Editing User talk:Velocity7 (section)

== Re: Spacing and Name Changes ==

I mainly did the spacing due to the fact that that page looked particularly different compared to the other pages.  Since it is not necessary, I'll try to aim for that last.  I understand that "//" is to denote what was originally there or a slight commentary that does not go into the program or reading, however I find it is there to structure organisation.  I was aiming at making it look more neat rather than correcting, though I can focus on other aspects instead.  However, I suppose I forgot that for that same reason, anything after "//" does not need to be edited, even if there's typos.  Well, I was unaware of {-- this is ignored --}.  My computer science is horrid, so I'll look more into the manual to better understand the notations.  I tried playing the game to hunt for some event codes until I realised I don't quite understand the computer science.

I inputted Young man due to the translation being written that way, so I ended up matching what the text used, forgetting the guidelines at that time.  I suppose I should have changed what was in the text and used Young Man.  That was my mistake, I apologise.  So, now I changed the dialogue so that it says 'Young Man' on the text.  It's one or the other, and I made the wrong decision, thank you for correcting me.  I'm bound to miss something even if I read it often.

There are a lot of components I am not entirely sure of, so my judgment might be flawed.  Like if the original text says \m{A} within dialogue, I look for that and possibly insert it.  Though I won't look to into that too much since that would be direct translation seeking.  Another portion would be British or American English, but since they're both used like half the time, I'm ignoring those until one is set in stone.  Then there's the ellipses into an ending of a sentence, which would be four periods.  I guess this is a worry for later, since there's some variance in these it seems.  Hyphens and contractions can appear iffy to me (you might have noticed the fortune-telling edits or some de-contractions ... if that is a word, either for consistency or avoidance of possessive usage.).  Punctuation rules would be the portion that's most iffy to me.

Well, I'll do my best to avoid hindering mistakes while making positive corrections.  Pretty challenging, but it's a fun learning experience.  Thanks again.

--Amoirsp 14:38, 14 March 2007 (PST) ... (I don't even remember how to put a time stamp)