Editing Talk:Mushoku Tensei:Web Chapter 113 Preview (section)

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You're not improving. You do not improve by posting clearly wrong stuff. All you do is confuse the readers with unreadable garbage. If you want to improve then continue working on one piece of text until the translations are accurate. Dumping garbage doesn't make anyone improve, how are you supposed to improve if you don't even check up the meaning of a simplest word like 視線 in a dictionary? This word appears every 10 lines in every light novel I've ever read or translated. You're saying you're trying to improve. But that's either an excuse or you're plainly unaware that you're not learning. One does not learn by posting stuff, but by researching it and perfecting it. You're lacking dedication to make the piece of text be translated accurately, someone who's satisfied with posting 'readable' piece of text (this is not a translation, as its wrong) which is in fact fanfiction, cannot and is not qualified to call himself translator.

As for the second thing you said, it's not readable, it's plain wrong. You're obviously lying to the readers who come to read the stuff, what they're reading is not the content of original novel but what your imagination created. While half or maybe the most of the readers don't care as they're satisfied with anything and don't mind it being wrong, I think that they deserve being given something that's correct and not a fanfiction. Readers take it all as true and often never come back to check if it was retranslated (most likely it will never be retranslated). Readers are also unaware of it being wrong.

While I do not oppose newbie translators, but someone who dumps garbage just because he doesn't want to spend more time on researching the Japanese text because all he cares is to pump content faster, will never become a proper translator. 

If you haven't discovered the meaning of a word like 視線 which appears 15 times every chapter, then come on, what improvement are you talking about?.--[[User:Krytyk|Krytyk]] ([[User talk:Krytyk|talk]]) 10:41, 14 August 2014 (CDT)

視線 --> gaze or line of sight so far as I know , and I said that I know I make mistakes , just wondering , you never made a mistake reading a Kanji or even Kana that you know 100% ... but I agree , no idea why merging sentences and sometimes writing what I understood instead of word-for-word translation would end up as Fan-Fiction , fan-fiction is not translation removing the text now :) thank you for speaking so seriously regarding this matter. --[[User:Kazeboy|Kazeboy]] ([[User talk:Kazeboy|talk]]) 10:50, 14 August 2014 (CDT)