Editing User talk:Eternal Dreamer (section)

==High School DxD==

Use Chaos Brigade instead of Khaos Brigade. That is the standardized name to use for this project for now. --[[User:Hiro Hayase|Hiro Hayase]] 20:13, 12 April 2012 (CDT)

Understood. I wasn't sure since the chapter title spelled it that way, but it makes sense, since it's probably just a misspell on the author's part. --[[User:Eternal Dreamer|Eternal Dreamer]] 21:09, 12 April 2012 (CDT)

Greetings Eternal Dreamer-san.About the last sentence in this paragraph (High School DxD volume 5 life 2 part 2):<br />
"Within my field of vision, a table still safely remained in a corner of the hall and elegant-looking family servant devils could be seen. In the center of these gentle-looking male devils…were people covered in weird-looking food."<br />
I think it's "''In the center of these gentle-looking male devils...was a person eating a weird-looking food.''"But as food can be interpreted either as something that is eaten or drunk,the last part of the sentence can also changed to "''...was a person drinking tea.''" (omitting the ''weird-looking'' part to be consistent with part 3 where Diodora Astaroth introduce himself.) Does this sounds better?<br />
Also,about Hyoudo Issei's internal monologue:"''—! Seriously!? Number 1!? As in the strongest!>=?''" Does the '''>=''' part intentional? Or can I change it to "''—! Seriously!? Number 1!? As in the strongest!?''" ?<br /><br />
In part 3 there were "''What’s more, everyone was a distinguished-looking devil on the level above that.''." Imo,shouldn't it changed to "''What’s more,there were distinguished-looking devils on the level above that.''"? <br />
For the second one,there's "''Saji was also proudly listening to Buchou’s dream.''",can it be changed to "''Saji was also proudly listening to Kaichou’s dream.''"?<br />
And lastly there is "''Rias, Sona, would you not like to fight each other?''" to "''Rias, Sona, won't you like to fight each other?''".<br />
If it's okay with you,I'll go with the change.Sorry for my lengthy questions.--[[User:User753|User753]]-[[User talk:User753|Talk]]- 11:11, 28 May 2012 (CDT)

For the first thing, please change it if you think so. I was really unsure and stuck with that section with the food, and I honestly think your interpretation makes more sense, so go ahead

Second part is just a mistype on my part, please feel free to change it. (Sadly, I'm told that I type too fast sometimes.)

Third part, I think either one makes sense, but yours sounds better as a sentence, so please change it if you want.

Last part, I think the original is better. (The more formal phrasing of "would you not" just seems more grammatically correct and sounds better in this context.

Anyway, thank you very much for asking me about this. I appreciate that you took the time to ask me, unlike others, who simply make significant changes as they wish. If you ever feel that other corrections are necessary, please feel free to contact me again like this. --[[User:Eternal Dreamer|Eternal Dreamer]] 13:17, 28 May 2012 (CDT)

Copy that.Thank you for your permission.Well,this is a community,and it will be rude if I made a change that will change the meaning without asking the translator(learnt my lesson when I tries to edit AW vol 1 chapter 5 pv without asking,he he,silly me.).Until next time then.--[[User:User753|User753]]-[[User talk:User753|Talk]]- 17:26, 28 May 2012 (CDT)

Umm...Sorry to intrude again(missing your note on part 3,as the rest are correct,imho.).This time it's a discussion about this one "''The Leviathan-sama in question was in a refreshingly pissed off mood.''" Refreshingly can also mean "pleasantly new/different" (remembering that in Life 1 Serafall Leviathan is acting like a magical girl and such),compared to "surprisingly" I think it's way better.Well,in case you are wondering.--[[User:User753|User753]]-[[User talk:User753|Talk]]- 18:10, 28 May 2012 (CDT)

Ah, that part. Actually, I was pretty much guessing on the word "refreshingly", since I only half-understood the Japanese word used there プンスカ. I also think surprisingly would work better here, though, so change it if you wish. At the very least, the sentence would make more sense. --[[User:Eternal Dreamer|Eternal Dreamer]] 18:17, 28 May 2012 (CDT)

Understood.Thank you very much.--[[User:User753|User753]]-[[User talk:User753|Talk]]- 18:27, 28 May 2012 (CDT)

Just a quick question.....whenever you, or if its even you, is finished translating Volume 5, will there be a PDF Direct Link like the first 4 volumes? Thanks for all the hard work. -Adamkombat

Yes, I'm the one translating, and yes, it will naturally be put in PDF format when the entire volume is done. The project members do that automatically, regardless.

Hey sorry if I came across rude it wasn't my intention. I really appreciate the hardwork you put into this.-Adamkombat

Hey Eternal Dreamer, I realise that you may no longer check this page, but I'll leave this here just in case...there's something I'd like to discuss with you over email. Send me a message: admin[at]zxzxzx.info   [[User:Zxzxzx|zxzxzx]] ([[User talk:Zxzxzx|talk]]) 12:47, 4 April 2019 (CEST)