Editing Tomoyo After:SEEN0702 (section)

== Translation Notes ==
*Lines 19 & 20
**It's been on my mind for a while, but wouldn't it be it be more natural for English speakers to just give a standard greeting('hey', 'hello') when they come home?--[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 14:37, 13 
**I just noticed some sort of line swap? before it says that Tomoyo arrives after Tomoya and its like that in the translation, but in the japanese text Tomoyo says okaeri and Tomoya tadaima. translation wise it should be the other way around [[User:Kura|Kura]] 02:00, 25 April 2010 (CET)
**Nothing is wrong kura, its not meant to meant tomoyo returning and been greeted. It is meant to mean that tomoyo is greeting tomoya returning from work like a dutiful wife, its just a kind of formalities. tomoyo translation should said welcome home and tomoya, Im back -- Anonymous
**^ What Anon said. ^ It's meant to be Tomoyo welcoming Tomoya home, even though she came in afterward. Changing it to reflect the correct translation. --[[User:AbstractBlueSky|AbstractBlueSky]]20:16, 20 October 2010 (UTC)
September 2008 (PDT)
*Lines 38 & similar lines
**I don't know about you, but 'Hng' sounds more like someone in pain. Perhpas we should agree on a standard for sounds/lines like these.--[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 14:37, 13 September 2008 (PDT)