.

*[[user:ShalDengeki|ShalDengeki]]
**Translated lines 0410-0479
**Requesting TL check on 0463; not sure Tomoya is a big a dick as I translated him as being
**Will be QCing the rest of the script in the next day or so