Editing Talk:HEAVY OBJECT (section)

=== Volume 1 ===
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Image:Heavy_Object_v01_008.png|The war is all about Objects.<br>There is no place for flesh and blood soldiers.<br>- Councillor Freed
Image:Heavy_Object_v01_106.png|*As you can see on image
Image:Heavy_Object_v01_168.png|TriCore (TRI-CORE)<br>Length : Approx. 180m<br>Top speed : 320km per hour<br>Material armor : 2cm x 500 layer (Including welding impurities)<br>Class :  Intercontinental invasion weapons<br>Type : Naval battle specialized Second generation<br>Propulsion engine : Naval combat, oil mining specialized float<br>Official name : Unknown<br>Affiliation : Unknown<br>Armament <br>Main gun : railgun x 3<br>Secondary weapon : laser beam, coilgun<br>Code name: TriCore (Since it has 3 power reactors)<br>Main Ring Color : Unknown
Image:Heavy_Object_v01_325.png|Generation 0.5<br>Total Length : Approx. 70m<br>Top speed : 450km per hour<br>Material armor : 10cm x 100 layer (Including welding impurities)<br>Class:	Land Battle specialized Generation type 0.5 <br>Type:	Anti-Object specialized weapons (self-proclaimed)<br>Propulsion engine:	Steel wheels (Ground-contact weight distribution)<br>Official name : Unknown<br>Affiliation:	Military power Oceania<br>Armament	<br>Main gun : 1 x large caliber coilgun <br>Secondary weapon : laser beam, coilgun<br>Occupant:	 Military leader of Oceania nation <br>Code name: None (Generation 0.5)<br/>Main Ring Color : Silver<br>
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Moved the translation to fit under the image, there are some parts whereby the translations sound a bit weird. Would someone mind double checking? Did a bit of editing for the quote. Thanks for the effort in translating :D [[User:Zakashi|Zakashi]] ([[User talk:Zakashi|talk]]) 20:03, 25 August 2012 (CDT)


Discussion for Correction welcomed ~(^^ ~), working for volume 2 Intro page, there are some kanji is hard to read, using tesseract i got this <br>
今のところ、オブジエクトは最強だって貫われているな<br>
誰もがびっくり返らないと信じ切つている<br>
でも.<br>
こんな歴史の定説だつ、いつひっくり返るかは分からないもんだ<br>
とある輩備兵の世間舌<br>[[User:1412|1412]]  08:30, 26 August 2012 (+7 GMT)

You might be know this, but you can get object data excluding Code Name here, just let chrome translate it to the get general idea
[[http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%83%98%E3%83%B4%E3%82%A3%E3%83%BC%E3%82%AA%E3%83%96%E3%82%B8%E3%82%A7%E3%82%AF%E3%83%88]]
[[User:1412|1412]] 08:30, 26 August 2012 (+7 GMT)

I have changed "coil gun" to "coilgun" to be the same as the chapter translations. I have slightly rephrased the description of generation 0.5's propulsion engine. Please do give your comments on it. :) By the way, what does "ring main colour" mean? I don't seem to find mention of it in the translation. [[User:Zakashi|Zakashi]] ([[User talk:Zakashi|talk]]) 21:40, 25 August 2012 (CDT)

Thanks, i also dont know about "ring main colour", but the page ilustration mentioned it, note that i also add "affilation", since it mentioned in wiki, but not in the image
And i also not quite sure with TRICORE propulsion engine description, and WATERSTRIDER Code Name, please some one recheck it 6_-
[[User:1412|1412]] ([[User talk:1412|talk]]) 12:20, 26 August 2012 (+7 GMT)

Changed to "Main Ring Colour" to be consistent with Water Strider's illustration. By the way, the main ring colour for Tri-core is stated as unknown. Should we just follow the illustration?<br>For Tri-core's propulsion engine, from what I understand from the wiki, it sounds to me to be a float specialised for use in naval combat and mining for oil? Maybe that can help you with coming up with the description.<br>As for Water Strider's codename, you would need someone to translate from Japanese, since the characters used seem different from the one in the title, can't help you here since I can't read Japanese. [[User:Zakashi|Zakashi]] ([[User talk:Zakashi|talk]]) 04:57, 26 August 2012 (CDT)

Thanks, And you right, TRICORE main ring colour is unknown as stated in illustration, For TRICORE propulsion description, i also agree with you, maybe thats what it means, And for the Water Strider code name, its written as "Amenbo" - Japanese for water strider, and the text in bracket simply explain why it is called by that name.
so we could conclude that code name is what the quenser, heivia and froleytia call the object and why, not the object official code name.<br/>
- Removed -
[[User:1412|1412]] ([[User talk:1412|talk]]) 19:05, 26 August 2012 (+7 GMT)

By the way, was the "sliding like a water slider" in the bracket for the description intended? [[User:Zakashi|Zakashi]] ([[User talk:Zakashi|talk]]) 07:16, 26 August 2012 (CDT)

"sliding like a water '''strider'''" Typo [[User:1412|1412]] 21:00, 26 August 2012 (+7 GMT)

Should we change "occupant" to something else like "pilot" or "elite"? It would fit better for the translation. By the way, if we are adding things not mentioned in the original image like affiliation, we should take note that the extra information mentioned is not spoiler (it has been mentioned in the translation before), in case some readers don't want to read the translation after coming across it in the chapter as they don't want to be spoiled. I'll help look at the other images at a later time :P [[User:Zakashi|Zakashi]] ([[User talk:Zakashi|talk]]) 04:47, 1 September 2012 (CDT)