Editing User talk:Banisher (section)

===Editor===
====John Woodward====
Hey Banisher,

I'm an editor for Mushoku and I worked hard editing Web Chapter 137 - A Father of Dignity. I did mainly verb-tense editing, but also clarifying sentences, grammar, spelling, etc. I came up with a few questions and put them into hide tags. Also, the biggest edit I made, and double checked with another person, was regarding the magic stone hypothesis edit.


Before and after:


* Could it be the mana which was inserted into the back had changed into [a decompose wave that instantly decomposed things which were generated by mana] which was released from the front.


* Could it be that mana generated into the back of the stone transforms into [a canceling wave] through the front, effectively dispelling magic?


Please let me know what you think and if it still stays true to the translation.

Best,

[[User:John Woodward|John Woodward]] ([[User talk:John Woodward|talk]]) 19:43, 18 August 2014 (CDT)

====Deadgye====

Hey, I made some TLC edits to your upload of Mushoku Tensei web chapter 137. It was mostly small changes in sentences that felt a bit off when compared to the original Japanese text. Main goal was to improve readability or understanding. Let me know if you think any of them were unsatisfactory and should be changed back.

[[User:Deadgye|Deadgye]] ([[User talk:Deadgye|talk]]) 14:32, 19 August 2014 (CDT)