Editing Talk:Suzumiya Haruhi:Volume2 Chapter4 (section)

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:Regarding the above, maybe 'minions' would work? But I think "henchmen" also works fine.

  henchmen is probably closer, but I think minion better describes the postion of Miruku and Kyon.  They don't have a lot of choice in the matter.

While it is absolutly wrong, I also like Murmidion.  I use Suzumiya Murmidian as my title in a couple of newsgroups.
[[User:151.151.73.170|151.151.73.170]]Steven

I have a problem with the phrase "Asahina-san placed her hands on her extremely short skirt as she become very despaired"

Is is possible that her eyes filled with dispair?   Dispair isn't even a verb, is it?
Steven[[User:24.20.137.157|24.20.137.157]]


Hopefully, someone will be able to answer this. Towards the end of Volume 2 Chapter 4, Kyon in his own narration says, "A smile formed on Koizumi's mouth; it looked like a ''self-depreciating'' smile."  I was not sure whether ''self-depreciating'' was intended to be used here, because ''self-deprecating'' seems like a better fit. Also, it may just be a typo, since the difference between the two words is one letter, ''i''. I have not changed anything in this chapter, but if it is a mistake, then we should edit to the correct word.

Shouldn't it be "preserving information down on paper" and not "preserving information down in paper" as well as "whose high-heeled shoes don't seem suitable" and not "whose high-heeled shoes doesn't seem suitable" --[[User:71.56.235.76|71.56.235.76]] 23:20, 7 December 2006 (PST)

:It's "Myrmidon." Ant warrior. Anyway, I think I touched up all these points in my recent editing pass.--[[User:Nutcase|Nutcase]] 08:54, 11 February 2007 (PST)