Editing Talk:Sakurasou no Pet na Kanojo (section)

== Edit Confirmations ==

In some of the translations, some of the responses use 'why' to reply back. I'm not sure what the literal translation is from the RAWs but it this type of reply is very awkward and confusing so I would rather change everything to 'what'. Before I make any such changes though, I would like some confirmation about this. Thanks.--[[User:Vu.P|Vu.P]] ([[User talk:Vu.P|talk]]) 18:56, 8 February 2013 (CST)

In the KR raws that I TL from, it uses 'why'. However, if you think that 'what' is a better choice, I don't think it really matters. I would check with Pudding though, since he TLs from the original JP raws.[[User:Junnynam|Junnynam]] ([[User talk:Junnynam|talk]]) 20:50, 8 February 2013 (CST)

'Why' is a valid response in many cases, so I don't really see a problem with the use of 'why'. But, if it's really bothering you... From what I remember, the JP raws do use 'why'(なぜ naze), but I might be wrong as I haven't looked through them ever since I got them a few months back. I don't think pudding (or anyone else for that matter) will reply any time soon, as the only activity I've seen lately has been from Junnynam. Also, many thanks for still being such a great and dedicated translator, Junnynam. -[[User:Jasou|Jasou]] ([[User talk:Jasou|talk]]) 21:17, 8 February 2013 (CST)

Thanks Jasou, and I think you're right about the 'naze' thing. 'Naze', 'nande' are some commonly used responses in Japanese (from what I've seen on animes at least). Anyhow, I'll be back on Sakurasou soon. My other LN project is almost complete :D --[[User:Junnynam|Junnynam]] ([[User talk:Junnynam|talk]]) 21:29, 8 February 2013 (CST)

In general, English speakers don't reply back with 'why'. However, if the raws translates like that, then I will not touch it.--[[User:Vu.P|Vu.P]] ([[User talk:Vu.P|talk]]) 08:05, 9 February 2013 (CST)

"If it’s Mashiro, she would be able to paint something like that. She certainly had the possibility." Perhaps 'ability' or 'potential' since 'possibility' doesn't fit in this context. Also, "Thin legs, slim figure, pale skin and the person still looked boyish". The flow is a bit bad so maybe "Even with thin legs, a slim figure, and pale skin, the person still looked boyish"? --[[User:Vu.P|Vu.P]] ([[User talk:Vu.P|talk]]) 11:19, 18 February 2013 (CST)

Possibility to potential is fine. And with the second bit, I'll try to change it so that it flows better. Thanks for the edits. [[User:Junnynam|Junnynam]] ([[User talk:Junnynam|talk]]) 13:53, 18 February 2013 (CST)

I'm reaching my finals so my pace will slow down drastically. From now on, I will also be pasting my edit suggestions in the discussion page of each chapter if that doesn't bother everyone. --[[User:Vu.P|Vu.P]] ([[User talk:Vu.P|talk]]) 20:32, 30 March 2013 (CDT)

I haven't been very active in my editing as of late, but I just finished going through part one of volume 4 chapter 3 in response to the request. If there are any problems with the edits, feel free to address them. I tried not deviate too much from the original. Also tranlated a few prologues earlier, so feel free to fix if there are mistakes in TL. -[[User:Jasou|Jasou]] ([[User talk:Jasou|talk]]) 21:17, 1 May 2013 (CDT)

Sakurasou Volume 4 Ch 3, I've just started a bit. Please tell me if the following changes would be alright with you, if they are minor in your opinion, I can just edit accordingly by myself form there on.<br/>

"[...], and that became his confidence." -> "[...], and it [IMO it refers to the "making people happy"] made him confident.", IMO it's confusing otherwise.<br/>

"[...] that he could also make someone happy." -> "[...] that he was able to make someone (people?) happy."<br/>

"He wanted to taste that excitement again… no, as much as he could." -> "He wanted to taste that excitement again… no, as many times as he could."<br/>

If you prefer another contact method for these questions or if they annoy you in general, please let me know.

[[User:Cautr|-cautr]] ([[User talk:Cautr|talk]]) 18:27, 15 September 2013 (CDT)

Those changes are fine. Thanks
Also, you can contact me via my email if that's more convenient for you. 
junnynam@gmail.com  --[[User:Junnynam|Junnynam]] ([[User talk:Junnynam#top|talk]]) 18:34, 15 September 2013 (CDT)